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Mira vs Caroline

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Mira vs Caroline
« on: January 23, 2021, 01:28:48 AM »
I started this story as a writing experiment and then decided to finish because I didn't want to waste it.  I apologise for the long build up but I hope this appeals to some people out there. As always thanks for reading and I appreciate all comments, criticisms, and suggestions. Enjoy!


 It had been three weeks since Mira discovered her husband's secret porn stash. She came across it while borrowing his computer to do some paperwork, a huge folder hidden amongst all the program files. Curiosity drove her to investigate the 200gb folder, what she discovered shocked her at first. There were scores of videos featuring women in various forms of combat! Lots of the videos featured women wrestling for submissions.  Others were more violent, with hair-pulling and slapping. Some were very sexual in nature, with two ladies fighting to see who could make the other orgasm first or orgasm the most.
As she scrolled through her husband's collection she experienced an array of emotions; shock, confusion, a little arousal, but mostly just sad and hurt. Why had Al hidden this from her?  Their twelve year marriage has been virtually perfect up to this point full of love and communication. They shared everything with each other, or so she thought.
Her thoughts haunted her and she struggled to maintain the image of a peaceful marriage that had been shattered in her mind.
           Al began to notice a change in his wife's behavior, she seemed to grow distant and looked at him in a different way.  His concern and uncertainty grew as the weeks went by, until it became too much to handle. He sat down with his wife one evening and asked her directly what was going on. She looked him in the eyes for the first time in weeks and burst into tears, she sobbed as she explained everything she had gone through the past three weeks.  As Al began to understand that Mira had found his secret stash he hung his head in shame, he apologized and said he was sorry she had found that, he went on to explain that it was his ultimate fetish to see women fighting and wrestling.  He had never told her because he thought she would hate it or think he was disgusting for liking it. When Mira heard that she leaned in, hugged her husband and told him that she loved every part of him. She said that her behavior the past three weeks was based on the fact that he hadn't told her and she was just shocked and hurt that he had kept this from her.  He apologized again and said this was the only thing he ever kept from her and would never do it again. They kissed and then went to their bed to have sex for the first time in the weeks.
 Al laid on the bed and she sat on top of him as she rode his dick. She loved to be in this position and her favorite thing to do was work her husband as slow as she could while talking dirty. This time as she began her slow grind she looked him straight in the eyes and asked if he wanted to see her fight another woman. As soon as Al comprehended the words she could feel his dick get even bigger inside her, she let out an involuntary moan and began to grind faster. As she started to breath harder she asked if he could picture her pinning another woman under her, pulling her hair and making her submit. Her husband let out a moan and started to caress her tits. This was a huge turn on for Mira as she loved having her breasts played with. She could feel an orgasm rising inside of her and she started to make a little grunt with every thrust of her pelvis. Al could tell she was close and knew he couldn't hold his own orgasm much longer. As his wife screamed out her orgasm she pinned his shoulders to the bed and worked his dick until he began to grunt and moan underneath her. She kept going until he was drained and could barely move, then she laid on his chest and caught her breath while enjoying the feeling of his half hard dick still twitching inside her.
    With her sex life and marriage repaired Mira's thoughts turned to her husband's fetish. A lot of those videos had aroused her and she wanted to do something for her husband to celebrate this new revelation. She began to watch through her husband's collection, she started with submission wrestling videos, as those made the most sense to her. As she watched more and more videos she began to put herself into the scenarios she was seeing. She could tell when a wrestler made a bad decision or missed an opportunity. She also started to enjoy the drama of each match. Seeing the ladies warm up stretch, hearing them talk before and during the match, their grunts and moans of exertion, it was all so exciting!
Soon she was moving on to the sexfight portion of Al's collection  These videos got her excited in a way that she never knew was possible. They often started like wrestling matches but the focus was always on making the opponent come. Mira enjoyed these because they never seemed to follow the same set of rules twice. One video could be a wrestling match that allowed fingering while another would feature two women using a double ended dildo and seeing who could last longer.  The variety of matches led to many interesting videos, where the size or strength of a competitor was not the main deciding factor. Seeing these women competing in such a way brought something to life inside Mira, she was never the most competitive but this was different. She wanted to compete, to win.
As she watched through the sexfight matches she began to finger herself along with the match, imagining herself as the one on top, she was the one that lasted longer, the better woman.
Every night after she finished her video she would hunt down Al and force him into the bedroom (though it usually didn't take much force). Their sex life was on a level that Al had never imagined and he was over the moon. Mira had fully embraced his fetish.
The final category of videos in Al's collection was the one that intrigued her the most, catfighting. Seeing two women pulling each other's hair, slapping, and scratching each other. It had a primal air about it, it made her breath short as the ladies began to circle.  She couldn't understand what it was about these videos that affected her so much, she just knew it turned her on.
After a month of watching her husband's collection Mira was certain, she wanted to fight for him.  As she became aware of her newfound desire she started to see other women in a different way.  In the past when she saw a woman her size or age she would look for something about then to compliment. Now she would weigh them up as a potential opponent. It was exhilarating just to imagine herself locked in combat with another woman; the lady in line at the bank or the woman jogging in the park. Each woman seemed to present their own challenge and Mira yearned to try one.
Eventually an opportunity presented itself, a co-worker had received some free day passes to the new gym that opened in town and gave one to Mira. Now Mira had an established workout routine already and didn't need a new gym but she was intrigued by all the fancy equipment that the gym advertised and wanted to check it out.  She checked in at the desk and was assigned a locker. As she made her way to the locker room she looked around the main workout room. It was a large room filled with treadmills, ellipticals, stair Climbers and other cardio machines. There were about a dozen doors leading to other smaller workout areas, she could see a weight room through one door and a dance room through another. Most of the other doors were closed but the last one she passed was open enough to see a full sized boxing ring.
As she changed into her work out clothes, a white sports bra with blue leggings, another woman entered the locker room. She smiled at Mira and went to a locker near hers. As the woman changed she asked if she had ever been to this gym before, Mira said no and told her about the guest pass. The woman introduced herself as Caroline and said she was visiting on a guest pass as well. As they spoke Mira started to evaluate Caroline as an opponent. She was the same size as Mira but looked strong, Mira thought she would probably lose to Caroline in a wrestling match, but in a catfight things might go different.
After they had changed Mira invited Caroline to workout with her, she accepted and the ladies went out to the treadmills for a warm-up. As they worked out they got to know each other and found they had quite a lot in common. Mira was beginning to feel very comfortable around Caroline and wondered if there was any possibility of talking her into some kind of wrestling match or catfight.
Not long after that the perfect opportunity presented itself. As they were wrapping up their workout they began to tour the gym, exploring all the state of the art amenities that it offered. When they passed the room containing the boxing ring they both lingered at the door. Caroline saw the look on Mira's face as she looked at the ring and asked if she wanted to go check it out. Mira said yes as she walked into the room, she told Caroline that she'd never seen a ring in real life. Caroline said she hadn't either, as she walked around the other side of the ring she found a tub full of boxing gloves. Mira saw her picking up a pair and asked if she was a boxer. Caroline said no but she's always wanted to try. Both ladies seemed to get the idea simultaneously. Mira walked over to the gloves saying she had never boxed either. They both stood there nervously for a second, hoping the other would say what they wanted to hear. It was Caroline that broke the ice, she started to slide a pair of gloves on and told Mira they should hop in the ring, just to try it out. Mira was already reaching to put the gloves on as soon as she saw Caroline put hers on. Her body was starting to tingle all over, she was about to get her first taste of female combat.
As the ladies climbed into the ring they both realized they had no idea how to box. Mira asked how do you want to do this. Caroline seemed unsure, she suggested body shots only since they didn't have mouth guards and that they just box till the first good punch. Mira agreed since they were both pretty tired from their workout.
They put their gloves up and began to circle. They were both bouncing on their toes like they'd seen pros on tv do, but were unsure of what to do next. Mira stepped in and threw a cautious punch at Caroline's stomach. Caroline stepped back to avoid it and countered with a jab towards Mira's left tit, she made contact but not enough to have an effect. The ladies began to pick up the pace and dance around the ring. They seemed very evenly matched, any time Caroline would try to find an opening Mira would be right there waiting and when Mira would move onto the attack Caroline was always ready to counter. After five minutes of moving around and trading blows the ladies were already tired, they had worked out for over an hour and could feel it. Neither lady wanted to be the one to give up so they kept going. Caroline moved inside and tried to fake Mira out, it might have worked out if they hadn't been so tired, however Mira just reacted instinctively and threw a random punch towards Caroline's stomach at the right moment. She caught her right as Caroline started to extend her arm for a jab. The hit caught her by surprise and knocked the wind out of her. She made an unladylike groan and bent over.
Mira immediately felt bad and began to apologize saying she didn't mean to hurt her. Caroline looked up with a grin on her face as she sucked in air. As she caught her breath she started to laugh and complemented Mira on a good hit. Mira felt a sense of relief as both ladies took the gloves off and relaxed. As they headed back to the locker room Mira commented about how her husband would have loved to see that. This intrigued Caroline and she asked Mira to elaborate. Mira explained everything from the last month that had been on her mind. She started with finding her husband's collection and went on to talking about all the videos and how excited she got watching them.  Caroline's face stayed emotionless throughout the whole explanation, finally when Mira got to the part about wanting to fight for her husband Caroline smiled slightly and said she'd do it.
Mira hesitated for a second unsure of what to say or do, she asked are you sure. Caroline nodded and said yes, she'd really enjoyed the boxing and was looking for some more fun in her life.
They exchanged contact info and agreed to meet for drinks at Mira's house over the weekend to discuss the arrangement.

The whole rest of the week Mira teased Al about the present she had gotten for him, she would go on about how he was going to love it but wouldn't offer any hints about what it was. Eventually Saturday evening came and Mira told Al to expect a guest, but when he answered the door he was dumbstruck. Caroline was gorgeous, her hair was black and curly and hung down to her shoulders, she was wearing a black halter top that showed almost all of her cleavage and tight white jeans to show off her perfect ass. She said you must be Al as she walked in, her high heels clicking on the tile of their entry way. Al had no idea who this beautiful woman was and when his wife came and hugged her his confusion grew. Mira was dressed just as nice in a pink tank top that left her midriff bare and blue jeans that were as tight as Caroline's. As the ladies hugged Al couldn't help but stare at their breasts pushed together. The two pairs of 36d boobs looked identical and both seemed to have an equal amount of give.
The ladies noticed Al staring and started to giggle, Caroline asked if she'd told him anything. Mira said no, she'd been waiting for this. Al couldn't take it, he asked what on earth they were talking about. Mira just smiled and said come join us for drinks.
As they sat down with a bottle of wine Mira explained that Caroline was there to discuss them having a fight in front of Al.
Al nearly dropped his wine. He looked back and forth between Mira and Caroline waiting for one to tell him it was a joke. When neither lady said anything Al asked what they were planning on doing. Mira said they didn't know yet, she suggested they watch some videos and pull the ideas they liked best.
They went to the den with a selection of Al and Mira's favorite videos and started to watch through them. They showed Caroline a few submission wrestling videos before moving onto catfighting and sexfighting.
The videos seemed to excite Caroline a lot, as Mira sat next to her on the couch she could hear Caroline's breath speed up as the fights got more intense. Al was losing his mind, just watching these videos alone turned him on just fine, but when there were two gorgeous women watching with him, it took it to another level. He could hear them breathing and getting excited, their small exclamations when something unexpected happened, it drove more blood to his member than ever before.
After about an hour of watching Mira turned to Caroline and asked what she thought. Caroline was nothing more than absolutely ready. She grinned at Mira and said it looked like the most exhilarating thing in the world. Mira agreed and stood up. She looked Caroline in the eyes and said I officially challenge you to a catfight!
Caroline's eyes lit up and she stood as well, she shook Mira's hand and accepted her challenge.  They sat down again and began discussing the details of what they wanted to do.
Al was living in a dream world at this point. The two beautiful women next to him were now using him as a catfighting expert to help them establish rules for their arranged match.  They discussed attire, time limit, allowed moves, and winners stakes. There was a lot to discuss as neither lady had ever done anything like it aside from their small boxing match at the gym. As their inexperience became more evident Al suggested that perhaps they try submission wrestling before the full blown catfight. Both ladies readily agreed and Caroline was so eager she suggested they try wrestling that night.  Mira thought that was a great idea as well so Al ran to the living room to start moving furniture while the ladies went upstairs stairs to change.
When the ladies came back they saw that Al had gone all out. All the couches and chairs were against the wall and he had found their daughters old gymnastics mats in the garage. The mats were laid out forming a 12 by 12 square and couch cushions were surrounding the edges protecting the wrestlers from hitting their heads on the fireplace or tables. Al had also brought out some towels and bottled water for the ladies and had a beer for himself.
The ladies had decided to wrestle in their tops and underwear. Mira walked onto the mats first in her pink tank top and a white g string. Her large breasts seemed to be straining against her shirt more than usual and Al noticed she had tied the side of it to make it tighter. She was looking hotter than ever with her blonde hair in a loose ponytail and a confident grin on her face.
Caroline walked in right behind her and Al immediately understood why Mira had tightened her shirt. Caroline's halter top looked like pure lingerie when she wasn't wearing pants! Combined with her black g string Caroline looked like she could have been pulled straight from a lingerie catalog.
The ladies discussed the rules as they stretched. The match would be thirty minutes long, the woman with the most submissions wins. After each submission there would be a three minute rest. No hitting, scratching, kicking or hair-pulling.
Al could feel himself beginning to get hard as he watched the women stretch, he loved every aspect of what was happening in front of him, the tension between the ladies, their gorgeous bodies, his wife's dedication to his fantasy. It was pure bliss. He could see from their stretching that their bodies  were similar. Both were about 5,6 and weighed around 130. Both had 36d breasts and curvy waists. The differences between them were very minimal, Caroline seemed slightly more muscular but Mira's legs looked stronger.
Soon they both stood up and said they were ready. Al had them face off chest to chest, the two women stared into each other's eyes. The tension in the room was building, there was no animosity between the ladies but they were both very serious about winning.

The ladies backed up and Al said go. Neither lady pounced immediately, they just started to circle, slowly closing the gap between them. When they got within arms reach their hands came together and entered a test of strength. Mira immediately felt the strength of Caroline's arms and knew she had her work cut out for her. As she tried to force Caroline's arms back she could feel her opponent driving into her. Caroline stepped closer and closer until Mira was forced to step back. She grunted from exertion and tried to stop herself from moving backwards. She could feel Caroline's leg working behind hers and the next thing she knew she was being slammed into the mat with Caroline directly on top of her.
Their large breasts mashed together as Mira struggled to roll Caroline off her. Caroline grinned as she grunted from all her efforts. She still had a hold on Mira's hands and kept her arms pinned above her head, making it very hard for Mira to find leverage. Mira tried to bridge but Caroline felt it coming and used her legs to grapevine Mira's, forcing her ass back into the mat. Mira struggled for thirty seconds before realizing it was better to save her energy and submitted the first fall.
Caroline released her and stood up. She was flushed red from the three minutes of hard wrestling but positively beaming. She held out a hand for Mira and after a second of hesitation she took it. Caroline told her good job and Mira let out a short laugh and shook her head.  She said I hope you enjoyed that because it's the only submission you'll get from me.
Caroline just smiled as she adjusted her top and sat down on the couch. As she was sitting next to Al she couldn't help but notice his full on erection, and how big it was! Mira noticed her looking and cleared her throat, they made eye contact for a second and Al could almost feel the sparks flying past him. Caroline stood up and asked if Mira was ready. Mira replied that she was more than ready. The ladies started to circle but this time Mira charged forward almost immediately. She tried to catch Caroline off guard but her opponent was ready. The two women crashed together and struggled for supremacy. Caroline attempted to throw Mira to the floor but Mira countered and used the momentum to whip Caroline around and take her down. As she hit the mats Mira was right on top of her pulling her arms back behind her and holding them with her thighs. She then threaded her fingers under Caroline's chin and pulled back hard putting her into an excruciating camel clutch. Caroline let out an involuntary groan as she was stretched to her limits. Al had a perfect view of her gorgeous cleavage as her tits threatened to fall out of her top. Mira asked if she wanted to give and Caroline let out a frustrated growl. Mira felt her tense up as she tried to escape one last time then relax as she submitted. Mira slowly released her opponent then stood up and looked at her husband. He was watching her with stars in his eyes and she had never felt sexier. She started to rub her large tits, something she always did when she got horny, and asked how she did. Al told her it was the sexiest thing he's ever seen. She smiled and turned to look at Caroline who was just starting to get up. Mira asked if she was alright and Caroline nodded with a small smile. She said she wasn't expecting such an intense attack and that her tits had almost fallen out. Mira smiled at her husband and said he probably would have loved that. He just started to blush and didn't say anything.
His reaction made Mira strangely jealous so she decided to take it up a level. She pulled her tank top up over her head and threw it onto the couch. She gave Caroline a challenging look and said I hope you don't mind if I wrestle you topless. Caroline didn't even skip a beat, she just whipped her own top off and replied only if I can do it too. As Mira glared at her she tossed her shirt directly to Al and he caught it instinctually.  Caroline smirked at her opponent and asked if she was ready to go. Mira didn't say anything, she just walked towards Caroline until their breasts were touching. Their breasts squished together as both ladies pushed into each other, neither wanted to be the first to step back. Their foreheads came together and they wrapped their arms around each other in a mutual bear hug and started to squeeze. Mira let out a groan as Caroline's strong arms tightened around her. Sensing a moment of weakness Caroline threw her opponent to the floor and tried to jump on top of her. Before she could get on top Mira rolled out of the way and tried to get her legs around Caroline. Mira's legs tightened around Caroline's chest but Caroline was able to pry then apart and roll to safety. Both ladies were on their knees and crashed together again. Mira managed to put Caroline in a headlock and held on tight. She pulled Caroline's face into her chest and tried to put her weight on top for a chest smother but her opponent slipped away and before lunging right back at her. Caroline surged into Mira and put her straight onto her back. She then straddled Mira and brought her chest down for a boob smother. Mira struggled and thrashed but couldn't throw Caroline, soon she ran out of air and had to tap. As Caroline stood up she said that's how you smother someone then she turned to Al and shook her chest for him.
Mira was fired up now! She asked Caroline if she was woman enough to take it to the next level and get a little catty. They slowly started to circle as Caroline asked what she had in mind. Hair pulling and body slapping are allowed, Mira delivered her challenge looking her opponent straight in the eyes. Caroline held her gaze, she was feeling more confident and sexy than she had felt in years. Let's do it, she replied.
They continued to circle and started to creep towards each other until both women simultaneously sprung at their opponent. 
Their bodies slapped together as they collided. They immediately sunk their claws into their opponents hair and started to pull. Mira started to groan and squeal as her opponents powerful grip caused her scalp to burn. She refused to give in though. As she yanked on Carolines hair with one hand she used the other to slap her opponents breasts repeatedly.
Al watched on in amazement as the most erotic thing he'd ever witness unfolded before him. Caroline's tits were bouncing around and starting to redden from the repeated attacks. As the ladies continued to struggle Al could hear them talking to each other in aggravated whispers, insulting each other, calling the other a bitch and threatening to pull their hair out of they didn't give. Both ladies pressed on though, each determined to prove they were the better woman, the stronger fighter.
As Caroline's tits started to burn from the repeated slaps she realized she needed to do something to make Mira stop, she wrapped her leg behind Mira's and tried to trip her. As the ladies started to go down Mira slung her opponent around by the hair so she landed on top. With Caroline on her back Mira was able to sit on her opponents breasts and shove her barely covered pussy into Caroline's face. As Caroline struggled underneath her Mira began to feel her confidence growing and looked at Al. He had his pants off now and was fully jacking off as he watched his beautiful wife dominating her opponent. She started to rub her tits with one hand while the other kept a firm hold on Carolines hair, keeping her face shoved between Mira's legs.  Caroline continued trying to fight her way out while Mira rode her face. As Mira was searching for a way to make her opponent submit an idea formed in her head. She pulled her g string to the side and started to shift her vagina so it covered Caroline's nose and mouth. Caroline's eyes opened wide as she realized how Mira was trying to finish her. She started to struggle more but Mira had a perfect position and couldn't be shaken off. As Mira sensed her victory approaching she started to smile at Al and play with her tits, she was so turned on and felt like the sexiest thing on the planet. She could feel herself moving towards an orgasm and started to slowly grind her pussy on Carolines face. Caroline could tell Mira was getting off on her position so as a last ditch effort she started to lick her opponents clitoris. Mira was so close to orgasming already that it only took five seconds to get her squirming around. As Mira became caught up in the pleasure she was feeling Caroline took her chance and brought her legs up, hooked them around Miras head and toppled her to the floor. Mira was seconds away from cumming at this point and slightly dazed as her opponent climbed on top and started raining slaps all over her body. Mira started to struggle before Caroline could lock herself in and soon the ladies were rolling around the mats pulling hair and slapping like crazy. After five minutes of fighting for control Mira managed to get on top again. She grabbed a hold of Caroline's hair as she once again sat on her opponents chest. She bounced her ass on Carolines tits until she stopped struggling. Mira looked into Caroline's eyes and could see she was exhausted, she pulled her g string to the side again and said, lick it bitch. Caroline immediately complied and soon Mira was grinding on her opponents face and moaning like crazy. Al could hear the pitch of her moans getting higher and knew his wife was close, she let out a loud scream and pressed her pelvis into Caroline's face as an orgasm racked her body. She rode it out for about thirty seconds before she collapsed on top of Caroline. The ladies both laid there for another minute before Mira finally asked, so do you give?
Caroline gave her a tired smile and said yes, Mira replied with a smile of her own and said good. She sat up, still on Carolines chest, and reached behind, slipping her hand under Caroline's g string. She started to rub and soon Caroline was singing out her own orgasm.
After that both ladies laid, exhausted, on the mats for about five minutes before they both sat up and looked at Al. The man was speechless, he simply stood up and clapped for both of them. He said that was one the greatest things he'd ever experienced. The ladies smiled while Caroline pointed at his massive erection and said obviously. Mira crawled over to her husband and began to play with his boner. She looked over at Caroline and asked if she wanted to help. Caroline crawled over and the ladies started to make out, each with a hand on his dick. Soon they moved their mouths to his member and double teamed it, they made out with his dick between their lips before taking turns deep-throating him. With all he had witnessed that evening he could only last for a few minutes before he was cumming all over their chests.
As he collapsed back onto the couch the ladies pushed their tits together and made out some more, enjoying the feeling of lubrication between them.
Twenty minutes later the ladies got up and went to shower off together while Al rearranged the furniture in the living room. While in the shower the ladies discussed the details of what had gone down that evening. Caroline thanked Mira for the experience, she hadn't thought things would go the way that they did but she was happy with how they had turned out. Mira agreed and thanked Caroline, then she apologized for how things had escalated so much. Caroline said it was fine, in a fight like that emotions are sure to run high. Mira agreed and promised that in the future, if they were to do it again, that she wouldn't do anything sexual without discussing it first. Caroline smiled and said she appreciated that. She then went on to say that she had been so turned on during the whole thing that she had orgasmed two times before they even started pulling hair.
After their shower Caroline kissed Al and Mira goodbye and thanked them again for the amazing evening. Just before she left the ladies agreed to meet up the next month to discuss another match, possibly a catfight.
After they watched Caroline's tail lights disappear down the road Al and Mira went upstairs and made love like they never had before. Just before they fell asleep Al thanked Mira and told her how grateful he was to have someone that would do that for him. Mira just smiled and kissed him before saying she loved doing it and it wouldn't be the last time.



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Re: Mira vs Caroline
« Reply #1 on: January 23, 2021, 02:52:26 AM »
Fantastic, well written story. It had a great build up and aggression during the catfight.  As the tension was building so was the sexiness with Mira giving her man a little show when dominating and enjoying the super sexy fruits of her victory while pinning her beaten foe.  Can't wait for the rematch maybe with the stakes the winner gets Al while the loser has to watch.  Please write it when you can.  You are an excellent writer. Thanks
« Last Edit: January 23, 2021, 02:58:51 AM by master »

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Re: Mira vs Caroline
« Reply #2 on: January 23, 2021, 05:35:36 AM »
Thanks for the feed back. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll be starting the next story tomorrow but I don't know when it'll be ready.

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Re: Mira vs Caroline
« Reply #3 on: January 23, 2021, 05:44:36 AM »
Nicely done. It's in the vein of stories like the ones that RWesley used to do, as well as many others, but its own thing. I am looking forward to the rematch and potentially the expansion of this little universe.

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« Reply #4 on: January 23, 2021, 05:59:24 AM »
I will look forward to reading another of your well written and creative work.  Thanks for taking the time.  I've written a few stories in FCF and know its a lot of work.

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Re: Mira vs Caroline
« Reply #5 on: January 23, 2021, 04:48:19 PM »
Nicely done. It's in the vein of stories like the ones that RWesley used to do, as well as many others, but its own thing. I am looking forward to the rematch and potentially the expansion of this little universe.

Thanks! I'm a huge fan of Rwesley. As you can see I draw inspiration from his work. I fully intend to continue expanding on this and hope to have the next installment up soon.

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Re: Mira vs Caroline
« Reply #6 on: October 09, 2023, 06:43:57 AM »
Nicely done. It's in the vein of stories like the ones that RWesley used to do, as well as many others, but its own thing. I am looking forward to the rematch and potentially the expansion of this little universe.

Thanks! I'm a huge fan of Rwesley. As you can see I draw inspiration from his work. I fully intend to continue expanding on this and hope to have the next installment up soon.

Magnificent!  Definitely added to one of my favorites. I cant wait for a sequel! So, maybe in addition to a sequel, you can do a spin off. As, I am R Wesley, I would love to read a story where your wife tangles with my wife, Christy in a hot catfight! I haven't had the availibility to write in a long time. I think Mira should come across saved stories in your computer file about Bobby's wife and set up a rules catfight. I believe Mira and Christy to be evenly matched and I am dying to witness them in a clothes-ripping, hair-pulling roll across the floor as we cheer them on!
Nicely done. It's in the vein of stories like the ones that RWesley used to do, as well as many others, but its own thing. I am looking forward to the rematch and potentially the expansion of this little universe.

Thanks! I'm a huge fan of Rwesley. As you can see I draw inspiration from his work. I fully intend to continue expanding on this and hope to have the next installment up soon.
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« Reply #7 on: October 12, 2023, 04:40:27 AM »
Just letting you all know I've posted the sequel to this story in the catfights board. Enjoy!

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Re: Mira vs Caroline
« Reply #8 on: February 09, 2024, 04:37:27 PM »
needs more clear paragraphs otherwise not bad
its a fantasy so have fun with it