Roommate’s Secret

[tommyfighter]

Very good. Reminds me of times I have had with friends.

[Rambler0428]

not finished reading yet, but have to say now: HANDS DOWN. THIS IS A MASTERPIECE. THIS IS CATFIGHTING AT ITS CUTEST. I LOVE IT!

Catfighting at its cutest is a new one but I LOVE that description! xD I do absolutely love and prefer to write scenarios where the characters aren't at each other over some vendetta, but are generally friendly toward one another.  That said, I do enjoy writing a good grudge fight every now and then too!

Thank you and everyone else for the kind words!!

[Alix_Fights]

What a great and amazing story!  Thanks so much for sharing it with us.     

[Phoenix_Falcone]

What a wonderfully written story.  A simple premise.  Very believable.  I definitely liked how you ended it too.  It could have gone a few ways, but I think you went down a really satisfying route.

Thanks very much for writing and sharing this with us.  Well done!

[Rambler0428]

Y'all are all too kind!  It probably isn't perfect as far as grammar or punctuation because I don't heavily edit this kind of stuff before posting it.  It's usually just the first draft I put up on fan story sites.  But at least y'all know I don't let AI within 50 miles of my work. xD

[Edududu]

Echoing what everyone else has said, I really enjoyed your story. For a first story it's truly oustanding, nailing right away an intresting and refreshing dynamic between the combatants.

Will be looking foward to whatever you end up writing next!

[Violet Rae]

Y'all are all too kind!  It probably isn't perfect as far as grammar or punctuation because I don't heavily edit this kind of stuff before posting it.  It's usually just the first draft I put up on fan story sites.  But at least y'all know I don't let AI within 50 miles of my work. xD

BASED!!! so happy to know I like a writer who doesn't use ai slop, though I was already super sure of that just from reading this story!

[Rambler0428]

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Y'all are all too kind!  It probably isn't perfect as far as grammar or punctuation because I don't heavily edit this kind of stuff before posting it.  It's usually just the first draft I put up on fan story sites.  But at least y'all know I don't let AI within 50 miles of my work. xD

BASED!!! so happy to know I like a writer who doesn't use ai slop, though I was already super sure of that just from reading this story!

Y'all are all too kind!  It probably isn't perfect as far as grammar or punctuation because I don't heavily edit this kind of stuff before posting it.  It's usually just the first draft I put up on fan story sites.  But at least y'all know I don't let AI within 50 miles of my work. xD

BASED!!! so happy to know I like a writer who doesn't use ai slop, though I was already super sure of that just from reading this story!

Look, it might be a hot take, but I do not and will not ever praise any writer who uses AI to write their stories.  They ALWAYS suck, and have so many cringe worthy problems, and always, ALWAYS lack any kind of soul to them.

[Horny-Jew]

Excellent story. Got me sexually aroused. Thanks for not making it too, too violent.

[Jessi the Country Cougar]

I think I have found one of my new absolute favorite stories on this site.   I hope that this isn't the last we'll see of these two, either in a rematch or branching out to draw in more of their friends and associates.

[Violet Rae]

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Y'all are all too kind!  It probably isn't perfect as far as grammar or punctuation because I don't heavily edit this kind of stuff before posting it.  It's usually just the first draft I put up on fan story sites.  But at least y'all know I don't let AI within 50 miles of my work. xD

BASED!!! so happy to know I like a writer who doesn't use ai slop, though I was already super sure of that just from reading this story!

Y'all are all too kind!  It probably isn't perfect as far as grammar or punctuation because I don't heavily edit this kind of stuff before posting it.  It's usually just the first draft I put up on fan story sites.  But at least y'all know I don't let AI within 50 miles of my work. xD

BASED!!! so happy to know I like a writer who doesn't use ai slop, though I was already super sure of that just from reading this story!

Look, it might be a hot take, but I do not and will not ever praise any writer who uses AI to write their stories.  They ALWAYS suck, and have so many cringe worthy problems, and always, ALWAYS lack any kind of soul to them.

MY FUCKING MAN!!! YOU ARE MY NEW GOAT HERE! <3

[Bondage_Queen]

Fantastic writing and story!  Thanks for sharing!

[Rambler0428]

I think I have found one of my new absolute favorite stories on this site.   I hope that this isn't the last we'll see of these two, either in a rematch or branching out to draw in more of their friends and associates.

I'm currently still undecided on if this needs to become a multiple story series!  But you'll certainly know if I do!

[tommyfighter]

It would be a great series.

[Rambler0428]

It would be a great series.

Should I choose to do that, what would be the better course of action for an immediate sequel?  A rematch?  Introducing a new character/fighter?  Changing up the dynamic a little?  All questions I'd like to figure out, because I know for me, the first sequel is absolutely what makes or breaks a series.

[Rambler0428]