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Charlie 's Angels 2 : Misguided Revenge

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Offline twins10

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Charlie 's Angels 2 : Misguided Revenge
« on: February 05, 2015, 05:13:27 AM »
As Gina Marrone and henchwomen Mel and Celeste waited for their victims to regain consciousness they came up with a idea they thought would be fun . Each one would go one on one with one of the angel's daughters in a special rules type fight Gina would face Katie in lights out match,Mel would face Chloe in a last women standing match and Celeste would face Cate in a ten count knockout match. The 3 villains carried their knockout victims into a dimly lit room with a boxing ring in it .As Katie , Chloe and Cate groggily regain consciousness their assailants informed them of their plans and told them that if they could win 2 of the fights they could be free . First up was Cate vs Celeste in a ten count match. Cate was perceived to be the weakest of the three thin and not very strong while Celeste was a former female bodybuilder with strong thick arms . Celeste started out with three straight jabs to Cate's face as she staggered around the ring trying regain her senses . Remembering something her mom taught her Cate slip on a a pair of brass knuckles without being noticed and hit a grinning Celeste with a devastating right cross that sent Celeste into dreamland . As Celeste laid out cold her partners were in shock . As the very slow 10 count reach 10 Celeste was stil out cold. Gina and Mel lifted up their lifeless partner and flung her into the corner . Round 1 to Angels !! The second match was Chloe vs Mel in a last women standing match . Chloe was feeling good and started out with a viscous kick to Mel's head which sent her to the floor with a thud . Practically out Mel staggered to her feet just in time to beat the count . Chloe then made the mistake of getting cocky and turned her back to Mel to taunt Gina . As Chloe turned around Mel caught her with a amazing shot to the jaw . Chloe staggered around til Mel grabbed her by her neck as Chloe eyes were glazed and Mel kissed her hard on the mouth and told her it was time to sleep and hit her with straight right to the jaw . Chloe fell lifeless to the floor and Mel even counted to 20 as Chloe laid dead to the world . Mel then stripped a unconscious Chloe naked playing with her limp body then draping her unconscious body over the turnbuckle . Gina then turned to frighten looking Katie and said " well 1 to 1 . Looks like we settle this ourselves " Marrone then told Katie that killing her mom was fun but this will be even better.
Katie then angrily charged Marrone knocking her down her and landing countless punches to Marrone's face .
Marrone was struggling to keep her senses and trying to get the much heavier Katie off her . A vicous rake of Katie's eyes made her fall to the floor when she rose to her feet she was hit with a devastating punch to her plump ample mid section . Grasping for air Katie was basically out on her feet. Marrone then lifted Katie's head up by her jaw and licked Katie's face and told her that her mom's eyes rolled around just like hers right before she killed her with a single blow . Marrone then held the barely conscious Katie up by her hair and told her that she wanted to end her differently than her mom. With that Marrone put Katie in rear neck choke sleeper hold that slowly had Katie fading into darkness . As Marrone lifted the limp arm of Katie for a second time she decided to have some fun with her unconscious victim lifting her up over her head two handed and tossed her over the ropes . Katie laid out cold as Marrone ruled her unable to continue . Gina and Mel bring up a groggy Celeste and then talked about what would be next ..... To be continued.... Please add what you think should happen next

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Re: Charlie 's Angels 2 : Misguided Revenge
« Reply #1 on: February 05, 2015, 07:00:55 PM »
Good girls always defeated, of course  ;D

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Offline DogWithABone

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Re: Charlie 's Angels 2 : Misguided Revenge
« Reply #2 on: February 05, 2015, 11:10:35 PM »
Giant wall of text is unreadable.

Should be in the celebrity fight section.
RIP the account of Sophie Cees.

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Offline Nutmeg

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Re: Charlie 's Angels 2 : Misguided Revenge
« Reply #3 on: February 05, 2015, 11:26:53 PM »

Should be in the celebrity fight section.

Nope. A story abut the daughters of the originals? Using celebs as models for the characters description wise? Quite a stretch there.

Oh wait I forgot you dont want story writing to be discussed in the stories section either:)

@Twins10; Was it in paragraphs before you posted? Sometimes it clumps the text together ón a cut and paste. If you like I can put some spacing in if you let me know where.
« Last Edit: February 05, 2015, 11:41:31 PM by nutmeg78 »
https://megforrest.blogspot.com/ used to post stuff there. You will have to log into goggle to see it

The biggest fakes here are those posing as humans.

Death will not be a tragedy but an inconvenience for others.

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Re: Charlie 's Angels 2 : Misguided Revenge
« Reply #4 on: February 06, 2015, 01:58:06 AM »
Ignore Leroy. Always a complaint, never anything else. Good story so far. The story would improve if you broke up into different paragraphs like Nutmeg78 said. Maybe each fight should be their own paragraph. Also for me it would be nice if each fight was a little bit longer and more descriptive.


Keep up the good work.

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Re: Charlie 's Angels 2 : Misguided Revenge
« Reply #5 on: February 06, 2015, 04:45:15 PM »
I do understand now after viewing that it does look pretty jumbled but I definitely appreciate your constructive critism and appreciate your offer of help . We are all on here just looking for something fun to read in a setting
that we have our own interests in . I enjoy writing about the heroines getting beaten by the villainesses because you just don't see that on tv or movies . I have witnessed my friend's girlfriend ( now his wife ) getting knocked out cold by another female outside a bar and it was frightening so I know that writing these stories are fantasy like escapism for real life . Leroy these were stories not polls . I apologize for not being Hemingway but as far I know neither are you . Thank you again.