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Classy classy

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Offline betnsuneha

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Classy classy
« on: September 30, 2025, 02:58:34 AM »
The music in the hall was a low, pulsing thump — fast enough to keep people moving, slow enough to keep secrets. Vanessa stood near the edge of the dance floor, one hand on her clutch, the other braced against the rim of a high table. Her white satin ruffle blouse caught the light; her black latex pencil skirt clung like armor. She smiled politely at people who passed, but she had been watching Jordan for most of the night: the way Jordan laughed too loudly, the way she prowled the room like she owned whatever she walked past.

It started with a stare. Jordan cut across the floor and stopped in front of Vanessa as if pulled by a string. For a second the two of them were a photograph: Jordan in a leather jacket, hard and quick; Vanessa, unnervingly composed. Then the words — a thin, deliberate jab about someone Vanessa loved. The room blurred around them. Vanessa's fingers tightened on the clutch. She could have walked away. She chose not to.

Jordan moved first, a mocking shove that had the crowd’s attention like a match to dry tinder. Vanessa stepped back and then, as if something inside her snapped, stepped forward. The shove became a slap; the slap turned into a palm to the chest. People closed in, whispering, circling like they always do for entertainment. The DJ kept the track, oblivious; two drinks toppled from an overturned tray.

Jordan's first punch was sloppy but fast — a stinging blow to Vanessa's midsection that folded her slightly at the waist. It was the kind of hit meant to humiliate, not to break. Jordan laughed and followed with a hard backhand that rocked Vanessa's head. A string of gasps rose like a wave.

Vanessa had never been a fighter, but she wasn't helpless. She blocked, twisted, elbowed. For a breath, she had the upper hand — a clean strike to Jordan's jaw that made the other woman's head snap sideways. That instant of triumph lit Vanessa like a torch. Then Jordan recovered, eyes narrowing. What had been fast became furious.

Jordan's technique was rough and vicious. She drove her shoulder into Vanessa's ribs, then stomped to create space and lunged again. The crowd's shock curdled into cheering; people were hungry for a story, for sides to pick. Vanessa felt the world compress to the point of contact: leather against latex, the heat of someone's breath, the sting of knuckles. A brutal knee connected with her abdomen. The floor under her seemed to tilt.

She tasted blood — copper and metallic — from a split lip. Her blouse had torn at the seam where Jordan had grabbed it, and lace of satin fluttered like a wounded flag. Pain flared in her sides with each breath. Every movement became calculation: absorb, counter, survive. She managed to hook Jordan’s arm and pull her close, trying to use the aggression against her. For a second their faces were inches apart, hot and red and raw with effort. Vanessa whispered something fierce enough to hush the surrounding noise: you think you win?

Jordan answered with another blow, then a hard series of punches to the gut. Vanessa doubled over, and this time the floor claimed her knees. The world above her became a ring of boots and determined hands. Jordan didn't stop for show; she punished. Her strikes were not choreography but intent — to place Vanessa small and helpless in the middle of everyone. The humiliation stung more than the bruises.

Someone tried to pull Jordan away. For a heartbeat it worked. Jordan spun, eyes blazing, and shoved the interloper into a buffet table. The distraction was all Vanessa needed; she rolled to the side, fighting panic, scraping skin along the parquet. She tasted grit and iron, felt her skirt stick to a patch of blood on the floor. Adrenaline kept her moving, patching together small plans: get up, find a path out, avoid another direct hit.

When she lunged to her feet, Jordan came at her again, savage and relentless. One fist drove in to her abdomen; another landed across her cheek with a sound someone in the crowd would describe later as the slap that ended the argument. Vanessa's knees buckled. For a painful, shame-drenched moment, she considered curling into nothing and letting the room decide what to do with her.

Then Mira arrived.

Mira moved through people like wind through reeds — quick, efficient, and impossible to ignore. She had seen the fight from across the room and she had been holding herself in for weeks waiting for the moment someone crossed the line with Vanessa. She didn't ask questions. She went. Her hands were bare, her stance calm. When she intercepted Jordan, she did it with the kind of force that arrests momentum without letting it escalate: a firm grip on the shoulder, a twist that put Jordan off balance, a shoulder to shove her away.

Jordan blinked, surprised. Her fury had an edge of calculation; she had been performing for the crowd, and arrogance was a dangerous habit. Mira's intervention turned performance into consequence. With a few precise movements she separated the two, placed herself between them, and spoke to Jordan in a low voice that carried only to her. The words were sharp, private — the sort that settle prides. Jordan's jaw worked. She looked at Mira, then at Vanessa on the floor, then at the faces around her. For a breath she looked like she might swing again. Then she didn't. She slunk back into the noise, her swagger gone.

People dispersed with murmurs and a handful of shoves. Someone fetched ice; someone called a friend. Vanessa sat on the floor with a bruise blooming on her cheek and a shard of embarrassment slicing her pride. Mira crouched beside her, a steady presence, and offered a hand. Vanessa's fingers closed around it like a lifeline. Mira hauled her up and steadied her, and for the first time since the first jab, Vanessa felt the rush of relief break over her.

They didn't make a scene about it after. The room had a way of picking up other stories, other spectacles to consume. But later, in the dim light at the edge of the parking lot, Mira helped Vanessa into a cab and refused to let her go alone. Vanessa pressed her hand to her abdomen where the pain sat like a small, insistent animal. Her skirt had a torn seam; her blouse was wrinkled beyond fashion. She tasted victory in that small survival, bitter and sharp, but it was a victory nonetheless — not over Jordan, but over the part of herself that wanted to be beaten into silence.

“You okay?” Mira asked, voice rough with the night's adrenaline.

Vanessa laughed once, horribly, then let it turn into something steadier. “No,” she said honestly. “But I’ll live.”

Mira hooked her arm through Vanessa's. “Then we're even,” she said. “And next time, you don't go it alone.”

Vanessa thought about revenge and about restraint, about lessons learned in the calculus of humiliation and force. She thought about how thin the line had been between control and chaos. The bruises would fade, but the lesson would linger: there are fists that break and fists that protect. Tonight, the latter had arrived just in time.

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Offline WHYBEB!

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Re: Classy classy
« Reply #1 on: October 01, 2025, 11:13:52 AM »
This was dope

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Offline Alexandra X

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Re: Classy classy
« Reply #2 on: October 02, 2025, 07:49:28 AM »
I'm really curious what Mira said to Jordan.
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