Catfight Details You Want To See More In Stories

[Astrakhan]

As someone who's been reading catfight stories for a while, it got me thinking about certain little details I see in videos that I don't see as often in written works. Here's some things I think I could stand to see in stories more:

• Breasts popping out of tops. In most of the stories I've read, tops/bras either stay on throughout or get ripped off entirely in one go. I've seen a few videos where tops get shifted and one or both breasts hang out, and there's not a lot of stories I've seen that feature details like that. Always found it hot, though.
• On a similar note, bra straps slipping down shoulders. I think seeing the girls grow more disheveled as the fight goes on helps make it feel more intense, like it's taking a toll on them, and I'd like to see it more.
• Hair coming down as the girls pull hair. In most videos I've seen where the girls put their hair up, it doesn't stay that way for long, but that's something I don't often see addressed in catfight stories.
• For that matter, with all that hair-pulling, there should probably be a lot more hair clumps littering the ground than people usually acknowledge.
• Not a lot of people acknowledge how much fighting would work up a sweat. I think that's a good detail to again show how heated the fight is, and could even make the girls harder to grab onto.

What about you? What are some details about catfights that you like seeing in other media but don't see as often as you'd like in the written word?

[diane p]

i was thinking of course might be little far fetched
 what about both women in full figured bras thick straps in a titfight
 now twist to it titfights can go best of 3 rounds or 5
whom ever has toughest tits should submit verbally or right continues
 in doing so use there tits with uppercuts to her rivals she can move them
 side to side  now during the fight say clasps under her cups breaks
 there for winner by default
 fight proceeds until clear winner
both should be about same size which would make the fight more fair
 just an idea oh no hands neither there hands can be restrained behind there backs
no advantage to neither

[Ashton Suite 7C]

As someone who's been reading catfight stories for a while, it got me thinking about certain little details I see in videos that I don't see as often in written works. Here's some things I think I could stand to see in stories more:

What about you? What are some details about catfights that you like seeing in other media but don't see as often as you'd like in the p

I am going to try a different approach to how I feel about people taking time out of their schedules in their life to write stories for us.

Thank you for writing stories at all for us. Stories that you don't get paid a single penny for. We sincerely appreciate it.

[MikeHales67]

 That is quite a good list of things to bear in mind. As someone who reads and (tries) to write them, yeah it's hard to bear all this in mind and find places in the story where you can insert it without slowing the pace down to much. I'd also include gradual exhaustion and gradual bruising. Also pe0ople don't seem to make thar many mistakes.


Come to think it. This all comes under the category of 'show" as in 'Show, don't tell'

I'm telling you - "She yanked hard on the bitch's hair"
I'm showing you - "The hair fell like black rain on the floor".

And yes you should always do more showing not telling.

[caryn1]

A wife returns home from work and finding a guest on the couch with her husband

Husband buys a dress for his girlfriend but wife finds it not her style and wears it

Either one of those just might get a fight started

[caryn1]