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the wedding

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Offline Odin

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the wedding
« on: February 12, 2009, 01:41:51 AM »
this was written ages ago an i never got round to finishing it does anyone want me to carry on an get it finished ?

Mike turned up for work a little after three on Saturday afternoon he was a Banqueting manager at a fairly large Heritage Hall, today was just another wedding the second this weekend after looking after one yesterday, however it seemed like they were beginning to roll into one as nothing ever happened (besides the odd throwing up Aunty after to much wine) at these types of functions, little did he know his day was about to take a turn for some excitement.
After meeting today’s groom an average looking guy who was very smartly dressed even for a groom, with his top hat and cane a little over the top even if it was his wedding day Mike thought, he was a nice enough guy all the same named Paul, Mike decided that as the bride was arriving in about 15 minutes it was time to move all the guests up the ceremony room from the foyer so they wouldn’t see her till she made her grand entrance.
“Ladies and Gentlemen, can all guests of Paul and Karen please begin making your way up to the Douglas suite for the ceremony now” Mike announced at this all seventy guests began moving in unison up to the function suite leaving Mike to meet the Bride.
After ten minutes a limo pulled up outside the doors and Mike began to make his way out to it. The driver was all ready opening the door when he got there and out stepped three Bridesmaids’ all dressed the same with long burgundy tight fitting strapless gowns on with matching shawls and heels, the first to step out was a beautiful brunette with dark seductive eyes and kinked hair down to her shoulders, slim waist around 120lbs, ample sized breasts at a guess Mike would have guessed maybe a 34D and about 25 years old. She looked at Mike and smiled, wow he thought, she introduced herself as Sara. The second bridesmaid was pretty much identical to the first in size and weight again a 34D at a guess and around 120lbs an again Mike would have guessed around 25 years old, however this girl was natural blonde, she had the same hair style as Sara (must have been the brides idea) but with lighter features and intense blue eyes, however this girl was just as stunning in every way as the first girl, she introduced herself to Mike as Louise, Mike laughed to himself an thought this day was turning out for the best after all. Then the third girl emerged from the limo an god was she big she was dressed the same as the first two however managed to fill the dress out a lot more, there’s always one Mike thought.
The three ladies stood in the foyer with Mike waiting for the bride to arrive, Mike couldn’t stop staring at Louise an Sara god they were hot, so he decided to make some small talk while they waited,
“So is the bride on her way then” he asked
“ yeah the limo is going back for her so shouldn’t be to long” replied Sara with a seductive smile she then turned to Louise and asked her to help with her dress as it was in need of some adjusting.
“No problem I’ll go an check on Paul make sure he’s not run off” said Mike at this the three girls giggled and he left the room.
As soon as Mike had left Louise who was now stood behind Sara adjusting her dress pinched Sara’s back with her manicured nail
“Your such a whore, I can’t believe we’ve only been here five minuets and you’re flirting with the manager already”
“Aghhh that hurt bitch, and I’m not flirting with him” replied Sara
“Yes you are, you’re a slut!” said Louise at this Sara turned to her getting right in Louise’s face
“Fuck you, how dare you…..” Sara started to say but the big girl whose name was Jen stepped between the two girls,
“guys, please don’t argue this is Karen’s wedding can you not try and get on for her sake”  at this both girls stepped back but glared at each other neither one wanting to be the first to look away,
“Fine” said Louise
“Fine, For Karen’s sake” said Sara
“Good, look she’s here now” said Jen at this Mike walked back into the room unaware of the friction between the two beauties to see the car pulling up and the bride being helped out of the car by the driver followed by a man who Mike assumed was her Farther.
She walked in and after the introductions Mike walked the party to the function room and opened the doors so the bride could walk in. as she walked by he wished her good luck and she lead the way with the bridesmaid’s following behind, he smiled at them as they went passed, they all smiled back and the brunette Sara even winked at him, maybe today was going to be a good day after all.

After the ceremony the guests began to drink and party whilst the happy couple had photographs.
At around 4 pm Mike walked into the bar area to check on the guests and try and catch a glimpse of the gorgeous Sara, he couldn’t see her anywhere but he could see the other equally beautiful Louise. He made his way over to her and Louise saw him coming smiled and walked towards Mike,
“Is everyone on time?”  Mike asked, to which Louise placed a hand on his arm and said
“Yeah all set, how are you honey?” Honey, thought Mike they talked for a little while and Louise flirted very heavily before Mike had to return to the kitchen as he left he felt very happy with himself 

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Offline JT Edson

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Re: the wedding
« Reply #1 on: September 26, 2012, 05:54:34 PM »
Odin,

Did this story ever get finished?

Thanks.

JT Edson

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Offline Wondering48

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Re: the wedding
« Reply #2 on: September 27, 2012, 04:39:12 PM »
Like the premise please keep it going.

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Offline Odin

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Re: the wedding
« Reply #3 on: September 06, 2017, 12:30:48 PM »
Hi guys at the time I posted this there seemed to be no interest from the board so sadly no I never got round to finishing  it.

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Offline JT Edson

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Re: the wedding
« Reply #4 on: September 06, 2017, 02:17:21 PM »
Hi guys at the time I posted this there seemed to be no interest from the board so sadly no I never got round to finishing  it.
That's too bad. It looked VERY promising.

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Re: the wedding
« Reply #5 on: September 28, 2018, 09:26:24 PM »
Would love to read the end to this story ;)