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Bar Fight

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Offline bvvv

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Bar Fight
« on: June 28, 2009, 04:27:34 AM »
Marie and Edie despised each other for awhile.  This one saturday night they both were in a bar, drinking and talking in two different groups.  Both were 18, Marie dressed in a black skirt with dark dark stockings on, medium high heels, and a fairly low cut button shirt which showed off her 36 c's magnificently, along with her great legs.  Edie had tight jeans on, flat shoes, and a tight tube top that showcased her 34 c's. They were both the same height, 5'5", and weighed about the same,125 lbs. Marie had dark hair, and Edie had sandy blond hair. Both girls were considered to be the best looking around, so there was a natural rivalry in that. along with the fact that Edie was in the crowd that had picked on Marie early on in life.  They had attended the same grammar school, but went to different high schools.  Marie and Edie had fought once before, but the fight had been broken up before there was a winner.
     Marie was going to the bathroom and passed by Edie's table, who said under her breath, "stuck up bitch"  Marie asked, "what did you say?" and Edie repied, "fucking bitch!" and threw her beer in Marie's face, wetting her shirt also.  With that Marie flew into Edie, and they both crashed to the floor.  They rolled around once or twice, with each girl throwing a few punches at each other.  Marie grabbed ahold of Edie's hair and shoved her face into the floor, but Edie grabbed a tit of Marie and squeezed and scratched it, causing it to pop out, and Marie let go of the hair and pried Edies hand off her breast.  Nobody tried to break it up, rather they let the two go at it and enjoyed the sight.  The two just started to punch each other, hitting each in the face and breasts.  Marie did not stop for a minute to fix her breast, but grabbed at Edie's and pu;;ed her top down.
     They clinched for a second, and Edie threw Marie onto a table, straddling her.  Edie than reached to get a beer bottle to hit Marie with, but one of the guys grabbed her hand to take it away from her.  with that Marie got off the table, and stood there waiting for Edie.  As the two girls fought, Edie was cursing at Marie, calling her every name, while all one heard from Marie was an occasional grunt.  edie tried to grab Marie by the neck, but Marie punched her in the breast, and than kicked Edie in the pussy.  edie fell to the ground, and Marie jumped on top of her, stradlling her and punching Edie in the face a couple of times.  Edie did not fight back, so Marie got off of her, smiling thinking she won the fight .  Edie jumped up, punched Marie right under the eye, and pulled her head straight back by the hair.  Edie was now right behind Marie, and with both hands clawed at Marie's breasts. Marie howled in pain, and stomped on Edie's foot.  Edie let go, and Marie turned to face Edie, but Edie charged Marie and tackled her to the ground.  Edie was trying to punch Marie in the face, while Marie was turning side to side.  Marie was on the bottom, and grabbed edie's ears, ripping her earrings out, causing blood to flow.  Edie hit Marie right in the mouth.  Marie grabbed Edie's hands, and edie just straddled Marie,asking her if she gave up.  Marie said no, and Edie banged Marie's head against the floor.   Again Edie asked if Marie gave up, but Marie, even though she knew she was beaten, refused.  With that, 2 guys dragged Edie off Marie, who laid on the ground for a minute to compose herself, while edie whooped it up and went to the bar to get a drink and congratulations from all there.
     Marie put her boobs back in place, found her shoes, and, smelling of beer, a welt under her eye, face all red, left the bar, thinking that she never should have let her rival up, and that perhaps they would fight again

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Re: Bar Fight
« Reply #1 on: June 28, 2009, 02:53:18 PM »
there was a rematch, i just have to write it.  Marie's been in over 50 fights, some were just brief tussles, others were like the ones described.  She hasn't fought in a while and she never would fight for my or any other man's enjoyment, she would onlyfight if the situation required it

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Offline fantasyman

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Re: Bar Fight
« Reply #2 on: June 28, 2009, 08:54:13 PM »
I really enjoyed this story. Great job.

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Offline JOHNNY the DUECES

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Re: Bar Fight
« Reply #3 on: June 29, 2009, 06:40:45 AM »
great fight. i hope in the second fight the winner really humiliates the loser.

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Re: Bar Fight
« Reply #4 on: June 29, 2009, 07:21:16 PM »
This was a excellent story.

pete