ILLUSTRATED: Punching Bag ~ Body Builder -vs- Ballerina

Started by DebbieDoes2, October 28, 2018, 05:33:55 PM

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DebbieDoes2

I just finished this story this morning. If you're into one sided domination fights, you might enjoy this.....







Knicks

Like the story but hard to read with the pictures. Is there another website to read on or one without pictures.

DebbieDoes2

#5
Really?  ???

sig

Congratulations for a great story. The illustrations really added to it. Hope this is the first of many.

DebbieDoes2

Quote from: sig on October 28, 2018, 09:00:41 PM
Congratulations for a great story. The illustrations really added to it. Hope this is the first of many.

Thank you, Sig   :)

krispin

Fantastic story and great illustrations!
Poor girl, you are so frail an weak aganist a so larger stronger rival.
Please, more of that!

Maizenblue

Quote from: DebbieDoes2 on October 28, 2018, 06:03:22 PM
Really?  ???

Yes. Not sure why. Tried on my iPhone and only saw part of the story. Had to slide right and left to read. The iPad was better holding sideways. Not sure if it is just me and if so will try to fix it.

griffin

Terrific story, and the illustrations were great! Hope to read more like this.

krispin

Quote from: Maizenblue on October 29, 2018, 01:58:50 AM
Quote from: DebbieDoes2 on October 28, 2018, 06:03:22 PM
Really?  ???

Yes. Not sure why. Tried on my iPhone and only saw part of the story. Had to slide right and left to read. The iPad was better holding sideways. Not sure if it is just me and if so will try to fix it.

Same problem !

Drake

Wow! What a great story! Love the illustration and hope to see more stories like this from Debbie, who might soon become my favorite new jobber...

About the viewing problem, she used large images (which is good), but if you just zoom out on your browser the problem goes away. I don't use an Ipad, but I'm guessing it has an option for zooming out?

Thanks for the story Debbie! More, more, more!

Cheers, Drake

DebbieDoes2

I'll try to make the images a little smaller if that fixes the problem  :P

mille