[ginaglory]

Dave couldnt look at her he felt ashamed n didnt know why . Perhaps he had more feelings for lynn than he realised.she was fumming her eyes filled with tears n she curled her fists n started banging the coffee table not her she screamed out at the top of her voice.

[Nutmeg]

Is there a reason this can't be done in LONGER posts instead of a few lines at a time. SInce this feels like someone bumping their story constantly.

[ginaglory]

Oh dave she said tell me its not true iam affraid it is he told lynn . Does she know dave no he told lynn i havent let her know yet lynn says well i suggest u go n tell the fat slag n if she wants to know who the other woman is make sure u tell her its me n tell her iam not giving u up n if she wants to carrying on seeing u as well then tell her iam happy to meet her n see whos going to keep u . Its something that has always needed to happen ive always wondered whether if we were to b left alone to actually finish a fight which one of us would finish up the better woman .

[Pillowtime Stories]

.. Was this written on a phone? why so many posts for one story when you could have done it all in one body?

[chrisstevens]

its certainly a different way to write a story gina but I kinda like it ........looking forward to the next bits