[Ginny38]

Nicely done story.

If I had one (constructive) criticism.... I would have made the principal a female, rather than a man, which may have opened up the possibility of a teacher/principal vs parent/student fight later - with either/both parents.

(But you wrote it on commission so THAT may have been one of the requested story elements, so it's a very minor one... if at all!)

[dtrain12575]

Wow....loved it. Thank you.

[luffy316]

Nicely done story.

If I had one (constructive) criticism.... I would have made the principal a female, rather than a man, which may have opened up the possibility of a teacher/principal vs parent/student fight later - with either/both parents.

(But you wrote it on commission so THAT may have been one of the requested story elements, so it's a very minor one... if at all!)

yep, principal was specifically to be made male by the buyer

[JOHNNY the DUECES]

Extremely hot story. Thanks so much!!!!

[pizarro777]

A great story.  Well thought out!  I was wondering if you will do a rematch?