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Offline dutch-bitch

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Starting
« on: March 28, 2022, 04:23:09 PM »
Hi
I like to start in writing stores.
Are there some pointers i need to know.

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Offline sinclairfan

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Re: Starting
« Reply #1 on: March 28, 2022, 04:53:58 PM »
Hi
I like to start in writing stores.
Are there some pointers i need to know.

<> Write what you know.  Make the setting, time period, and circumstances one's you have personal familiarity with.

<> Decide if the story takes place pre-internet or post-internet.  Makes a big difference to plot.

<> Show, don't tell.  Show why the two women are doing what they're doing to each other.

<> Give at least an outline of the women's appearance--build, clothes, hairstyle.

<> I know others disagree with this one, but it's important to me:  has either woman been in a fight before?

<> Most important of all:  if anyone disagrees with how you do it ....  too bad!  It's your story.  Listen to criticism, but don't take it to heart.  Have confidence in your inspiration.

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Offline speed

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Re: Starting
« Reply #2 on: March 28, 2022, 11:50:40 PM »
Hi
I like to start in writing stores.
Are there some pointers i need to know.

Yes, every story should end up with one girl  ass up one her knees, with the victor pounding her pussy with a strap on.. LOL Speed