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Gala Grudgematch

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Offline Guy Incognito

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Re: Gala Grudgematch
« Reply #30 on: July 13, 2025, 11:41:20 PM »
BRO YOU ARE FUCKING GOATED!!! THAT'S A FUCKING MASTERPIECE FROM START TO FINISH, AND IT'S ONE OF THE MOST UNIQUE AND MEMORABLE STORYELLING I'VE EXPERIENCED WHEN IT COMES TO STORIES WITHIN THIS FETISH! MOST ESPECIALLY CHAPTER 10, HOLY FUCK, THAT WAS CHEF'S KISS UNEXPECTED AND SUPERB, AND IT'S SUCH A BRILLIANT WAY TO BUILD FURTHER HYPE FOR MORE OF WHAT'S TO COME NEXT WHICH IS THE EPIC FINALE AS IF THE PREVIOUS FIGHTS WEREN'T ALREADY FUCKING EPIC ENOUGH!!!

okay enough all caps, holy shit! I've never been an ass kisser and I hate ass kissers, so know that I meant all of that genuinely! you are in my top 10 all time favourite writers -- maybe even top 5. you're a goddamn legend in my books, Guy! incognito person recognise incognito person, too!

I'm excited for more stories by you! keep cooking!

Things I liked about Chapter 10:

<> Ruby perfectly encapsulates the type of woman who tries to agitate two other women into a conflict.

<> The conversation explores how two women in a fight only discover later how the post-fight dynamics between them will play out.  Sometimes it succeeds in blowing off steam, and they resume going back to a normal relationship.  But other times there's still unresolved tensions.

<> Very unusual for a woman the be able to process a fight she's just lost so quickly afterwards.

I'm pleased that people liked chapter 10. Wasn't sure if 2/3 chapters not having an actual fight might be boring. Pleasantly surprised that its a sleeper hit. :P

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Offline B-Anna

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Re: Gala Grudgematch
« Reply #31 on: July 17, 2025, 05:43:19 PM »
I loved the ending! What it (truly) hurts from a loss isn't the physical humiliation of a sore,bruised body but the painful twitching of a defeated heart  ;D

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Offline rocknrick22

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Re: Gala Grudgematch
« Reply #32 on: July 18, 2025, 04:23:16 AM »
"Ben nodded. “Yeah. That was pretty much the best-case scenario. Kyle stepping in to break it up was basically him throwing in the towel on her behalf. The message it sent was, ‘I don’t believe in my girlfriend to win this.’ That’s what people will think, anyway.”

Amber didn’t reply right away, revelling in the satisfaction. Kyle hadn’t believed Hazel could beat her. She wondered what kind of conversation those two were having now. She assumed Hazel would be furious at his lack of faith. The thought of them sleeping tonight in separate rooms brought her immense joy.

“Why didn’t you step in?” she asked suddenly. “When Hazel had me pinned—it looked like she was about to win. You could have stopped her.”

Ben smiled. “Isn’t it obvious? I knew you were going to win. I had faith in you.”

Amber smiled back. “Yeah, I knew that was the answer. Just wanted to hear you say it.”"


Masterful touch. Genius! The foreshadowing implications of these words. Also like to see the teamwork and growing bond between Ben and Amber. Ben caring for her, in her corner as the rivaly between the two couples, and the two women escalates.
« Last Edit: July 18, 2025, 04:26:34 AM by rocknrick22 »

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Offline CuriousCombat

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Re: Gala Grudgematch
« Reply #33 on: August 02, 2025, 12:52:25 AM »
I can't believe I skipped over this masterpiece for so long. But, on a brighter note, that gave me the chance to read it all in one go.

Now, I know I really need to read all your stories. Excited for all your upcoming work.