This is a revised version of a 2 part story i did a few years ago, it just popped into my head this morning, and i thought, lets go and see if i can improve it, and make it available to the new people who have joined the forum over the last few years.
This is the story of 2 backpackers (Jane and Cindy) who where on a hiking holiday, where they stumbled across an old mansion in the middle of the English countryside. The mansion was run by a Dominatrix called Femqueen Roxy, and her trainee Dominatrix's. Having stumbled across the old mansion, the 2 girls had to fight for survival in order to escape the Mansion.
It was a hot summers day, Jane was a 22 year old blonde, who had a just finished at university and was taking a year out to backpack around Europe. Jane was a had long blonde hair was 5'5'' and had an athletic 36C-24-28 body, she was wearing tight black athletic style leggings, and had walking boots on and a white vest which clung to her figure showing off her fit young body. Cindy was also 22 years old, had long blonde hair, was 5'6'' but with a voluptuous curvy 36DD-26-36 figure, she was curvy, fit and feminine. Cindy had trainers on, tight athletic black leggings and a black vest clinging to her curvaceous body, both girls had left their backpacks at the Hostel, and had planned to go on a walk in the hills on this lovely sunny day.
It was a hot day, and they where glad of the shade in the trees as they walked, and they decided to leave the trail and head through the woods, after a mile or so they entered a clearing, and about half a mile away they could see the top of an old Victorian building. At that moment, they also noticed that it had become cloudy whilst they had been walking through the wood...and just then Cindy felt a drop of rain on her arm, 'this doesn't look good, shall we go and see if we can get some shelter over there, and a drink perhaps? - i'm gasping for something to drink Jane' Cindy said smiling, 'OK, sounds like a good idea,' Jane replied.
The girls walked across the grounds, and headed to the building, it appeared that it was a lot bigger then they first thought, and they appeared to be heading to the rear of the building, as they approached they could see the rear door appeared to be ajar, 'let's check it out Jane' Cindy said.
They cautiously opened the door and where surprised to see the building looked well maintained and went inside, they went down a corridor and entered a large room, with a stock in the middle, and some chains on the wall side, 'mmmmmmm i don't like the look of this' said Jane.
'WHY NOT?' a voice demanded from behind, both girls swivelled around to see, three women in uniform, and with whips in their hand, the uniform was a pvc corset, pvc hotpants and patent high heeled knee length boots.
Jane and Cindy turned around slowly, worried, and they looked at the source of the voice 'sorry' blushed Jane.
'SORRY! SORRY, SORRY IS NOT GOOD ENOUGH!' Demanded the closest dominatrix, she was 5'7'' with dark hair in a bob, and had immaculately applied make up, she then smirked and said to one of the others 'Miss Jenny, call Femqueen Roxy, and tell her we're going to have some fun.'
One of the other 2 Dominatrix's picked up a mobile phone from a holder on her belt, she was also about 5'7'' with the same uniform, she had jet black hair tied back in a pig tail, 'Mistress Roxy, we have some intruders in the torture training room, could you please come down' she said into her phone.'
'Look we just want to be on our way' Jane said, and started for the door, the third Dominatrix, who was 5'9'' with short blonde hair cracked her whip, and hissed, 'STAY THERE' as she stepped between the girls and door, flexing her whip in her fingers and staring Cindy straight in the eyes.
'Fuck you!' said Cindy, who launched herself at the Dominatrix, taking her by surprise, she kneed her in the groin before punching her on the chin and sending her sprawling backwards, her knees like jelly and blue eyes all dazed and out focus as she crashed against the doorframe...uguhhhhh she groaned...at which point Cindy punched her on the chin...and the Domme rolled over KO'd.
'NO' cried the the first Dominaintrix, who stepped in front of Cindy, Cindy, grabbed hold of the front of the Dom's Corset and gave her an upcut, rrrrrrrrrrrrrioiiiiiiiiiipppp, the Dom fell backwards as her Corset ripped and she on the floor with her small boobs exposed, 'haaha, look at those egg cups!' laughed Cindy. Cindy then turned to see Mistress Jenny struggling with Jane, but then felt a hard slap on her cheek...she turned to see the first Dominatrix up on her feet, her right arm covering her small breasts...'you''ll pay for this bi..' she hissed but was cut off as Cindy punched her hard in the mouth..her arm dropped down and she staggered punch drunk, until Cindy sent a hard kick into her stomach sending the domme flying backwards and through the open door, onto her back..sprawled out just in her pants and shorts..
Miss Jenny, seemed tougher then the other two Dommes as she had her fists up in a boxers stance...'Come to Mama' she taunted Jane as they circled each other...Miss Jenny did a quick one two, Jane stepped back..and Miss Jenny's punches hit thing air, she came forward again...and tried the same move...and this time the second punch clipped Jane's cheek, Jane gasped...'you bitch!' she panted and then steped forward punching Miss Jenny in the stomach, the corset made a loud smacking sound as Jane punched it...'Haha...my armour!' Miss Jenny hissed as she brought a knee up hard between Jane's legs, Jane doubled over, Miss Jenny was tottering in her high heeled boots but agile, she sent a left punch to the side of Jane's head sending Jane spinning to the side...'now you will pay bitch!' she hissed as her heels echoed in the room stepping forward.
'No way bitch!' Cindy screamed, as Miss Jenny turned shocked, Cindy grabbed the Domme's pig tail and pulled her towards her and got her in a headlock, and started to shake the Dominatrix's head violently..'uughhhhhh get off!' Miss Jenny panted. Meanwhile Jane had recovered, she then rang over, and pulled the hot pants down Miss Jenny's legs, 'Noooooooo!' screeched Miss Jenny, her face turning red as, as Cindy released her shoving Miss Jenny back...Miss Jenny almost falling over, windmilling her arms with her pants around her knees, as Jane stepped forward delivering a haymaker to Miss Jenny's chin taking her out cold, Miss Jenny fell across the back of the short haired blonde Dominatrix by the door with her legs apart revealing a clean shaven pussy. The 3 Dominatrix's where all sprawled out cold on the floor, and just as Jane and Cindy where about to leave.
Jane and Cindy looked around the Dominatrix's chamber, looking for a way to get out, there where 3 Dominatrix's humiliatingly sprawled on the floor, One mistress with short blonde hair, fully dressed, clean out cold with a whip in her hand, the Mistress with the Dark bobbed hair was out cold with her knee length boots and PVC hotpants on, but her corset was ripped on the floor next to her, her small breasts exposed and panting, and Mistress Jenny still in her PVC Corset and Knee length boots, but her pants where around her ankles and her legs where wide open showing her clean shaven pussy.
A shadow fell across the open doorway
'WHAT ON EARTH HAVE YOU DONE TO MY DOMINATRIXES! THIS IS UNACCEPTABLE!' YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS!.'
Cindy and Jane spun around to see where the voice had come from, behind them, was a beautiful 6 foot tall Dominatrix with blue eyes and jet black hair, who must have being FemQueen Roxy, she was in the same uniform as the 3 earlier Doms, shiny high heeled knee length boots, pvc hotpants and a pvc corsent, she also had a pvc military cap on, and around her waste was a large black strap on. In front of FemQueen Roxy was another 2 Dominatrix's one blonde and one brunette both with their hair held up, both had shiney black latex bands around their left biceps, and in the Dominatrix uniform of knee length boots, PVC hotpants and corset, both flexed riding crops in their hands.
'YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS INSOLENCE! MISTRESS VIXEN AND MISTRESS DENIAL, SHOW THEM WHO IS IN CHARGE.'
'I'm going to shove that crop so far up your ass you'll have your own tail if you come near me with it bitch!' Cindy said to the brunette Mistress Denial.
'YOUR GOING TO LICK MY BOOTS IN A MINUTE SLUT.' Mistress Denial snarled back.
Mistress Vixen approached Jane, swishing her riding crop back and forward, 'YOUR GOING TO PAY FOR THIS YOU LITTLE BITCH,' she hissed, 'fuck you' retorted Jane, and with that Jane used her athletic body to spring forward and charged shoulder first into the taller Blonde connecting with the Dom's mid section and pushing her back. 'AAAARRGH' Cried Mistress Vixen, 'GET OFF ME SLAVE I COMM..' the word stopped as Jane slapped her across the face.
'Let's see how you like your own punishment' said Jane, as she took the riding crop from Mistress Vixen, ' enough of the toys!' she said, Mistress Vixen's face was a mixture of shock and fury as she and Jane wrestled for supremacy.
Across the room Mistress Denial was swishing her crop in front of Cindy, Cindy was hopping from side to side, and then rushed towards Mistress Denial, Denial screamed, ' GET OFF IT BITCH!'
'Fuck you' replied Cindy and grabbed the whip pulling the Dom towards her, she grabbed hold of Denial in a headlock and bent her over, pulling the whip out of her hand with her superior strength.... 'NO' exclaimed Mistress Denial as she toppled over held in a headlock by Cindy, the blonde Cindy, laughed, and pulled down Denial's PVC pants, 'NO' cried Mistress Denial, 'Noooooo' as she then felt the handle of her whip push inside her, 'another baldy eh, what is it with you Dom's! hahaha,' laughed Cindy as she looked down at the Mistress's smooth pussy, which now had a whip protruding from it. Cindy, started working the whip handle like a dildo in and out of the helpless wriggling Dominatrix, 'NO PLEASE' but her struggles where in vain and she was getting weaker, and also turned on, but then Cindy stopped, and kneeed the Dom in her exposed pussy, which was now sensite 'AWWWW' panted Mistress Denial as she squirmed, her body now betraying her as she got more and more excited...mmmmm mmmmmmm as she was fucked by the handle of her own riding crop. Cindy, smirked sadistically..'great Dominatrix you are!' she hisses at the lustful Mistress Denial, her dark locks now coming loose...as all of a sudden Cindy pushed the crop in hard...Denial yelped..as Cindy straightened and sent a hard kick to Denial's chin..sending her crashing forward out cold on all 4s with the Crop protruding from her.
Cindy turned to see, Jane and Mistress Vixen squaring up to each other, Vixen was a mess, her corset was on the floor and her immaculate make up was smeared, one of her knee length boots was unzipped and flapping around, her held up her was all dishevelled, she no longer commanded the room, Jane was in pretty good shape, just a couple of scratches to her cheek but otherwise ok. Mistress Vixen tried to kick Jane with the leg that the boot was half hanging off, and she was too slow, Jane caught the leg, and yanked the boot from the Mistress, ' your going to be naked at this rate haahha' she said back to Vixen. Vixen was now unevenly stood as she only had one high heeled boot on.
'ENOUGH' shouted Femqueen Roxy.
At which point Jane, gave a tremendous kick between the legs to the unguarded Mistress Vixen, Vixen slumped to her knees moaning...before rolling over on her side panting quietly oooooooooo.
Femqueen Roxy stood at the door, her 5 Dominatrixes all lying on the floor humiliated.
'We're going, but not until we teach you some respect, bitch!' shouted Cindy.
'HAHAHA, I'LL KICK BOTH YOUR ASSES, THEN FUCK YOU WITH THIS STRAP ON BITCH,' Commanded Femqueen Roxy, she then strode into the centre of the room, she was in the same uniform as her Dominatrix guards, but with a strap on around the waist, she then rushed towards, Cindy, who avoided the Dom, and stuck her leg out so that Roxy stumbled forward, Cindy then on her back 'c'mon Jane let's show this stuck up bitch how to fight' she shouted.
'NO' cried Roxy, and she stood up with Cindy piggy backed to her back, Roxy backed against the wall, pressing Cindy against it..sending an elbow into Cindy's stomach. Cindy gasped then switched her grip to the Corset so that it was supporting all her weight rrrrrriiiiippppppppp it popped off and Cindy came away with it in her hands. 'NO; cried Roxy, as she put her hands to her exposed breasts, just as Jane came up grabbed the 6ft womans Strap on and punched her on the chin, so that Roxy flew through the air, and at the same time her strap on snapped off, she was now only in her hot pants and knee length boots, effectively castrated.
Jane, held Roxy's Strap on in her hand, 'this looks well used , haha, it's going to be used on you in a minute.'
'NO' Cried Roxy, as she got up, but it was too late, Cindy rugby tackled her, bringing her down, and then struggled to pull her pants down, 'now take this you bitch.'
Cindy got Roxy into a headlock and forced her into a doggy style position, as Jane thrust the Dildo up Roxy's ass, in out, in out...faster and faster...ooooo oooooo oooooo panted Roxy excitedly...before Jane finally thrust it so deep, that Roxy passed out.
Cindy and Jane where tired and still thirsty, they looked around the Dominatrix training room, it was chaos:
Femqueen Roxy was on all fours passed out, only with her knee length boots on and a dildo sticking out of her ass.
Mistress Vixen was sprawled out with one knee length boot on, and her PVC Hotpants on, she was out cold
Mistress Denial, only had her corset and boots on and her whip was coming out of her pussy
Mistress Jenny was out cold with her legs spread displaying her bald pussy
The Dom with short blonde hair was passed out on the floor
The Mistress with the Dark bobbed hair was out cold with only her hot pants and boots on.
'Not so bossy now are they' chuckled Cindy... as they headed to the door.
