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Pool Hall Smack Down
« on: September 17, 2010, 12:24:59 AM »
Pool Hall Smack Down!

Melinda and her friend Timi have a run in with some local bitches, Kinga and her friend Anita.

Small town Midwestern girls
Melinda 19½ years old
Timi 19 years old
5'2.2" (158cm)  128 lb (58kg)
5'3.0" (160cm) 122 lb (55.3kg
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Kinga19¾ years old
Anita 19 years old
5'3.0" (160cm)  125lb (56.7kg)
5'4.0" (163) 126lb (55.2kg
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The city was Chicago. The neighborhood was in the far northeastern part of Chicago on a little spurt above Howard St. that cut into Evanston. It was a working class neighborhood at the last stop of the El before it switched to overhead lines. It was not the best of neighborhoods and was getting seedier with time. Even so the neighborhood had its attractions. There local bar claimed to be the longest bar in Chicago. The bartender knew your name and your drink if you were a local. Your drink would be already waiting for you when you sat down at the bar. It was that kind of bar.

Next to the bar was a pizza place that had some of the best Chicago style pizza with real imported Italian cheese. Above the pizza place was a pool hall. The pool hall was not just a local one but famous as one of the best pool halls in Chicago. It was not one of those new fancy billiard rooms with the different colored felts that tried to appeal to the more gentile cliental.. It was a real pool hall for serious players. Minnesota Fats frequented the joint when he was in town. High stakes games were played here. Three cushioned billiards at $100 a pop or more. Nine ball, eight ball, even straight pool was played on some of the best slate tables around. The green felts were replaced often. This was often necessary as tempers flared during games and it was not uncommon for a ball to be slammed down on the table and bounce. high up in the air The establishment was overseen by a tall (around 6’5”) thin, no-nonsense bloke who was friendly while being stern. If you didn’t have your own pool cue he would select a nice one at the weight you specified from behind the counter. “Table number 22 in the back has a new felt. Let me brush it off for you” was a typical greeting to long time customers.. It was a rough place and he knew what brought the customers in. He generally “let them play” unless things got too far out of hand. The locals knew the limits and if they exceeded them they could be banned for life.

Melinda and her friend, Timi, were on spring break from college. They decided to drive to Chicago for a holiday. What with college expenses and not being wealthy, they were on a tight budget and chose a cheap motel the east Rogers Park area, close to an El stop, convenient for access to downtown and Wrigley Field – they were both Cub fans. They took in the various sights and even attended a Cubs game. As usual the Cubs lost a squeaker. As it turns out they were both very good pool and billiards players. At least they were the best in their small town, beating all comers, girls and boys. Their only competition was each other. The record between them was pretty much even although each though she was slightly better and the other one was luckier. Melinda and Timi were big fish in a very small pond. They thought it might be fun to test their prowess in the big city to see where they really stood. They asked the desk clerk where there was a good place to shoot some serious pool. He told time about the pool hall north of Howard. He told them it had the best tables I town and was easy to get to. Just take the El to the last Chicago stop at Howard St. Then walk east a couple of blocks. The pool hall is on the left side just north of Howard St. on the second block. [color]green]”Oh be careful in the neighborhood after dark. Stick together.”[/color]

Little did Melinda and Timi know what a rough pool hall they were going to. Their local pool halls were seedy but a level or two about this place. But it was the best place in town to shoot a serious game of pool. Melinda and Timi dressed the way they did at home which allowed them to win many a game against boys. Melinda wore a red halter top tied just below her breasts to expose her belly and lift her tits up. She added a blue skirt about mid-thigh in length or slightly less. It was very tight and showed of her legs and ass when she bent over the table as it rode up. Oh yes, the cleavage also showed a lot of tit when she leaned over the table. Timi wore a similar halter top and tight skirt. She chose a lilac halter top and pink skirt, both of which she thought showed off her long, blonde hair. Four inch high heels completed their outfights and off they went. Some people might have thought they were hookers in that neighborhood except the makeup was that of clean cut, small town girls.

The pool hall was filled with males of various ages and a few females who were probably attacked to some of the males in various ways. Melinda and Timi started playing each other in straight pool. They quickly gathered attention as the males leered at them and the females starred daggers. Then the observers started to notice that they actually knew how to shoot poll, imagine that. They even occasionally ran a rack or two.

Needless to say the place was filled with hustlers. They looked upon new blood like Timi and Melinda who were good and thought they were better than they really were as the perfect pigeons. Soon each girl was challenged to a game and, to make it interesting, how about $2 a game. If they were to really test themselves this was the time. The preferred game was nine ball. In typical hustler fashion the opponents let Melinda and Timi win the first few games. For their part, Melinda and Timi seemed to win on some lucky shots and squealed with girlish delight each time they made an improbably shot. After several games the last opponent suggested to each girl that they make it a “little more interesting”, say $10 a game. That isn’t high stakes but is a lot of money to two college girls.

So Melinda and Timi agreed, they could use some extra cash. In typical fashion, the hustlers started shooting better – making shots they had just missed before. To their surprise, Melinda and Timi also raised their game. Those lucky shots started going in with more precision and fewer squeals. The girls became serious and all business. Where before they had sometimes left themselves “stitched” so they couldn’t get a clear shot at the object ball now the cue ball rolled just far enough for a clear, easy shot. Melinda and Time continued to win. They had out hustled the hustlers. It wasn’t long where the male egos couldn’t stand losing to these two country bumpkins and no one wanted to play them. Melinda and Timi went back to playing each other.

This was the setting as Kinga and Anita walked up the stairs and entered the pool hall after having a couple of brewskies in the bar below. Kinga and Anita wore matching black micro-mini skirts stretched tightly over their shapely, rounded asses. The skirts barely covered their asses and crotch when they stood up straight. You can imagine what they displayed when they bent over to line up or take a shot. Anita was completely in black. She wore a short sleeved, skin tight, vee neck satin sweater with a lot of cleavage. It must be noted she had a large chest of perfect boobs. The other three women in our story had nice breasts but of average size. Kinga wore a white halter top, tied similarly to the way that Melinda and Timi had down. The also wore 4” heels.

It wasn’t clear whether or not Kinga and Anita plied their wares on Howard St. but their make up, especially they way they did their eyes seemed to imply the affirmative. What was true was that they were local toughies who didn’t like new women cutting into their territory. The pool hall was their territory and the usual women in their stayed out of their way. They may not have been big but they were tough and had beaten up more than one woman who thought she was tougher. They knew how to fight and how to use anything handy in a pool hall to their advantage, especially a broken off cue stick. Most people also thought they had knives hidden somewhere in their clothes even if no one could guess where in their skin tight outfits.

As was their custom Kinga and Anita surveyed the pool hall to see what was going on. It took only a fraction of a second to note that most eyes were riveted on some bare legs and exposed cleavage. They were not pleased. Kinga poked one of the males in the side and said ”Who are those hos and what are they doing here?”
”Dunno, thy walked in here and cleaned most of us out of our money.”
Anita whispered to Kinga, ”We goona let them move in on our territory? Let’s kick the shit out of them.”
”Don’t be in such a hurry. Let’s make nice, first. We can take that bundle of money away form them. They don’t look that good. Then we can kick the crap out of them.”
”Gee, you’re smart. That’s why you are the leader of our gang.” As you may have guessed Anita was the sharpest pencil in the box.

Kinga and Anita strolled over to where Melinda and Timi were playing. Introductions were made all around and friendly small talk ensued. Melinda and Anita were welcomed to the neighborhood but if they had observed more closely it was through gritted teeth. But they had no reason to suspect Kinga and Anita of being nothing but friendly and took them at their word. They began playing nine ball for fun. Melinda and Timi partnered up against Kinga and Anita. The shooting was good but not of the highest quality as both pairs held something back in reserve. As expected someone suggested “we make it interesting.”
Timi suggested ”How about $5 a game?”
Anita answered ”We don’t play for chickenfeed, do we Kinga?”
”Well what do you suggest?” chimed in Melinda.
”Let’s make it $50 a game.” stated Kinga.
”that’s a little rich for our blood, we’re just two college girls.”
”Hah! From what I heard you cleaned out all the guys so you should have lots of money. OK, then, how about $25, we don’t play for less.
”All right, at least we can play until we lose all we won.”

The play began. The matches were close and the wining team went back and forth for sometime. Another competition developed beside the nine ball games. Most of the crowd supported Kinga and Anita, at least openly for they dare not do so otherwise. Among those there were some who secretly wanted to see Melinda and Timi beat their asses. There were a few who were brave or stupid enough to cheer openly for Melinda and Timi, they liked their spunk to defy the ruling bitches (even if they didn’t know Kinga and Anita were the ruling bitches.)

Whether it be luck or more skill, Melinda and Timi started to win more games. After a few hours of playing they finally cleaned out Kinga and Anita. Kinga and Anita wanted to keep playing to win their money back but Melinda told them “We don’t take IOUs. No money, no play.” The look that came back from Kinga and Anita told our two small town girls that it was perhaps time to leave. They went to the ladies room to freshen up and relieve themselves before taking the El ride back. Melinda had more serious business than just a tinkle and remained in a stall while Timi came out. She began touching up her make up and brushing her long, blonde hair. Both purses were on the sink top with Timi keeping an eye on them.  

Kinga and Anita watched Melinda and Timi go off to the little girls’ room. They waited a short time and then fallowed them in. They entered to see Timi brushing her hair. Melinda was not to be seen.
”Why look who we have here, little Timi or is that short for Timid. She sure looks like a frightened little blonde to me?” snickered Anita.
Timi whirled around to face tem and instinctively grabbed the twopuses on the counter top.
”What do you want?”    
”We want our money back.”
”We won it fair and square.”
”We don’t like hustlers. Give us our money or you’ll regret it. Can I beat her up after we get our money?”
{You can do whatever your heart desires; even fuck her if you want!”

While this banter was going on Kinga and Anita moved closer to Timi. Timi clutched the handbags tightly to her bosom. If it came to it she could swing them as a weapon. Kinga and Anita spread apart as they approached Timi. Timi tried to face them but was trapped as they moved to each side of her. Melinda could hear the commotion but “was indisposed” which is as politely as I can say it. And certain things can’t be rushed as nature takes its course. You could say she was caught with her panties down and no amount of grunting or pushing could speed things up. Need I be more exlicit?
   
Kinda and Anita continued to move in slowly on each side so Timi couldn’t slip past them and so she couldn’t attack them one at a time. But close enough that she couldn’t run between them to escape. They worked as a team who done this before and knew exactly what they were doing. None of the stupid things you see in the moves where first one attacks and gets slugged and then the other moves in. Both figured they could take the slender blonde themselves but they weren’t taking any chances. She couldn’t fight them both at once.

Kinda moved in on Timi’s right side and Anita from her left. Being right handed Timi raised the handbook in her right hand to swing it at Kinga.At the same time Anita wrapped Timi’s long, blonde hair around her fingers and yanked her head hard to the side. There was a lot of malice in that hairpull. Anita had been tempted several times during the game to use Timi’s blonde hair to rap her head against the pool table. Now she was fulfilling her desire.

Timi could put nothing behind her blow with her head being simultaneously jerked to her left. Kinga easily caught the handbag and took it away. Anita was still jerking Timi’s head around by the hair as Kinga yanked the other handbag out of Timi’s clutches. She did it hard enough to bruise at least one of Timi’s tits.  Kinga opened both handbags and dumped the contents on the sink counter top. Anita continued with her attack and slammed the back of Timi’s head against the mirror behind the sink. It is a wonder the mirror didn’t break.

Kinda sifted through the contents there were  spilled out on the counter top. She opened a couple of small purses that were in the handbags but only found some coins. The money was not to be found.. With Kinda distracted, Timi got a chance to fight back at Anita. She turned with her side bent over the sink and sunk her hands into Anita’s long, lush, black hair. She banged the side of Anita’s head against the mirror. Anita wound up and gave a hard slap with her left hand across Timi’s face.

”It’s not here. WHERE’S OUR MONEY!”
”You mean, OUR money” Timi was being feisty even though she was in a fight with Anita and took another hard slap on the face.
Kinda took ahold of Timi’s right arm and spun her around to face her, delivering a slap to her left cheek. ”Tell me where out money is, you fucking bitch.”
”That’s for me to know and you to find out.” . Timi tried to hit Kinda but Anita grabbed her wrist from behind. She brought Timi’s arm down and then twisted it behind and up her back.
”Tell us or I’ll break your weak arm off.”
Timi gave a squeal of pain but would not say anything.
”Maybe she has it in her clothes. Let’s strip her.”
Kinda fingered the knot in Timi’s halter top to either untie it or just rip it off.

At that moment the stall door banged open and Melinda came charging out.. Without bothering to wash her hands she flew into Kinda, at full speed. Her momentum shoved Kinda backward. Kinda’s back slammed hard into the tiled wall. Melinda moved her hands to her hair and began beating the back of her head against the wall.

Anita was still getting the best of Timi. Kinda’s slap had turned her head to the right. With her hand still yanking Timi’s hair and having Timi’s right arm in a hammerlock, she turned Timi to face the sink and then pushed her head down, pinning Timi against the sink. She used her leverage to force Timi’s arm to near the breaking point. Anita was close enough to reach out and yank Melinda back by the hair.

As Melinda was pulled backward Kinga pushed off the wall with her feet. Now Melinda went stumbling backward. She bounced off the protruding wall of the stall and both she and Kinga went down. As they fell Melinda was able to turn them so she ended up onto of Kinga facing her. She gave Kinga two hard slaps across the face. Kinga wound up and gave Melinda a knuckle sandwich that rattled her teeth. Melinda delivered a blow back that rocked Kinga’s head. This was a real brawl, no girlie slapping anymore.
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Re: Pool Hall Smack Down
« Reply #1 on: September 17, 2010, 08:38:33 AM »
Hhhm, a great exciting start - eagerly awaiting to see how this turns out - (For myself, hoping Melinda & Timi manage to teach the 2 bitches a humiliating lesson - LOL!) ::) :P ;D

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« Reply #2 on: September 17, 2010, 04:42:51 PM »
Hhhm, a great exciting start - eagerly awaiting to see how this turns out - (For myself, hoping Melinda & Timi manage to teach the 2 bitches a humiliating lesson - LOL!) ::) :P ;D

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Glad you like it. Just so you know the pool hall, pizza place, and bar (called Talbott's) were real places. I don't remember the names of the pool hall or pizza place.

Do you really think that two small town, somewhat naive teenagers can stand up to two tough, battle proven teenage bitches (with obviously fake IDs).? Maybe so.... Maybe not.... We shall see.... To confess I often don't know how a fight will turn out when I start writing it. I get ideas about how the action should do and sometimes the endings just write themselves.

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« Reply #3 on: September 19, 2010, 05:38:35 PM »
Anita kept Timi pinned against the sink. She was pulled Timi’s hair as hard as she could., which was hard enough to remove strands now and then. She had Timi’s right arm trapped between their bodies and pushed into a painful chickenwing. Anita pressed down on Timi with her body, bending her further over the sink. She pushed her far enough that she could use her hair to bang her forehead against the mirror. Anita was too experienced a fighter to do something stupid to let Timi get out from under her.

Melinda had ended up on top of Kinga when they went to the floor. She was getting the better of Kinga from her superior position. Kinga drove with her legs and got on top of Melinda. She delivered some hard punches. Melinda forced them to roll in the same direction. But as she got on top Kinga used their momentum to continue the roll. The opposite wall stopped their progress. Melinda was the unlucky one this time. She hit the wall and was three quarters under Kinga. Kinga had Melinda by the hair with both hands and was beating the back of her head against the wall and the floor. Melinda didn’t wait to be knocked out. She planted her leg against the wall and pushed to roll them over again. Kinga and Melinda rolled and rolled, hand buried in the other’s hair and legs fighting for top position.

They rolled right into the back of the legs of Anita, knocking them out from under her. Anita fell over them, pulling Timi by the hair on top of her. Anita hit hard on her back and the back of her head, knocking the wind out of her and dazing her. Timi wasn’t at full faculties either, having had her forehead beaten repeatedly against the mirror. Anita had tripped over Kinga, who had ended up on top of Melinda with her legs on top of Kinga. Likewise Timi who was facing up on top of Anita. Both Anita and Timi started thrashing and kicking wildly in their foggy haze. Melinda got a few kicks on the side but Kinga took the brunt of the kicks since she was on top.

Timi’s mind cleared first. She placed her feet on Kinga and shoved hard to take herself over Kinga. It didn’t quite work, instead pushing Kinga off of Melinda. Kinga rolled under the sink. Melinda rolled onto right her side to face Kinga. She bent her left leg and drove it hard into Kinga’s stomach. Whoosshhhh! The air was expelled from Kinga. Timi and Anita were still kicking wildly. Melinda received two hard kicks, one from each fighter, one kick square on the back and one at the back of her head. Melinda felt the pain from the spiked heels. That caused Melinda to flinch and she didn’t pull her leg back fast enough. Kinga wound her fingers of her left hand around Melinda’s ankle. She pulled Melinda’s left shoe off with her right hand and began beating the side of Melinda’s calf with the spiked heel.

In the meantime the more alert Timi managed to roll off to the side of Anita. She got to her knees and sunk her fingers into the lush black hair of Anita. Standing up, she pulled the groggy Anita up to her feet by the hair. The flash of pain from Timi’s knee into the crotch made Anita fully alert. Before Anita knew what was going on a second kick hit the same spot causing a shriek from Anita. Timi then whirled Anita around by the hair and slammed her back into the tiled wall. A couple of hard bangs of Anita’s head against the wall made Anita groggy again and her knees buckle. Timi held her up and began hitting her with punches to the body and the breasts. A hard uppercut to the left breast knocked it completely out of the low cut vee of her tight sweater.

The spiked heel of Melinda’s shoe only a few centimeters wide at the bottom. It caused great pressure because of its small area and the sharpness of the heel left marks and even some small cuts on Melinda’s calf. Hits to the hard shin caused even more pain. Melinda finally managed to yank her foot away but Kinda was on her like a cat. Kinda knew how to use a weapon and Melinda’s sharp heel was a weapon. She cracked Melinda on the left temple. Some blood oozed out of the cut. Worse yet, the blow to the temple momentarily stunned Melinda and put her out of commission.

Kinga shoved Melinda out of the way with her feet and climbed out from under the sink. She jumped and grabbed Timi’s blonde hair and flung her away from Anita. Timi bounced off a wall and caromed into a stall. “Nice bank shot” thought Kinga to herself as she chased after Timi. The dazed, semi-conscious Anita slid down the wall, sitting on her ass with her back against the wall and her legs bent in front of her.

Timi was able to spin around just as Kinga charged into the stall. Both women went for the hair. Kinga’s momentum knocked Timi back and Kinga rammed her head on the side of the stall. Timi responded by using Kinga’s forward motion to fling her against the other side of the stall. Kinga threw a vicious right at Timi’s head but Timi managed to block it with her left forearm. Timi kicked Kinga on the sin. It hurt but it was with the toe and did not do the same damage her heel would have. Kinga answered with a kick to the shin. Hands remained locked in the others hair, blonde hair and red hair as the two women kicked each other’s shins.

Kinga got nasty. She placed her sharp heel on Timi’s arch and pressed down. A sharp pain shot up Timi’s leg as the heel pierced the skin. As Timi reacted to the pain Kinga used the opportunity to slam Timi’s head against the side of the stall. The quarters inside the stall were tight so Kinga could not get  a lot into the blow. Still it hurt and Timi was off balance. Kinda pushed Timi further into the stall and Timi was forced down onto the commode. Kinga sat on her legs to pin Timi on the seat.

 Back outside the two groggy fighters were beginning to stir. Anita had suffered the worse damage caused by Timi’s punches and banging of her head against the wall. Melinda sat up first. She rubbed her temple only to find some blood on her hand. Her shin was also hurting badly from the many marks left by Kinga’s beating of it. She rubbed her shin to try and alleviate the pain. She heard Anita groaning and starting to wake up. Melinda knew it was time to react before Anita could fight back. She took off her other shoe in order to fight better. She quickly crawled over to Anita. She pulled her legs out straight and kneeled over them. She got some revenge for Kinga’s pounding by hitting Anita a few times on the head with the heel of her shoe. But Melinda’s nature was not as cruel as Kinga’s or Anita’s. She tossed the shoe to the side. As Anita was becoming more fully awake, Melinda banged Anita’s head against the wall again to once again render her helpless.

Melinda spotted Anita’s large, c or d cup breast hanging down out of her top where Timi’s blow had knocked it up and out of the vee top sweater. Melinda was still not thinking too clearly. Had she been doing so she would have knocked Anita completely out and gone and helped Timi. Instead her mind focused on Anita’s tit. It was much superior to her own tits, bigger and seemed more perfectly shaped. “Probably filled with silicon, it’s just too firm and shapely” thought Melinda. She grabbed as much of the tit as she could with her right hand and squeezed. “Shit, it’s real. Well these are going to be really sore when you wake up, gutter snipe!” Melinda reached in and pulled Anita’s right tit out of the sweater. Melinda began to work both tits and nipples over.
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Re: Pool Hall Smack Down
« Reply #4 on: September 19, 2010, 08:12:14 PM »
Tee hee! Looks like the two tough bitches are being surprised & humiliated here, huh? LOL!  ::) ;D
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Re: Pool Hall Smack Down
« Reply #5 on: September 20, 2010, 01:14:01 AM »
Never in my born days did I imagine someone -- besides me -- would write a story set in the neighborhood where I grew up, so thank you, byline.  Yes, I'm a Rogers park Chicago boy, and I used to catch the Howard Street El to go to Wrigley Field and watch the Cubs play.  I also still remember well the Howard Street Greasers, a gang whose leader, Ace, was a friend of mine in Elementary School.  I was long gone from the neighborhood by the time he paralyzed some poor kid and went for a long stretch at Pontiac.  Bad stuff.  He was a good guy who was always drawn to violence.  I watched him give this guy a concussion in a schoolyard fight -- in 6th grade.  Ace was no one to mess with, even then.  You should've seen all the blood the other kid puked up after getting his head bashed into the asphalt..

Anyway, you got it right.  That used to be a nice neighborhood but is exceedingly dangerous now, west of Sheridan Road.  I don't have any memory of that pool hall, but I was just a little kid back then, so pool halls weren't on my radar.

I'm enjoying the fight.  I'm pulling for the smalltown girls.  I guess that makes me a traitor, but Kinga and Anita are so damned bitchy I'd love to see them taken down a peg.  And yes, I believe smalltown girls can hold their own with city babes.  Smalltown girls are always up in each other's shit and there's always bad blood and fighting over boys and petty insults.  An aggressive girl can get a lot of experience brawling in small town America, especially if she's in a redneck town.

Keep up the good work!

BTW, you write like a Brit.  How did you get to know this neighborhood?

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« Reply #6 on: September 20, 2010, 01:14:26 AM »
Anita kept Timi pinned against the sink. She was pulled Timi’s hair as hard as she could., which was hard enough to remove strands now and then. She had Timi’s right arm trapped between their bodies and pushed into a painful chickenwing. Anita pressed down on Timi with her body, bending her further over the sink. She pushed her far enough that she could use her hair to bang her forehead against the mirror. Anita was too experienced a fighter to do something stupid to let Timi get out from under her.

Melinda had ended up on top of Kinga when they went to the floor. She was getting the better of Kinga from her superior position. Kinga drove with her legs and got on top of Melinda. She delivered some hard punches. Melinda forced them to roll in the same direction. But as she got on top Kinga used their momentum to continue the roll. The opposite wall stopped their progress. Melinda was the unlucky one this time. She hit the wall and was three quarters under Kinga. Kinga had Melinda by the hair with both hands and was beating the back of her head against the wall and the floor. Melinda didn’t wait to be knocked out. She planted her leg against the wall and pushed to roll them over again. Kinga and Melinda rolled and rolled, hand buried in the other’s hair and legs fighting for top position.

They rolled right into the back of the legs of Anita, knocking them out from under her. Anita fell over them, pulling Timi by the hair on top of her. Anita hit hard on her back and the back of her head, knocking the wind out of her and dazing her. Timi wasn’t at full faculties either, having had her forehead beaten repeatedly against the mirror. Anita had tripped over Kinga, who had ended up on top of Melinda with her legs on top of Kinga. Likewise Timi who was facing up on top of Anita. Both Anita and Timi started thrashing and kicking wildly in their foggy haze. Melinda got a few kicks on the side but Kinga took the brunt of the kicks since she was on top.

Timi’s mind cleared first. She placed her feet on Kinga and shoved hard to take herself over Kinga. It didn’t quite work, instead pushing Kinga off of Melinda. Kinga rolled under the sink. Melinda rolled onto right her side to face Kinga. She bent her left leg and drove it hard into Kinga’s stomach. Whoosshhhh! The air was expelled from Kinga. Timi and Anita were still kicking wildly. Melinda received two hard kicks, one from each fighter, one kick square on the back and one at the back of her head. Melinda felt the pain from the spiked heels. That caused Melinda to flinch and she didn’t pull her leg back fast enough. Kinga wound her fingers of her left hand around Melinda’s ankle. She pulled Melinda’s left shoe off with her right hand and began beating the side of Melinda’s calf with the spiked heel.

In the meantime the more alert Timi managed to roll off to the side of Anita. She got to her knees and sunk her fingers into the lush black hair of Anita. Standing up, she pulled the groggy Anita up to her feet by the hair. The flash of pain from Timi’s knee into the crotch made Anita fully alert. Before Anita knew what was going on a second kick hit the same spot causing a shriek from Anita. Timi then whirled Anita around by the hair and slammed her back into the tiled wall. A couple of hard bangs of Anita’s head against the wall made Anita groggy again and her knees buckle. Timi held her up and began hitting her with punches to the body and the breasts. A hard uppercut to the left breast knocked it completely out of the low cut vee of her tight sweater.

The spiked heel of Melinda’s shoe only a few centimeters wide at the bottom. It caused great pressure because of its small area and the sharpness of the heel left marks and even some small cuts on Melinda’s calf. Hits to the hard shin caused even more pain. Melinda finally managed to yank her foot away but Kinda was on her like a cat. Kinda knew how to use a weapon and Melinda’s sharp heel was a weapon. She cracked Melinda on the left temple. Some blood oozed out of the cut. Worse yet, the blow to the temple momentarily stunned Melinda and put her out of commission.

Kinga shoved Melinda out of the way with her feet and climbed out from under the sink. She jumped and grabbed Timi’s blonde hair and flung her away from Anita. Timi bounced off a wall and caromed into a stall. “Nice bank shot” thought Kinga to herself as she chased after Timi. The dazed, semi-conscious Anita slid down the wall, sitting on her ass with her back against the wall and her legs bent in front of her.

Timi was able to spin around just as Kinga charged into the stall. Both women went for the hair. Kinga’s momentum knocked Timi back and Kinga rammed her head on the side of the stall. Timi responded by using Kinga’s forward motion to fling her against the other side of the stall. Kinga threw a vicious right at Timi’s head but Timi managed to block it with her left forearm. Timi kicked Kinga on the sin. It hurt but it was with the toe and did not do the same damage her heel would have. Kinga answered with a kick to the shin. Hands remained locked in the others hair, blonde hair and red hair as the two women kicked each other’s shins.

Kinga got nasty. She placed her sharp heel on Timi’s arch and pressed down. A sharp pain shot up Timi’s leg as the heel pierced the skin. As Timi reacted to the pain Kinga used the opportunity to slam Timi’s head against the side of the stall. The quarters inside the stall were tight so Kinga could not get  a lot into the blow. Still it hurt and Timi was off balance. Kinda pushed Timi further into the stall and Timi was forced down onto the commode. Kinga sat on her legs to pin Timi on the seat.

 Back outside the two groggy fighters were beginning to stir. Anita had suffered the worse damage caused by Timi’s punches and banging of her head against the wall. Melinda sat up first. She rubbed her temple only to find some blood on her hand. Her shin was also hurting badly from the many marks left by Kinga’s beating of it. She rubbed her shin to try and alleviate the pain. She heard Anita groaning and starting to wake up. Melinda knew it was time to react before Anita could fight back. She took off her other shoe in order to fight better. She quickly crawled over to Anita. She pulled her legs out straight and kneeled over them. She got some revenge for Kinga’s pounding by hitting Anita a few times on the head with the heel of her shoe. But Melinda’s nature was not as cruel as Kinga’s or Anita’s. She tossed the shoe to the side. As Anita was becoming more fully awake, Melinda banged Anita’s head against the wall again to once again render her helpless.

Melinda spotted Anita’s large, c or d cup breast hanging down out of her top where Timi’s blow had knocked it up and out of the vee top sweater. Melinda was still not thinking too clearly. Had she been doing so she would have knocked Anita completely out and gone and helped Timi. Instead her mind focused on Anita’s tit. It was much superior to her own tits, bigger and seemed more perfectly shaped. “Probably filled with silicon, it’s just too firm and shapely” thought Melinda. She grabbed as much of the tit as she could with her right hand and squeezed. “Shit, it’s real. Well these are going to be really sore when you wake up, gutter snipe!” Melinda reached in and pulled Anita’s right tit out of the sweater. Melinda began to work both tits and nipples over.

Installment 3

Ed. Note, This is a brutal fight. It is not a catfight over a boyfirend or some other inferred injustice or humiliation. It is a street brawl. That is the only kind of fight that Kinga and Anita know. It is why they win their fights because they are willing to do anything in a fight to win.

Melinda was really doing a job on Anita’s big tits. She tore into them with glee, squeezing, pinching, twisting, raking, and punching. When she got bored of brutalizing her tits she went to work on her nipples. More twisting, pinching, stretching out, driving her nails into the sides when she pulled the nipples out. Her favorite was to massage the tits to make the nipples erect. Then place them between her thumb and forefinger and roll them back and forth, all the while squeezing them as hard as she could. If Anita came out of her stupor to grab Melinda’s hands and pull them off her tits, Melinda would grab her hair and bang her lead against the wall until Anita lapsed into semi-consciousness.

Kinga had Timi pinned on the toilet seat. She was sitting on her legs to trap her there. Kinga held Timi by the hair and bent her heat back. She was slapping her back and forth across the face while holding her head. Timi couldn’t fight back because her arms were pinned between Kinga’s legs and her own, i.e. Kinga was sitting on Timi’s arms crossed under the legs. Even though Kinga had Timi by the hair, each slap snapped her head to and fro. Timi’s cheeks had long gone past red to a dark color. Tears streamed down her cheeks and her eyes fluttered indicating she couldn’t take much more.

Kinga decided it was time to put Time out of her misery so she could go take care of Melinda who seemed to be getting the better of Anita. Kinga stood up so she could put all her weight into a hard right cross. Timi was in bad condition but alert enough to feel Kinga get off her legs. She instinctively raised her right leg. Bent at the knee she placed in on Kinga’s gut. She shoved hard. Kinga went flying out of the stall and banged into the wall. Fortunately for Kinga she was able to turn and take the brunt of the contact with her shoulder, not the back of her head. She saw Melinda sitting on Anita and torturing her tits. In one motion Kinga came off the wall and did a flying tackle on Melinda.

Kinga bowled Melinda over onto her side and landed on top of her. “”You country bumpkin, you’re gonna pay for what you did to Anita.”  Kinga put her finger in the big loop of Melinda’s pierced earring. She ripped it out, tearing Melinda’s earlobe at the same time. Then she used Melinda’s hair to bang the side of her head against the floor.

Timi finally got stood up, a little wobbly at first but soon gained her balance. She came out of the stall. She moved as quickly as she could although she was still not at full strength. She stepped on Anita as she went by her, driving her spiked heel into Anita’s place of business. She grabbed Kinga by the hair and pulled her up off of Melinda. Kinga came up swinging. She hit Timi on the jaw and sent her staggering back. She charged after Timi and deliver a blow into her stomach, bending her forward. An elbow t the side of the head sent Timi to the floor.

She was getting ready to pierce Timi with her spiked heel when all of a sudden she was whipped around by Melinda. Melinda had struggled to get up in spite of her bleeding earlobe and her sore head. Kinga came full circle and locked up with Melinda. She went immediately for Melinda’s ripped earlobe with one hand and grabbed her other earring with the other. Melinda would learn not to wear such big looped earrings that were easy to grab the next time she might get in a fight. she let go of Kinga to cover her extremely painful, bleeding ears. Kinga took both her hands and slammed the base of her palms into both sides of Melinda’s head at the same time. Then she brought her right hand across her body in front of Melinda. She delivered an elbow to the side of Melinda’s face on the return trip. She caught Melinda on the cheek and square on her damage ear. Kinga had long learned that a good solid elbow to the head or jaw was more effective than a punch with the fist and didn’t hurt your knuckles or break a finger.

Melinda’s eyes went glassy and she crumpled to the floor, in a spiral in the direction that Kinga had elbowed her. Timi was struggling to get up. At least she appeared to be struggling but this was a ploy. Kinga charged at her to pound down on her with an chop before Timi could get all the way up. Timi anticipated Kinga’s action and bent down. As Kinga landed on her back she put her elbow over the back of Kinga’s neck and flipped her over her. Kinga crashed hard but got up immediately. She charged at Timi, winding up to deliver a haymaker to Timi. Timi grabbed her arm and threw Anita down with a hip toss. She kept ahold of Kinga’s arm.. She stepped on Kinga’s side and pulled her arm out straight. Then bent her wrist back with her other hand. Kinga was crying out in pain as Timi bent her wrist more and more. She had Kinga in a perfect judo hold after tossing her. Kinga started pleading with her to stop.

“And why should I stop? What do you have to offer me?”
“ Anything you want, only don’t’ break my wrist. I’ll do or say anything, just let me go.”
“I don’t trust you. If I let you up you’ll just attack us from behind when you get the chance.”
“”No, no, oh fuck no. I won’t, please I can feel my wrist breaking.”
“OK, if you cross your heart and hope to die.” Timi slackened her grip and then suddenly shouted. “Oh fuck, what the hell…” and she snapped Kinga’s wrist back breaking it. “Looks like you won’t be shooting any pool or ripping out any more earrings for awhile.” A sinister smile crossed her face that Melinda didn’t know Timi was capable of.

Speaking of Melinda, she had been all but been knocked out. She couldn’t get up but she opened her eyes to see Timi toss Kinga around and finish her off. “Where in the hell did you learn that?”
“I’ve been taking self dense lesson. I figure it might come in handy, especially her in the big city.”
“Shit, why didn’t you use it earlier.”
“Just didn’t have the chance in the close quarters.”

Just then Anita started to stir. “Ayeeeee!!!” she cried out as her vagina told her it had been spiked.
“This one is mine” said Melinda as she struggled to her knees and then stood up. She walked over to Anita who was still sitting with her back against the wall. She had moved her head out several inches as she was starting to get up. Melinda kneed her hard right on the face. Anita’s head cracked a tile as it bounced off the wall. She was out cold. Her nose was broken and bleeding and she had lost her front teeth.

Timi untie Kinga’s halter top and took it off. She couldn’t resist giving her tits a couple of shots. Timi took Kinga’s top and wrapped it around Melinda’s head to cover her ears and help stop the flow of blood. Then the two women freshened themselves up. Washed their faces and strolled out of the ladies room. When patrons asked about the bandage on Melinda’s head she just answered “Oh, I’m OK. You should see the other two. They need some medical attention. They learned that big city toughies and cxnts are no match for us small town bitches.”

With that Melinda and Time returned to their motel to enjoy the rest of their holiday. The were sore and even injured but feel good about a job well done. And they had earned quite a bit of extra cash. Hmmmm,. wonder where they had hidden it. Melinda had to have her ears treated at a clinic but it was told her earlobes would return to normal.

Poor Kinga and Anita suffered even more. Once it was learned that these two little country girls had beaten them so badly they lost a lot of their mystic. Women and men who had been intimidated before were no longer afraid of them and stood up to them. They were no longer queen bitches of the pool hall.
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Re: Pool Hall Smack Down
« Reply #7 on: September 20, 2010, 01:22:14 AM »
Never in my born days did I imagine someone -- besides me -- would write a story set in the neighborhood where I grew up, so thank you, byline.  Yes, I'm a Rogers park Chicago boy, and I used to catch the Howard Street El to go to Wrigley Field and watch the Cubs play.  I also still remember well the Howard Street Greasers, a gang whose leader, Ace, was a friend of mine in Elementary School.  I was long gone from the neighborhood by the time he paralyzed some poor kid and went for a long stretch at Pontiac.  Bad stuff.  He was a good guy who was always drawn to violence.  I watched him give this guy a concussion in a schoolyard fight -- in 6th grade.  Ace was no one to mess with, even then.  You should've seen all the blood the other kid puked up after getting his head bashed into the asphalt..

Anyway, you got it right.  That used to be a nice neighborhood but is exceedingly dangerous now, west of Sheridan Road.  I don't have any memory of that pool hall, but I was just a little kid back then, so pool halls weren't on my radar.

I'm enjoying the fight.  I'm pulling for the smalltown girls.  I guess that makes me a traitor, but Kinga and Anita are so damned bitchy I'd love to see them taken down a peg.  And yes, I believe smalltown girls can hold their own with city babes.  Smalltown girls are always up in each other's shit and there's always bad blood and fighting over boys and petty insults.  An aggressive girl can get a lot of experience brawling in small town America, especially if she's in a redneck town.

Keep up the good work!

BTW, you write like a Brit.  How did you get to know this neighborhood?

I knew the neighborhood because I went to Northwestern University. I lived in Evanston for awhile and then move south of Howard St. near Ridge Rd. We frequented the bar, pizza parlor and pool hall quite a bit. The neighborhood was not great but not too bad when I was there. A friend of mine did get robbed at knife point in Rogers Park.

Years later I went back for a visit. The bar had moved because the neighborhood had gotten too rough and they couldn't keep waiters and waitresses. The pizza parlor and pool hall also disappeared. That was too bad because the pizza was really great and it was a real pool hall, just like I described.

Hope you like the ending of the story. The story is more brutal than I usually write but these were street girls who started the fight.
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Re: Pool Hall Smack Down
« Reply #8 on: September 20, 2010, 03:50:22 AM »
Very nice ending!  That really is a grisly catfight story, but you did a great job.  All that chaos is very realistic, like YouTube fights where girls jump in and everything goes crazy.  Yes, I was pleased to see the street girls get their asses kicked.  Justice was served, but it sure as hell wasn't easy.  ;)

Thanks also for telling how you know about the neighborhood.  It might be hard to believe, but that was once among the nicest neighborhoods in Chicago.  Nowadays, a lot of small apartment buildings are surrounded by 10-foot tall steel fences with locked gates.  Sad.

I never went to Northwestern, but I've walked the campus many times.  Evanston is still a very nice place, thankfully.

I'll be looking for more of your stories, byline. 

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Re: Pool Hall Smack Down
« Reply #9 on: September 20, 2010, 08:17:07 AM »
Yup, was nice & exciting for a change to see the street girls get dethroned by a couple of small town girls. IRL it's not likely to happen, but here in fantasy land, nice to see an upset every now & again! Variety adds spice to the catfighting scene! LOL!  ::) :D ;)

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