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Fyre's Fight Journal, Chapter 15: A Family Affair

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Offline sinclairfan

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Re: Fyre's Fight Journal, Chapter 15: A Family Affair
« Reply #15 on: July 06, 2017, 04:01:34 AM »
Love the concept.
BUT:
Women hate blondes much, much more than you're depicting.

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Offline FyreCracka

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Re: Fyre's Fight Journal, Chapter 15: A Family Affair
« Reply #16 on: July 06, 2017, 08:13:06 PM »
TERRIFIC

Thanks  :)

Wonderfully written! And I love in-law fights!!!!

This is one of my more "real" fantasies, so it was fun...I did try to keep it fairly realistic...so not as fun for me, lol

Love the concept.
BUT:
Women hate blondes much, much more than you're depicting.

Thanks...oddly enough, your story with the emails from both sides was part of the inspiration for doing it.
Fyre: a 5' 5 1/2", 130lbs, 39 years old, blonde hair and brown eyed brawler.

If you're interested in being in a story feel free to contact us.

We are now on Trillian: Fyrecracka

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Offline Cheeto Fingered Trumpet

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Re: Fyre's Fight Journal, Chapter 15: A Family Affair
« Reply #17 on: July 06, 2017, 08:56:02 PM »
Love the concept of seeing the other perspective. Well done, but you're obviously more comfortable with your normal POV. Maybe take a shot at one of the others that you did as well and see if you can figure out another character's thoughts?

Re: Fyre's Fight Journal, Chapter 15: A Family Affair
« Reply #18 on: July 07, 2017, 05:15:36 AM »
Course the question on most of our minds is, how did the rematch turn out? ;)