On a related note, I do have a storyline in the works which a Catfight court where a judge could dole out punishment for an infraction.
On a related note, I do have a storyline in the works which a Catfight court where a judge could dole out punishment for an infraction. I don't have it fleshed out completely but right now, if I lose in the court battle, the judge will pick my next several opponents. Of course, who knows if I'll keep going with it or not... or when lol.
Surely all matters that might go to Catpin Court would be settled by Trial By Combat?
Being a prosecutor in Catpin Court is a pretty strenuous occupation...On a related note, I do have a storyline in the works which a Catfight court where a judge could dole out punishment for an infraction. I don't have it fleshed out completely but right now, if I lose in the court battle, the judge will pick my next several opponents. Of course, who knows if I'll keep going with it or not... or when lol.
Except it Australia, where it's trial by wombat.Surely all matters that might go to Catpin Court would be settled by Trial By Combat?
Being a prosecutor in Catpin Court is a pretty strenuous occupation...On a related note, I do have a storyline in the works which a Catfight court where a judge could dole out punishment for an infraction. I don't have it fleshed out completely but right now, if I lose in the court battle, the judge will pick my next several opponents. Of course, who knows if I'll keep going with it or not... or when lol.
Of course things are settled with trial by combat. :)
Totally not enough hair pulling by those wombats.... I thought the animals would be spared from the "wussification" that has taken place in Australia since the mid 90's, guess not. LolExcept it Australia, where it's trial by wombat.Surely all matters that might go to Catpin Court would be settled by Trial By Combat?
Being a prosecutor in Catpin Court is a pretty strenuous occupation...On a related note, I do have a storyline in the works which a Catfight court where a judge could dole out punishment for an infraction. I don't have it fleshed out completely but right now, if I lose in the court battle, the judge will pick my next several opponents. Of course, who knows if I'll keep going with it or not... or when lol.
Of course things are settled with trial by combat. :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fqdp5P7P3pI
As you see, not much action but loads and loads of attitude.
Oh, but the backing in - what a diss!Totally not enough hair pulling by those wombats.... I thought the animals would be spared from the "wussification" that has taken place in Australia since the mid 90's, guess not. LolExcept it Australia, where it's trial by wombat.Surely all matters that might go to Catpin Court would be settled by Trial By Combat?
Being a prosecutor in Catpin Court is a pretty strenuous occupation...On a related note, I do have a storyline in the works which a Catfight court where a judge could dole out punishment for an infraction. I don't have it fleshed out completely but right now, if I lose in the court battle, the judge will pick my next several opponents. Of course, who knows if I'll keep going with it or not... or when lol.
Of course things are settled with trial by combat. :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fqdp5P7P3pI
As you see, not much action but loads and loads of attitude.
I see this as a challenge to work that into a story. I already have ideas.Oh, but the backing in - what a diss!Totally not enough hair pulling by those wombats.... I thought the animals would be spared from the "wussification" that has taken place in Australia since the mid 90's, guess not. LolExcept it Australia, where it's trial by wombat.Surely all matters that might go to Catpin Court would be settled by Trial By Combat?
Being a prosecutor in Catpin Court is a pretty strenuous occupation...On a related note, I do have a storyline in the works which a Catfight court where a judge could dole out punishment for an infraction. I don't have it fleshed out completely but right now, if I lose in the court battle, the judge will pick my next several opponents. Of course, who knows if I'll keep going with it or not... or when lol.
Of course things are settled with trial by combat. :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fqdp5P7P3pI
As you see, not much action but loads and loads of attitude.
Trial by Combat question: what happens in the event of a draw? A retrial?You know my style, there are no draws- fight to the end :)
Hi Tiberius, I’ll get working on this story. Some working titles might be:It would be WAY cool! And if you dropped her next time with a left hook, you'd get extra brownie points. By my calculations, you're still 28 knockouts behind Mexico's fighting nurse, Zulina 'la loba' Muñoz, but closing fast (and I bet her dog can't play the banjo!)
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I don’t know if FyreCracka approves of pee jokes on her thread so I’ll stop. See what happens when a nurse gets started on such topics. I love the idea of Kelli and I side by side flexing while standing on our opponents. That would be cool. :)
It would be WAY cool! And if you dropped her next time with a left hook, you'd get extra brownie points. By my calculations, you're still 28 knockouts behind Mexico's fighting nurse, Zulina 'la loba' Muñoz, but closing fast (and I bet her dog can't play the banjo!)Thanks for the info. I’m definitely a Zulina Munoz fan now. She’s a nurse with knockout power and I read she likes to play guitar. I guess I’m not so way out there after all! I wonder if she likes Bruce. Her uniform is an old style outpatient or hospital floor style where ICU nurses wear scrubs. The cool thing about being a nurse with KO ability is that we can cause a concussion, then go back and do our own head injury assessment
She has a mean right hook though:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pjYEeYtnWw4
and her left's not bad either:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1YdtRXAZZHg (5:38)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FdhRGshk7J0
But her uniform isn't half as chic as yours: https://www.jornada.com.mx/2009/12/31/fotos/a28n1dep-1_mini.jpg
And you're going to HAVE to have a showdown with another soccer mum, Kelli. You know the kind of thing, her daughter's pulling your daughter's hair all the way through the match, and you complain to the referee, and she tells you to butt out, and the referee blows the whistle and says "You two, take it somewhere else!" and you say "Good idea!", and as soon as the match is over, you and she head off to a quiet spot behind the changing rooms to settle your differences - followed by all the players from both schools, AND their parents, and the referee agrees to officiate, and… well, you can take it from there.I know I’ve been slow getting new stories out. Since you brought this idea up, my next journal story is a fight with a mom from my daughter’s dance school. It’s not nearly as exciting though as what you’re proposing for Kelli. This one is a private fight in an empty dance studio witnessed by one person, the school’s owner who is a former professional ballerina, and herself a catpin owner.
That's much more imaginative. I love the professional ballerina with a catpin angle. If you follow ballet, you'll know who Darcey Bussell is: as the New York Times once put it: "There are three good things about the Royal Ballet: Darcey Bussell, Darcey Bussell and Darcey Bussell."And you're going to HAVE to have a showdown with another soccer mum, Kelli. You know the kind of thing, her daughter's pulling your daughter's hair all the way through the match, and you complain to the referee, and she tells you to butt out, and the referee blows the whistle and says "You two, take it somewhere else!" and you say "Good idea!", and as soon as the match is over, you and she head off to a quiet spot behind the changing rooms to settle your differences - followed by all the players from both schools, AND their parents, and the referee agrees to officiate, and… well, you can take it from there.I know I’ve been slow getting new stories out. Since you brought this idea up, my next journal story is a fight with a mom from my daughter’s dance school. It’s not nearly as exciting though as what you’re proposing for Kelli. This one is a private fight in an empty dance studio witnessed by one person, the school’s owner who is a former professional ballerina, and herself a catpin owner.
And you're going to HAVE to have a showdown with another soccer mum, Kelli. You know the kind of thing, her daughter's pulling your daughter's hair all the way through the match, and you complain to the referee, and she tells you to butt out, and the referee blows the whistle and says "You two, take it somewhere else!" and you say "Good idea!", and as soon as the match is over, you and she head off to a quiet spot behind the changing rooms to settle your differences - followed by all the players from both schools, AND their parents, and the referee agrees to officiate, and… well, you can take it from there.
It would be WAY cool! And if you dropped her next time with a left hook, you'd get extra brownie points. By my calculations, you're still 28 knockouts behind Mexico's fighting nurse, Zulina 'la loba' Muñoz, but closing fast (and I bet her dog can't play the banjo!)
She has a mean right hook though:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pjYEeYtnWw4
and her left's not bad either:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1YdtRXAZZHg (5:38)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FdhRGshk7J0
But her uniform isn't half as chic as yours: https://www.jornada.com.mx/2009/12/31/fotos/a28n1dep-1_mini.jpg
That's a sweet peach of a knock-out shown in all it's sweet glory starting at 1:12 of this recording
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FdhRGshk7J0
I'm professionally envious....
...also I want my own dancing wolfman mascot accompanying me to the ring ;D
OK, pass on it, just like you passed on the chance to buy stock in Apple or Google, or play Dorothy in The Wizard of Oz…So much to process here. We’re still pontificating :). I think the security guard beating a child would prompt the moderators to remove the story. Keep the ideas coming. One of the reasons FyreCracka started this post is so readers can share ideas of what they’d like to see in these stories or comment or ask questions on existing storylines. Don’t be shy, folks.
If the moderators haven't taken down my post, they wouldn't have taken down the story either because I wasn't suggesting you describe the child being beaten up; just state that it happened and that your daughter/niece had filmed it to establish the motivation for the fight. But if I'd wanted either of you to write the actual story I'd outlined, I wouldn't have told everyone the plot; I'd have sent you all a personal message. All I was saying is that I like the idea of the three of you taking down trained fighters and bullies. The only part I liked in the otherwise abysmal 'Fair Game' was the elevator scene - where the mother slaps her child for almost no reason and Cindy Crawford decks her (the mother not the child…)OK, pass on it, just like you passed on the chance to buy stock in Apple or Google, or play Dorothy in The Wizard of Oz…So much to process here. We’re still pontificating :). I think the security guard beating a child would prompt the moderators to remove the story. Keep the ideas coming. One of the reasons FyreCracka started this post is so readers can share ideas of what they’d like to see in these stories or comment or ask questions on existing storylines. Don’t be shy, folks.
All I was saying is that I like the idea of the three of you taking down trained fighters and bullies.I think that’s a good concept. I’m not sure if every fight needs a catpin. Standing up to a bully or protecting someone else or putting some miserable arrogant bitch in her place because it is necessary can make a very good story.
Attagirl!All I was saying is that I like the idea of the three of you taking down trained fighters and bullies.I think that’s a good concept. I’m not sure if every fight needs a catpin. Standing up to a bully or protecting someone else or putting some miserable arrogant bitch in her place because it is necessary can make a very good story.
"FC's Angels" we'll call you, and I love the fact that we have a blonde, a brunette and a REDHEAD who talks with one of them funny English accidents y'all love in the States. That's something they didn't have in the Spelling-Goldberg version. "Once upon a time, there were three little girls…"All I was saying is that I like the idea of the three of you taking down trained fighters and bullies.I think that’s a good concept. I’m not sure if every fight needs a catpin. Standing up to a bully or protecting someone else or putting some miserable arrogant bitch in her place because it is necessary can make a very good story.
All I was saying is that I like the idea of the three of you taking down trained fighters and bullies.
Are any family gatherings with Jaymie present part of your holiday plans?My guess is that with Kelli and Jaymie in the same room, the atmosphere might be a little strained. But don't you get involved, Kiva. I'm sure you could handle Jaymie, that's not the problem, but she has a pet alligator, remember? I fear for your poor dog. Nothing a pet alligator likes better as an amuse-gueule than a banjo-playing pooch.
Is it a thing to wish people an UNhappy new year? I've never done it before, but I must say Jolene has COMPLETELY worn out my patience, and as for Jaymie and her pet alligator: Grrrrrr! >:( >:( >:(
I know I'll probably roast in the hottest of hot hells for saying this, but I rather enjoyed the fight Kelli lost against Michi. The setting, the fight and the challenge ("let's do this again in front of our husbands") were all perfect and she was a wonderfully sexy villainess. If you need her permission and can't track her down, isn't that what the CIA's there for? You pay taxes, don't you? Tell them to get their little butts into gear.
Or do they take Christmas off as well?
I do think this counts as an emergency.
I’m open to ideas, thoughts, suggestions. Anything you’d like to see in one of my upcoming chapters? Particular opponent? Type of fight? Storyline? Yes, I’m bound to lose sooner or later - hopefully much later, but you never know.Can't bear to think of you losing.
I'm getting very worried about Kelli and Jolene. They can't still be fighting can they? We had a war once in Europe that lasted 100 years and they're beginning to make that seem like a skirmish. Do you think perhaps one of those sailors you have in Texas kidnapped them and turned them into pirates? Or perhaps they made friends and went off to live on a desert island and the rowing boat capsized. If there's anything left of that shark Kaida caught, could we ask her or Agnetha to look in its belly and make sure it hasn't got Kelli and Jolene inside?Friends!?!?.... with Jolene.... as if.... Grrrrr!
I'm getting very worried about Kelli and Jolene. They can't still be fighting can they? We had a war once in Europe that lasted 100 years and they're beginning to make that seem like a skirmish. Do you think perhaps one of those sailors you have in Texas kidnapped them and turned them into pirates? Or perhaps they made friends and went off to live on a desert island and the rowing boat capsized. If there's anything left of that shark Kaida caught, could we ask her or Agnetha to look in its belly and make sure it hasn't got Kelli and Jolene inside?Friends!?!?.... with Jolene.... as if.... Grrrrr!
I've been doing a little bit here and there.... looks like I've settled on the championship being the next chapter though. :)
Me too! But if there's another chapter or two between times, I"m cool with that too.
Looking forward to this one. Can’t wait to hear how this played out.
Me too! But if there's another chapter or two between times, I"m cool with that too.
Looking forward to this one. Can’t wait to hear how this played out.
M vs M stories always strike me as a little unnatural - like mice fighting over a cat - but if others enjoy them, good luck to them. But write the stories whenever you get time and in whichever order you see fit. They're always worth waiting for.While I do enjoy the MvsM stuff, it is definitely not my preferred or best style, but it does work to change the pace a bit, give me a place to experiment with some things and give to me something to write other than an intense catfight, lol. Also, it gives me a chance to put in some of the character development that doesn't make it into the main storyline (you should see how much I do to create them that doesn't get put into the actual chapters... but I like my characters to be consistent so I try to develop them in more than just their fights). I also like using the MvsM stuff to explore some other things that aren't possible as a fighter- I do enjoy doing the whole "proxy war" aspect of having Jake fight the husband of one of my rivals and figuring out how we can use that to advance our rivalry. I will still do a few "palette cleanser" type FvsF matches to change it up as well- most likely they'll be my kind of weak attempts at doing more erotic stuff, but I figure if I keep pushing the intensity, I'll end up killing someone or dead- then I'll have to justify cloning or reanimation and that would just be silly, lol.
A little birdie tells me it's snowing in Texas. Here's your chance girls: time to make snowcats in the front yard and deck them out in the panties and bras of your victims. You won 'em fair and square. Might as well flaunt them.Oh it's done snowing.... it's just no power now. I'm sending this out via carrier pigeon as my phone has died and I have no internet. It is a shame that my series is in the summer chronologically.... because I've got lots of cold inspiration going on right now....
You could even equip them with accoutrements, like a stethoscope for Freda, a coffee pot for Olivia, a dog collar for Maria, a sash for Luana, a sand-wedge for Kyong… – imagine the look on her face if she just happened to be driving by and saw that!
Or why not hang a little poem round their necks like one of them titulus thingies the Romans used to hang round the necks of crucifixion victims:Roses are red
violets are blue
Look, so are Brenda's
panties too!
Oh it's done snowing.... it's just no power now. I'm sending this out via carrier pigeon as my phone has died and I have no internet. It is a shame that my series is in the summer chronologically.... because I've got lots of cold inspiration going on right now....So it was in the summer when Jolene beat you up and stole your camouflage bikini? Well I hope she's wearing it now, the dumb bitch, thinking she's still invisible in the snow and gets eaten by Jaymie's alligator. And poor Kiva with her injured shoulder and all the pharmacies closed down! What probably helps with an injured shoulder is not making snowmen, so ignore Tiberius's idiotic suggestion and stay inside where you won't slip on the ice and make it worse. If I lived anywhere nearby I'd be shuttling back and forth between your houses with blankets and mugs of hot chocolate but I'd need a plane and I might fly slap into Kelli's pigeon which would be a very poor reward for all its splendid efforts.
Lo. We're Texans snow and ice are a mere inconvenience. We've been busy playing in it...now, the candy ass California transplants are whining incessantly though. I could tolerate a few more weeks of this if it causes their annoying dumbasses to go back west! Those people are humanized cancer, I tell you.Poor Californians! They almost roast to death in a forest fire. Flee to Texas, thinking they'll be safe there because there are no trees, and get buried in a blizzard! Out of the frying pan into the freezer, as it says in the Bible, somewhere (probably the New Testament because I think freezers are quite a recent invention). And now they've somehow got on the wrong side of Kelli (which is not the side you want to be on) and are probably going to end up being torn limb from limb and fed to Jaymie's alligator!
Kiva, if you live nearby, could you lend Kelli a bikini? And do Clarissa or Chase perhaps have something that might fit the squirrel? They're going to catch their death of cold in this weather!In a weird out of character aside, I can't figure out if the squirrels love or hate this weather. They are running around like crazy playing in the stuff... could be that they are just so cold that they have to keep moving.... who knows? Squirrels by there nature, are squirrelly.
Kiva, if you live nearby, could you lend Kelli a bikini? And do Clarissa or Chase perhaps have something that might fit the squirrel? They're going to catch their death of cold in this weather!Sure, Kelli may use one of my bikinis, but if I know Kelli, she has plenty of her own. Sadly, the camo was her favorite. Speaking of bikinis, Kelli, if you’re still having problems with your water, my invitation is still open. After the kids go to bed, the four of us can jump into the hot tub on our deck, drink margaritas (rye for Jake), and have a good time. Then, we’ll light up the fireplace, have a few more drinks,....and who knows....maybe we’ll find a way to surprise our guys. :o
I knew you'd come through for us, Kiva. You're a hun! Better make it a white one while the snow lasts or the alligator will still spot him. And does Chase perhaps have a white pompom hat he doesn't wear any more? It's just that those ears…Kiva, if you live nearby, could you lend Kelli a bikini? And do Clarissa or Chase perhaps have something that might fit the squirrel? They're going to catch their death of cold in this weather!Sure, Kelli may use one of my bikinis, but if I know Kelli, she has plenty of her own. Sadly, the camo was her favorite. Speaking of bikinis, Kelli, if you’re still having problems with your water, my invitation is still open. After the kids go to bed, the four of us can jump into the hot tub on our deck, drink margaritas (rye for Jake), and have a good time. Then, we’ll light up the fireplace, have a few more drinks,....and who knows....maybe we’ll find a way to surprise our guys. :o
Yes, we still have Chase’s doggy sweaters from when we lived in colder climates. His puppy sweater should fit a squirrel. :)
Kelli and Kiva, you two have inspired me to write some stories that use your Cat-Pin as the vehicle to get two women to catfight. I have posted my first one called "When Sally met Cat-Pin".
Give it a read and critique. Same to all Cat-Pin fans.
Room for one more in your hot tub, Kiva?Kiva, if you live nearby, could you lend Kelli a bikini? And do Clarissa or Chase perhaps have something that might fit the squirrel? They're going to catch their death of cold in this weather!Sure, Kelli may use one of my bikinis, but if I know Kelli, she has plenty of her own. Sadly, the camo was her favorite. Speaking of bikinis, Kelli, if you’re still having problems with your water, my invitation is still open. After the kids go to bed, the four of us can jump into the hot tub on our deck, drink margaritas (rye for Jake), and have a good time. Then, we’ll light up the fireplace, have a few more drinks,....and who knows....maybe we’ll find a way to surprise our guys. :o
Yes, we still have Chase’s doggy sweaters from when we lived in colder climates. His puppy sweater should fit a squirrel. :)
Room for one more in your hot tub, Kiva?Black bears are chill. Such a fun clip. Thanks!
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Late to this topic thread...seemed to veer of course a bit...but for an unenlightened guy (maybe that is intended). Obviously there is a fictional element to the Catpin Uverse but I have seen different kinds of actual jewelry which some women wear to signify both pride and a challenge to potential rivals (pins) and it makes me wonder what if any is the universal official or unofficial "Catpin?" Has the fictional Catpin Uverse adopted an official pin? I also agree that taking another woman's Catpin would make a nice collectable trophy provided each pin had a unique identifier to associate it with a member of the league so it would be proof of a victory over that rival. So is there a universal Catpin or are they adopted locally by certain circles or certain leagues or clubs? Is the Catpin a real thing or entirely a thing of imagination and fiction?
Hi all.
Kiva’s Fight Journal Chapter 8 Friday Night Lights Out is now posted in it’s entirety. My opponent is Cynthia in a rules ring fight. She and her husband were high level college athletes once but are now hopelessly trapped in the past. If you ask me, I think they are a couple of nutcakes. But make no mistake about it, she is an athletic dangerous fighter. Does she snap my undefeated streak or do I give her a rude reality check? Find out!
While I’m here: A few of you asked if it is necessary to read Fyre’s Fight Journal or my series beginning with chapter 1. I’d say it’s great if you did but it’s not necessary. If you’re like me, you’re time is limited and you can only read so much. Most chapters are a self contained story and include a fight. The catpin concept is very simple. Some characters are reused and there is a chronology (Forget that Kelli ages very slowly. That has more to do with Einstein’s Theory of Relativity in the catpin world.) but no extensive background knowledge is needed. If you’re new to the catpin universe, jump in. And also, be sure to read JillC’s two excellent Sally stories. Feel free to contact us if questions. Enjoy!
Ouch! Right on the cheekbone. I'm guessing there were tears. What did she do to upset you Kiva? (Lovely tum, you got, BTW!)It will be in an upcoming chapter. It was a brief skirmish in a gym (and I do mean brief)! Thanks, I got a new high intensity Zumba routine and I still like abdominal crunches.
So Chase paces you when you're doing your roadwork and that beautiful cat (what's his/her name?) calms you down afterwards and sits beside you while you write. There has to be a role in all this for the alligator. I'm guessing he gets to clear up the debris at the end and share it out fairly among the crows.Ouch! Right on the cheekbone. I'm guessing there were tears. What did she do to upset you Kiva? (Lovely tum, you got, BTW!)It will be in an upcoming chapter. It was a brief skirmish in a gym (and I do mean brief)! Thanks, I got a new high intensity Zumba routine and I still like abdominal crunches.
The rumor is that Cynthia and I may be in the same place at the same time in the near future... I wonder if anything will happen.Just tell me when and where. Have wings. Will fly.
Hiya. So I posted a new...yet most likely familiar series within the "Catpin Universe". It's called "The Catpin Chronicles" and it will be a collection of stand alone stories from perspectives other than Kiva's or my own. It should give some nice depth to some characters you may have already met. Anyway, it will probably make more sense to just go check it out in the Catfight section. Hopefully y'all will enjoy it!Excellent idea Kelli, and great start with the first story. This opens up a lot of story potential and let’s us bring back characters many of us would like to see again. I love the idea of reader participation you mentioned in your introduction.
Happy Holidays, everyone. Thank you for reading my stuff. I appreciate every single reader. This is my Christmas card to y’all. Wish you health and happiness in 2022!Your stories are a joy to read. Thank you for writing them.
Merry Christmas y'all. Chapter 4 is now up in the Catpin Chronicles.... Everyone's favorite (except for me) Step Sister In Law shares one of her favorite fights against one of her most hated opponents!Great chapter and Merry Christmas to you and all the brave Catpin sorority and their readers too.
Kiva and I have been up to a few things. She is off gallivanting around with Doc McSteamy and watching him battle, and I just had a knock down, drag out fight with fan favorite Cynthia. Hopefully, there are some things y'all will enjoy.Your fight with Cynthia was a gem!
:)
Kiva and I have been up to a few things. She is off gallivanting around with Doc McSteamy and watching him battle, and I just had a knock down, drag out fight with fan favorite Cynthia. Hopefully, there are some things y'all will enjoy.Your fight with Cynthia was a gem!
:)
Kiva and I have been up to a few things. She is off gallivanting around with Doc McSteamy and watching him battle, and I just had a knock down, drag out fight with fan favorite Cynthia. Hopefully, there are some things y'all will enjoy.Your fight with Cynthia was a gem!
:)
Thanks... I'm still a little embarrassed I didn't come up with the Dumpster Fyre thing.... you realize that would have been the title of the chapter? Lol.
Anyway, while not quite in the Catpin Universe, I did post the first chapter in a new miniseries with Cynthia's sister, Charlotte, in it. Charlotte will definitely make an appearance in Fyre's Fight Journal some time soon. So it's definitely Catpin Universe adjacent :)
Haven't enjoyed a author this much since HotNancy, I know I am not the only one who wants to see you even the score with Joelene and the posh bitch who made you eat her pussy. Is there any chance?
I even try my hand at erotica novel style writing :-*. As always, I’d love to have your feedback. Thanks for reading.
Kiva
I even try my hand at erotica novel style writing :-*. As always, I’d love to have your feedback. Thanks for reading.
Kiva
I mostly liked it. Just one suggestion. When Kiva had Frank's phone, she found pics of different IRL girls. But .... why just that. Like Frank even says, that's pretty run-of-the-mill stuff. Why not include other 'stuff': Frank and another woman photobombing, oh, a formal fundraiser or something. Google Maps directions to a secret love nest. Downloaded extreme content. Frank's search history. Etc. As long as Kiva is getting dis-enchanted with Frank, why not pile it on thick?
Are we going to see more developments in the catpin universe?
I believe both are acceptable. Though, I am partial to bare ass naked... or as I pronounce it "nekkid" :)Do you write for GQ by any chance, Kelli? Look at example 3 from the OED.
Are we going to see more developments in the catpin universe?
Yes. I realize sometimes it takes us several weeks between stories due to life’s commitments. This time, I took a break from the catpin universe and posted an unrelated story about two moms wrestling in a backyard called, “Wating At The Door” (Wrestling board). But I am back again, getting into catpin trouble. I know Kelli is cooking up new stories as well. Thanks for reading! :)
Am I the only person who is hoping for a continuation of the catpin stories?
There are many of Kelli and Kiva's fans out here who are waiting for new installments of their excellent respective series. But real life sometimes causes some of our favorite authors to devote time elsewhere and not to the stories on this board. We have been spoiled by the quantity and quality of these series, that it feels a little empty without them. Things have gotten a little slow lately, with several authors not being able to post anything in a while. Anyway, I expect they will be back sometime in the future, just not right away..
I'm still working on it. :)@ Easylove,
No links for the stuff I'm working on, but I do have links for all of my stuff in my profile. Any thing in particular that I can point you towards?
Absolutely the Jolene rematch, can't seem to find it
This thing is really taking off! As well as the pin itself, there's the Catpin app, the web site, of course, the bar, the Anthology, the Universe (which is a lot of different things really) and now … (drumroll) … a line of clothing! Check out Kiva's awesome t-shirt collection with all your favo(u)rites: Fyrecracka, Paula, Candace, Cynthia and even the lady herself!I’m thinking of a Catpin Universe online store. We can sell T-shirts, sweatshirts, hoodies, fleece jackets, baseball caps, coffee mugs, keychains, bobbleheads, jigsaw puzzles, action figures, board games, backpacks, coloring books, comic books, energy drinks, workout accessories, pillows and bedsheets …well, maybe not that last one.
(Hope the link works - if not, it's page 2 of her profile pictures):
https://www.freecatfights.com/forums/index.php?action=profile;u=62172;area=pictures;album=0;start=10
My cats are demanding "Kiss the Kitty" collars.Oh, the interesting things that could run through your mind if random women interact with the kitty ;)
We are totally attracted about this pin...
Chapter 7 is now posted in the "Catpin Chronicles". One of the more enigmatic characters of Fyre's Fight Journal rears her seductively sadistic head and allows you inside it to get a peek of her mind works. Hopefully y'all enjoy it.Congratulations! It's an instant classic. Impossible to do better.
I'd like to wish a Merry Christmas to everyone in the Catpin community – not to just to Kelli and Kiva, whom we all adore, but also (since Christmas is a time I feel, to reach out to lost souls) to the Jolene's, Jaymie's and (dare I say it?) the Franks, the Carls, the Claires and (my special favourite) the Billys of the bunch. Lashings of grog and Yuletide cheer to one and all. Look forward to seeing you in the new year.Thank you! Merry Christmas to you and all the readers out there. It takes the virtue of a saint to wish goodwill to such villains as Jolene, Jaymie, Frank, and Billy, but I’m sure no one is surprised by your high quality of character..
Its Christmas...there's a new FyreCracka Catpin Chapter...
I got coal for Christmas...It's a MvM match.
Just joking, glad to see you back and looking forward to the next story.
Anyone ready for a new story? A real one? With your favorite humble scribe as the one of the participants? Well, it won't be today BUT we are nearly finished with a new chapter!Can't wait!
(I felt like I needed to post something to keep me on task, just in case.. :D )
I wish I could take you up on the offer, my friend. Hopefully this one will be worth the wait, it's a pretty big story- a "two parter" (as in, it will be broken into two posts at the same time, not half of it one day and then make y'all wait for the rest).Anyone ready for a new story? A real one? With your favorite humble scribe as the one of the participants? Well, it won't be today BUT we are nearly finished with a new chapter!Can't wait!
(I felt like I needed to post something to keep me on task, just in case.. :D )
If I can help in any way: hold your coat … tie the other chick's shoelaces together … you've got my number.
Anyone ready for a new story? A real one? With your favorite humble scribe as the one of the participants? Well, it won't be today BUT we are nearly finished with a new chapter!
(I felt like I needed to post something to keep me on task, just in case.. :D )
Kelli, Crime and Punishment was a well-done chapter, as per your usual high standards. A lot of items to think about . . .
Lily is now the co-chief villain in your story, alongside Jolene. She has a clear motive for her actions against you, namely punishing you for your “past sins” as well as losing the fight to you several chapters ago. Unlike Jolene, she has friends in higher places, which could cause trouble for both you and Jake. She will be formidable to deal with. Using a henchwoman to do her dirty work is very villainous. Meanwhile, Letticia has the heart to be a great fighter, but not the skill. If she and Lily fight, I fear Lily will destroy her.
The main fight was great and you fought valiantly, but the odds were against you. Agent DuBois is well-trained as a boxer and seems to enjoy her work a bit too much. I wouldn’t mess with her in the future.
Letticia described the judge as a “fair and honorable judge”, but why does anyone (be it Lily or someone else) get to have this trial by combat event without some level of evidence of a “crime” being committed? You clearly were railroaded into a disadvantageous situation, without much opportunity to stop it. Also, despite not hearing the specified charge against you, you were sentenced to FIVE fights at the judge’s whim in the next year. Is the punishment proportional? It doesn’t seem like it. The more I think about it, the more concerned about the judge’s motives I get.
The Court seems easily corruptible by bullies trying to “avenge” made up grievances. Lily clearly conspired with Agent DuBois to do this to you. Couldn’t you accuse Lily of something, anything, get a different agent of the Court to help you and precipitate a similar trial by combat for her on demand? Couldn’t anybody do that to anyone in the Catpin universe? I know this is a fictional world, but this issue with the Court feels sinister to me. Oh, well, maybe life just isn’t fair . . .
If Rebecca does not treat you fairly, you have turned the direction of your story to a much darker course. Maybe that is your intent for future stories. Maybe after all the success your character has had in the Catpin universe, your character will now have some serious trials and tribulations to deal with. We will have to wait and see.
I look forward to your future chapters of this excellent series.