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Started by dementedpaki, September 08, 2026, 09:43:12 PM

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dementedpaki

So, I have been away from the keyboard for a little while because of some personal familial issues. And I am thinking of writing what I have witnessed this last week. Yes, I know it will be a huge jump from the previous story. The suggestion or opinion is about whether I should write it or not. It would probably be a 4 part story if I limit the emotional side, but the main issue is that one part is fight, two parts inc*st/lesbian inc*st and two of those will be straight/male female coupling. This is a catfight site, so I want to make sure I do not get banned. The floor is open. Please advice.
Demented Paki

suffolkwrestling

Do not pass go! Do not collect $200.00!  Get you ass in the chair and start typing! Now! I have enjoyed every one of your prior stories and patiently await new seeing more.

dementedpaki

Quote from: suffolkwrestling on September 09, 2026, 07:41:02 PMDo not pass go! Do not collect $200.00!  Get you ass in the chair and start typing! Now! I have enjoyed every one of your prior stories and patiently await new seeing more.

I know what you mean, I am talking to my wife about it as well. Depending on the messages I have received, we are debating if we should keep the emotional and inc*st part out completely and just present the fight part. Will update soon.
Demented Paki

suffolkwrestling

Honestly the family factors in your fight are really buried within the over all text.  The family stuff is not something I'm into but you structure your writing so that is is more akin to salt and pepper, as opposed to the meat of the story.  Your stories would be just as good with out that element as they are with it.

HumanPerson

Where's the story? Why is this in a story section instead of general discussion or requests?

dementedpaki

Quote from: HumanPerson on September 12, 2026, 01:54:52 AMWhere's the story? Why is this in a story section instead of general discussion or requests?

apologies, I wrote the message in a hurry and tad too much excitement after i saw what i saw. I will be more careful in the future.
Demented Paki

Rocko23


dementedpaki

Quote from: Rocko23 on September 13, 2026, 02:59:00 AMWrite it all please!

Already in the middle of it, I will post something else in the mean time.
Demented Paki

momcf

Your stories are too good, and when I imagine Mom as if like my mom, I always get an erection. I admire family women fighting. I have always admired other families' women as well as my family's women in competition; I have always seen women in competition, as it gives men a pleasure to erect, and I have always seen them fighting, whether it is verbal or physical. Being a man, it's normal to see that there is a combat or titfight or sexfight, and it's normal to give us as how we are better products of these women when they win a fight.

dementedpaki

Posted the first part, enjoy.
Demented Paki

finglock

Make sure you do a long prefight, you are very good at that too.

dementedpaki

Quote from: finglock on September 15, 2026, 12:21:55 AMMake sure you do a long prefight, you are very good at that too.

Hahaha, my wife says the same thing. She wants me to add everything I see into it. So, I will be doing that too. and spoilers, this fight was between my wife and my mom.
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