In Mordor's Depths

Started by bcw8, September 03, 2026, 03:27:01 PM

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Incredible start. The characters have already won me over. That upright posture of the elf, even while chained, conveys vitality and strength and starkly highlights her incredible, perfect physique against the hostile atmosphere. And that "orc-bitch" line from her is tremendous: despite being very young, naked, and chained, she still feels superior to the orcs. She doesn't beg for her life or show any fear, despite her opponent's more robust, aggressive, and mature appearance. It's clear that her chains are only physical; her mind and her pride remain intact.
This grimdark scene is one of your best cliffhangers! Spectacular

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Quote from: Drake8 on September 04, 2026, 06:11:12 PMIncredible start. The characters have already won me over. That upright posture of the elf, even while chained, conveys vitality and strength and starkly highlights her incredible, perfect physique against the hostile atmosphere. And that "orc-bitch" line from her is tremendous: despite being very young, naked, and chained, she still feels superior to the orcs. She doesn't beg for her life or show any fear, despite her opponent's more robust, aggressive, and mature appearance. It's clear that her chains are only physical; her mind and her pride remain intact.
This grimdark scene is one of your best cliffhangers! Spectacular

I've always been attracted to the scenario of captured warrior given the chance to fight for her life, as well as fantasy characters and races. The Dark King agrees to both requests...

bcw8



The second the chains felt from the Elf-maiden's wrists, the Orc-wench attacked.  Her fist cracked the Elf's ribs as her dagger horn gored her breast. 

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