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         This was a year in the making and when it happened. It started I suppose when my wife found out about my female fight fetish. At a bar one night two girls got into a fight and she noticed me watching and then saw I had been aroused by it. She asked about it and I told her I just thought it was sexy to see two good looking girls try and see who is the better and stronger women. She asked if I ever saw her fighting someone and who it would be? I said I’ve thought about it a lot actually but I didn’t name a specific person. So she asked me if I liked the woman who won or lost. I told her the winner is who I picture her being and who turns me on the most. Now that was part true. While the winner turns me on the most it wasn’t her I saw as winning. She finally said well I’m not fighting a girl unless she messes with you and then I’d kick her ass. I asked really you would? Shocked that even though my wife is fiery at times but wasn’t provoked to an altercation without being pushed a great deal. She said no woman worth anything would let another girl make moves on her man without doing what’s necessary to put a stop to it. It was at that statement I thought about a lot.

          My wife was very jealous over me. I never gave her a reason too but other girls that talked to me she say as flirting. She always talked about that bitch this or if this bitch don’t stop that. She would call girls names when they were dressed in a way to show off their tits or wore tight clothes. Not that she isn’t sexy with her 5’4 130 pound frame with a 36b bust size she was very nice looking. She did know though my favorite asset was boobs. So if a girl had big tits and dresses to show them off she really hated them and talking to me about everything she could come up with to put them down. Of course she never challenged any of them in any way or spoke where they could hear but she treated me as if I was an asshole for looking when she would point it out.

          The jealousy got worse and then came accusations that I was doing something wrong when I didn’t . I wasn’t the kind of guy that would cheat and did my best to never let my wife see me talking with another girl that was dressed or in someway matched my wife’s looks in anyway. It started more arguments and then she’d accuse me of trying to start something so she would end up fighting another girl. Which wasn’t the case. All I had done was confess to her of a fantasy. She just seemed to be so jealous she let it dominate her thoughts.

         That’s when we got a new girl at the office. Robin was a 24yr old smoking hot blonde. I am 30 so it’s not like she was a lot younger but I was married and she wasn’t . I didn’t even talk to her much because if someone had seen it and told my wife I would be on the couch for a week. Robin was 5’6 130 but with a 36dd chest she was the example of the girls my wife despised. Only because of their body. Robin was very nice and when my wife first met her she tried to shake her hand and exchange hello nice to meet you but my wife had nothing to say back. She just smirked and walked to me asking me who was the girl with her tits hanging out? Which they weren’t hanging out they were just so big there was no way to hide them.

           As the months went on Robin started talking to me more and more and soon began flirting back and forth. Mostly because my wife was always mad at me and she wouldn’t go anywhere and then daily accuse me of seeing Robin. We still had sex and it was good but it was sometimes like she was doing it right after I got accused of being with Robin and she would ask me during sex I bet ms big tits can’t fuck like that. It was like she was competing but there was nothing to compete with. I had a feeling at some point she was going to make a scene with Robin at some point and it may affect my job.

          Then my group at work had to go out of town and Robin would be going as well. We were in the van from the airport to the hotel when my wife called me. She was accusing me of sleeping with Robin and calling her a bitch and on and on she went till I said I have to go. When we got to the hotel everyone was to meet in the lobby for drinks. We were all hanging out and Robin pulled me to the side. She said I just wanted to say I was sorry. I said sorry about what? Robin said I heard your wife when she called. I said no way nothing for you to say sorry for. She is just so jealous and I’m sorry you heard all that. She smiled and said well I’m glad you’re not mad cause I didn’t want to cause problems. I said no Robin she is so bad she keeps saying you keep making moves on me and how she sees me staring at you and says all kinds of stuff. She is getting bad. Robin says well I kinda have been flirting with you Steve. I got the feeling you were flirting back. I was at a loss. I know I blushed. She said you aren’t mad at me are you? No no of course not. She said well I just didn’t want you to be upset with me but I can tell she’s been riding you and I heard what she said about me too. Oh crap I thought. Robin said I hope she really doesn’t think what she said to you on the phone is true. Not being sure what she was referring to I said which thing are you referring too? She said well about me being those things but one comment she said that really kinda pissed me off. I heard her say that you flirt with me so you could start a fight for her to kick my ass.

         Oh crap. You heard that part ? Yes. What I don’t understand about that comment though is what did she mean about  you trying to get us to fight her? I know I was red now as I couldn’t look up to her to speak. She said really it’s ok Steve I’m not mad at you but why would she think you want us to fight? Finally with no good answer I said well I told her a while back about girls fighting turns me on. So now she assumes that I’m trying to start something in hopes that she fight the other girl. Robin sat silent a moment as I continued to look at the table. I never said anything to her about her kicking your ass that was her thinking Robin I never said that.

        Robin placed her hand under my chin and gently raised my head so I was looking at her. She said Steve it’s ok really. I believe you. I said you do? Yes she said I know you wouldn’t say that. I said well I didn’t want you to think I’m some kinda weirdo wanting girls to fight. My thinking is I didn’t tell my wife about the fight fantasy until I had too so Robin would think I was crazy for it. Robin then surprised me by saying female fights turn lots of guys on. I’m thinking what is she saying. I don’t think you’re weird for being turned on by girls fighting. So don’t let that worry you ok? Ok I say kinda relieved as I smile at her. We all go to our rooms for the night and I’m feeling better now anyway that at least Robin knows what I have been dealing with and I’m not trying to keep it to myself.

          About 30 mins later a knock on my door as I open it it’s Robin. She’s in a silk robe that stops at her knees. The sash is tied but I can see plenty as the cleavage separates the sides and her nipples are showing clearly. I see her face is flushed a little like she’s been hot. I ask what is Robin is everything ok? She comes in as all I have on is my pajama pants. Steve she starts I keep thinking about it and it’s just not right. What is I ask tell me what’s not right? She them walks closer and stands close enough her nipples brush me through her robe and says I would kick her ass easy. I’m thinking oh shit oh crap. Stepping closer still pressing firmly to me never losing eye contact as she pulls the sash on her rob and roles her shoulders causing it slide easily off her. Still eyes locked to mine standing in front of me in only her bra and panties she steps back a little. She says do you think she can kick my ass Steve? Raising both arms flexing her muscles as I stand mouth hanging open. I feel my cock grow rapidly as I stare . Robin says oh you can’t judge without this. Then reaches behind her back to unclip her bra as it drops she raises her arms again. How bout now can she beat me? I shake my head no no no as she smiles.

        She presses her body to mine wrapping me in her arms squeezing me tight. Saying see I’m strong. Turning me so my legs bend and sit on the bed as she stands in front of me. Her tits in my face as she cups my face in her hands and tilts it up to look at her. She smiles and says give me your hands. She places my hands on each tit and helps me kneed her huge firm tits and gives a soft grunt. See Steve I’ve got muscles. Here feel as she resumes the bicep pose as I trace her arms and tits as she steps closer bringing her hands behind my head pulling me to her chest. Saying I will show you too for real. Pushing my shoulders back flat on my back as she mounts me pinning my arms beside my head. Kissing me hard. Pulling up where her nipples graze my chest putting her mouth next to my ear I feel her hand grab my cock stroking it slowly. She says I’d pinning the jealous bitch just like this. Grabbing my cock firmer as she moves her chest to my face gently allowing them to cover my nose and mouth saying and smother her out with my superior,stronger, and sexier body so you know who the better woman really is. That was beginning of an awesome night that led to many other meetings until Robin decided it was time to talk to my wife in person.          To be continued 

[JayB]

Can't wait to here the rest of the story! 

[Wondering48]

Wow! Great start. I really like the initial set up as it is at least believable. Love the inclusion of Robin's thoughts. Looking forward to the next chapters of this story.

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         After several months of seeing Robin on the side she wanted so bad to to tell my wife about us. She would ask me each time what the bitch said about me today? Knowing that my wife was obsessed with the thought of her taking me to bed. Which she had been since well before we started actually seeing each other. When my wife would comment on what Robin had been wearing when she saw her about how slutty she dressed i started using it as an opportunity to stoke the fire so to speak. She’d say that bitch has no shame walking around with shirts too small thrusting her chest out like she’s something. I’d love to just knock her head off. Really? You would really like too? You damn right I’d beat the shit out of her slutty ass. You’d like that though wouldn’t you? You’d just be in heaven watching me drag her around by her hair until I made her admit who the better woman is. Yeah I would reply I’d really like to see what you SAY you would do. She stopped an silently stared at me before walking over to me. What you think I couldn’t really beat that bitches ass? Is that what you mean? No. Not at all but I sure would like to see something just one time to maybe let her know what you think of her. Maybe she’d stop acting like you say if she were told. She says you know you have a point there. Her kind acts that way till some stands up to them and they fold at the first hint of a challenge. Well I said then tell her. Challenge her or something so you can show her and put her in her place. You know what that may just happen first chance I get.

            Robin asked me the next day at our lunch time meeting about “the bitch” as she referred to my wife. I told her what was said and she was smiling at me as she sat straddle me on her knees with only her bra on. As I told her what I had said to my wife and she listened to my wife’s reply she bit her bottom lip. She said to me that sounds promising. Then getting a little smirk on her face you don’t really think she could do what she said to me do you? I said well you just never really know. She is pretty tuff y—— before I could continue she stopped me unsnapping her bra and flexing her toned arms as she took in a deep breath holding it in to increase the size of already huge tits. She looks at each bicep and says feel them! As I watched her she reached for my hand to place it on her bicep saying go ahead feel it. I been doing extra sets at the gym this week. As I rubbed her arms and shoulders as my hands made their way to her tits that were as firm as her arms she leaned forward. All at once quickly grabbed each of my wrist in each of her hands slamming them to the bed by my head. She says you just give me the chance and any doubt you have will be resolved. Smiling at her as she was well aware of my prodding was done for just such a reaction.

         After work that night when I walk in I see Robin sitting on the couch as my wife sits in the recliner. I think oh shit. I sit my stuff down and say hey Robin what brings you over. Robin says since you’re here I guess I can get on with it. My wife stands and said what is it you want here. Robin stands as she walks to stand toe to toe with my wife. My heart is beating out of my chest seeing this. Robin says I’ve been fucking your husband and he’s mine from now on. Looking in my wife’s eyes. My wife smacks Robin hard sending her head side ways. As Robin turns back to look at my wife she sees my wife swinging another smack toward her face but as it gets close she grabs her wrist stopping it dead. She turns it back running the arm up behind my wife’s back. Grabbing a hand full of hair she takes my wife pushing her forward until she has her chest and face immediately against the wall. I can hear my wife grunt and say get off me as Robin pushes her hard to the wall. They stand beside me and my wife’s face is turned so she is looking at me as Robin holds her in place. Robin leans in to get her head next to my wife’s turned in my direction as well. Robin said he’s going to watch me stomp your ass. He knows already I fuck better than you but as you may know he has a fantasy that you can’t fill. You bitch my wife says get off me. Robin says after I finish kicking your ass I will. My wife says Steve get her out of here. Robin says oh not so tuff now that I’m here huh . What about all the times you told him you’d kick my ass? What? My wife says. Oh don’t even try it. I heard you tell him cause your loud mouth can be heard anywhere. So back it up or shut up. My wife says again Steve get her off me. Robin says told you didn’t I ? Your bitch of a wife is all talk. Robin says ok bitch let’s go as she pushes my wife in the middle of the room sending her stumbling across the floor.

         My wife turns back to her and says you fucked bitch. You should’ve kept me where I was cause now I’m going to beat you so bad. All talk is what you are all talk. My wife pulls her shirt off puts her hair in a pony tail. Robin laughs getting serious huh bitch. Robin says good as she pulls her shirt off exposing her chest much to my wife’s dismay. My wife can’t help but show the reaction of surprise at the size of Robins tits and Robin sees it. She smirks at my wife saying yeah he really likes these being as his wife has nothing. My wife runs forward enraged at the slight. Her head down as she aims her shoulder for Robins stomach. Her shoulder hits my lovers abs pushing her back but before she ram her back to the wall Robin wraps her arm around my wife’s neck and lifts her off the floor swinging her sideways into the wall.

          My wife’s side hits the wall bouncing back of her hip. Robin keeps the front face lock on though as my wife’s feet hit the ground again Robin falls back lifting my wife by her neck and arm as she falls driving my wife’s head to the floor in a ddt type move. As she plants her head first she releases the hold standing as my wife thumps to the floor on her back whimpering. Robin stands up looking down on her taunting her. Get up bitch come on. You do know he’s watching you get your ass kicked. You ain’t shit all that mouth and here you are on your back while the woman fucking your husband is stomping your ass. In your own house. My wife is slowly trying to get up. Fuck you bitch she says to Robin. Look at your big bad wife Steve.  I know why it turns you on now babe. I’m getting horny as hell stomping her mouthy ass. My wife gets to her feet saying it’s not over yet. Robin says good I’m not done yet.

     
         

[lifeofriley]

more!!! 

[JT Edson]

Damb! I love part one. I just read it. Great build up and set up. I LOVE a good build up. Very hot and interesting.
I can hardly wait to read part 2, but I HAD to comment on part 1.

[JayB]

Sounds like the wife isn't done yet but this Robin is a real turn on!

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         My wife stands there recovering some from the ddt, rubbing the top of her head. Robin stands there her body covered in a sheen of sweat, which just adds to the definition in her arms as her arms and legs. Robin watching my wife says you’re weaker than I thought you’d be.  Im waiting for you to whip my ass like you said. Fuck you my wife says. Robin laughs at her as she walks to where I sit never taking her eyes from my wife. Looking at my wife as she reaches down grabbing my dick she says you are enjoying this aren’t you? He’s hard as rock bitch. He likes watching you get your ass handed to you. My wife is getting more and more pissed as Robin taunts her. She tells me to stand up as she pulls my shorts down. That’s it she says as she licks her hand and then stokes me saying look at this I’m stroking your mans cock in your living room with you watching. Robin says you like that baby? My wife wanted to get her wind back more but Robin is really making it difficult to stand and watch. I tell her yeah it does feel really good. Smiling at my wife as she can see the rage building in her face. She says stop that. That’s mine!! Ooooh I’m scared Robin says. Robin asks you want me to stop Steve no. Hell no do it! You like watching us fight don’t you? Oh yeeess I reply. You like watching me win? Dominating little princess bitch don’t you? Oh shit I say I’m gonna gonna as I explode. Seeing me shoot my load is more than my wife can take. Finally  she can’t take it any more and charges forward again.

            Robin has to stop stroking me before I can finish to turn her attention to my wife’s charge. I take over to finish as the two women meet. Robin opening her arms up as my wife’s body slams to hers. They wrap their arms around each other in a mutual bear hug just as I finish the last of that load. I sit back now and watch as they stumble about as they both squeeze hard trying to break the other. In the beginning it’s a battle as Robin pushes my wife back and then my wife will push her back. The 2 girls grunt as they strain against each other and I’m a little surprised when my wife pushes back and is able to slam Robin’s back to the wall causing the first real sign that Robin has taken any pain as a uuhhh escapes her lips. My wife hears that and it gives her some confidence as she backs up a step and does it again drawing a louder uhhhh uuuhhh from Robin. Wondering if this is just a fluke that my wife has found some offense I watch for a sign.  My wife must see something as she pulls Robin back as they still hug each other saying hurts doesn’t it slut. Again driving Robin in to the wall this time though my wife bends her knees and jumps upward as she slams her shoulder into Robin just below her tits. Shocked as I see Robins arms loosen from around my wife’s body. My eyes widen and I can see that even my wife is a little surprised but only for a second as her lips curl into a smile.

            Pulling back now as Robins arms hang down I see some confidence as my wife leans back to get Robins feet off the floor being a couple inches shorter. Then with great effort shakes Robin ragdolling her some as I hear ohh uuhhh uhhhh from Robin. I’m starting to wonder now if maybe my wife can win this fight. Hearing those sounds from her opponents lips my wife turns in circle spin around twice then forward again to the wall releasing Robins body. Robin stands there but it’s plain to see she’s hurt. Wasting no time my wife slaps her face hard. Fucking bitch she says bringing a backhand sending Robins face back to the right.  Then reaching way down balling her fist up she drives a fist hard as she can to Robins right abs. Uuhhhh  Is Robins response, then another in the same spot.

           Then taking her forearm placing across Robins neck pressing her to the wall causing her to choke and coughing and eyes wide with the first look of concern I’ve seen on Robins face. Thought you was going beat me didn’t you slut? Not so tuff now fat ass. Turning her head to me I hope you’re watching this. I told you I’d stomp this bitch. Using her off hand she turns Robins face to me. Look at her!! You see her now? I can’t help but get hard again which is not unnoticed by my wife. Pressing in on Robin as their bra covered tits meet she grabs her face by the cheeks looking her in the face. With gritted teeth she says you give bitch or you want me to choke you out? Robin’s mouth opens trying to speak but no sound can come with her throat pushes in with the forearm. Sorry slut I’ll let you talk as my wife loosens the choke a bit to allow some air in Robin’s lungs. Well bitch im waiting are you finished or you want a real beating? Im nervous as shit up on my seat looking and shocked at what’s happening. My wife notices my stare and says you get your ass over here to. You need to hear her say it more than anybody. Walking up standing next to my wife I see Robin cut her eyes to me. A tear goes down her cheek. My wife says look at the bitch cry. Say it slut say you’re done. As Robin opens her mouth I hear a uuhhhh.   Oohhh and watch as my wife’s arm drops from Robin’s neck then sinks to her knees. Robin had lifted her knee right between my wife’s legs. I smile a little, as Robin rubs her throat as she gets her breath back. My wife sits on her haunches if front of Robin. Robin slams a knee right in my wife’s chin sending her to her back almost out.

           Robin walks me to the couch saying shit that was close. The bitch surprised me the first time I hit the wall and it hit my head. She fucked up now though cause she’s gotta pay. Looking over to where my wife lays clutching her crotch. Looking in my eyes saying that will never happen again. You just sit back and enjoy the show.

         Grabbing my wife’s hair bringing her to her feet as she wraps her arms around my wife. Squeezing her hard while saying this is where I left off bitch before that lucky wall hit. I’m going to hurt you now, really hurt you. After a few minutes I see Robin’s arms flex fully around my wife and hear a crack and my wife whimpers as Robin gives another hard squeeze. My wife cries out ahhhh as Robin lifts her off the floor and rushes forward slamming my wife’s back to the wall. Uhhhhh escapes my wife’s mouth. Robin says what’s wrong big mouth it hurt? My wife cant squeeze back to be effect, so now she pushes at Robins arms trying to break free from the crushing hug. Robin says you feel that bitch? That’s my tits dominating your pitiful body. Hammering at Robins arms more now my wife is desperate to break free. Another squeeze and a little roll of her shoulders grinding her tits against my wife’s and my wife’s head lays on Robins shoulder. Robin picks her up carrying her over in front of me. Standing so my wife sees me as she tells her he’s watching you princess. My wife tries to pry at her arms again seeing me but Robin flexes her arms again causing my wife to drop her arms again. Robin said come on bitch. You aren’t done already are you? Robin lifts her and rag dolls her easily telling her that’s how you rag doll bitch. Sitting her feet down allowing my wife to stand Robin slips her arms under my wife’s shoulders locking in a full Nelson. Applying hard pressure pushing my wife’s chin to neck. Lifting her up off the floor in the Nelson showing awesome strength shaking her side to side. Drool drops from my wife’s mouth running down between her firm tits.

         Standing beside the wall she throws my wife face first into the wall letting the full Nelson go. Pulling her to her knees and calling me over she grabs two hand fulls of hair and rubs my wife’s face to her panty covered crotch. Oohhh yeahhh that’s it right there tossing her head back. My wife begins to try and pull back but a hard slap to her face stops that. Robin looks to me saying her face makes a great toy but shutting that mouth of hers that’s more fun! I’m almost done with her now babe. Just a few little things to make sure she has no doubt who is the better woman.

            Go sit and I’ll bring her over. As I sit I watch her pull my wife to her feet then scoop her up carrying her one hand between the legs one over her shoulder across her body. Muscles flexed as she carries her to in front of me. Dropping to a knee allowing my wife’s back to slam down over the other in a perfect back breaker. Holding her there as if presenting me with a sacrifice, biting her bottom lip. As my wife lays across her knee Robin raises both arms flexing her biceps for me. Shoving my wife off her leg to thump to the ground as she stands placing her foot on my wife’s throat causing her to choke and gag as she grinds down with it. Looking down at her saying you like choking so much have a little bit slut.

          Taking her foot away she grabs her ankle dragging her back some once again pulling her to her knees. Ripping her bra off she laughs I just had to show Steve how we match up princess. Reaching behind her back allowing her DD tits to be released. There is no drop as big as they are they sit hi and firm on her chest from all the gym work outs. Forcing my wife’s head back to see her standing over her. See these bitch? You can’t match me. Pulling her to her feet she pushes their tits together nipple to nipple. I see my wife’s nipples harden first as Robins do they push my wife’s nipples back in to her chest without even pushing her chest closer. That is nipple domination bitch. You do kinda make me horny though princess. Wrapping her arms around my wife’s back smashing their bare chest together. Lifting her and bringing her over to me before allowing her feet back on the ground. Rolling her shoulders mashing and crushing my wife’s tots easily engulfing them until my wife’s tits are totally overwhelmed and disappear under Robins stronger dominant chest. Uhhhh coming from Robin as she gets wet feeling her tits demolish my wife’s chest.

            You are good for something anyway but not enough as she slings my wife down to the couch so she’s sitting next to me. Now for some real fun huh princess? Straddling my wife’s legs sitting on her thighs she takes a wrist in each hand and pins my wife’s arms to the wall behind the couch. Arms pulled above her head as Robin gets on her knees on the couch and pushes her chest into my wife’s face. Ohhh yeessss that’s a good little slut. Looking at me as she rubs and grinds her tits to my wife’s face asking you like this Steve? Nodding and saying ohh yeah I love it. Me too. How bout you princess as all we hear is mmmppphhhh mmmmpppphhh. Robin says I think that’s a yes. Pulling her tits away from her face Robin asks if she gives? No answer comes as Robin plays with her nipples . You gotta say it sweetheart or else I’ll just knock you out. So do you give? My wife’s face is red and wet with sweat from Robins tits with drool from her mouth as Robin rubs her face with her hand. Steve’s waiting honey. You can’t be the only one enjoying this body he needs a woman too since clearly I’m the best one here. So again this time Robin starts smacking her face with her tits. Throwing my wife’s head side to side. Ok ok stop stop as my wife is whining and crying now you win. Pulling back now Robin says what was that princess? I give ! You win! Smiling at me Robin starts stroking my cock. Again what was that Steve didn’t hear!! I give up you beat me. I’m so hard now as Robin squeezes my cock tight and says who has better tits? You do. Who is the stronger prettier woman? You are! Whose going to fucking Steve from now on? As my wife sits silent Robin says ok here we go with some more. No no no please I’m sorry. Steve is yours you won him. How did I win him? You stomped my ass while he watched. You made me beg you to stop, your tits beat mine back easy and I’m too weak to fight any more. Say your sorry! What? Smack as Robins hand leaves a print on my wife’s face. I’m sorry I’m sorry I should’ve not fought you he’s yours. That’s it. Now you know the rules. Since you were such a bitch you should kiss my tits. Now! I watch as my wife starts licking around Robins nipple and then latches on and sucks it like she wants it. Robin says oh yes that’s it you really do like it. Pulling me over she places my head on her other tit and I lick and suck it. Robin says ohhh yesss . Look at this husband and wife or ex wife sucking my tits. I can’t keep both so I got to choose. Leaning down to whisper to my wife she says you lose again slut.       
            Looking me in the eye as Robin pulls me to kiss her I see my wife is still working her tit. Robin breaks her kiss with me and says help me finish this babe. Let’s do it together.  Pulling my wife away Robin looks at her and it’s clear she’s done fighting. Totally beaten. Cupping her face with both hands she leans forward kissing my wife’s forehead. I slip behind my wife’s back as she leans forward to meet Robin. Robin looks at her and says you ready princess? Not having a clue what Robin means she nods yes. Glancing up at me Robin nods. I take both hands and push the back of my wife’s head until it is fully engulfed in Robin’s massive cleavage. Holding her tightly to her chest as my wife pushes and paws at Robins shoulders to try and get some air. Robin says stop struggling and just enjoy it. Slowly the struggle slows and Robin whispers you were fun bitch. This is a first for me. The husband holding his wife’s face in to her defeat. That’s embarrassing huh princess. Hot as hell for me your ex but embarrassing for you. As the struggles get weaker still I keep her face planted as Robin licks her lips and raises both arms flexing for me as our eyes lock. It’s actually several minutes before I realize my wife is no longer struggling to escape. Robin says better get her out before she has to go to the hospital. Oh yeah I say. I pull her head away and let her slump to one side as Robin and I embrace each other. Robin says now let’s go fuck in her bed before she wakes up. If you play your cards right I might kick her ass again when she wakes up.

[master]

A great domination story like the "Party" story.  After enjoying Steve in bed, It would be super hot for Robin to consummate her victory on her victim's face making her suffer the ultimate humiliation. Outstanding description and great work again.  Please add to this story and the "Party".

[JayB]

Love that the wife had just enough success to think she was Robin's equal but Robin was simply too much for her to handle proving to be the superior woman in every respect.  Excellent story.!

[Wondering48]

I will be definitely be in the minority, but I still need to at least state a conflicted feeling after reading this. While, I really supported Robin through the story. I think the dehumanizations suffered by the wife was a little too harsh, especially, if at any time, Steve really loved his first wife.
You have to imagine that after the fight and the after effects it would have to scar her for the rest of her life. I know some people would say she got what she deserves, and I understand tha feeling. Now in the fantasy world she can make a comeback and regain her pride but then he has put his wife thru hell. She should then drop him.

This is the first time that a story has hit me this way. A lot of losers and no real winner.

Very strange and too serious for this type of reading anyway. LOL

[darkfighter1]

what an Amazing Story, i love this writing style and the humiliation parts!!! Great! one of the best stories ever, i hope there will be more fights of the new wife with new challengers 

[snw]

         Appreciate the compliments and it’s a fantasy story. Like most folks here I would say the girls in my stories are based on girls I’ve dated and or married to. Personality of most are close. I’d say most fantasy fights have a base that’s true and lots of fantasy on the back end. I appreciate the thoughts on them. Some turn out good sometimes not so much. Would love to see other stories similar to these on here. There’s far better writers than me here just not many of this type of one sided beating of the wIfe or gf by the other woman which are my favorite types. Anyhow I appreciate it.