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Ivy Destroys Amber

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Offline gobulls23

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Ivy Destroys Amber
« on: April 21, 2013, 11:26:38 PM »
This is my first attempt at writing a wrestling story. It is essentially describing a fight that takes place, would love feedback.


The match was simple, the first girl who could knock the other one out 5 times was declared the winner. It was no disqualification, anything goes, and both Ivy and Amber were ready for battle. However, for anyone who could have been there, this was not going to be a fair fight. Ivy was a seasoned wrestler who had been in the business for 10 years now. This was Amber's first match, and she felt extremely cocky that she could somehow knockout Ivy 5 times, let alone once. Once the match began, Ivy just laughed at Amber's fooling attempts to put her in various submission holds. After having her fun, Ivy decided to begin her attack. She kicked Amber in the chest, causing the rookie to howl in pain, what followed was an onslaught of belly punches that had Amber gasping for air. Ivy then decided to get the first knockout out of the way, and with such ease picked Amber up and administered a tombstone piledriver that made me cringe watching. For never having taken a piledriver before, I was surprised that Amber did not even twitch, she was just out cold, laying motionless in the center of the ring. A simple 3 count pin gave one point to Ivy which also meant she could go for knockout number 2.
A couple slaps to the face and a stomp to the belly brought Amber back from her slumber. What followed was a wide variety of submission holds. First, a camel clutch, followed by a boston crab and finally s figure four leg lock that had Amber begging for mercy. Yet points were only scored through knockouts and for the next 10 minutes Ivy continued to use every hold in the book to make sure Amber was aching from head to toe. With Amber wincing in pain, Ivy contemplated how to score her second point of the match. She lift Amber up and put her near the turnbuckle at the opposite side of the ring. At full speed Ivy ran across the ring and plunged straight into Amber's belly, causing the inexperienced wrestler to give out a moan and fall to the floor. Somehow not out, Ivy decided to teach Amber one of the most classic knockout holds: the sleeperhold. Once the hold was applied, Amber in her hurt state tried unsuccessfully to escape the hold, she didn't even know how to escape. Her failed attempts became futile and soon her arms and legs became limp, and I could see her eyes roll into the back of her head. Ivy held the hold for a good 30 seconds after she knew Amber was out, just to watch the poor rookie twitch in her arms. A second 3 count pin gave the second point to Ivy.
This time, Ivy stood with her whole body weight on Amber, bringing her back to life with a shriek of pain. Since this was a no disqualification match, Ivy decided to have a little fun for her third point. She went and grabbed a chair from outside the ring, and once Amber was finally able to make it to her feet, slammed the chair into her belly and then smacked the chair right into the cute rookie's face. For a split second Amber just stood motionless, a weird smile on her face as her eyes crossed and her tongue hung out and then with a heap fell to the floor out cold. Ivy let out a laugh as she went for the third pin thus leading to her third point.
The fourth point for Ivy was the quickest, with Amber still out cold, she climbed to the top rope and like a bird flew through the air and landed perfectly on Amber. Amber gave out a moan as her eyes once again rolled into the back of her head and she went right back to sleep. Ivy dragged the lifeless body to the center of the ring for the pin to score her fourth point, and to prepare her victim for the final knockout.
Ivy left the ring momentarily and came back with a pair of handcuffs, even in her ragdoll state, Ivy did not want Amber resisting the last hold. Several stomps to her poor belly caused Amber to moan and wake up, however, she really had no idea where she was. Ivy put the handcuffs on Amber and then clamped both of her strong hands over Amber's mouth and nose, suffocating her. Amber's breathing got increasingly heavier, however, the rookie was in too much of a ragdoll state to do anything. Her eyes rolled back into her head and all I could see was white as Ivy increased the amount of pressure of the hold. The very minimal movement of her feet came to a halt, and she was out for the fifth time. Yet, Ivy wanted to send a message to the overzealous rookie and began to apply even more pressure after Amber was out cold. The pure strength of Ivy caused blood to start to stream from Amber's nose, her body convulsing from the extended period of time without oxygen. Once Amber started bleeding on the mat, Ivy let go of the rookie, and simply sat on her for an extended 10 count pin, earning her fifth point and ending the match.

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Offline ballz_billy

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Re: Ivy Destroys Amber
« Reply #1 on: April 22, 2013, 12:08:04 AM »
Ok attempt...  but some feedback. Maybe post pictures or describe the girls otherwise not bad