Outstanding story--suspenseful, extremely violent and emotional.
One of bcw8"s major skills is the intensity he brings to his stories, both in the pre-fight and the actual battles. You can feel the tension and contempt these two women have for each other. You can feel the danger, the anger and desperation they have as they fight. While the title refers to the vows each woman took, I did feel a dread and fear that one or both of these women could die or be very seriously hurt in this battle.
Who won? I don't know. Little clues seem to make me think Keisha won, but those clues could be imaginary and I could be totally wrong. I like the mystery of how it ended. If you want to do a sequel, fine. But in my imagination these three people (now four with the birth of the son) are perpetually in conflict into the future--until death parts them.
One of your best stories, bcw8 (and that is saying something given all of the great stories you have posted here since you burst onto the site almost four years ago with your stories). Thank you.
Thank you, coachzzz, and everyone, for your comments. I very much appreciate it.
