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petelv
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« Reply #1 on: August 02, 2009, 01:35:01 AM » |
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X , Nice start to your story here. I am looking forward to the next part.
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« Reply #2 on: August 02, 2009, 01:40:29 AM » |
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X , Nice start to your story here. I am looking forward to the next part.
pete
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« Reply #3 on: August 02, 2009, 02:02:47 AM » |
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Good start thus far!!
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« Reply #4 on: August 02, 2009, 05:14:10 AM » |
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beth35
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Bring it, girls!...hee! hee!
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« Reply #5 on: August 02, 2009, 06:19:09 AM » |
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This is a hot start, X. You are writing a well crafted story ha has me wet already! Please get on with it!
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« Reply #6 on: August 02, 2009, 09:06:44 AM » |
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Nice start!
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Naughty - but oh, so NICE! :-)
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« Reply #7 on: August 02, 2009, 09:44:39 AM » |
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YEAH...GREAT BEGINNING. CANT WAIT FOR MORE !!!
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Brutal NHB fights to the ultimate finish!
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« Reply #8 on: August 02, 2009, 05:16:24 PM » |
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Great build up! Best way to settle things is 2 babes alone. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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« Reply #9 on: August 02, 2009, 08:55:06 PM » |
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Starting to shape up very nicely!!
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« Reply #10 on: August 04, 2009, 08:47:10 PM » |
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« Reply #11 on: October 11, 2009, 11:40:27 PM » |
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I wonder if X will ever finish this story ?
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« Reply #12 on: October 21, 2009, 06:25:25 AM » |
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Back to page 1.
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« Reply #13 on: October 22, 2009, 03:20:14 PM » |
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I wonder if X will ever finish this story ?
pete
There you go.... part 2 will continue right from the end. |
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« Reply #14 on: October 22, 2009, 04:23:59 PM » |
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Great story, and more to come it seems!  |
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Naughty - but oh, so NICE! :-)
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