your story of Harper all I can say is Can I have some cold water its getting hot in here as I read it and betting this story has given you a lot of offers to box. I would even bet that writing the story made you hot The descriptions you gave reminded me of our talks we used to have ( miss those) You did real good, as you know, but the feelings you expressed she had being a newbie taking on someone that was real good, trained by the same person. Your fight in the story I liked cause reminded me of some you told me about and how you described them the raw emotion Harper had in them, perfect you did good. the story is like your experiences. Those moves, the way she played her to draw her in for the punches.the beginning was steaming Thought I was going to have to take a few cold showers there 
I really enjoyed the Chapter The whole story is damn good. You are BRILLIANT AWESOME INCREDIBLE You are the T.H. Lawrence and Mark Twain all rolled up in one 
And Harper you float like a Butterfly and sting like a Bee They can't hit what the eyes can't see girl you are fast More sex scenes huh, I won't argue LOL
Thank you faithful reader Watcher314.....your input and analysis is most appreciated....and I was certainly glad to provide you with the incentive to take a shower.....I am sure those around you appreciated it too
I hope you read all of Chapter 4 too.......and Chapter 5 should be so awesome as to help you "keep your hands under the desk"....so to speak
I even plan on writing the final copy of Chapter 5 ...topless......
Never let it be said that I take my loyal readers for granted.
T. H. Lawrence was actually T. E. Lawrence...not to be picky.....and I highly recommend his book...."Seven Pillars of Wisdom" Lawrence's public image resulted in part from the sensationalized reportage of the revolt by an American journalist, Lowell Thomas, as well as from Lawrence's autobiographical account I previously mentioned, "Seven Pillars of Wisdom" (1922). He is one of the very few Englishmen who have ever refused both the Victoria Cross and a knighthood. In 1935, Lawrence was fatally injured in a motorcycle crash in Dorset, dying at the all too young age of 46.
In his lifetime, Lawrence published three major texts. The most significant was his account of the Arab Revolt , "Seven Pillars of Wisdom". In addition to being a memoir of his experiences during the war, certain parts also serve as essays on military strategy, Arabian culture and geography, and other topics. Lawrence re-wrote Seven Pillars of Wisdom three times; once "blind" after he lost the manuscript while changing trains at Reading railway station.
Contrary to popular belief, Lawrence never wrote a book called "Lawrence of Arabia". His vivid writing and descriptions of the Arab revolt earned him international fame as Lawrence of Arabia, which title was used for the 1962 film based on his World War I activities.
Be assured Mr. Watcher you shall receive an autographed copy of my new chapter as a token of my appreciation for your loyal readership and general spot-on analysis.
As always, questions and comments are always appreciated regarding the series and who knows...you might even make a guest appearance in the new chapter.
We were informed last night we have made "Oprah's Book Club"....and I am scheduled for an interview with her next Friday.
