Oops! What on earth are you going to tell your son? He's bound to ask you who won, isn't he, and I'm afraid you'll need a better excuse than "She cheated! She turned it into a sexfight!" With the point of view changing the whole time I perhaps got a little lost but it did seem a bit 'six of one, half a dozen of the other'-ish to me, but I think you know that, don't you? "Samantha has conquered me sexually... physically... emotionally…" was a pretty honest appraisal of what happened. This 'she cheated' BS, I assume, was only for public consumption.
BTW Someone on the board (rin653? Kiva?) had the inspired idea of switching from italics to roman (and vice versa) each time the point of view in one of his/her stories changed. That might have eliminated some of the confusion but it didn't spoil my enjoyment. It's still a very sexy and original story. Like Carol, I'm looking forward to more.