[yora]

Thought I'd share the first part of this story, the rest will follow in about a week, hopefully the rest will follow soon, time allowing of course

Deep in the countryside is a barn, from the outside it doesn't look like anything special, just another barn down a lane a few miles from another small town in the middle of nowhere, but on the first Friday of every month it comes alive as the women only 'fight club'' meets there.  Anybody of any size, age and shape is welcome.  All they have to do is kick in 20 bucks and put their name in the hat and be prepared to fight.  There are three or four fights a night and if your name is drawn out then you have to step over the hay bales and get into the make shift ring and take on the opponent you have been drawn against – no matter who they are.  You win, you get a share of the cash, you lose? - you get the admiration and respect of your new found friends.  You back out? - You're not welcome ever again.

And it was against this backdrop that Shannon and Maria found themselves.  Neither girl had ever met each other, both had been before to the club before so both knew what to expect, but neither had been drawn out to fight before.

Around 40 people had showed up this night and they all eagerly gathered around the stage where the owner and host, a lady known as 'The Boss' would draw out the names one at a time.  The number of fights was unknown until The Boss stopped calling names.  As each name was called there was cheers, boos, sighs, and breaths of relief before silence fell and another name was called.

It was during this silence when Shannon heard her name called; a cheer arose from her friends and somebody slapped her back, all eyes turned to look at her, any one of these sets of eyes could be her opponent.  Shannon's stomach felt like lead and her mouth went dry as she nervously waited for the next name to be called.

Maria was stood a few feet away and like everybody else she spun around to see where Shannon was, what she saw was a woman aged about 25 with a black and platinum dip dye who looked a little Gothic, she looked to be about 5'7 in height and thin with a small chest and too much black eye make up, but despite the Gothic make up she now also looked absolutely terrified!  Maria waited quietly with everybody while The Boss pulled out another name and then everything went wrong.  The Boss called her name and a chorus of ohhhs came from her friends along with the cheers and catcalls.  Maria gave a nervous laugh.

Shannon scanned the room with a mixture of nerves and excitement, who was this Maria? Where is she?  What is she like?  How tough does she look?  All these questions raced through Shannons mind as she scanned the crowd and then she locked eyes with Maria.  Maria was sorter, a good bit shorter, she looked about 5'2 and seemed to look in her early 30's or maybe late 20's it was hard to tell, she was heavier much heavier looking, short and stocky with what looked like two balloons down her vest top, she had shoulder length brown hair and hard piercing eyes that bored into Shannon's.  Maria did not look scared, she looked tough, very tough.

Neither Shannon or Maria paid much attention while the other names where called.  They just waited until the end of the naming ceremony before the crowd went to take their positions around the straw ring and the fighters where divided into two groups and ushered into two different dressing rooms.  There would be no contact with the crowd or their opponent until fight time.  Of course you where free to leave at this point, but nobody ever did.  The shame would be too great and there was no coming back.

Maria and Shannon waited nervously in heir opposite dressing rooms, each changed into their fighting wear and listened intently to the roars and cheers of the crowd as the first match took, it seemed to go on for ever and then the noise stopped.  Ellen was carried in by the two marshal's, she had blood streaming from her nose, her top was ripped and covered with blood from her nose, her hair was a mess sticking out at all angles, to Shannon she looked ancient and obviously beaten, but she was only in her mid 40's, her body dazzled with sweat and she was breathing heavily, but as she slumped down on a sofa she raised her hands in victory and a smile beamed from ear to ear 'What a rush' she said through her huge grin.  Ellen has short blond hair, but Shannon noticed there was an awful lot of long black hair wrapped around her hand and more of it stuck to her sweaty arm.  As Shannon stared at her open mouth Ellen looked at her and said 'It's not as bad as it looks, my nose always bleeds at the slightest bump and honestly – that's one hell of a adrenaline surge, good luck!'  and with that the marshal's invited Shannon out to the ring.

Maria jumped to her feet as Laura threw open the door and stormed in to the dressing room swearing 'fucking bitch got lucky, I had her, I fucking had her...'  'oh well, always next month' she said like a switch had been flipped and now she was utterly calm.  She looked about 30 years old, a little sweaty, hair was a bit messed up, make up a little smudged and her clothes where still intact, she cracked open a beer, looked at Maria and said 'You're up next sweet cheeks, don't fuck it up like I did'.

The door opened and Shannon walked out into the bright lights of the barn and towards the straw bale ring and that's where she saw her opponent for the first time since the draw, Maria was just stepping over the bales into the ring, she was wearing black spandex shorts down to her chunky thighs and a sports bra top, she was a heavy looking girl with slighly chubby belly that slipped over her shorts and hidden in the sports bra where some obvious big boobs, her hair was tied back, something Shannon had forgotten to do, and she wore a mean scowl, like she never smiled.  Shannon was a bundle of nerves as she walked to the ring.

Maria clambered over the bales, she felt silly in just the sports bra, but one of the more experienced fighters warned her that her opponent could use her top against her 'the less you have to grab the better' she said, so she ditched her vest.  Maria watched Shannon approach the ring and noticed her long black and platinum hair was down and she had a baggy vest top on too, 'good' she thought to herself, she hated that Shannon was taller by a good 5 inches and was concerned that she also looked much fitter and toned 'fuck, I bet she knows judo or something' she thought to herself.  Maria stepped back and crossed her arms as Shannon entered the ring.

Shannon was getting her first look at Maria, 'oh she looks mean and tough, I bet she's been to prison or played rugby or something, she's bound to have done this before'. 

'Damn she's tall, look at those toned arms, I'll have to act fast here, she looks like she has loads of stamina bottled up'.  Though Maria to herself.

The referee walked into the centre of the ring and raised her arms for quiet, 'Match two!' she called 'Shannon against Maria' she continued and the crowd erupted in cheers.  'ladies step to the centre of the ring' requested the ref as both Shannon and Maria walked to the centre 'you both know why you're here, anybody got second thoughts?'  Shannon shook her head 'fuck no!' announced Maria as she glared up trying to look Shannon in the eyes, Shannon returned a steely glare, or at least tried too.  'Well all good then!  Shake hands bitches and then back to the hay please'.  Maria held out her hand and Shannon took it, Maria squeezed and then let go.  Shannon turned and started to walk to the edge of the ring and as did she turned around and saw Maria walking backwards her eyes glaring into hers, a look of pure hatred on her chubby face.

'OK girls, FIGHT!!!' screamed the referee  as she threw her arms to the floor and jumped back.

To be continued

feedback and opinions welcomed, thanks for reading

[Ginny38]

Thanks! That was an EXCELLENT set-up for what will be (I certainly hope) a terrific fight - judging by the time and effort you put into describing the two women who will be fighting; the setting and even some peripheral characters to lend an air of "reality" to the scene.

I'll be here waiting (eagerly) for the next installment!

[yora]

The second part - go time!

Maria let out a guttural roar and bolted forward like a cannonball charging towards Shannon, she hadn't thought about what she would do when she got there, she just knew she had to strike first.  Seeing Maria charging at her Shannon's eyes went wide and her mouth dropped open, she raised her arms in defence, but it was no use.  Maria hit her like a steam train and as she threw her arms around Shannon the power and momentum saw them both crashing backwards into the all of hay bales and both when flying over the low wall of bales and hitting the dirt on the other side.

The crowd roared as the two fighters crashed over the wall, quickly both girls where gathered up and separated by many arms, Maria elbowed and thrashed them all off her and quickly cleared the bales to get back into the ring, Shannon was slower and still a bit stunned as she was pushed by the crowd back into the ring, before she knew what was happening, Maria had grabbed her by the shirt and with a scream threw her across the ring towards the centre.  Shannon fell like a rag doll and rolled across the dirt.  As Shannon came to halt she also came to her senses, she had to defend herself, she had to attack and quickly she tried to get herself up, but as she was getting to her feet she felt a foot connect with her back and she kicked face down to the floor again.  This was not the evening she had hoped for.

Maria felt alive and full of confidence as she came up behind Shannon and with an outstretched foot pushed her foe back down to the dirt floor, walking around to Shannon's left she reached down and grabbed a handful of hair just as Shannon was starting to get up again, Maria pulled Shannon up by the hair with her right hand, and pulled her left hand back to deliver a heavy slap to Shannon's face, it connected with a huge crack which lead the crowd to make a collective groan.  A moment before impact Maria let go of Shannon's hair, the force of the slap sent Shannon crashing down on her side on the floor again.  Maria jumped back and raised her arms in triumphal pose as Shannon struggled on the floor her hand nursing a giant red welt on her cheek.

Shannon hit the floor, her hand going to stinging cheek, rage and anger started to boil in her blood and she braced for another hit.  Which didn't come.  She rolled away as fast as she could, her eyes darting about the arena, looking for her enemy, as she got to her knees and brushed hair out of her eyes she saw the fat little tart showing off and getting on like a Premiership Footballer, more anger and adrenaline surged through her as the pain was pushed to the side.

“BITCHHHHHH!” screamed Shannon as she charged towards Maria, now it was Maria's turn to look shocked and as Maria braced for impact and put her arms out to block Shannon, instead she found herself in a bad position.  Shannon raised a long leg and kicked hard at Maria's soft belly the resulting connection saw Maria double over almost instantly, winded and shocked, she folded up, but stayed on her feet.  Shannon continued the attack, screaming as she brought a fist down on the back of Maria's head, then grabbing her pony tail with her left hand and yanking her backwards.  Maria's hands where still wrapped around her aching belly and she was in no position to defend herself as her angry opponent yanked her backwards, Maria's feet went out from under her and she fell backwards landing hard on her back, and as she did Shannon lifted her foot and kicked again at Maria's stomach, her foot again thumped down into Maria's soft tummy and she buckled and groaned in pain, tears came to her eyes and rolled down her cheeks, leaving mascara tracks down her cheeks.  Maria rolled into a ball and away from the enraged Shannon as she kicked at her back blindly.

Seeing Maria roll away from her and into a ball Shannon saw the chance for a quick pin, she stepped over Maria, a leg on either side and bent down to try and grab her wrists, but as bent down and tried to get herself into position Maria brought a knee up and kicked her hard, right between the legs.  The crowd almost exploded as Shannon's eyes bulged and she stopped almost dead and open mouthed, she looked shocked and stunned and Shannon's hands instinctively went to her injured pussy as she feel backwards.  Now both ladies where lying on the dirt nursing painful injuries, each moaning in pain and slowly coming to their senses.

Each fighter manoeuvred away from the other, each trying to get some breath back and come back to their senses, slowly, and like baby deer, at opposite sides of the ring, each got to their feet.  They stared at each other as they started to slowly circle the wing, neither wanting to get too close, each closely watching for an opening.  Neither said a word as they walked around the edges of the ring.  They didn't need too.  The anger and hatred was now obvious as tension filled the area.

[T aka Tony]

Excellent!

Tony 

[yora]

The third and final instalment

As the girls circled the ring Maria raised her arm and pointed at Shannon “this is it bitch, last chance to back out, before I give you another beating” she shouted.  Shannon stopped in her tracks, put her hands on her hips, tilted her head; 'excuse me? Another?  You didn't do shit you fat little tramp'.  Maria advanced on Shannon, slowly now, wary, one step at a time, arms out stretched in front of her.  Shannon raised her arms defensively, “that's it, come get your ass kicked” she muttered as she glared at Maria.  Maria tried a few testing slaps at Shannon, and Shannon easily blocked each of them.  Shannon, with her greater height and longer reach now returned the slaps stretching forward throwing individual slaps at Maria, the two got closer, less than a foot apart, throwing slaps at each other, heads down for defence.  Some hit, some didn't, some where deflected, some where not.  The crowd grew restless, someone heckled “I'll come in there and kick both your asses”, “throw a cock in the ring, they'll soon fight over that” came from somewhere and the crowd erupted in laughter.  Shannon threw another swift kick at Maria, but this time Maria caught her leg and gabbed it.  “Silly bitch” she sneered as she punched at Shannon's exposed inner thigh.  “oh shit...” thought Shannon as Maria grabbed at her leg and them slammed a punch into her thigh, but as she did, Shannon grabbed her ponytail and pulled Maria towards her, this prevented any further punches and gave Shannon some balance, not that it mattered as both girls fell backwards.

Shannon landed on her back, with Maria on top of her, the weight of Maria landing on her knocked the wind out of her, but now Maria was between Shannon's long muscular legs, quickly she wrapped her legs around Maria's soft middle in a scissor and started to squeeze.   Maria reared up in pain screaming as she did before flopping back again on top of Shannon.  Shannon applied more pressure and threw her arms around Maria, pulling her tight into her.  Maria was not done though, she planted her arms on the dirt floor and arched her back, lifting with all her strength she got herself up on her feet and lifted Shannon of the ground, she dropped herself, and bam!  Shannon hit the the ground with Maria on top of her, it was enough, a stunned Shannon dropped the hold and Maria wriggled free. 

Both women got to their feet as quickly as possible and both where in a pouncing position as they faced off, Shannon moved first and threw herself at Maria, but Maria caught her and with her extra weight and strength threw Shannon across the ring, Shannon slid across the floor and fell onto her front.  Maria was on her like a shot, she straddled her back, reached down, grabbed Shannon's top and pulled it up over her head “I'm having this bitch!” she shouted as Shannon screamed as her arms where forced up and her top removed.  The crowd shouted it's approval as Maria turned holding up the captured trophy in her arms a huge smile across her face.

Shannon was humiliated and filled with rage, she spun round saw Maria's exposed back and her own clothing held up and threw a brutal punch right into Maria's Kidney area “You'll be pissing blood for a week you thieving whore!” she screamed as Maria collapsed forward, her arms dropping and immediately going to her aching back.  Shannon grabbed at her vest and started pulling, but Maria wasn't letting go.  Despite the pain, Maria got up and spun around.  The two girls, now both reduced to sports bras and shorts played tug of war with Shannon's top, the crowd was in a frenzy as they pulled and hauled at the item of clothing like two desperate shoppers on Black Friday.

“It'll never fit you!”  Screamed Shannon as she pulled Maria closer, “I'll fucking choke you with it” Maria spat back – just as she let go.   Shannon went skidding backwards, her arms wind milling as went down.  Maria was on her like a shot, she dropped on top of her like a stone, plonking down on Shannon's chest and with relative ease getting the shocked girls arms tucked under her legs and grabbing her hair with both hands pulling her head in between her chubby thighs.  “Submit you skinny witch!!” Maria bellowed as Shannon kicked and squirmed desperately trying to shift the heavier girl – but it was no use, she was stuck fast between Maria's sweaty inner thighs and for Shannon breathing was getting harder and harder as Maria sat tight growling as she kept Shannon's head tight between her thighs.  Shannon was starting to fade, she was sweating like she's never sweated before, her chest ached, she could hardly breath and could move nothing but her legs.  All she could see was Maria's sweaty shorts and tummy, all she could feel was pain, all she could hear was Maria bellowing at her to submit and calling her a bitch, all she could smell was Maria's sweaty musty scent.  It was over for her and she knew it, with as much movement as she could muster she started to to tap the dirt floor and tried to say she submitted, but her throat was dry, her breath was weak and she was gripped so hard between Maria's thighs she could hardly open her mouth.

Maria was feeling great!  She was exhausted yes, her heart was beating like a hammer and her muscles ached, but she had Shannon and she knew it.  She looked down and saw Shannon's hand taping the floor like there was no tomorrow; “something to say loser?” she asked as she opened her legs and let Shannon's head drop.  Shannon wheezed in a mouth full of air “I give...  You win...”  came the hoarse words from Shannon.  Hearing those words Maria was stunned and elated!  She dropped everything and jumped up right away, grinning from ear to ear.  The crowd, well most of it, cheered and applauded.  It was then that Maria realised her legs where shaking and she was absolutely wrecked, she felt weak and nauseous and sat down on the floor.  “We have a winner by submission!” announced the referee as she held up Maria's limp arm.  Shannon just lay on her back panting.  Both where handed bottles of water, a marshal helped Shannon up and Maria got to her feet, Shannon walked towards her, still holding her now ruined vest, she held out a hand, Maria took it, Shannon looked her in the eye “good fighting, you're tough”.  “You too”, said Maria “I was almost beaten, don't think I could have lasted another minute.”  The two marshals and the ref got between the two ladies, at this point things are not always so cordial!  “It stays in the ring”, said the ref as the marshals led Shannon and Maria back to the dressing rooms.

As Shannon crossed the floor she felt shame at losing, but as the other ladies wished her well and congratulated her and slapped her back she felt better, she felt accepted, even proud.  When she got to the dressing room Ellen was waiting, still in the ripped top with the now dried blood stains.  “How'd it go?” she asked, “Badly...” responded Shannon as she flopped onto the sofa.  “ohh should have warned you about the top, and the hair too.”  said Ellen as she handed Sarah a beer.  “Thanks I'll know for next time, and you're right, I've never felt such a rush, I will do this again”.

Maria walked into the changing room, still shaking, still grinning.  “Well, that shit eating grin answers my question” spat Laura “you gonna do it again?” she asked.  Maria took a deep breath, “yea, for sure” she said.  “Good” said Laura as she got to her feet, “Maybe I'll get to beat the shit out of you.”

Thank you for reading, as usual, any thoughts, opinions, feedback negative or positive is encouraged

[Ginny38]

POSITIVE FEEDBACK!

Sure looked like a fun time was had by all.... especially the spectators who weren't being kicked and punched!

Thanks for sharing, I hope to see more like this from you in the future. Nicely written.

[yora]

Thanks for the positive comments!

[FyreCracka]

Great story! Loved all of it. Very well done.