Glad to see something like this! This is awesome, the only thing which bothers me is the first person prespective the fights are written at....if you want to read them as a story afterwards, it is kind of weird, because it is written like a dialogue between two girls, and not like a regular fight story.
I would have preferred it to be "X hits X with a punch" rather than "I hit you with a punch".
Just wondering if I'm the only one who thinks so...