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Chapter 6 Baroness and the Queen

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Chapter 6 Baroness and the Queen
« on: February 17, 2021, 03:01:46 PM »
Chapter 6 The Baroness and the Queen

Peggy wasn’t as beat up as i thought the next day, I think Joe getting ice on her face was instrumental in that one, but other than a few marks and a black and blue here and there she wasn’t really in need of a big rest, one thing was certain , getting her to wait another day to face Gretchen was going to be a new level.

I knew if we took her out the sight seeing she would be doing is for Gretchen, if they saw each other it would be a fight no doubt. We saw a few of the sights and though Peggy was enjoying the sights her eyes were were on the glare for the blonde Baroness, Peggy gave her a fight for sure, But Gretchen with her innocent smile right up to the fight started was a trap Peggy fell for, she had no idea Gretchen was ready and wiling to go all out , we all not just Peggy thought it was going to be at worse a hair fight or some sort of comparing even a nipple duel but once Gretchen set things in motion it was a street fight .

Having seen Peggy in both arranged and sudden there was always that chance or risk a fight was coming and she was mentally ready, but Gretchen lured her from prying eyes making her think it was to have an erotic style so when the fight started i think she was taken back, then again by Gretchen being so savage and willing to punch it out.


We started to head back to the hotel, for us it was a great time, but Peggy was lost in how or where to find Gretchen, with no one speaking German, to enter a bar and ask about Gretchen would be near impossible without some kind of trouble from either men or women and Peggy wanted all she had for the german Amazon.

The next day was much the same for Joe and I but Peggy wanted to be sure she was a 110% for tonight. Peggy woke around 7 that night she did her stretches and some workout a shower than had a full protein meal sent to her room, as i checked i around 8:30 she was already getting dressed, tonight she wore black heels black thigh highs thong and bra then a black kimono style robe , hair up and make up was perfect, she looked like a model, her cleavage had the bra strained as her veiny G’s were swelling in anticipation, she looked at me as she eased a long coat on, “we ready to head up?”, i smiled “yes mom Joe is getting the car to drive us”, she walked by me, “lets go then”.

I smiled my plan was going as i wanted but i still care for her and don’t want to see her hurt, i  know if we weren’t at the catfight these two had it might have gotten more vicious, and as i shut the door it hits me , it very well still might, Peggy hates to lose any fight .

The car pulls up and we all get in as Joe tells the driver to take us to the old Baronesses Castle i look at Peggy her hand is in her coat and softly massages her breasts to get them ready, her eyes stare out the window as if she is already seeing the fight that hasn’t happened yet and by the look in her eye and not even a smirk as she pinches her thick nipples, it is as if she sees this titfight not being in her favor but i know no matter what Peggy will make Gretchen sorry she took her on win or lose.

It was much chillier as we reach the castle, i felt bad for Peggy barely dressed but she didn’t seem to notice or care, we stepped from the car and told the driver we would call to be picked up, the wrought iron gate was still open and a few lights shinned from the windows above, the castle was still in Gretchen’s family but she had it made into an attraction to help keep it maintained, as we stepped into the courtyard we see a shadow stand by the window hands on hips, Peggy stared back up.

Joe pushed at the front door that were at least eight feet high and what looked like a foot thick, we step in and it was as if we stepped back in time, other than the modern lighting replacing the torches the castle and everything in it was left exactly as it was centuries ago, as we walked in you picture the German Baroness ruling and walking about  the statues of armor, weapons, and the opulence of the detail works of decor.

Peggy looked about admiring the how time seem to have stopped in the building, slowly we starts to hear the click of heels and Gretchen appears in a stone lined winding stair case, her eyes and that smile at Joe and I were so inviting but as her eyes scan to Peggy’s the bright welcome look turned frozen as did Peggy’s, both could see the lightened bruises they left on others face and marks from nails.

They inhale at the other , both ready to wait on the titfight and start tearing into each other again but they swell their busts at the other and need this first, Peggy in a hiss, “Where?”, Gretchen a sneer and hiss back, “the tower we can do this out on the top “.

Peggy knows it is chilly let alone even higher up but both know the night air will numb a lot of pain making the duel go longer, Peggy sways her hips and removes her coat, her body wearing the skimpiest sexiest black bra thong thigh highs and heels he had, “Lead the way”, Gretchen removes her coat to reveal her yellow thigh highs thong and bra and heels her hair up as she wants and is as ready as peggy for this duel, she turns and the slow click of hr heels are joined by Peggy’s.

The long walk up was adding to the tension as the two of them keep glaring at the other as if there were anymore steps the fight would start in the stairwell, but each holds back till finally Gretchen opens a heavy wood door and we step out on to a large wide cement  circle, the edges with the old style points that look outs and archers stood centuries ago, Gretchen shuts the heavy door as Peggy slowly walks to the edge and looks over , the parking lot a lot smaller now from the towers limits, she looks back at Gretchen, “thats a hell of a drop if one of us gets knocked between these”, Gretchen wearing that sexy inviting smirk again purrs to Peggy, “well we will have to agree if one of us gets ..trapped between them we pause and reset, and we will have to watch our footing , now you still want to fight Gretchen ya?”, Peggy glares, “oh very much so and more”, Gretchen glares back, “oh you want the rematch as well?, ya i agree after we go down and fight again as well”.

Gretchen stands by the door to the tower and the steps down and turns a switch on, the entire inner circle of the tower lights up, then she slowly steps to the center , Peggy seeing this is where they will titfight meets her as they stand face to face the very edge of their bra cups shaped in rounded form to their firm breasts hiss as they breath and nipples tent and rub.

They stand this way a few moments then Gretchen says, “What are we agree on for our fight?’, Peggy “No hands just my tits against yours, winner milks loser, and can smother under breasts, face sit or use hands, you?”, Gretchen feeling her covered nipples meet Peggy’s breaths in , “i agree to that but i take that bra from you as well”, Peggy smirks, “not without a fight “, Gretchen breathes in, “then we fight”.


They stand still and eyes locked they both reach back and peel off their bras, they toss them by us and as they stare at the others round firm breasts their nipples rub and despite the dislike they both feel the  arousal, softly they rub, roll and flick others nipples and you can see their stiff nipples grow and get thicker at the feeling, they slide the shafts side by side as if sawing the others as the tips dab into the swollen aureola’s and each licks her lips to not moan.

They flick with more determination now and each can see the others breasts hold firm the Peggy raises her hands to her hair and inhales, Gretchen stares and follows suit, they let nipples still flick then Gretchen presses firm into Peggy, both women inhale at the feel of others equal pair and they hold to each other, after the initial press they both start to rub their breasts into the others, “uuuhhnnn mmm ya fight my tits “, Peggy rolls and rubs back “uuunnnn mmm yes cmon fight my tits”.

Both women are a bit aroused and stunned at how full and firm the other really feels to her own, they stand frozen as they bump, rub , roll and smear their tits to the others , breathing slow but heavy and getting the erotic feeling gone so they can get more intense . as we watch the start of this duel is so evenly matched i start to think it will go he longest ever, but not soon after i see these two amazons really want to fight the others tits and win.

The slow dragging pressing starts to speed up between them, their round full breasts bulge every angle and at times Peggy then Gretchen’s seem to swallow her rivals only to reform by force of the others breasts taking control, they both Pant heavily, “Fight uuhhhh”, then Peggy tries to take control, “Cmon Bitch” she pumps her tits firmly, the Clop is firm and Gretchen gets shaken, “”uuhhh uhhhh mfff ohh you Bitch “.

Peggy felt it and a smirk as she now starts to go at the big blonde, she pulses head on the clops ring out as their flesh turns pinkish from the cold air, Peggy then bumps head on the stabs into Gretchen and drags up and down , “uuhhmmm mfff mff mf cmon bitch fight my tits”, Gretchen pants out as her hot breath is seen leaving her lips, “uuughh ughh mmff mff ohh you bitch fight “, the crisp night airs silence was broken by the warm firm Clops as their smooth round flesh collided over and over, neither of the women made any attempt to shift or dodge the others driving breasts into her own.

The smooth round veiny breasts on both recoiled then instantly reshape only to be recoiled back as they pumped together, the pink chilled skin turning back to the natural color then start to redden as they cause a jostling quake to others breasts, it wasn’t a pain as if hit or roughly squeezed , the pain was coming in the form of a deep ache from the constant contact, and rolling, there was more to come between these two but for now they just needed to cause that ache to go deeper till her rivals breasts grew more sensitive and hurt all around.

They arched almost inhaling offering their full firm round breasts to the other  as if begging for more contact, their panting breath grew hotter and more frequent, as the light steam of their breath mixed in the chilly mountain air, neither woman twists or shifts they stand face to face as this duel is already 10 minutes in and just grunts disturb the steamy hot breath flow.

Neither shows in her face any worry about the other, as they jam head on again it is Peggy that makes a change in the rhythm they had going, the clop is firm then she presses in tight and drags slow but firm into Gretchen’s breasts, Gretchen breathes in, a soft groan, “uuuhhhhh ohhhh”, Peggy hear her and now grinds in slow but with purpose, “uuuhhhh cmon bitch”.

Gretchen curls a lip and then presses to Peggy and drags up and across she stares in Peggy’s eyes as it causes Peggy to groan, “uuuuhhhh mmffff bitch”, each takes her turn then slowly a new rhythm starts as they exchange the slow dragging and grinding across each other, “uummff mmfff cmon Bitch”, Gretchen hisses, “uuuhnn mmff mfff ohhhh you bitch fight “.
 
The tight duel starts to gain speed now and the clops of flesh ring out faster as do grunts from their full lips, the duel gaining speed and intensity now, the first sign of effect they have on the other their heels slowly scrape the ground then skid on it as they try to drive the other back yet want her close to feel the effect, “cmon bitch, “uuhhh yes fight ya cmon”.

The action now gets faster the clop, then claps, then slaps of their heavy breasts collide and grind away, chests start to get red as they use shoulders to drive breasts harder, they are dead even then Gretchen suddenly is losing ground, she retreats as Peggy uses her breasts as we have sen so often, hurting her rivals and beating her, “uuhh uhh uhh uhh cmon bitch stand and fight my tits”, Gretchen staggers backward , her breasts being bounced and pulled by her rivals breasts, “mmff mff mff bitch ohh uughhh mfff get off my tits ohh”.

Gretchen her face both showing hurt and shock staggers back till her bar back thumps against the castle tower stone , as she hits it her back straightens and her broad breasts stand out and lift, Peggy steps in and delivers a quick but sold upper cut to her rivals undersides, SMACK Peggy lands it but Gretchen stays standing, “Uughhh ohhh “, Peggy not sure she realized her rival felt the move but wasn’t downed stays on her , “cmon cow fight my tits cmon!” she pumps head on and drags smears and grinds at Gretchen, i can see the bulging flesh of the blondes breasts get turned on her chest, “uuhhh uhhh ohhh you Cow uughhhh get off my tits”, Peggy grabs the top of the short wall designed for look outs and archers  and she goes after Gretchen hard smearing, grinding , dragging pumping as if no resistance at all, “yes cmon feel my tits hmm fight me cmon bitch i want more”, Gretchen her back getting scraped up  shakes her head no as her breasts are being worked over .

Gretchen is gasping her, breasts are being rolled out on her chest as Peggy uses her own like a rolling pin, up and down and pumping, I was a bit stunned how she took Peggy’s uppercut but i now realize after she landed the move , Peggy didn’t follow through instead she wanted to go at the busty blonde breast on breast head on and prove to herself and her rival she didn’t need any extreme move to beat her breasts.


Gretchen is being worked but she is fighting back hard as she can, Peggy while in control is panting hard as she can’t seem to put the blonde away, as she presses tighter to Gretchen the blonde grabs Peggy by her hips and pulls her in then arches from the stone wall and stabs her left then right then left into Peggy’s breasts “cmon Bitch you fight me ya umff umff umff “ , Peggy’s breasts get jolted from Gretchen and the clops are firmer and the clops louder, Peggy a bit stunned gets backed up and staggers as her heels scrape but her breasts being almost punched by Gretchen’s, “ohh uughh ughh mmff mff cow ohh you bitch uuhhnn uhnn “.

They twist but Gretchen is working hard to get back in the fight, Peggy is now feeling her rival and is starting to work hard to stay in this fight, “mmff mff mf ohhh ughhhh bitch damn it”, Peggy gasps as Gretchen smears and jabs a rhythm starts she forces Peggy to retreat now till her bare back hits the cement tower wall and Gretchen starts to go at her tits. Peggy hands press at the wall behind her to ease the scraping, arches and rolls her shoulders, Gretchen shoulders back plowing her tits into Peggy’s equal pair, her hot breath on the face of  Peggy, “uuhhh uhh nmmm I am going to hurt you now ya”.

Despite Gretchen getting Peggy on the wall and working at her Peggy was taking it as if the big blonde had no effect on her , she easily was fighting back, then Gretchen turned it on, bringing a rougher version of her fight to Peggy,  Gretchen thrusts head on to start her series, she takes Peggy on three times head on the clops a bit solid , both grunt at the contact, but Gretchen was timing herself to unload on the big redhead, as they gain a bit of space between their breasts Gretchen follows through with a very full left to right swing of her breasts across Peggy’s, the SMACK was solid and i saw Peggy’s firm round set quake and jostle, then before they settle to a stop Gretchen swung back the other way, SMACK rang again, the move was a slower breast boxing move but had a lot of force behind it, Peggy’s G’s were crushed into each other and jostled firmly and quaked from the aftermath carrying them across her own chest.

Peggy at first was taking the assault, her proud firm G’s were being battered but standing firm, and as Gretchen was battering them, her own were standing firm and making for a loud sold collision into Peggy’s.

Both women grunt at the impact but now as Gretchen closes in tighter to Peggy and the wall pressing at her back Peggy can’t swivel her shoulders as often or fast and the power, Gretchen sneers as she feels the returning blows slow, and tightens her chest as she now aims and delivers solid side to side impact with heavy dragging across Peggy’s breasts, she works her rival Peggy rolls her head and gulps as she pants heavy at the attack.

Gretchen her lips a sneering smile spits at Peggy, “feeling my tits ya? want to fight Gretchen hmm? come bitch where are your tits now hmm?”, Peggy is getting red in the face as her tits are turning redder with each THWACK of her rivals heavy breasts, as i watch and wonder if this blonde is about to break Peggy’s breasts the way her G’s are battered is like slow motion as i can see the flesh cave and fold around the firm G’s hitting them then crush together before being forces up and to the side only to have the blondes breasts drive in and drag them further stretching the chest tendons and muscle.

The move goes beyond the painful colliding as her chest is pulled on by the after effect, Gretchen however not feeling it at the moment is suffering , her breasts as they meet the firmer pair of Peggy’s collide together and swell up thinning her thick fleshy globes and turning red, Peggy knows though taking much more of this will hurt her and she has to get out of it but can’t use hair or these two will be in a catfight in a second.

Both are breathing heavy panting, gasping as they both want this win, Peggy feels her rival a bit more now as her breasts get both pounded into and dragged and stretched her back limited to turn allows her chest to take the weight of her rivals breasts , “uughhh ughhh Bitch!, my tits ohhh mff mff mff cxnt”, Gretchen a snarl, “come you Cow fight my tits , your nothing but talk”, Peggy in anger stabs her tits out and while it slows Gretchen’s attack she adjusts easily, “that your best bitch hmm? Gretchen will hurt you now “,  Peggy feeling the wall start to cut skin and her breasts being hurt has one card to play, she waits for Gretchen to deliver a hard hit, she didn’t wait long as Gretchen drags right then the expected left blow never comes instead Gretchen lets Peggy’s breasts settle into place then she dips and thrusts up the SMACK is sharp and Peggy tosses her head back, “AAAGhhh Bitch!!”, the upper cut was heavy and hard and knocked Peggy’s breasts up .

Peggy had the way off the wall she drops to her knees and then hip, Gretchen looking down over her own tits heaving breath, “Get up you Bitch Fight ya come stand and fight”, Peggy was hurting no doubt and the upper cut was hard her eyes welling up as she catches her breath but she was very much ready to go on she needed off the wall, as she rolls on her knees i see her back has white scrape marks but a few cuts as well, she really was getting hurt .

Gretchen was growing impatient her breasts swelled outward red and ready to fight on, Peggy’s were still in perfect shape and a bit redder and a bit more swollen, but she had to go down to avoid anymore damage to her bare back, once satisfied she was ok, Peggy stands up, and sucks in a long breath her breasts out as well, both ladies circle now and glare they both knew this exchange can very well decide the duel.

Gretchen was a bit concerned her rival stood and looked as ready as when the fight began, and she knew deep down the upper cut to her undersides earlier was not Peggy’s hardest, both make sure their hairs secure then hands go atop as they shimmy and head into each other, after nearly an hour both ladies are feeling the others firm breasts and both know the next few minutes will be a real test of ability and endurance.

They move slower as they approach, and as it first started they flick and rub stiff nipples, their eyes locked as chins tilt up in pride, “ready to end this Bitch?”, Peggy hissed at her rival, Gretchen a raised brow, “so ready Ya come fight my tits Bitch”.

They suck in then CLOP! rings out as they crush head on, they press tight and rub and roll and smear tit to tit as hard as they can, both stare then each turns her face as they push and smear and drag hard, breasts are bulging, looking ready to burst open from the tight pressure, breathing turns to grunts as they drive equally into each other, nipples become swallowed in the large veiny flesh as they use their long strong legs to push and press and attempt to drive other back while stand stabile.

Both part their lips as they feel the others true strong round weight and firmness, “uuuhhhh uummfff Bitch “, “uuhhh uughh mmff mff whore fight “, back and forth they see saw but neither is getting that big advantage to hurt the other and take over, the night sky grows darker as midnight grows near, the air chillier , the hot breathing mixing in the air above them, foreheads meet now and they have to look other in her eyes as they bump, push, drag, mash and roll breasts firmer to her rivals.

The fight goes past an hour , both are ready to drop now but the war is not yet settled and the warmth of the others breasts and body is keeping them in tight, as they grind even tighter together breasts are being shoved and ironed between chests and breasts, they smear foreheads as they grunt in others face the threat and reactions, “cmon bitch your tits are done”, Gretchen, “ohh uhhh your tits tired ya? give to my superior tits cow fight me”, Peggy gasps “uuuggggBitch” Gretchen a smirk starts to drag her tits on top of Peggy’s making her take the weight, “uuuhhhhh mmfff you Cow”, Gretchen smirks, “you feel Gretchen now  mine hurting yours i know, give now “.

Peggy leans against Gretchen it looks like she is all but done now, Gretchen rolling her tits on top of Peggy’s is smiling as she rolls her shoulders to try to punish Peggy more, Peggy stutter steps a moment , Gretchen is all over her dropping her heavy tits on Peggy’s i was getting worried this was about over then like Peggy has in her past , she lured her rival into false hope, her knees bend she dips then looks at her rival, “i am going to break your tits”, she pulls her breasts low and then shoots up hard, SMACK!!!, then again SMACKKKK!! SMACKKK!!! SMACK!!!, Gretchen the first two was in shock as she was stood up straight her tits swaying out free as she was so stunned and hurt she forgot to cover, Peggy landed one last driving uppercut, SMACK!!.

Gretchen arches in pain but before she can reset her stance Peggy starts to pump in and up and is destroying the undersides of the big blonde, driving her back and staying in her weakest area, “mmff mmfff mfff cmon Bitch fight my tits FIGHT!!!.

Gretchen has her head up and back,tears start to run from her eyes, her cheeks pink from the cold, and her breasts are now red all around, the blue veins dulled from the swelling mass, her aureolas stand firm but her nipples sink a bit.

Peggy stands her up grabbing her hips and is refusing to stop driving into the undersides, the Clops turn to claps and slaps as she stares in Gretchen’s eyes “Give Bitch say it !”, Gretchen lips trembling and pouted nods , ‘YA I GIVE MY TITS STOP STOP !!!!”.

Peggy jams her breasts one last firm drive then pushes back from Gretchen, the blonde cups her tits in her forearm and sinks to the stone floor, Peggy saunters hips extra sway, til behind her rival and straddles her back, then slaps her hands on to each breast and squeezes as hard and deep as she can, Gretchen rears her head in pain , “ohh owwww you Bitch!!” Peggy works the breasts till she milks her and stands then using her heel on the blondes ass cheek kicks forward and Gretchen lands breast first on the freezing stone soaked in her milk.

Peggy smiles as Gretchen begs for it to stop and stands hands on hips breasts out for more nipples stiff as Gretchen has t weakly stand, Peggy saunters to the robes and bras and takes both as she heads to the door Gretchen growls, “you can’t take my clothes”, Peggy turns on her heels drops everything then walks to Gretchen and jabs her tits into the blondes, “who is gonna stop me?”, Gretchen snarls, “maybe you forget i beat your ass ya?”, Peggy looks her over , “you wanna rematch ?”, Gretchen breathes heavy, “your not taking my things”, Peggy sneers and lands a open hand slap that rings out and turns Gretchen fully around, as Gretchen is stunned Peggy rams into her back and yanks the blondes head back by her hair then her claws stab into the breasts and scratch deep, Gretchen squeals as Peggy snarls, “shut that mouth Bitch”, then slams three right fists to Gretchen’s face.

Gretchen falls on her knees again as Peggy uses her hair to whip and drag the blonde across the stone ground, “cmon Bitch stop me fight me get up”, Gretchen screeches as her hair is being torn by the fistful, finally Peggy pounces on her chest and like Gretchen did swings her fists like a wind mill into the blondes face and head, the thwacks and thuds ring out as we see Peggy sitting up on her rival and pounding away.

Gretchen reaches up to punch back and even rakes her nails at Peggy’s breasts but as Peggy lands a shot to the nose Gretchen drops her arms and shakes her head no more,Peggy gets up and swaggers again to the door grabs everything again then looks back, “Guten tag Bitch”.

We call the driver and as we head back to the hotel Peggy is massaging her sore breasts but is on a high i haven’t seen in a long time, she smiles at us, “that was a great fight her tits were hard but not hard enough to beat the Queens, i wonder should i fought her for the castle?” then laughs.

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Re: Chapter 6 Baroness and the Queen
« Reply #1 on: February 17, 2021, 11:19:14 PM »
The same as previous chapter but great description of the fight in the tower. Open air combat like a gladiator
« Last Edit: February 17, 2021, 11:20:24 PM by krrishtiano »

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Re: Chapter 6 Baroness and the Queen
« Reply #2 on: February 18, 2021, 10:09:15 AM »
I like reading your stories so well, but I is Peggy really getting away and turn the tabels at the last moment everytime?
Don't take everything so seriosly does not mean you have to be unkind!

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Re: Chapter 6 Baroness and the Queen
« Reply #3 on: February 18, 2021, 10:10:11 PM »
It's a honor to have Peggy walking my home country. Lot's of descriptions are very true, just like this one "but none were as big as Peggy if they were they were no where near as firm". I wonder what would happen if Peggy would go out dressed in a dirndl, other busty german woman would titfight for all they are worth and their pride getting challenged dressed in a dirndl. A dirndl is what makes german woman show off their best assets to gain all the attention.
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Re: Chapter 6 Baroness and the Queen
« Reply #4 on: February 19, 2021, 02:27:05 PM »
I agree with previous comment when I read beer tents automatically thought in what you say, I didn't know the name is dirndl. When I see pictures of the Oktoberfest always think how sexy that attire is. As you say it would be great to see Peggy in a dirndl stealing the attention from the german women.

I also partly agree with Doreen comment "is Peggy really getting away and turn the tabels at the last moment everytime?", as you say many times Peggy is dominated and turn the tables at the last moment, but I think its realistic, that happens because Peggy's firmness is her best quality, above size, ability or experience. When Peggy fights an equal during more than an hour its her firmness what makes the difference at the end, cause they are tied in everything else. I always imagine Peggy's body like Bea Flora, who has 34G too. and when I think about a woman fighting those unbelievable breasts so firm they seem fake for more than an hour I understand they have to submit even after dominating most of the fight. If you add to that Peggy is very proud and stubborn and refuses to lose to any woman even when they are crushing her, its normal that there are many comebacks, although I agree with you it makes the story a little predictable at times.

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Re: Chapter 6 Baroness and the Queen
« Reply #5 on: February 19, 2021, 02:40:13 PM »
I need to have Peggy continue her dominance but like in her other chapters prior she has times she loses , you guys don't want me to spoil it or tell you when and where and against who do you?, lol trust me she maybe be fit and full and firm but she is meeting a more stronger array of rivals now wink wink just gotta stay tuned

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Re: Chapter 6 Baroness and the Queen
« Reply #6 on: February 19, 2021, 06:01:14 PM »
Why does anyone think anything will change? It's been 5 years and dozens of stories about Peggy, and they're all basically the same. It's a formula that obviously works for several people, so DottiD would be crazy to change it up.

1. Peggy's new rival gets introduced.
2. Peggy gets goaded/goads the rival into a fight.
3. Peggy's rival gets the upper hand and it looks like Peggy might lose (sometimes she even loses the first fight).
4. Peggy makes a miraculous comeback and suddenly dominates the other woman no matter what has happened up to that point - she's the 1980s Hulk Hogan of tits.

That's it. Every single time, that's it. Every story gets 8-10 likes or more, plus a few comments, so she keeps doing what's working. Her earlier stories were much better in my eyes, and were written with proper spelling and punctuation, but they didn't prove to be as popular so she's got no reason to even try to anything else.

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Re: Chapter 6 Baroness and the Queen
« Reply #7 on: February 19, 2021, 06:08:29 PM »
Why does anyone think anything will change? It's been 5 years and dozens of stories about Peggy, and they're all basically the same. It's a formula that obviously works for several people, so DottiD would be crazy to change it up.

1. Peggy's new rival gets introduced.
2. Peggy gets goaded/goads the rival into a fight.
3. Peggy's rival gets the upper hand and it looks like Peggy might lose (sometimes she even loses the first fight).
4. Peggy makes a miraculous comeback and suddenly dominates the other woman no matter what has happened up to that point - she's the 1980s Hulk Hogan of tits.

That's it. Every single time, that's it. Every story gets 8-10 likes or more, plus a few comments, so she keeps doing what's working. Her earlier stories were much better in my eyes, and were written with proper spelling and punctuation, but they didn't prove to be as popular so she's got no reason to even try to anything else.

Yet you still read the stories. Go back under your bridge troll. If you know it so well, then don't read it, plain and simple. Everyone has their own pattern of writing, yet you want to complain about it.

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Re: Chapter 6 Baroness and the Queen
« Reply #8 on: February 19, 2021, 07:04:33 PM »
Let me first say my previous stories especially those before we all moved to IRC were varied between cat,sex,fist,tit,hair and others simply because there was no one spot for any story so it didn't matter to post a story , here we are divided into Cat, sex and titfight, and other styles in sub categories , so i am posting my stories now based on the category i know best.

 Yes the Peggy series does work any one can see that but try to keep in mind I get personal requests to keep this series going, I was technically done with it after small town but i had several messages to the tune of ,Peggy's losses, Peggy when younger, Peggy and Gina again and so on, why would tell people who enjoy hat i do No? makes no sense if i like writing and they like reading it I let them read it. as far as views or comments go, this place has and always will be a popularity contest , which is why i NEVER do poll fights its all who your friends are and support you, Aaron has an obvious issue with me for what ever reason, maybe he was denied to much candy as child I don't know but he is entitled to his opinion, and i accept not everyone is going to like my stories, or the basis of them, Aaron before you do comment take everything into consideration, let me narrow it down better, while i have posted fistfights mixed in my titfight story as well as sex fights, hair fights and more the TITLE is SEXFIGHT AND TITFIGHT so that is what you will read from me, also there is only one real way a proper titfight takes place , and i am trying my hardest to not only tell that side of it but make a reader feel as if they are either in the fight or watching it, so yes the formula sticks to any scenario or character, as far as Peggy goes as a character she is the hero in the series the champ, thee queen of fighters, every time you watch Mike Tyson does it vary? NO every fight in under a round he destroys someone the few times he was rocked what happened he came back to win, sound familiar?.  As far as errors in my writing i will be the first to say I mess up constantly, my bad and i own that, but as a mom of 2 boys one a diabetic, working from home, cleaning my home taking care of two dogs and my husband i don't really have the time to write and reread every line or section to correct it and for that i am sorry. Also my writing style i am sure is not like any one else i get an idea i see it i use my experiences from it and i start typing way so i don't lose the groove and flow, at times i bang out 4 chapters other times i get 2 paragraphs done, just how i roll . one last thing take a moment to realize some mistakes i write? are slang or phrases that no spell check gets so if i don't a\make the thing i wrote stay it will self spell it or red line it as not a word or term, also when i type things like PRESSSSSSSSSSSSS it is to emphasis how long and hard the motion is , maybe i am wrong but i think "they press their breasts together " , is less effective then Thy PRESSSSSSSS their breasts together", if you prefer the first you like boring non action stories and that is not me. I have been trying to do better on my mistakes but when life comes up i could care less about what comma i left out, i do this for me and those who enjoy reading it, if and when  I decide to get more serious i plan to have all my stuff posted on amazon which will auto correct everything before publishing , but then you have to pay to read them, and i am not looking to be that type, so if you like my stuff great nd thank you, if you don't? then don't read it i lose no sleep over it trust me.

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Re: Chapter 6 Baroness and the Queen
« Reply #9 on: February 19, 2021, 07:41:32 PM »
Why does anyone think anything will change? It's been 5 years and dozens of stories about Peggy, and they're all basically the same. It's a formula that obviously works for several people, so DottiD would be crazy to change it up.

1. Peggy's new rival gets introduced.
2. Peggy gets goaded/goads the rival into a fight.
3. Peggy's rival gets the upper hand and it looks like Peggy might lose (sometimes she even loses the first fight).
4. Peggy makes a miraculous comeback and suddenly dominates the other woman no matter what has happened up to that point - she's the 1980s Hulk Hogan of tits.

That's it. Every single time, that's it. Every story gets 8-10 likes or more, plus a few comments, so she keeps doing what's working. Her earlier stories were much better in my eyes, and were written with proper spelling and punctuation, but they didn't prove to be as popular so she's got no reason to even try to anything else.

WTF is your problem? This is Dottis style. If you dont like it, write better stories or dont read Dottis. LOL... You are a joke dude.

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Re: Chapter 6 Baroness and the Queen
« Reply #10 on: February 20, 2021, 12:44:00 AM »
I do want to thank all of you who enjoy the stories and the series, and having my back it is more appreciated than you all know,  for those who do not like them well can't please all the people all the time look for a new chapter soon  either Saturday or Sunday

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Re: Chapter 6 Baroness and the Queen
« Reply #11 on: February 20, 2021, 03:00:22 AM »
Great story AND stories DottiD.  Thank you so much for sharing them with us members and to help make this site as it is.  Thank you again very very much DottiD