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The Evil carol

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The Evil carol
« on: October 02, 2025, 12:57:55 AM »
    The air was heavy with the scent of crisp autumn leaves and distant woodsmoke, the neighborhood pulsing with a vibrant, fleeting warmth under the fading light. Amy and I had just finished our usual evening walk, our hands entwined, her laughter still echoing in my ears from a silly quip I’d tossed about our nosy neighbors, their curtains always twitching like they were auditioning for a spy novel. At 40, my wife Amy was a vision of pure allure—5 feet 8 inches of breathtaking beauty, her body a masterpiece sculpted by years of disciplined fitness and healthy eating. Her curves were flawless, soft yet firm, with a grace that could unravel any man’s composure. Her perfect, perky 32b breasts and nipples pressed teasingly against the thin fabric of whatever top she wore, and tonight was no exception.  She’d slipped into a flowy gypsy skirt that swayed seductively with every step, clinging to her hips in a way that was both elegant and maddeningly provocative, paired with a cropped top that bared her toned midriff, showcasing smooth, sun-kissed skin that glistened in the evening light. Her legs—long, shapely, and endlessly enticing—peeked through the skirt’s high slits, each movement a hypnotic dance that felt crafted for my eyes alone. Watching her walk was a private obsession, her every curve a silent promise that stirred my blood.We were nearing our flats, a weathered brick building that had been our home for three years, its charm worn but comforting, when I spotted her—Carol, our neighbor from across the hall. I hadn’t seen her in months, maybe a year, but Amy had shared their tangled history early in our relationship, over late-night wine when secrets spilled freely. They’d been inseparable friends a decade ago, sharing laughter and late nights, until one drunken evening when Carol crossed a line, leaning in to kiss Amy. Amy, unaware of Carol’s bisexuality, had recoiled, and the moment shattered their bond, leaving a jagged wound that never healed. Carol was shorter than Amy, at 5 feet 4 inches, but she carried herself with a bold, almost defiant swagger. Her 150-pound frame was solid and voluptuous, her 34E breasts straining against a tight tank top that left nothing to the imagination. Tonight, she wore fitted jeans that hugged her thick thighs and accentuated her powerful presence, her dark hair pulled back to frame a face that was both striking and hardened, as if she’d been nursing a grudge for years.As we approached the entrance, Amy’s steps faltered, her hand tightening in mine until her knuckles blanched. “Oh God, it’s her,” she whispered, her voice a mix of shock and old resentment, barely audible over the rustle of leaves skittering across the pavement. Carol turned, her eyes locking onto us, and a sly, predatory smile curled her lips. She sauntered over, deliberately blocking our path to the door, her hips swaying with a calculated, almost taunting ease.“Well, well, if it isn’t Amy,” Carol purred, her gaze raking over my wife like she was savoring a forbidden delicacy. “Long time no see. You look… nice amy.” Her voice dripped with flirtation, sharp with a bitter edge—perhaps the sting of rejection from all those years ago. Her eyes lingered on Amy’s bare midriff, tracing the curve of her hips, then flicked up to her face, challenging, daring her to respond.Amy’s cheeks flushed, but she squared her shoulders, her jaw set with defiance. “Carol. What do you want? We’re just heading inside.” Her tone was firm, but a tremor betrayed the reopened wound beneath her words.The tension crackled between them, thick and electric, like the air before a thunderstorm. I stepped forward slightly, my hand still in Amy’s, ready to intervene, but she shot me a look—fierce, determined—that said, I’ve got this. Carol laughed, a low, mocking sound that sent a chill down my spine. “Oh, come on, Amy. Still playing hard to get after all these years? I see you’ve snagged yourself a husband now.” Her eyes flicked to me, assessing, lingering just long enough to make my skin prickle, then back to Amy. “Does he know about that night? How you ran from a little kiss like it burned you?”Amy’s eyes narrowed, her voice slicing through the evening air. “That was ten years ago, Carol. Move on. And get out of our way.”But Carol didn’t budge. Instead, she stepped closer, invading Amy’s space, her breath close enough to stir the loose strands of Amy’s dark hair. “Or what? You’ll pretend you’re not curious? I bet you’ve thought about it—wondered what you missed out on.” Her words were a taunt, laced with a decade of unresolved hurt and something darker, more possessive.That’s when it erupted. Amy shoved Carol’s shoulder, hard enough to make her stumble back a step. “Back off!” she snapped, her voice raw with anger, her body tensing like a coiled spring.Carol’s face twisted in fury, and before I could react, she lunged forward, her hand whipping out in a sharp slap that cracked across Amy’s cheek. The sound echoed in the quiet evening, jarring and brutal, and Amy’s head snapped to the side, her dark hair flying. I froze, stunned—my beautiful wife, caught in a sudden, violent clash with this ghost from her past, her vulnerability laid bare in an instant.“Amy!” I shouted, my voice breaking through the haze, but it was too late. Amy swung back, her fist grazing Carol’s arm, but Carol was quicker, fueled by a grudge that had festered for years. She grabbed a fistful of Amy’s crop top and yanked her forward, delivering another stinging slap across her face. Amy yelped, staggering, her perky breasts heaving under the thin fabric as she fought to regain her balance. Carol didn’t let up; she twisted her fingers into Amy’s hair, pulling hard and dragging her sideways toward the grassy patch beside the flats, her movements brutal and precise, like a predator toying with its prey.I watched, my heart pounding, a sickening mix of horror and—God help me—arousal surging through me. Amy’s sexy legs kicked wildly, her gypsy skirt riding up to expose those smooth, toned thighs, glistening in the golden light. She was helpless in Carol’s grip, her arms flailing as Carol smacked her again, the sound wet and humiliating. “You think you’re better than me?” Carol snarled, her voice dripping with venom. “Always strutting around like you’re untouchable, teasing everyone with those slutty little tits”Amy gasped, her hands clawing at Carol’s wrist to free her hair, but Carol’s 150-pound frame gave her the edge. She shoved Amy down to her knees, then yanked her back up by the hair, slapping her cheeks back and forth like she was toying with a rag doll. Amy’s cries were sharp, desperate, her body twisting in a futile struggle. Her crop top twisted, one strap slipping off her shoulder, teasing a glimpse of those perfect, perky nipples I’d worshipped so many times. Each slap left red marks on her flawless skin, making her look both vulnerable and achingly seductive, a contradiction that tore at my soul and stirred my body in ways I couldn’t reconcile.“Stop! Let her go!” I yelled, snapping out of my shock and rushing forward, but Carol shot me a glare that stopped me cold. “Stay out of this, lover boy,” she sneered, her eyes flicking to me with a knowing smirk. “Or are you enjoying the show? Look at you, all hot and bothered while your wife gets put in her place.” Her words hit like a punch, my face burning as I realized she’d noticed the way my breath had quickened, the way my body betrayed me despite my horror.Amy’s eyes widened, a flash of humiliation crossing her face at Carol’s taunt, but she kicked out, her foot connecting with Carol’s shin. It only enraged Carol further. With a grunt, she grabbed the waistband of Amy’s gypsy skirt and pulled hard, the delicate fabric tearing with a sickening rip as it slid down Amy’s hips. Amy’s legs thrashed, those long, sexy limbs fully exposed now—bare, glistening, and endlessly alluring as the skirt pooled at her ankles. She was left in just her panties and the disheveled crop top, her body on display in a humiliating spectacle. Carol laughed, a triumphant, cruel sound, and dragged Amy by the hair across the grass, Amy’s knees scraping as she was pulled like a helpless puppet.I couldn’t tear my eyes away—my wife, so stunning and fierce, reduced to this writhing, smacked-around mess. Her breasts bounced with each jerk, her nipples hardening against the fabric, the cool air or adrenaline making them strain provocatively. Carol noticed too, her smirk widening. “Look at you, Amy, all perky and desperate,” she taunted, her voice low and mocking. “Bet your husband’s loving this—his slutty little wife, all exposed and squirming. Isn’t that right, lover boy?” She glanced at me, her eyes gleaming with sadistic delight as she caught the flush on my face, the way my hands clenched to hide my reaction.The shame burned through me, but my body wouldn’t listen, my pulse racing as Amy’s vulnerability ignited something primal. Carol’s taunts only fueled her cruelty. She yanked Amy’s hair harder, forcing her to arch back, her breasts thrusting forward as the crop top slipped further, fully exposing one nipple now, pert and glistening in the fading light. Carol’s hand lashed out, delivering another sharp slap to Amy’s cheek, then another to her  ear, the sound echoing like a whip. Amy whimpered, her legs kicking futilely, parting slightly in the struggle, her panties twisting and revealing more of her smooth, tanned skin. Each movement was a torment, her curves accentuated, her body a canvas of humiliation and allure.Carol pinned Amy against the brick wall, her jeans-clad body pressing close, her 34E breasts brushing against Amy’s chest as she leaned in, her breath hot against Amy’s ear. “You love this, don’t you?” she whispered, loud enough for me to hear. “Parading around, making everyone want you, and now look—your man’s practically drooling while I put you in your place.” She slapped Amy’s bare side, the sound wet and sharp, making Amy’s body jerk, her exposed breast swaying. My heart pounded, guilt and arousal warring within me as Carol’s words cut deeper, her taunts amplifying the twisted heat I couldn’t suppress.Amy’s sobs grew louder, her hands clawing at Carol’s grip, but Carol was relentless. She grabbed the crop top and ripped it clean off with one brutal tug, leaving Amy’s upper body bare, her perfect breasts fully exposed, nipples hard and trembling in the cool air. Amy gasped, her arms flailing to cover herself, but Carol caught her wrists, pinning them above her head against the wall. “Oh, no you don’t,” Carol mocked, her voice dripping with glee. “Let him see you—let him see how pathetic you look, all naked and crying while he’s getting off on it.” She slapped Amy’s cheek again, then raked her nails down Amy’s bare stomach, leaving faint red lines that made Amy shudder, her legs trembling and parting slightly as she struggled.I tried to move, to stop this, but my body was frozen, my groin still throbbing from Carol’s earlier knee, my mind a haze of conflicting impulses. “Carol, stop!” I managed, my voice weak, but she ignored me, her focus locked on Amy. She slung Amy by the hair, spinning her away from the wall and back to the grass, where Amy stumbled and fell, landing on her back with her legs splayed, her panties now completely askew, barely clinging to one thigh. The sight was unbearable—my wife, stripped and humiliated, her body a vision of beauty and defeat, every curve highlighted by the golden light.Carol straddled her, pinning Amy’s arms with her knees, her jeans-clad thighs a stark contrast to Amy’s bare, trembling ones. She leaned down, her face inches from Amy’s, and delivered another slap, lighter but no less degrading. “Still think you’re too good for me?” she hissed, dragging her nails across Amy’s bare breasts, grazing the sensitive skin just enough to make Amy cry out. “Look at him, Amy—look at how much he’s enjoying this. Your perfect little body, all mine to play with, and he can’t get enough.” She glanced at me, her smirk vicious, and I felt the heat of shame flood my face, my body betraying me as Amy’s tear-streaked eyes met mine, her expression a mix of pain and betrayal.Amy’s legs kicked up and out, desperate and wild, giving flashes that seared into my mind—her smooth thighs, the curve of her hips, the vulnerability of her near-nakedness. Carol laughed, grabbing Amy’s panties and tugging them down further, leaving her almost entirely exposed. “Let’s give him a real show,” she taunted, slapping Amy’s inner thigh, making her yelp and squirm, her body arching in a way that was both heartbreaking and maddeningly erotic. Amy’s cries grew frantic, her breasts heaving, her skin flushed and marked, every movement a testament to her beauty and her humiliation.Finally, I couldn’t take it anymore. Ignoring the pain shooting through me, I staggered to my feet and grabbed Carol’s arm, yanking her off Amy with a force born of desperation. “Enough!” I roared, my voice raw. Carol shoved me back, her strength surprising, and I stumbled, collapsing again as the pain in my groin flared. She laughed, brushing her hands off like she’d just finished a chore. Amy lay there, sobbing softly, her body a map of red marks and grass stains—her cheeks flushed, her stomach scratched, her bare breasts trembling, her legs tangled in the remnants of her panties.Carol glanced at me, still doubled over, and smirked. “Keep her on a leash next time, lover boy. Or maybe you like her better like this.” Her eyes gleamed with cruel satisfaction as she sauntered off, her swagger more pronounced, as if she’d reclaimed a piece of herself in this brutal display.But Amy wasn’t done. Despite the humiliation, the tears streaming down her face, something primal snapped inside her. Her expression twisted into raw, defiant rage, her dark eyes burning. “You’re not walking away from this, Carol!” she screamed, her voice hoarse and fierce. Bare-legged and disheveled, her torn panties barely clinging to her, she scrambled to her feet and charged after Carol, her bare feet slapping the pavement, her exposed breasts bouncing with each furious step.I tried to shout, “Amy, stop!” but the words came out as a croak, my body paralyzed by pain and the overwhelming sight before me. Carol turned just in time, her face flashing with cruel amusement. As Amy lunged, aiming a wild swing, Carol grabbed a fistful of her hair, yanking so hard Amy’s head snapped back, her body arching provocatively, her bare breasts thrusting forward in the evening light. Carol slung her around, spinning her like a rag doll, Amy’s sexy legs kicking wildly, her panties slipping further, exposing the full curve of her hips. The sight was gut-wrenching and unbearably arousing—my wife, nearly naked, her perfect body twisting in defiance and defeat.“You never learn, do you?” Carol snarled, her voice thick with venom. She slapped Amy hard across the face, the crack echoing, making Amy’s cheek blaze red as tears streamed down. Amy cried out, her hands clawing at Carol’s wrist, but Carol dragged her sideways, then down to her knees again, the grass staining her bare legs. “Look at you, all bare and pathetic,” Carol taunted, her eyes flicking to me. “And he’s still watching, getting harder by the second. Isn’t that right?” Her words were a knife, twisting in my gut as Amy’s eyes met mine again, her humiliation deepened by Carol’s cruel awareness of my reaction.Carol yanked Amy back to her feet, slinging her against the brick wall with a thud that made my stomach lurch. Amy’s legs buckled, her bare thighs trembling as she slid partway down, held up only by Carol’s brutal grip. Carol leaned in close, her breasts pressing against Amy’s bare chest as she whispered something taunting, then slapped Amy’s thigh with a loud smack, making her yelp and kick out helplessly. Those kicks exposed her further, her panties now a useless scrap, leaving her vulnerable in a way that made my heart race with rage and a shameful, uncontrollable heat.Carol’s hand lashed out again, tearing away the last remnants of Amy’s panties with a vicious tug, leaving her completely exposed from the waist down. Amy sobbed, her hands flailing to cover herself, but Carol pinned her wrists above her head, her body pressing closer. “Let him see every inch,” Carol mocked, her voice dripping with sadistic glee. “Let him see how weak you are, how much he loves it.” She slapped Amy’s bare hip, then her breast, the sound sharp and degrading, making Amy’s body jerk, her curves glistening in the fading light. My breath caught, my body betraying me as Carol’s taunts fueled the fire in my veins, the sight of Amy’s naked, writhing form pushing me to the edge of control.Finally, Carol stepped back, her smirk triumphant. Amy slumped to the ground, her body trembling, her skin marked with red welts and scratches, her beauty both broken and intoxicating. Carol glanced at me, her eyes gleaming. “Enjoy the view,” she said, her voice cold and victorious, before sauntering off, her hips swaying like she owned the night.I forced myself to crawl to Amy, the pain in my groin a distant ache compared to the anguish in my chest. She was curled up, trying to cover her nakedness, her tears mixing with the grass stains on her cheeks. I wrapped my arms around her, pulling her close, my hands shaking as I tried to shield her from the world. “It’s okay, baby, I’ve got you,” I whispered, my voice hoarse. Her body pressed against mine, warm and trembling, still so achingly beautiful despite the violation. I helped her to her feet, guiding her inside, her bare skin cold against my arm as we stumbled into the safety of our flat.Inside, the silence was suffocating, broken only by Amy’s quiet sobs as she sank onto the couch, pulling a throw blanket over herself to hide her exposed body. I knelt beside her, my own pain forgotten, my heart aching with guilt for not stopping Carol sooner—and for the twisted arousal that still lingered, her taunts echoing in my mind. “I’m so sorry,” I murmured, brushing her tangled hair from her face. Her cheeks were red, her eyes swollen, but that fire still flickered in them, the fierce woman I loved refusing to be fully broken.“I should’ve fought harder,” she whispered, her voice cracking. “I didn’t think she’d… I didn’t think she’d go that far.” She clutched the blanket tighter, her knuckles white. “She saw it—she saw how you looked at me, and she used it to hurt me more.” Her words cut deep, the betrayal in her eyes a mirror of my own shame.I pulled her close, my mind a storm of images—Amy’s naked, writhing body, Carol’s cruel taunts, the way my own desire had betrayed us both. “This wasn’t your fault,” I said, my voice firm despite the guilt gnawing at me. “She’s the one who crossed the line. We’ll figure this out, I promise.” But as I held her, the weight of the evening settled over us like a shroud. The memory of Amy—stripped, slapped-around, and humiliated, her beauty twisted into a spectacle for Carol’s cruelty and my shameful arousal—seared itself into my mind. It wasn’t just the physical marks on her body; it was the violation of her dignity, the reopening of a decade-old wound, and the dark, twisted allure I couldn’t shake. Carol’s shadow loomed across the hall, and I knew this night would haunt us, its scars running deeper than either of us could imagine.
« Last Edit: October 02, 2025, 02:23:22 AM by Prissypro78 »

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Re: The Evil carol
« Reply #1 on: October 02, 2025, 05:22:15 AM »
Enjoyed this story. I’d say living in such close proximity this might just be the start since Carol knows Amy isn’t much of a match and you couldn’t help but be aroused while she worked her over. With Carol being bi she may be after you just to taunt Amy with it. Hope this isn’t the end and again nicely done!!

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Re: The Evil carol
« Reply #2 on: October 02, 2025, 07:43:16 AM »
Wonderful story, I really liked it.  But why did Carol wait 10 years? Amy's husband is a complete loser. I'm sure she would have been better off with Carol than with such a loser.
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Re: The Evil carol
« Reply #3 on: October 02, 2025, 12:23:02 PM »
Great story!!!

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« Reply #4 on: October 02, 2025, 07:25:56 PM »
This story is wonderful, even if it's difficult to read without a single line break.
It's perfect for my tastes: a slender good girl dominated by a more robust and stronger bigger titted bad girl in front of her man, who, seeing his fragile woman defeated and humiliated, too weak to fight back, can't help but get aroused.

 I hope you write a sequel and more stories like this.

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Re: The Evil carol
« Reply #5 on: October 03, 2025, 03:29:16 AM »
Unreadable wall of text.

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Re: The Evil carol
« Reply #6 on: October 03, 2025, 03:53:01 PM »
I think it is a good start to further conflict

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Re: The Evil carol
« Reply #7 on: October 03, 2025, 08:18:59 PM »
I think it is a good start to further conflict
What other conflict can we talk about if Amy is weak? Is she really going to hit the gym and pump up her muscles? Or will she gain Jedi powers? She's just a whipping girl.
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