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Catfight at a Concert

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Offline KarsaOrlong

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Catfight at a Concert
« on: November 02, 2014, 08:43:14 PM »
Here's a quick story that doesn't have much to do with anything I have written up to this point, it's just kind of a stand alone filler as I still decide what to include in the Housewife series I am working on. 



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Erica, the tall brunette, had a bad feeling watching the H3 Hummer pull directly across the parking lot from where her and Gina were tailgating while awaiting the upcoming concert.  Seconds later both of the front doors of the Hummer flew open.  Out of the passenger seat jumped a tiny brunette, wearing a tight white sheer top, a pair of jeans that hugged her curvy legs, a cowgirl hat upon her head and a half-drank beer in her hand.  The driver door opened and out came a stunning blonde in a way to tight light pink dress, calf high cowgirl boots, matching cowgirl hat, and an almost empty bottle of vodka in her hand.  The blonde girl ran to the back of the Hummer, “The party’s here!!!” she yelled out while opening the tailgate, and if her bouncing breasts didn’t get everyone’s attention, her shrill scream surely did.   All natural Erica looked cute, and liked the attention she was getting, but now the group of guys around her suddenly began making their way over to the two new comers who looked more than ready to party. 

A short time later, Erica was slamming another beer in frustration, staring at the blonde with the inflated tits in the tight pink dress.  For the past hour the bleached blonde tramp and the smaller brunette had drawn all the attention in the area, both of the bitches were already clearly drunk, and whatever morals they had were gone.  Shaking her head, Erica glared watching the blonde slut who smiled at the leering onlookers as her hands clamped down on the brunette’s top.  The group of rowdy and hammered guys tailgating in the area were loving every second watching the blonde tease in action as she slowly undid the top button, the brunette in the white shirt smiling and giggling looking down at her exposed cleavage.     

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Of course the guys in the area screamed wanting to see more, but apparently the brunette was a cock tease and little else, as she pulled away from the blonde stopping her from unbuttoning any more buttons.  That didn’t stop the show, as the brunette came back over with salt, a few limes, and a bottle of tequila.  Erica’s jaw dropped in surprise watching as the brunette tugged the blonde’s already tiny dress down over her ample breasts, almost exposing her nipples in the process.  The brunette licked the blonde’s upper breast flesh and then splashed some salt on her boob, and slid a lime in the blonde’s mouth so it was facing outward.  Licking the salt of her breasts, the brunette knocked the shot back and then brought her mouth up to the blonde’s lips to get the lime.  “What a slut!” Erica fumed watching as the brunette spit the lime out and continued kissing the curvy blonde, the group of onlookers screaming and yelling for more, but then moaning in disappointment as the sexy gals broke apart their passionate kiss. 

By now Erica learned the blonde’s name was Jewel having heard the smaller brunette yell it as she walked back to the Hummer to get another beer.  The brunette opened the tailgate to the car and cranked the stereo up, their music now drowning out Erica and Gina’s tiny portable radio.  “Turn that shit down bitch!”  Erica yelled, finally loud enough this time for one of her snide comments to be heard by the girls.  Jewel and the brunette quickly chatted for a few seconds, then giggling they spun so their backsides were facing Erica and Gina.  The blonde and brunette bent at the waist, one hand holding the ground in front of them for support and the other coming to rest on their asses.  The brunette wiggled her ass back and forth, while the blonde slut actually lifted her dress up.  Her bountiful breasts almost leapt out of the tight pink dress, the material sliding up over her hips revealing a sling shot white thong, her long tan legs accentuated by the cowgirl boots, and her incredible ass cheeks were now exposed to the delight of the roaring crowd, “Kiss our ass bitch!” Jewel yelled, smacking her left ass cheek, the tight flesh barely moved from the playful spank. 

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Erica had enough, the brunette charged forward ready to go at the blonde bitch.  Jewel stood her ground and pumped her fists flying into Erica like a wild woman, her blows slammed into Erica’s ribs and stomach.  Erica felt the impact of both of the punches, but continued her charge forward until she caught two handfuls of Jewel's long blonde hair, sending the Cowgirl Hat flying off the blonde’s head.  Jewel squealed in pain as Erica jerked her forward by her hair, a look of rage painted on the brunette’s face.  Building momentum, Erica shuffled backward, twisted around and then flung Jewel shooting forward.  Jewel’s body sped forward and the blonde’s hands were late in coming up to slow her charge, a thud echoed out as the beauty slammed face first into the side of the H3 Hummer the girls were partying by only seconds ago.  Feeling the effects of the alcohol, Jewel was slow in responding, the blonde staggering hunched over with her hands holding her throbbing forehead and Erica chugged forward.  Erica launched her speeding frame into the air, her flying torso brutally squashing Jewel's body between her and the side of the car.  The force of the impact sent the Hummer rocking back and forth, while the crushing blow knocked the air out of Jewel's lungs, the blonde left struggling to remain on her feet.  Erica grabbed a handful of Jewel's luxurious bleached blonde locks, ripped back on Jewel’s head, and slammed her beautiful face blasting into the side window of the Hummer.  The glass didn’t move, and poor Jewel groaned, her arms wearily fell to her sides, her head buzzing.   

Erica backed up a few feet and once again hurled her body flying into Jewel's, squashing the blonde’s spine painfully against the car.  Erica stepped back a few feet ready to repeat the life sapping attack but Jewel’s centerfold body slowly slid down the side of the Hummer, the blonde crumpling to the gravel.  The blonde hottie was kneeling on all fours, her breasts barely inside the confines of her dress, and the pink material rode upward on her hips exposing her heart shaped tan fleshy ass parted by the white slingshot thong.  Jewel had no idea what was happening to her, and just as the blonde turned around to see where her attacker was, her jaw took the brunt of a booted kick that sent her sprawling onto the ground.  Another booted foot flew through the air and jarred the blonde’s head to the side, this time hammering into her temple and Jewel’s head was ringing.  Jewel’s gorgeous face was sent shooting out to the side as Erica’s third kick connected squarely into the side of her head yet again, this time the jarring kick sent her spinning around and laying chest first on the gravel.  Jewel tried to scramble up to her feet, fighting through the pain in her face and the dull ringing in her head, having no idea what was happening to her.  The blonde was just about up on her feet, but Erica was already on the attack latching onto Jewel’s long blonde hair from behind, the brunette using the momentum and then slamming her model like face slamming down upon the hood of the car.  The gorgeous blonde groaned as her face was crushed against the metal, Jewel not even noticing that the right strap of her dress was dropping over her shoulder blade, the material now stretched out and not functional any longer. 

Erica, still with two handfuls of hair, reared back and then mashed the stunned beauty’s head against the hood again and again like a wild woman.   A scream of pain filled the air as the blonde was getting the shit kicked out of her, her face driven down into the now dented hood of the Hummer.  Erica was yanking the blonde’s battered face backward, screaming at the aching beauty only to repeat the move once more.  Jewel’s nose was drilled down into the hood a final time and the blonde was finally allowed a small reprieve as Erica released her hair hold allowing the aching beauty to crumple back down to the gravel.  Jewel’s forehead was bright red, and her hands came up to her aching nose, but Erica was already back on the attack.  The brunette latched onto Jewel’s right wrist, ripping the aching gal back of the ground.  The blonde was totally unaware as her dress slowly began sliding down and out popped her incredible tit.  Because she stood close to 5’9”, it was tough to tell if her big C/small D cup breast was fake or real, but the meaty mound looked perfect on her chest, the beefy orb not showing a tan line anywhere, her big dark areola smack in it’s center with a big thick nipple that seemed ready to poke to attention in the warm summer air. 

Once she had her almost topless opponent standing, Erica quickly spun around and sent the dazed beauty head first into the Hummer.  A boom filled the air as Jewel’s head thudded into the car door and she instantly crumpled to the ground in a heap, leaving a dent the size of a basketball in the metal.  Jewel’s body was painfully pulled back upright as Erica had two handfuls of hair, the blonde shrieking and unaware as her other breast sprang out into the air as she was jerked off the gravel.  Both meaty mounds flopped around as Jewel rose shakily to her feet.  The blonde never got a chance to defend herself as Erica drove her face first into the glass window, Jewel’s eyes rolling back in her head.  Rearing back on the long locks, Erica mashed the blonde’s face forward again, this time Jewel’s nose was crushed against the hood of the car and the beauty saw stars as pain exploded in her face.  Tears coated Jewel’s enchanting eyes, but Erica still held her hair tightly with two hands and slammed her face forward one more time.  Jewel’s knees buckled and the stunned beauty found herself on the ground in a heap with pain filling her entire face.  The blonde’s long hair hung down wildly disheveled draped over her shoulders, and her pink dress now lay in a clump around her tiny waist.

Trying to somehow crawl to safety on all fours, the blonde decided to push herself upward off the gravel, just as Erica’s foot came flying upward and smashed into her jaw.  Jewel groaned and her body spun to the side from the jarring kick, the blonde lying on her back dazed and in pain, exposed breasts flopping around on her chest.  Erica was on her in a second, again pulling her up to her feet using her hair like a handle.  Jewel helplessly struggled against the pain in her face for a brief second until her forehead was rammed into the hood of the car again.  Jewel saw stars and couldn’t get her hands up in time to prevent her nose from being crushed against the metal yet again.  Jewel’s hands cupped her pulsing face and Erica didn’t slow down, again ramming the blonde forward by the hair.  Jewel was stunned and her forehead was bright red when Erica finally let go of her long blonde hair.  Spinning the aching beauty around, Erica propped the blonde’s spine against the car, and then out of nowhere, her right fist exploded into the blonde’s cheek.  Jewel groaned from the force of the blow, and Erica quickly latched onto her long blonde hair more than ready to dish out some pain and rearrange that model like face.

Securing a grip on the blonde’s long locks with her left hand, Erica’s right fist reared back and slammed square into Jewel’s chin.  Jewel’s head shot out to the side as pain exploded in her flawless face, the blonde beauty staggering back and forth trying to clear her thoughts.  Left hand holding Jewel in place, Erica’s right hand flew back and forth, closed fists flying through the air, and two punches slammed into the blonde’s face.  The pink dress continued to let gravity push downward and in seconds it slid over those meaty thighs and continued down over her ever so long legs ending up around her boot-covered ankles.  The stunning beauty was nearly naked, her perfect Playmate like body on display, save that of her bright white thong which stood out sharply in contrast to her golden bronzed skin, the blonde’s C or D cup breasts swung about her exposed chest, and her tiny 23 inch waist heaved trying to draw air.  Jewel’s model like face contorted in agony and before her hands could come up, a third punch hammered flush into her nose sending her stumbling backward and then staggering back to the gravel as she tripped over her dress. 

Erica took a few seconds to clench her aching fist, while the blonde struggled on the ground, her hands slowly pushing herself off the ground.  Jewel agonizingly turned her aching face upward and the blonde’s jaw was met with a vicious kick that slammed squarely into the side of her face sending her sprawling back down to the ground.  Jewel was in trouble and the blonde got no rest for Erica was already picking the aching girl off the ground using her hair like a handle.  The blonde stumbled forward, her hands coming up to shield her exposed breasts, and that played into Erica’s hand as the brunette began another round of closed fisted attacking.  Erica’s left hand wrapped tightly around a strand of blonde hair, and her right fist flung upward, knuckles slamming home hammering flat into Jewel’s rosy red lips, jolting the head of the blonde to the side.  Jewel’s legs buckled and the blonde wanted to crumple to the ground, only the brunette held her in place by the hair.  Erica hammered the model like face with a second grueling right, then followed with another closed fisted shot that slammed into Jewel’s eye socket knocking the stunning girl’s head side to side, and sending a wad of spit spraying outward.  Jewel’s eyes seem to glaze over, the blonde looked drunk stumbling and swaying on her feet.  The blonde tripped backward and then shrieked as a chunk of her precious golden mane was ripped from her scalp as Erica tried unsuccessfully to pull the stumbling beauty forward. 

Erica was left holding a long strand of bleached hair and the brunette smiled for a split second before she tossed it to the gravel and then resumed her attack.  Latching onto the blonde’s wrist the brunette again yanked the aching Goddess upward and gave the blonde no chance for recovery.  Erica went to work with closed fisted punches, the brunette threw a left and then an overhand right, both punches landing flush into the blonde’s now puffy cheeks.  The blows jolted her head side to side, and the blonde desperately tried to get her bearing, but Erica’s left fist slammed up square into Jewel’s right eye.  Erica was out on her feet, and the grueling hook that slammed into her washboard stomach left her slumped over at the waist.  Now hunched over, the next punch crushed the blonde’s nose, driving it backward into her face, and blood began dripping from both nostrils.  Erica paid no attention to the damage she was causing and another fisted thudded into the blonde’s lips, Jewel’s teeth feeling like they were knocked loose.  A left and a right send the blonde spinning in a circle, then staggering before she went down chest first crumpling in a sobbing heap laying on the gravel.  Her cowgirl boots kicked the ground weakly as her hands came up to her aching face trying to stem the flow of blood from her nose, Erica finally halted her attack on the sobbing Goddess.

The brunette wasn’t totally done just yet as she grabbed the blonde’s purse, took her wallet and car keys, then locked the door to the Hummer and walked away victorious.  Jewel was still on the ground sobbing like a baby, a chunk of her long blonde hair lay on the ground next to her.  The blonde left only in her cowgirl boots and slingshot white thong was a site to see, and now locked out of her car, without a wallet or phone to call anyone was left in quiet the predicament. 
 

As always I welcome feedback or ideas of different scenarios that you would like to see going forward

Karsa

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Offline bishopberkley

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Re: Catfight at a Concert
« Reply #1 on: November 03, 2014, 12:51:49 AM »
You do write fantastic stuff. Trying to please everyone with your content will always be difficult because we are diverse and the fetishistic side of things tends to get quite specific.

I love the over-the-top nature of your stories. The basketball size dent in the car door. The one-sided relentlessness of the beatdown, the 'insult to injury' style humiliation like stealing the car keys and leaving her helpless.

I dislike realistic elements like blood-letting but it doesn't spoil my read because I kind of filter it out to enjoy the rest.

Keep writing.

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Re: Catfight at a Concert
« Reply #2 on: November 03, 2014, 12:42:36 PM »
I love the description and realism in this story and my only complaint is that it ended where it did.  I would have loved to see the blonde stripped in public and then humilation even further!  Maybe they run in to each other again and she gets her ass kicked even worse this time

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Offline KarsaOrlong

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Re: Catfight at a Concert
« Reply #3 on: November 07, 2014, 12:38:51 AM »
Thanks for the comments, I am going to have the next Housewife series installment posted soon, and then already have half done another story I am co-authoring...hopefully get one posted in the next day or so!