[Guy Incognito]

I'm replying here for the first time, just because I've been following this story for a while now, and after finishing it, it might've become one of my favortie stories on this site.

Not only was the setting appealing and the fights very well written, but the creativity on display here was astounding. Balancing multiple different types of confrontation, while escalating the fights in a natural way, incorporating other characters into the plot and providing a satisfying conclusion with just enough room to return to the setting in the future? Truly astonishing.

To finish, I just wanted to add that I'll be waiting with bated breath for whatever you publish next, be it a sequel to one of your previous stories or a brand new thing. You're a top tier writer!

Thank you so much!

[Guy Incognito]

BRO YOU ARE FUCKING GOATED!!! THAT'S A FUCKING MASTERPIECE FROM START TO FINISH, AND IT'S ONE OF THE MOST UNIQUE AND MEMORABLE STORYELLING I'VE EXPERIENCED WHEN IT COMES TO STORIES WITHIN THIS FETISH! MOST ESPECIALLY CHAPTER 10, HOLY FUCK, THAT WAS CHEF'S KISS UNEXPECTED AND SUPERB, AND IT'S SUCH A BRILLIANT WAY TO BUILD FURTHER HYPE FOR MORE OF WHAT'S TO COME NEXT WHICH IS THE EPIC FINALE AS IF THE PREVIOUS FIGHTS WEREN'T ALREADY FUCKING EPIC ENOUGH!!!

okay enough all caps, holy shit! I've never been an ass kisser and I hate ass kissers, so know that I meant all of that genuinely! you are in my top 10 all time favourite writers -- maybe even top 5. you're a goddamn legend in my books, Guy! incognito person recognise incognito person, too!

I'm excited for more stories by you! keep cooking!

Things I liked about Chapter 10:

<> Ruby perfectly encapsulates the type of woman who tries to agitate two other women into a conflict.

<> The conversation explores how two women in a fight only discover later how the post-fight dynamics between them will play out.  Sometimes it succeeds in blowing off steam, and they resume going back to a normal relationship.  But other times there's still unresolved tensions.

<> Very unusual for a woman the be able to process a fight she's just lost so quickly afterwards.

I'm pleased that people liked chapter 10. Wasn't sure if 2/3 chapters not having an actual fight might be boring. Pleasantly surprised that its a sleeper hit.