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Ruby's First Fight

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Ruby's First Fight
« on: August 05, 2014, 02:40:01 AM »

I got the idea of writing a girl fight story in the first person, which, as I'm male is a bit of a challenge! But I thought it might be fun, so here goes.

RUBY'S FIRST FIGHT

When Frank told me I'd earn a lot of cash if I took part in a fight with another girl I just said no. I've never been in a fight and violence scares me, so no way was I taking his offer up, until he told me how much cash I'd be paid. I'm nineteen and a chance to pocket a couple of thousand doesn't come along to often, so I agreed.
 It was to take place in a ring situated in the grounds of some rich guys mansion, with an audience who I guess paid to be there, and so on the arranged day I arrived, visibly nervous, but Frank tried to calm me, saying I should think of the money I'd get. He'd told me my outfit would be shorts and top like lady boxers wear, and soft beach sandals, so the damage from kicks would be limited, with my opponent identically clad. He hadn't mentioned that the attire I was supplied with was very tight, stretching over my figure in a way that showed every curve, and I was a bit perturbed by it. Frank had left me alone to change, then escorted me to the ring, which was surrounded by a largely, though not exclusively, male audience. Now though I say it myself, I'm a pretty girl, with a curvy figure, 38 DD boobs, and short, dark brown hair. As I bent under the rings top rope to enter the fighting arena there were some comments from some of the men, which I'd expected, but some of them were disgusting, and having these men leer at me increased my nervousness. I was at least a little reassured when I saw my opponent, Lena, a little redhead who was about five inches shorter than my height, of five feet eight. I did notice, however, that she looked confident, while my apprehension must have been apparent to her.
And so, the fight began. How do girls fight? I've seen a couple of cat-fights, and the fighters went for the hair, so that's what I did. And Lena? She went for the breasts! With my arms raised to grab her hair, my chest was vulnerable, but it didn't occur to me that anyone would fight so dirty as to attack the boobs, and she was vicious, digging her fingers into my tits and dragging me round the ring by them! When I eventually managed to prise her hands off I just stood there, tears in my eyes as I cradled my bruised breasts. "You dirty fucking bitch!" I screamed, as Lena stood there, grinning maliciously. Now I was angry, and reached for her with one hand, intending to grab her and punch her, but the little bitch kicked me right in my most personnel place! The pain was sickening, and as I bent forward, clutching at my crotch, I could hear the crowd cheering Lena, 'Right in her cxnt!' One man yelled.
I'd never thought the fight would be like this, and I was scared. That the onlookers all seemed to be supporting my opponent made me feel more vulnerable, and I didn't know what to do. But Lena did,  she stepped forward and punched me in the midriff, a good, solid blow, right in the solar plexus. It hurt! And I was so winded that I was completely doubled up, my knees buckling. There was no chance to recover as Lena pushed me face first to the ground then sat on my back and pulled my top up till it was over my face, then jumped up and ripped it off. So there I was, with painful breasts and crotch, breathless and topless, and the fight had barely begun! And boy did the men enjoy seeing my exposed tits, I almost cried with embarrassment at the obscene cries from them.
Lena now took hold of my hair and pulled me upright, and now I thought I'd got a chance to hurt her. Grabbing her throat with both hands, snarling with fury as I did so, I reckoned I could make my greater size and strength count. I should have learnt by now not to raise both hands as it leaves the whole body open to attack, and Lena's retaliation was brutal. Her fist slammed like a battering ram into my stomach, and for a moment I couldn't breathe, and it was agony! Worse was to follow, for as I wrapped both arms around my middle and doubled over again, my breasts were a target Lena couldn't resist. She slammed a right hook into one with such force it swung into the other boob, which was then assaulted with Lena's left fist. Crying I staggered back, Lena pursuing me. My eyes were so filled with tears I could hardly see her, and as I swung a fist towards her face it was merely an act of desperation, with Lena easily dodging the blow, and treating me to a smack in the mouth. It rocked my head back, and I was about to say I surrendered, but she didn't give me the chance, instead she delivered a flurry of blows to my face, with the skill of a professional boxer. I was knocked back against the ropes, dizzy, in pain, and terrified that damage may have been done to my features! Lena, though, was merciless, giving my boobs another couple of wallops with her fists.
I was mumbling that I conceded defeat and a grinning Lena said she'd stop beating me up if I removed my shorts. I couldn't take any more beating, so did as she said, and looked at the ground in shame as the men crowded round to ogle my naked body. The women were no better, taunting me for being thrashed by a girl half my size, while Lena, clearly enjoying herself, decided to torment me a bit more. That bit was a brutally cruel kick to between my legs, the impact lifting my heels off the ground, while the pain was appalling! I sank down onto the earth, curled up in a ball, sobbing, with both hands between my thighs. As I lay there crying a woman bent down so her face was inches from mine, and spat, "you pathetic wimpy bitch, you got what you deserved!"

This fight, well, me being beaten up to put it more accurately, changed my life. It took a while to recover from what Lena had done to me, even though no permanent damage had been done. She'd made a right mess of my face, with one eye becoming almost closed by red and purple swelling, and my lower lip was puffed up to twice its normal size, swollen and sensitive to touch. There was a cut on the bridge of my nose, another just below an eye, and ugly bruising to both cheeks. It was a while before the damage had recovered enough for me to be ready to show my face in public! My stomach was red and sore, and ached for several days. My breasts were so bruised, swollen and painful I really feared some serious injury had been inflicted by the savage Lena, but happily they healed, though for some time they were to tender to wear a bra. As for the most vital part of my womanhood, let's just say it was a while before I could fool around again! Even sitting down was painful!
And yet I've never been so turned on as I was by the battle with Lena! Don't know why, but everything that happened excited me in a way I can't explain. The jeering from the crowd as I was completely out fought by a girl so much smaller than me, and the agony my diminutive tormentor subjected me to made me crazy with excitement! I now inflict pain on myself, slapping my face, punching my breasts and using a tennis ball in a scarf to hit my sex. But it's not enough, I need to be beaten publicly again, so have got Frank to arrange another fight for me. He was surprised I wanted to fight again, given the beating I'd got from Lena, but I told him I've learnt from that and am determined to put up a better show in future. Actually I'm hoping he finds another tough girl to fight me and I get another besting up, and I suspect Frank knows that.

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Re: Ruby's First Fight
« Reply #1 on: August 05, 2014, 10:24:09 PM »
Glad you liked it Irene.

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Re: Ruby's First Fight
« Reply #2 on: August 06, 2014, 09:58:19 PM »
Good story.... very much enjoyed it.

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Re: Ruby's First Fight
« Reply #3 on: August 07, 2014, 05:59:54 AM »
'jobber' style stories are cool. This one was sexy too with detailed description. Keep it up.
-I happen to like catfight..don't like it..?? Sorry, that's your problem ;-)

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Re: Ruby's First Fight
« Reply #4 on: August 08, 2014, 02:39:59 AM »
'jobber' style stories are cool. This one was sexy too with detailed description. Keep it up.

Thanks for the compliment. :) There's nothing like a one-sided cat fightQ

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Re: Ruby's First Fight
« Reply #5 on: August 12, 2014, 10:31:28 PM »
Ruby has another fight, not quite of her choosing. She's a sub whose turned on by being beaten, but she begins to wonder if things have gone to far.

RUBY'S SECOND FIGHT
It was a sunny Sunday afternoon, and I was feeling sexy! So, I thought, how about going to one of those slick bars in town, some cool guys hang out there, maybe I'll find a bit of romance. Need to dress appropriately of course, so I chose a tight fitting, sleeveless top, no bra, and blue panties that were pretty small. They'd be covered, though only just, by a grey coloured stretch mini-skirt. I looked down at my scantily clad figure, and thought, 'God I'm sexy!'
But as I was about to leave there was a knock at the door, and on answering it I found myself facing Lena, the girl who'd beaten me up so badly. No doubt noticing my anxiety she quickly told me how sorry she was for beating me so brutally, but it was a fair fight, so no hard feelings, she asked.
"Er, no," I stuttered.
There was another girl with her, who introduced herself as Laura, and with a friendly smile asked if they could come in. "Sure," I replied, and we entered my flat.
Lena then came to the point of their visit. "Laura would like to fight you," she said with a grin.
I was unsure what to say, though the thought of a battle with Laura did excite me. She was a pretty girl of about twenty, an inch or so shorter than me, with black hair, and wearing a yellow blouse, light brown trousers. "Yes, we can fight," I replied, "when do you want to do it?"
"Right now." Both of them said.
I didn't know how to respond. I did want to fight Laura, hoping to lose, as I did against Lena, being defeated excites me, but this had taken me by surprise, and I was afraid that with nobody else present, well, if Laura was as cruel as Lena, this might get out of hand. On the other hand, while Lena was being friendly, I didn't how she'd react if I said no, and I've got to admit I'm shit scared of her.
I suggested the fight take place in the spare room, as it was empty. After we'd entered I got a shock when Lena pulled a smart phone from her pocket and announced she'd film the battle. "Frank will sell the film, and you'll get the same fee as last time," Lena informed me. The way Lena was dictating events was making me feel nervous, wondering what I might have been set up for. But there was no backing out now, so, as I remembered how when I fought Lena she'd gone straight for the breasts, and thinking Laura might be planning the same, I had my hands in front of my chest, palms facing my opponent, ready to grab her. As my legs were apart, as I took a fighting stance, my tiny skirt rode up to reveal my panties, and strangely, as there were no men present, this embarrassed and unsettled me. The next thing that happened showed me I should have been more concerned about the lower part of my body, as Laura stepped forward and flicked a foot up to hit me between my legs! It wasn't a hard blow, but as it hit the most sensitive spot I was bent over with my hands buried between my thighs, grimacing from the pain. Laura stepped behind me, and with a kick in my bum sent me careering across the room till I hit the far wall.
With a laugh Laura grabbed one of my arms, and applied some sort of hold to the wrist with her other hand. She must know judo or something because it forced my hand back against the wrist joint, and enabled her to force me to move where she wanted, which was to spin me round in a full circle till I crashed, tits first, into the wall! My breasts were flattened against my chest by the impact and it hurt. I cried out in pain, covering my boobs with my arms as I turned to face my tormentor, only to get kicked in the crotch again! The fight had barely started and already my breasts and vagina were filled with sickening pain! And as I was bent over from this assault between my thighs, a grinning Laura pulled my top off.
"My," she laughed, "what a pair of punching bags your tits are."
I raised an arm to shield my chest, keeping the other protecting my crotch, but to no avail. Laura delivered a kick to my belly, hitting a little below the waist, with her heel, with enough force to drive it in deep. The pain was awful, frightening, making me gasp as I clutched at the stricken area with both hands, and the merciless Laura swung a left hook into one breast and a right into the other. Crying, I sank to my knees, but even worse was to follow. Laura grabbed both boobs and hauled me to my feet by them, lifting them so high I was standing on my toes, as she walked me round the room. It must have been quite a sight, me being dragged around by my boobs, with Lena getting it all on camera. I was wailing pitifully, my breasts were being pulled cruelly, and Laura wasn't finished with me yet. Still holding my tits she drove a knee as hard as she could right into my ovaries, making me really scream!
At this point she released her hold and I fell to the floor, sobbing. "Get up." Laura ordered. The pain I was in made that difficult, but fearing what she might do if I didn't obey her, I managed to raise myself to my feet, leaning against the wall. She told me to remove my skirt, and after I'd done so she pulled at the top of my panties.
"They can stay on you, for the moment. Let's see, where should I hit you next?" Laura was eyeing up my near naked body, while I wondered fearfully what her next attack would involve. It turned out to be an uppercut to my chin that made me see stars, and as my head jerked back Laura picked the stomach as the next place for punishment, burying her fist deep in my midriff, As I slumped forward I wanted to beg her to stop, but I was to breathless to speak, Laura continuing her assault with a salvo of punches to my face and jaw. Then she stepped back, a broad smile on her face, and I thought that at last my torment was over.
"This has been so easy!" Laura grinned. "You're pathetic! My kid sister could beat you up."
Laura was then thoughtful for a moment, and then grinned like she'd just had an idea, and indeed she had, one that was to further my humiliation. "Piss in your pants."
"What?" I gasped, but I knew that refusing would just mean she'd beat me up some more, so I made the effort to urinate into my panties. Laura was now laughing, and still not satisfied, ordered me to take the panties off and put them in my mouth. I'd never felt so worthless as this as I placed the urine soaked panties in my mouth, with Lena getting a close up of my total humiliation.

At that point Laura felt she'd done enough, and she and Lena departed, leaving me to lick my wounds. Later I phoned Frank, turned out he already had the film, and he told me to call round and he'd give a cheque. It was a few days before I did so, I felt so pathetic I didn't want to see anybody. When I arrived at his house there was a young couple with him, friends of his I presume. Anyway, on seeing me they both started laughing. "That's the silly fucking cow Laura beat up," the still laughing girl said, then, stepping close to me added, "I'm gonna' kick your head in bitch."
Frank told her to sit down, and with a shrug she turned away, then suddenly spun round and punched me right in the stomach! "That's enough!" Frank said sternly, while I doubled over, gasping with pain. "If you want fight her Kelly, that can be arranged."
"I sure do." Kelly was now sitting with her boyfriend, both grinning broadly. and looking directly at me Kelly added, "I might even kick you in the cxnt if I bump into you in the street."
I left, and fought back tears as I walked down the road. With my defeats to Laura now being distributed on the internet I would never know who might have seen it. Everybody I met could be someone who'd witnessed me being beaten up by another girl, seen every inch of my body,  and how I'd put panties soaked in my own piss in my mouth. I might get beaten up in the street by tough girls like Kelly. I know I'm a sub by nature, I can't deny I'm aroused by getting a thrashing from another girl, but what had I let myself in for? I was so scared, so ashamed, and felt so pathetic, and maybe this was what I deserved.


 

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Re: Ruby's First Fight
« Reply #6 on: September 04, 2014, 05:34:39 PM »
Love Ruby's fights !  Nothing like a girl who wants to be beat stripped and humiliated in public.
I wish the second fight had taken part either in a Bar, or more than likely it would have ended in a back parking lot (for usually the fighters are made to leave the establishment ) where the crowd would have been able to see the fight finished . Ruby stripped and forced to piss her pants would have definitely excited the crowd, especially after Her wet underpants were shoved in her mouth as she is further beaten and humiliated.

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Re: Ruby's First Fight
« Reply #7 on: September 04, 2014, 10:41:06 PM »
I always write stories in the first person. I think you can tell more about the person's inner feelings that way and that the narrator being part of the action has his or her own voice.

Thank you and keep it up.
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Re: Ruby's First Fight
« Reply #8 on: September 05, 2014, 12:12:14 AM »
Peccavi

Yes what you say is true, I think stories are best when written in the first person. I have enjoyed your stories.
Jondo53's stories about Ruby are very good, I enjoyed them immensely.

I also love one sided fights where the loser ends up naked and publicly humiliated.
I hope Jondo53 will write more stories about Ruby.

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Re: Ruby's First Fight
« Reply #9 on: September 05, 2014, 02:38:35 AM »
Peccavi

Yes what you say is true, I think stories are best when written in the first person. I have enjoyed your stories.
Jondo53's stories about Ruby are very good, I enjoyed them immensely.

I also love one sided fights where the loser ends up naked and publicly humiliated.
I hope Jondo53 will write more stories about Ruby.

Glad you liked the adventures, well, misadventures of Ruby. When I find time I'm going to write a story of another challenger to Lena, but this time a girl whose confident of winning. She'll be a snooty, arrogant girl, but she'll suffer a similar fate to Ruby's.

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Re: Ruby's First Fight
« Reply #10 on: September 05, 2014, 09:35:02 PM »
Sounds Great ! I hope the story again will be told by the fight loser, She should also be publicly stripped and humiliated by the winner.