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My First Story: Brutalized by Bikers

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Offline KarsaOrlong

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My First Story: Brutalized by Bikers
« on: August 15, 2013, 08:48:54 PM »
Hello all! This is not only my first story, but it's my first post on the board, and I hope it lives up to expectations (I'm still not 100% sold on my work yet).  But, after devouring all the excellent stories on the board (Maura, scribbler, Boeing666, jjj11100, lovesexyjobbers, jjr9, jtedison, and many more! sorry for not remembering all of the excellent authors as I sit here and add this portion to my story pasted below) I have decided to give the writing of a tale a go myself to hopefully add to the excellent community here.  From the works I have read, I have determined that in my stories, pictures are important, and I will do my best to include photos at a minimum of the girls being featured. In this tale, I didn't flush out the physical appearance of the characters as deeply as I would have if there were no pictures added (maybe that's me being lazy and not doing a thorough job as a writer, but thank god for image hosting sites!).  In my attempt at making a go of penning out a tale, I have decided to place myself in these stories, kinda run with it and see where it ends up.  Now, this first story is a squash, (sorry to those hoping for a close encounter, but I do love seeing a jobber get her ass kicked as well as a back and forth match), but I promise that my second story if and when I complete it, will be comprised of great back and forth action with much more of a close match up in terms of the girls size.  But I digress, for this tale is already penned, and won't be modified any more.  So, here I am looking forward to getting honest opinions regarding my work as I am not sure I love it so far (I like the next planned adventure much better), but after a few re-writes have decided to post the first half (Second half will follow soon enough).  It contains some build up on a girl I will feature again in more of my future stories, so like I said I eagerly anticipate your responses!


Brutalized by Bikers

My girlfriend, Amanda, and I had planned to go on a picnic.  Yeah sure, not the most fun sounding thing you’re probably thinking, but we both loved the rush of having sex in public, and that was my definition of a picnic...I’d drink some beer or wine, eat some fruit and then we’d have wild sex.  Now, like I was saying we planned on going on a picnic, and there was a small remote spot near a pond we found a few months ago.  It was the perfect day to be outside, or in our case outside and having sex, with just enough chance to get caught that made your adrenalin rush making it that much more satisfying.  Not that having sex with Amanda wasn’t enough of a thrill for me, but with a girl like her I had to make sure I kept it interesting.  So we took a chilled bottle of wine, a few beers, some lunch and my girl promised me she would bring some sexy new lingerie for me after our meal.  By no means was my girl the brightest bulb in the stadium, but she was the hottest piece of ass I had ever laid eyes on, and holy shit was she wild and fun to be with…and fuck having a stimulating conversation, talking’s overrated.  I couldn’t wait to see her incredible body and she looked hot as hell in the little white sundress she was wearing, both of her new implants almost hanging out from the low cut material.  Of course, I got stuck carrying everything and the little nymph was playfully distracting me as we walked along through a field of yellow flowers that were about knee high.  Amanda would stop and spin around, smiling and pulling the strap of her dress down over her shoulder, as if she needed to show off even more of her bosom. 

 
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Fucking flower field…I almost tripped and dropped the picnic basket, not watching where I was going, instead thinking about how bad I wanted to fuck her.   She laughed at me when I stumbled, but I managed to save the wine and our lunch.   Again, she quickly galloped ahead a few yards pulling down the dress straps, teasing me with those cantaloupe-sized tits.  Just whip them buggers out already and let’s be done with it already, I thought!  A few minutes later we cleared the field of flowers and entered the area near the pond, the wind blowing across the water creating a slight ripple on the otherwise perfectly calm surface.  Finding a secluded spot at the deserted area was quite easy, and together we laid out a big blanket and began enjoying some fruit.  Of course she had to rile me up even more, as if almost popping out her tits a few seconds ago wasn’t enough, and Amanda began sucking on a strawberry.  Slowly at first, she ran the strawberry all over her luscious red lipstick coated lips, blinked a few times, and then oh so slowly inserted it into her mouth and began sucking on it.  I tried not to show how turned on I was, but she knew all the buttons to push and of course she reached into the picnic basket and out came a banana.  Oh fuck…here we go I thought watching her peel it while she continued smiling at me.  The next minute was like a mini porno; Amanda started sucking on the banana, inserting it deeply into her mouth and then tantalizingly tugging it back out.  Again and again the banana went in and came out, her cheek bulging, pulling the now dripping wet banana out, and then moaning as she quickly inserted it back in her mouth.  Deeper and deeper the banana disappeared into the back of her throat, and of course my pulse quickened watching the little cock tease put on her show.  I was hard as a rock, and looked down at the bulge in my swim trunks, Amanda laughing as she finished the banana in a few bites, finally ending her sexy show.

“Time to get this dress off!” she smiled, standing up off the picnic blanket.  I watched, slack mouthed as she slid her summer dress up and over her head and I starred at her lingerie-clad centerfold like body.  Like I said, what this girl lacked in intelligence she more than made up for with her looks, and body.  The bright white material of her skimpy lingerie was an incredible contrast against her dark tan skin, and light blonde hair, the fabric barely shielding any of her incredible body.  The sexy lacey bra was clearly working overtime, pushing upward on her 36D mounds of perfection, bringing them together nicely creating some inviting cleavage, while the matching thong fit like a glove accentuating her heart shaped ass.  Amanda spun around so her ass was facing me, and she slowly bent over and began rummaging through our picnic basket, taking much longer than she needed to, knowing full well that I was starring at her thong covered derriere.  After a few more seconds, she grabbed a bottle of suntan lotion and tossed it over to where I was lying.  The blonde stood over me, her body glistening in the sun, and she slowly ran her hands through her hair teasing it outward wildly and then began quiet the show of slowly peeling her lingerie from her curvy little frame.  I watched as she did a sexy strip show, the lingerie winding up on the ground and Amanda’s incredible body stood stark naked above me. 
 
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I grabbed the bottle of lotion, dumped a wad in my hand, and she bent down next to me, her tits swinging inches from my face.  Relishing every second, I began rubbing the oil all over her firm body, my hands going up and down her solid little legs, up over her meaty thighs, coating her tight stomach, and then lingering on each of her grapefruit sized mammaries.  Amanda was coated in the sleek substance and looked breathtaking, her curvaceous frame glistening in the sun, the blonde now lying flat on her back.  I was in overdrive and my hand slid down her tight stomach gliding smoothly before my fingers found her neatly trimmed pubic patch.  She was getting into it too, reaching over grabbing my rock hard cock, her oil-coated fingers pumping up and down from its base to tip.  Now it was me that was suddenly on their back, my cock in her mouth, my girl groaning and running her hands through her hair as she began to go to town sucking my dick.   

A sudden sound filled the air.  Fuck!  Just when we were starting to enjoy ourselves we both heard the rumble of motorcycles coming our way.  I was beyond pissed and wanted to keep messing around thinking they were still a way off, but we both must have been fooled being down wind from the bikes, and seconds later they came around the bend.  Five bikes thundered toward us into view and I quickly threw on my swim trunks and watched as Amanda scrambled to get her bra over her oil soaked tits.

To our surprise the five bikers were 3 females and 2 males, all riding on chromed out, souped up Harley Davidson’s.  Their engines seemed to shake the surrounding area as they drove in a tight circle around our make shift picnic area.  My pulse quickened, as the entire group was comprised of rough looking characters...just my fucking luck.  I was hoping they would keep going, but the lead biker chick, if I could call her a girl, stopped her bike.  The other bikers followed the lead of the first woman, stopping their motorcycles at various points around the area completely encircling us.  The lead biker got off her bike and she was a monster standing almost 6 foot tall, with a physique that was rock hard, muscular and most men would be envious of – this bitch definitely could have out lifted me in the gym.  She had combat boots on, and little else wearing a tiny bikini that hardly covered any of her tan muscle filled flesh…Who the hell drives a motorcycle around looking like this I wondered, but I dare not break the silence.  Leather gloves covered her hands, which flew up in the sky as she leaned back on the seat of her bike and flexed, her biceps bulging in the sun, the definition of her cut arms was more than impressive, “Whoooooo ittttt’s a fuckinggggg parrrty!” she howled and the other bikers all began screaming. 

 
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She slid her sunglasses up on top of her boy-cropped hair, the butch stared at us for a few seconds, the tension hanging in the air as Amanda and I sat like deer in headlights having no clue what the fuck was happening.  The other two women quickly dismounted from their bikes and while they were much smaller than the lead bull dyke, they also looked quite formidable in their own right covered with tattoos, and sporting unfeminine haircuts.  They had their arms crossed, standing near their bikes, each stood around 5’9 and if I had to guess weighed in around 180 or so with fairly unflattering figures, these two defiantly needed to take some lifting advice from the Amazon, although the brunette had a good pair of tits on her.  The two guys were last to dismount, and both were huge monsters of men, covered with tattoos, and bulging muscles, which again made me feel inferior.  The shorthaired blonde Amazon woman approached with a smirk on her face, yelling “I sure as fuck hope that were not late for the picnic!”  The other two girls followed in her footsteps, one chuckled seeing Amanda in her bra and thong and then noticed my bulging cock poking straight up in my swim trunks, ”Holy fuck…someone is excited to see you Vickie!”  Fuck…of course I was still rock hard as only seconds ago I was about to fuck Amanda, and now my dick stood like a totem poll practically poking through the now tight material.  I tried thinking about baseball player’s batting averages, the President’s of the US…anything to get my boner to come back down to earth, but the damn thing wasn’t budging.  Seemingly, with a mind of it’s own my cock decided to proudly stand at attention like a rocket ship ready for launch...I’ll remember this next time Amanda wants to fuck three times in a night and you lay there like a limp fucking cord, I thought down to my bulging dick not really expecting him to function three times in a night anymore.   

The blonde monster tuned her head to my swim trunks, fuck my stupid cock…go back down I willed it uselessly!   Amanda hurried to my side scared shitless, kneeling next to me, as the Amazon’s voice cut through the air, “Yeah I wouldn’t mind riding that!” My face reddened, and I realized she was still starring at my bulging erection.  I tried thinking about fucking this monster, and the way she would surely man handle me in the sack, surely that would make my dick crawl back inside of me.  Of course Amanda was hovering all over me, her oily tits slapping up against my skin, clearly not helping the bulge in my pants as her breasts brushed up and down my arm.  The bull dyke continued advancing slowly, looking at the picnic basket then back to us, “Yeah…I think I’ll have some food!” Looking down at Amanda she laughed, “Bitch make me a sandwich…maybe I’ll have some of that wine, then maybe I’ll take some of that bulging cock!” 

Amanda, now with her arm wrapped around mine, ”Who do you think you are?  I’m certainly not making you anything…and he’s my boyfriend!” she voiced from below…like I said not the sharpest tool in the shed. 

The lead butch woman smiled from ear to ear starring at my girlfriend, “And what do we have here…hmmm little Barbie doll…all I see is a fake titted slut talking back to me!” she said in a calm voice, then stunned us both as the air was suddenly filled with her scream,  “I shit out turds bigger than you bitch!!!!!”

I looked over at Amanda and could she was scarred shitless, but my girl stupidly rose off the ground…sit down I thought!  She stood up, and even in her three inch heels stood at least six inches shorter than the Amazon, “Please…just leave us alone…we don’t want any trouble!”

The blonde Amazon was still yards away, but walking slowly forward, I could see the way she was starring at Amanda’s curvy body she was either interested in her or jealous of her incredible beauty, either way not good for us!  The butch hissed in a far to masculine vocie, “Well I’d say trouble certainly found you…I don’t think you understand how things work…I see something I like and I take it!”  The butch biker began going through our picnic basket and actually brought out one of my beers, cracked the top off and chugged it in two gulps…quiet impressive, although I did intend to drink that one.  The biker tossed the bottle down and let out a huge belch, “Barbie make me a fuckin sandwich while I chat with Captain Erection over here!”

Amanda looked back down at me, and then at the monster standing only a few feet away, “Get out of here and leave us alone before I call the cops!” Amanda yelled.  Suddenly, that stopped the Amazon dead in her tracks, but I don’t think it had the effect that Amanda was hoping for as the trio of biker girls all looked at each other, and then broke out into a round of laughter.  The biker grinned, “Yeah…please, call the cops, that’s a fucking great idea, and when you call em why don’cha have ‘em send an ambulance…you ain’t walking out of here today Barbie!”  I swallowed hard, my stomach churned and I was shocked as things were spiraling out of control.  Amanda tried to stand up a little taller, looking ridiculously over matched standing in her white lingerie, her glistening body coated with suntan oil, she croaked out, “I warned you to leave…now I AM calling the cops!”  The right strap of her bra falling down her shoulder, and nervously her arms crossed over her midsection.
 
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The short blonde haired woman just glared down at Amanda, and their size difference was shocking, not only in height as Amanda was giving up about 8 inches, but in muscle mass and what had to be a weight difference of probably 50 pounds.  I think Amanda knew she had made a mistake, and I saw her hands nervously twitch, the awkward silence hanging in the air for a few seconds, before the Amazon broke the eerily still air, “You have a big mouth Barbie!” the biker girl spat down at Amanda, “I’ll knock out a few o’ you’re fuckin teeth and close it for you!”   The other biker girls yelled in agreement, and I was suddenly deathly frightened for our safety.  We were outnumbered, outmuscled, outsized, and Amanda was in way over her head having never been in a fight of any kind in her life…what was she getting us into I wondered.  The tattooed covered biker guys left their bikes, and came over to the action, both sensing the growing tension in the air, knowing a fight was about to break out…well maybe a slaughter was about to begin.  I was about to get up just as the big muscle bound duo walked over to me, the shaved head one yelled down at me, “Don’t even think about getting involved unless you want to get fucked up!”  My heart dropped as he whipped out a switchblade, I instantly froze in place and starred at the 5-inch blade hovering in the air, this was not how I envisioned this picnic going!

Amanda was scared shitless still starring eye-to-eye, well craning her neck upward looking at the blonde towering over her.  The biker girls behind the Amazon were getting impatient, and began trying to instigate a fight, yelling at their friend, “Kick her ass!” one yelled, and the other hollered “What are you waiting for…beat this bitch!”  The blonde Amazon raised her hand to quiet the other two biker girls, then snarled, “Maybe I’ll fuck your man Barbie and you can watch…would ya like that…I’ll show ya how a real girl fucks a man…but first I plan on making you feel pain…I’m going to break you bitch!”  I was scarred speechless and clearly Amanda was equally afraid as she slowly stepped back in her high-heeled shoes.  Amanda was backpedaling when the blonde Amazon suddenly went on the attack, springing forward like a coiled snake, hands flying forward in the blink of an eye. "EIIHHHH" Amanda suddenly squealed in pain, as the Blonde Amazon had both of her gloved hands wrapped in my girlfriend’s bleached blonde locks.  Amanda was shocked and I watched as my girlfriend was wildly spun around the empty field…this was not going to end well for us.  Amanda was hunched over and she began slapping at the monster’s arms, but the blonde Amazon remained in total control taking my girlfriend’s slaps on her forearm and continued painfully yanking on her hair.  Amanda’s eyes were shut in pain, and she gasped when her ankle slightly twisted, almost loosing her footing in her high-heeled shoe, but my girl managed to stay on her feet as her hair was yanked forward.  The other two biker girls were watching with smiles of enjoyment plastered on their homely faces, screaming and cheering, while my poor girlfriend was just screaming out in pain.

“Fuck her up Vickie!”  “Rip that slut’s hair out Vickie!” The other biker girl’s screamed, and apparently the blonde Amazon’s name was Vickie.  As it turns out, Vickie still had two handfuls of my girlfriend’s hair and poor Amanda’s scream of pain echoed out, the blonde Amazon began shaking the stunned hottie like a rag doll.  I watched in horror, having no clue how hard it was to rip someone’s hair out from her scalp, but I surely hoped this bull dyke didn’t ruin Amanda’s stunning golden mane...she had the best hair out of any girl I had been with.  Amanda shrieked in pain, “My hairrrrr…pleaseeee it burns!!!! She was begging, but Vickie showed no signs of slowing down, violently pulling and shaking my girlfriend around the picnic area.  The other two girls were savagely rooting on the destruction of my girl, seemingly enjoying the beating unfolding, and I watched as Amanda was stumbling along awkwardly in her high-heeled shoes trying to keep up with Vickie’s long strides.  Amanda was still in shock, totally stunned that she was in a catfight, and now she found herself being painfully yanked side to side by the butchy dyke.  Finally my girlfriend did something as her hands left her aching scalp and latched onto Vickie’s wrists.  “Letttt go!” Amanda wailed and wildly dug her nails into the blonde Amazon’s wrist and my girlfriend desperately began raking her freshly manicured nails into Vickie’s skin. 

“You little bitch!” Vickie hissed and instantly released the hair hold on the hunched over blonde taking only seconds to make sure her wrists weren’t cut open.  I prayed that was the end of this assault, but of course I was way off with that guess…strike one for me!  The blonde Amazon hissed, “I’ma fucking kill you now!” and she took a giant step forward, covered the distance in that one stride, and her left hand latched onto Amanda’s long locks yet again.  “Ahhhh!” Amanda squealed as Vickie yanked her painfully forward by the hair and then slid her right arm around my girlfriend’s neck getting the stunned beauty in a side headlock.
 

To be continued very soon...please do leave comments as to my writing, and what needs improvement

Witness - Karsa Orlong
   

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Offline bishopberkley

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Re: My First Story: Brutalized by Bikers
« Reply #1 on: August 15, 2013, 11:06:02 PM »
Excellent! I love the scenario and your style of writing. I'm not personally keen on the sexual descriptiveness but a lot of people obviously are. I love a blonde victim who is so decidedly outmatched. The descriptions of her not being 'the sharpest tool in the shed' etc are great.

Looking forward to more. My preference is for quite over the top but non-bloody violence, with a humiliating finale like Amanda being dumped in the mud etc. but I know I'm going to enjoy it however it turns out.

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Re: My First Story: Brutalized by Bikers
« Reply #2 on: August 16, 2013, 03:15:00 AM »
Part 2

“Do something!” I shouted form the ground, as my girl looked helplessly lost out there, and was getting her beautiful ass kicked.  The blonde Amazon’s right forearm tightly clamped around Amanda’s neck and my girlfriend’s thong covered ass swished side-to-side bent over at waist level.  “Leeet go…I can’t breath!” Amanda’s wailed, her eyes bulged, and clearly she couldn’t draw in any air.  Things were going to get bad for her as one of the other two biker girls strode forward to get involved in the action…really like that was necessary, I’m sure the bull dyke didn’t need her flabby friend’s help kicking my girls ass.  The other biker strode forward and delivered a stinging open hand slap crashing down on Amanda’s left ass cheek.  “Eiiihhh!” My red-faced girl squealed as her meaty ass cheek shook around and was met with another stinging smack, all the while Vickie continued to choke the life from Amanda.   Another smack hit skin, and Vickie’s free left hand meanwhile had snaked around Amanda’s thrashing body and her fingers latched onto my girlfriend’s right breast.  “Let go you sick fuck!” Amanda hissed. 

Oh fuck…not her tits!  Amanda’s breasts were really sensitive since getting implants, and I cringed thinking about what was forth coming.  A fourth and fifth smack hit her ass, just as Vickie’s fingernails violently squeezed down into Amanda’s breast flesh squishing through her bra.  “My tiiiittt!” Amanda wailed, eyes bulging as her incredible silicone filled orb was painfully squeezed, but my girlfriend again showed some signs of offense and began slamming punches into the blonde Amazon’s body trying to break free from the headlock.  Vickie grunted from the punches, but the bull dyke’s nails continued painfully squeezing Amanda’s ample mound through her bra.  “Let go!  Pleaseeeee!” Amanda sexily whined as her tit was squished.  I felt terrible as I watched my hunched over hottie’s breast being squeezed and mauled…only minutes ago I was applying oil to those tits!  The blonde Amazon’s lower back took another series of punches, but Amanda couldn’t get much behind her swings due to her position, and the group of bikers was going wild watching the action.

Vickie was all smiles as she finally let Amanda stumble forward, my girl’s face bright red from lack of air, and her hands went up to cup her aching right boob which was almost hanging out of her skimpy bra.  The short hair girl towered over Amanda and taunted her, "Get up Barbie, me and you, mono y mono, one on one...an ole’ fashion fist fight right now!"  Amanda was deathly afraid and wanted no more part of the blonde Amazon “God…no please leave us alone!” she begged, but Vickie stood her ground and waved the blonde to come at her.   Amanda looked over at me and I still fought helplessly against the two monsters restraining my arms, my girl looking defeated as she again begged, “Please I’ll do anything let us go!” “Barbie you’re already going to do anything I say…you’re gonna be my bitch…let’s go!” Vickie casually said while curling her fingers toward her body waving my girl to come at her.  The other two biker girls stood a few feet behind Amanda making sure she didn’t run away, and I watched speechless as Amanda knew she had no choice but to fight. 

Amanda’s head whipped side to side, desperately seeking a way out but it seemed she had to get through the blonde Amazon somehow as the other two girls stood only feet away now.   She looked back to Vickie and slowly began trying to distance herself from the blonde Amazon, somehow looking to find a way to freedom.  The bull dyke slowly closed the distance, and only a few feet separated the girls, Vickie began pumping her fists up and down like an expert boxer.  I watched the leather gloved fists fly up and down, the bull dyke more than ready to throw punches…punches that I wouldn’t want to be hit with.  Amanda raised her hands and was clearly scared, her fingers barely making fists.  Vickie’s gloved fists flew through the air, and she taunted my scarred as shit girlfriend “Barbie I hope the doctor who did those tits can do facials cause I’ma rearrange that ugly little face o’ yours!”  I tried to break free knowing Amanda couldn’t fight this monster, but to no avail, watching helplessly as the girls circled one another.  Vickie’s fists continued effortlessly going up and down while she looked for an opening sizing up her smaller foe, and Amanda was slowly moving side to side in her heels clearly not ready to go toe to toe with the bigger blonde Amazon.  With fists blazing, faster than I thought possible Vickie made the first move and slammed a right cross blasting square into Amanda's rib cage, I barely even saw that punch fly through the air, but I sure heard the response.

“Unngggg” My girl groaned in pure pain as a thud filled the air from the Amazon’s grueling blow.  Just as Amanda wound up trying to throw a punch of her own, Vickie drove a closed left fist shooting into the blonde’s washboard stomach.  Holy fuck this girl was a freak, the grueling blow instantly took Amanda’s breath away and my girl dropped her guard in response.  “Get your arms up!” I yelled but Amanda was in way over her head.  Soon sexy groans and moans of pain filled the air as Vickie began to viciously work over Amanda's incredible body with grueling lefts and rights blasting into to her ribs, and belly, each slamming home with tremendous force.  Amanda was soon wheezing while Vickie continued her body barrage using Amanda’s midsection like she was at a gym beating on a punching bag.  “Hit her back!” I screamed, and I give Amanda credit for even after all the hellacious shots she took, my girl began tossing a few punches of her own.  Vickie took a punch and laughed, “Was that the best you got you useless cxnt?” she taunted without missing a beat and slammed another crunching punch into Amanda’s ribs. 

Vickie stopped her attack, stood arms out wide, and yelled, “Free shot slut…hit me!”  Amanda’s aching body did just that and her right fist hit Vickie’s stomach, but instead of a pain response, Vickie burst out laughing, “I said hit me cxnt!  Don’t tickle me!!!”  I think mentally that demoralized my girl, as she put everything she had into the punch, and now the blonde Amazon was already back in attack mode.  The biker faked a left jab, Amanda’s body swaying in response, and that left her stomach wide open to be blasted by the right cross.  Somehow my gal fought back landing another much weaker punch, which seemed to have little if any effect on the blonde Amazon.  A hard leather gloved fist suddenly exploded into Amanda's right breast and the blonde’s mouth shot open in a pained response, her hands instantly coming up to cup her aching orb.  Amanda was in a world of trouble, her ribs and breasts aching from the barrage of fists.  Amanda began to stagger backward, and Vickie quickly switched her attack and slammed a right fist hammering home blasting into Amanda's china doll face catching the Goddess just under the eye.  “My faceeee!” Amanda wailed, and another closed fisted left followed the first blow and landed flush on Amanda’s cheek, long blonde hair and spittle flying outward in response to the grueling punch.  Amanda was ready to go down, my heart sinking as I watched the blonde stunners face being brutalized, a trip to the hospital seemed to be in our future.

Vickie latched onto a handful of long hair and suddenly my girlfriend’s scream filled the air as her entire upper body sped forward in response to the hair pull.  The blonde Amazon held tightly onto Amanda’s hair and evilly powered her kneecap flying upward cracking into Amanda’s forehead.  Oh shit, I watched as Vickie used Amanda’s hair like a handle and ripped her face back upward and then repeated the move again, a sick crack filling the air when her kneecap slammed into Amanda’s forehead.  This bitch knew how to fight, and I could only watch broken hearted as Vickie’s knee continued flying upward hammering right into my girl’s forehead.  Stop attacking her face I prayed…strike two for me, as the bull dyke repeated the knee left again.  Amanda groaned and staggered in place lifelessly but was held in place and remained hunched over at the waist, her forehead and face was blasted again and again by the blonde Amazon’s knee.  I looked on in horror watching the Amazon’s knee lift like a piston, while driving my girl’s model like face down slamming into her rising kneecap.  Oh fuck!  I prayed her face would be okay, and finally as if in answer to my prayer, Vickie let go of Amanda’s long locks.  My girl looked drunk, with her eyes glazed over, her forehead displaying a lump in the center, and her face was bright red, Amanda soon stumbled backward about to go down.  Her body teetered back and forth like a leaf blowing in the wind but then Vickie stepped up and let fly an uppercut that caught Amanda directly under her chin.  The rock hard punch crushed the blonde beauty’s face, head snapping back, long hair flying wildly, and the dazed Amanda spun before she fell forward chest first on the ground, her body glistening with sweat and suntan oil lying lifelessly face down on the grass. 

With Amanda face down, Vickie was free to punt away at my girl’s incredible body and that’s exactly what the blonde Amazon did showing no signs of slowing down.  Those damn combat boots went to work and suddenly stomp after stomp barreled into Amanda's incredible body.  I was mortified, watching as the trashing grew less and less and after a series of uncontested kicks all movement and sounds stopped, save that of the rowdy bikers cheering with glee and my girl sobbing like a baby.  The brutal kicking assault finally seemed to come to an end, and Vickie looked at me, “I hope you weren’t with her for her looks…she won’t look so good when I’m done!” T he comment rang in my head and I grew sick thinking about poor Amanda, still forced to watch Vickie stand over the blonde’s limp body.  Casually the bull dyke slid forward, and Amanda was in trouble as the muscular monster’s ass was perched on the blonde’s lower back.  “EEEiiiiihhhh” another shriek of pure pain echoed in the air when the blonde Amazon reached forward and yanked back on my girl’s hair.  Amanda’s scream continued as her hair was held tightly in place from behind, but things got worse for my gorgeous gal as Vickie suddenly pushed forward slamming Amanda’s nose down into the ground.  "Mpphhhh!" Amanda gasped, loose soil and dirt was forced into her nose and mouth and she struggled to breathe, while her face was dragged back and forth. 

Vickie was clearly jealous of Amanda’s stunning looks, and now the biker was going to make a statement, the Amazon seemed hell bent on marring her beauty.  Back and forth I watched Amanda’s face being dragged against the ground, the blonde Goddess’s once flawless cheeks covered with dirt, scrapes and scratches.  Amanda was begging, but the blonde Amazon showed no remorse as she dragged my girl’s cheeks against the rough ground.  "How's that feel you ugly bitch?" Vickie screamed at the babbling blonde, finally releasing Amanda’s hair.   Amanda was struggling for breath and finally my girl spun free, but Vickie seemed to expect that and quickly wrapped her muscular thighs around Amanda’s tiny waist.  Like a python squeezing a mouse, the ruthless bitch’s legs contracted around the blonde’s stomach, Amanda gasping for air. Vickie was relentless in her attack, her hand suddenly latched onto my girl’s ample right breast again and then the blonde Amazon painfully squeezed.  “My breassssttt!  Pleassse it huurrttttsss!!!!” My girlfriend begged futilely, her mouth hung open in shock as the dyke biker’s nails squeezed her tender melon, the lacey white bra offering scant protection to her mound of perfection.  Again this brought screams from the other biker girls, “Pop that slut’s tit!”  and “Fuck her up!”

“You silicone filled whore!” Vickie screamed, her gloved hand wreaking havoc on Amanda’s right breast.  “Ohhh my Goodddd!  It hurts sooooooo bad!” Amanda wailed, but was helpless to stop the assault on her orb.  Sheer panic drove Amanda and she wildly spun and trashed in place, finally breaking free from the crazy blonde Amazon’s vice like thighs.  “Get the fuck back here!” Vickie yelled, her gloved hand latching onto Amanda’s hair ripping her back downward, my girlfriend sprawled on the ground lying spread eagle.  Vickie began positioning her large body over my girlfriend, and I watched in growing fear as the muscle bound blonde straddled Amanda’s tiny waist.  Oh shit, Vickie never slowed, the biker began dragging my girlfriend’s arms down against her body, trying to pin them against her sides.  Things were going to get bad, well worse, for my girl if she didn’t do something soon, but Amanda was already to beat down.  It only took a few seconds, Vickie using her size and power to pin each of Amanda's arms under a knee leaving my girlfriend helpless.  “Oh booo hooo…the little Barbie doll is stuck in place!’ Vickie laughed as Amanda's long shapely legs flailed about frantically trying to find purchase and somehow dislodge the muscle bound monster sitting proudly astride her.  From my angle I starred speechless watching my girl’s legs wildly thrash, her crotch barely covered by her suddenly shrinking bright white thong.   

“So you thought you were tough shit huh Barbie?” the captor taunted her prey, like a cat playing with a mouse.  I fought in place, but I wasn’t going anywhere and was forced to watch.  A closed fisted glove suddenly rose upward and I watched in horror as the muscle bound arm drove down slamming a closed fisted punch into my beautiful girlfriend’s face.  Oh fuck, I couldn’t see the outcome, but instantly Amanda's legs fell limply apart, slowly spreading wide and her struggles stopped.  Vickie looked downward, “Talk shit now you useless cxnt!” taunting my girl before again raising a gloved fist upward.  This time her fist drove downward smashing into Amanda’s cheek, spittle sent flying through the air as all life seemed to leave my girl.  Fuck fuck fuck, I watched as the third punch hammered into her luscious lips.  Amanda’s pearly whites were suddenly coated with blood, as that last punch must have split her upper lip open.  Finally, the blonde Amazon stood upward, and the other girls began screaming in joy as it looked like Vickie had knocked my girl unconscious. 

“Strip her!” Vickie yelled, and stood off Amanda.  The other two biker girls sprang into action, seemingly salivating to get into the mix, one began pawing at the tiny lacey white bra, and the other latched onto the matching thong bottom…what the fuck were they going to do to her I wondered in fear.  Amanda was clueless as to the world around her, the warm sun casting down rays on my girls lifeless body, which was being stripped from all remaining clothing.  The biker girl holding Amanda’s bra stood back and my girl’s new fake breasts tumbled free, slightly spilling off either side of her heaving chest.  Both of my girl’s puffy pink nipples began standing at attention as a gust of wind blew through our picnic area, and her right breast had a few marks from Vickie’s abuse.  By now, the other biker girl had Amanda’s thong worked down over her legs and just like that her neatly shaved bush was visible for all to see.   I was speechless staring at my girlfriend’s naked body, her chest heaving with each breath, Amanda having no clue still lying spread eagle and unconscious on her back.

I stared in shock at my poor beaten girlfriend, hoping these deranged women were done with Amanda, strike three…such good fortunes weren’t in the cards, “Tie the cxnt up!” Vickie yelled.  Her minions went to work, one girl flipping Amanda onto her chest, and the other grabbing her lacey white bra and began tying it around her limp wrists.  In seconds Amanda’s arms were tightly bound and knotted behind her back, both off her hands resting on her ass.   Vickie still stood to the side of my lifeless gal, and looked at her friend whose name I hadn’t known up until this point, “Hey Lisa, why don’t we see how much this blonde whore likes her guy’s dick inside a real gal?”   No, no, no…my dick doesn’t want to be in another girl…and since I am not even sure you are a girl let’s not, I thought but was to scarred to chime up.  The other biker girl, apparently named Lisa, walked over to me starring at my bulging mound in my swim trunks and smiled back over to Vickie, “Dammmmmnnn…he must have loved watching his little slut get her ass kicked!  His flag’s still standing at full attention!”  Finally I yelled out watching Lisa near, “It’s an erection caused from the STD medicine I am taking…I caught a few things, Gonorrhea, crabs, Herpes, and a few other things that the doctor’s still can’t identify yet”.  Lisa laughed, “Oh a fuckin comedian…well I ain’t fucked a funny man in a while!” Oh shit…it wasn’t Vickie that was going to fuck me, it turned out it was her pug faced friend! 
My arms were still held tightly in place and the pair of biker guys drove me flat on my back.   Lisa had no trouble puling down my shorts bringing into view my bugling hard cock.  My stomach dropped, and I said a quick prayer hoping Amanda didn't wake up.  Thank God!  Amanda was still lifeless, and I watched Lisa quickly sliding her shorts off and began fondling my cock in her hands, and she wasn’t gentle at all violently squeezing it...had she even held a cock before, I wondered in pain.  Lisa’s face hovered above mine, and with her smashed in nose, big nostrils, her short brown hair cut ending just above her chin the whole package kinda made her look like a dude.  My dick was manhandled and I starred at this woman praying my dick would suddenly go limp just thinking about fucking her.

“Owww!  Fuck!” I yelled out in pain as the bitch wrenched on my shaft, lady it’s a penis not a fucking steel rod, I thought.  Lisa smiled, and again the sick bitch squeezed my cock tightly, then yelling back over to Vickie “Wake the slut up...I want the little Barbie doll to watch me fuck her man!”  Oh shit…panic…my dick was now being stroked softly by Lisa while the Blonde Amazon Vickie began lightly slapping Amanda’s face back and forth.  After a couple of smacks Vickie’s hands tightened in Amanda’s hair and she held my girlfriend’s face in place, Amanda now starring directly at me, blood dripping down from her upper lip.   When the realization of what was about to happen to me set in, Amanda shrieked in wild fury as she watched my cock being stroked by Lisa, but her arms were bound behind her and she was helpless.  The blonde Amazon held her tightly and teased “You’re gonna watch a real woman fuck him you worthless slut!”  Before I even knew what was happening, Lisa’s hips straddled my legs, my bulging hard cock standing at full attention and suddenly it was slid deep inside of the brunette’s moist pussy.  “I’ll fuckin killlllll you!!!!” Amanda shrieked and went wild watching me being forced to fuck the brunette perched atop of me.  This was far too much for my girlfriend, and she began bucking and trashing like a girl possessed, yet it was useless, her hair held tightly and arms restrained in place.  Up and down, Lisa’s tits flopped around while she continued to ride my cock, and I could only helplessly stare back at Amanda watching as Vickie instantly squashed my girlfriend’s pathetic uprising. 

I suddenly became afraid as I felt myself about to bust a nut, and then the horror took over thinking about my life if I somehow knocked up this pug-like looking girl.  My grandma, the church priest, Babe Ruth naked, think about anything but Lisa’s flopping tits…something to get my boner down.  The last thing I wanted was a pug nosed little snot ruining my life, I had to get this bitch off my cock.  I looked over and yet again my gorgeous, sobbing naked girlfriend was pinned down chest first and screamed mindlessly watching Lisa bounce around on my cock.  I felt terrible as I fucked the brunette, and I still couldn’t control my erection looking at Amanda who was a blithering mess.  Her right eye was swelling shut already turning purple, a lump was building in the middle of her forehead, and a small trail of scratches filled both of her flushed red cheeks, while blood slowly dribbled down her chin.

I don’t know how long I fucked Lisa, but finally the brunette slid off my dripping wet cock, thank God I didn’t cum inside her!  Lisa smiled down at me and then yelled at the two guys holding my arms, “Drag’em over to the slut!”  I had no idea what they had planned, but watched in sorrow as Amanda was still sobbing and screaming.  With two handfuls of hair, Vickie pulled Amanda’s aching body of the ground and hissed in her ear, “I want you to taste a real woman!  Lick it bitch!”  Amanda’s eyes went wide watching my swinging cock hanging inches from her mouth, the entire shaft still dripping wet filled with Lisa’s bodily fluid.  Vickie tightly pulled back on Amanda’s hair, my girlfriend’s mouth opened in a scream and just like that Lisa drove me forward at the waist driving my dick into my girlfriend’s mouth.

Amanda’s eyes bulged, as all three biker girls broke out into laughter, Lisa smiling, “Doesn’t my pussy taste good you dirty little slut?”  Amanda tried to push her head backward but Vickie held her tightly in place and I looked down in sorrow watching Amanda try to free her arms.  Vickie began pushing forward and pulling back on my girl’s long blonde hair, while Lisa was pushing my ass forward and back forcing Amanda to give me a blowjob and tasting all of Lisa’s fluids.  Black mascara trails streamed from the corners of my girls eyes and she was completely broken, a sobbing mess, helplessly held in place and forced to suck my dick and I felt myself loosing control.  Only a few more sucks, her head was driven forward and pulled back and my load shot in my girl’s mouth, Amanda instantly gagging on a monster sized wad of cum....It felt like Old Faithful spewing out fluid, pumping down her throat.  A second wad followed instantly filling her mouth and all three girls laughed as Amanda gagged, globs of cum and blood dribbled down from her busted lip splattering on her exposed breasts.

Vickie turned her attention back to the broken girl kneeling in front of her with her head bowed in abject shame, her hands bound on her ass.  The bull dyke biker stomped her combat boot on the ground in front of Amanda and Vickie began chuckling, “Shine my boots, bitch!” Amanda looked up to Vickie and then back down to dust and dirt coated combat boots, “Ohhh plleaseee no…leave me alllllonnnee!” Amanda sobbed.  Lisa grabbed Amanda by the hair from behind, my girls eyes wincing shut in agony, and she creamed at the blonde, “You heard her you worthless little skank. Lick her boots clean!”  With her hands wrapped in Amanda’s hair Lisa drove my kneeling girlfriend forward and Amanda couldn’t brace herself for the fall landing tits first, then her face smacked the ground.  I could see her lips quivering as Vickie slid her thick boot below my girl’s face, and Amanda whined out, “Plllleassee…I’m sorry!” Lisa bent down and violently shoved Amanda’s head down atop Vickie’s boot, and held her face, “Start fuckin lickin before I rip every fuckin hair from your scalp!”  Slowly, hesitantly, Amanda’s tongue slowly emerges form her mouth and runs over the top of Vickie’s right boot.   Vickie chuckled, towering over my humiliated girl,  “That’s it you useless little slut…lick it clean bitch!”

I glanced up in shame, and suddenly my heart beat faster, wondering if I was seeing things.  No I wasn’t, it really was a jogger coming around the far side of the pond, hurry the fuck up and run faster, I wished!  I made sure not to let on, and again dejectedly looked back down at my girl licking the dyke’s boots.  My eyes shoot over in a sideways glance, still not turning my head just yet…come on, hurry up and run!  I was beyond excited and as the jogger grew closer, I said a prayer that he was in ear shot, and it was then that I had to act, “Hellllppppp!  Callll the pollllicce!” I screamed at the top of my lungs, praying her heard me.  The other bikers all spun around, stopping instantly as the man must have heard me for he stopped running, apparently confused.  Amanda’s head snapped up and she stumbled forward from her kneeling position, with her arms still bound behind her.   “Call the cops!” I screamed and then my world went black as one of the muscle bound bikers slammed the back of my skull with something. 

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Offline goredsox

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Re: My First Story: Brutalized by Bikers
« Reply #3 on: August 16, 2013, 04:22:40 AM »
Awesome writing   just wish you included actually ripping hair out of the girls head. That would've been great.

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Re: My First Story: Brutalized by Bikers
« Reply #4 on: August 16, 2013, 08:44:54 AM »
He! He! That was pretty good! I identified with the butch dyke, of course ... LOL!  ;D
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Re: My First Story: Brutalized by Bikers
« Reply #5 on: August 16, 2013, 02:04:05 PM »
Thanks for the feedback!

Lol Suuny

Gore, I thought about that, but getting clumps of hair ripped out is permanent, and really not easily fixable.  If I wasn't using Amanda again i may have done so...maybe in  the future, she or one of the girls will loose a little strand or two.

biship - I had to put a little blood in their, but kept it mild as I can't see punches to the face not doing any type of damage.

Again appreciate the comments!


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Re: My First Story: Brutalized by Bikers
« Reply #6 on: August 16, 2013, 04:50:59 PM »
Good one Karsa! The fist beat down and forced sex portions of course were my favorites. I look forward to reading more of your works in the future!

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Re: My First Story: Brutalized by Bikers
« Reply #7 on: August 16, 2013, 05:59:23 PM »
I enjoyed your immensely! it is VERY similar to a story  penned in 2008 under the name Retrospect on the Seakings site...The River...http://www.seakingsfemfight.com/stories/storyretrospect01.html. I'm just wondering if perhaps you drew some inspiration from my story? If so, I am very flattered and actually like your writing style better :) Cant wait to read what the future holds for your poor girlfriend.

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« Reply #8 on: August 16, 2013, 06:15:23 PM »
I enjoyed your immensely! it is VERY similar to a story  penned in 2008 under the name Retrospect on the Seakings site...The River...http://www.seakingsfemfight.com/stories/storyretrospect01.html. I'm just wondering if perhaps you drew some inspiration from my story? If so, I am very flattered and actually like your writing style better :) Cant wait to read what the future holds for your poor girlfriend.

You know what I do remember reading that story vividly, and did in fact use it as the premise of my tale!  I am glad you provided the link as it gave me a chance to reread it, it's been years since I remember seeing it!  I hope I changed my version sufficiently for you as I just wanted to use your's as a similar setting and in no way attempted to plagiarize your work!  Awesome story on your part though as I still remember your work from back then!

Catwacher - Thanks for the comments.  I am not sure what the next story will bring about, but i hope it pleases everyone! 

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Re: My First Story: Brutalized by Bikers
« Reply #9 on: August 16, 2013, 07:46:32 PM »
I enjoyed your immensely! it is VERY similar to a story  penned in 2008 under the name Retrospect on the Seakings site...The River...http://www.seakingsfemfight.com/stories/storyretrospect01.html. I'm just wondering if perhaps you drew some inspiration from my story? If so, I am very flattered and actually like your writing style better :) Cant wait to read what the future holds for your poor girlfriend.

You know what I do remember reading that story vividly, and did in fact use it as the premise of my tale!  I am glad you provided the link as it gave me a chance to reread it, it's been years since I remember seeing it!  I hope I changed my version sufficiently for you as I just wanted to use your's as a similar setting and in no way attempted to plagiarize your work!  Awesome story on your part though as I still remember your work from back then!

Catwacher - Thanks for the comments.  I am not sure what the next story will bring about, but i hope it pleases everyone! 

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I am honored that you remember that story after 5 years and liked it so much! You have definitely changed it up enough for me...nice work. I really enjoyed your story and it made me "relive" our night at The River. My poor wife being brutalized by a big biker bitch was a turn on for me as i suspect seeing your GF beaten down was stimulating for you. Perhaps my wife and your GF are on a camping trip with us when something similar happens?? Just a thought :) Keep up the good work

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« Reply #10 on: August 17, 2013, 08:28:27 AM »
For a first story this is excellent!  Very descriptive and a good story line.  I look forward to your next work with a little more back and forth action.  Thanks for sharing…

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« Reply #11 on: August 17, 2013, 01:47:14 PM »
 
For a first story this is excellent!  Very descriptive and a good story line.  I look forward to your next work with a little more back and forth action.  Thanks for sharing…

IRISH


Thanks IRISH!  I used to love reading your work back on Kim and Ginny's site, Karen was always amazing to see in action!  I would look forward to seeing you back in action, and miss seeing your stories (would love to see Leeann Tweeden vs Karen McDougal where Leeann gets a win in the end this time!)

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« Reply #12 on: August 17, 2013, 04:41:17 PM »
I liked it , not into catfighting that much , especially where blood is involved or pulling hair out of someone's head , but I like how you used the pictures to set the tone & give some emotional attachment to the story like I like to do , but if it were pro wrestling , if promoters would do more bulldyke looking heels dominating Barbie good girls , it will be much better for ladies wrestling , but again , this was an enjoyable story & having fun is the most important thing
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« Reply #13 on: August 17, 2013, 08:14:24 PM »
Being a fan of blonde jobbers I immediately thought I would like it. Upon reading it I was amazed at the descriptivness and quality of your writing.

Welcome to the board and please post more of these works of art!