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Passionate Hatred Part 4

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Offline Marie B.

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Re: Passionate Hatred Part 4
« Reply #15 on: September 30, 2010, 05:22:34 PM »
As for little Mawee Bee, I hope she remembers I still have one more round to kick her ass some more.  So she should probably be careful with that dildo.

Kayla, thanx for not using the black, bubble blowing monstrosity!

It ain't over 'til the bitch in a family way screams for mercy, Joni.

Prepare for your own, personal Armageddon. Your limey friend, too.



--Little Mawee Bee

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Re: Passionate Hatred Part 4
« Reply #16 on: September 30, 2010, 09:41:13 PM »
Hey Marie,  just curious....in all your fights, have you ever had your butt kicked by a new mommy?

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The bitch is in her smile.
The lie is on her lips,
Such an evil child.

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Re: Passionate Hatred Part 4
« Reply #17 on: September 30, 2010, 11:58:05 PM »
I've had my butt kicked by everybody.

But hey, after your personal Labor Day, something can always be arranged. ;)



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Re: Passionate Hatred Part 4
« Reply #18 on: October 01, 2010, 12:40:54 AM »
Wow... I haven't read this much feedback for a story I've done here in a long time. I'm humbled and honored to have been a part of something so well structured and fun and I'm very happy that you all enjoyed my end of the story; with the previous parts being written by two of most outstanding writers the genre has seen and one other writer who's my personal favorite, my part had a lot to live up to. There was a line that I forgot to put in the story. It would've come after the match.

Kayla- Wow, Marie; how'd you think to use a leg full nelson on Gemma?

Marie- Oh, I was on the General Discussion About Catfights Board in the Submission Holds thread and Gemma posted a comment describing the hold. I figured why not beat her with it hahahahaha.

I might put it in on the version I have saved to my laptop. Like I said, it was an honor doing this and "working with Marie" again. And I don't know if anyone noticed; every chapter's subtitle is an Elton John song. Marie quoted his song "Island Girl" in the last chapter and since this was from her point of view, I decided to go in that direction as well as put in a bunch of inside jokes and playful jabs. You guys be breezy! :)
"When people walk away from you... let them go. Your destiny is never tied to anyone who leaves you... and it doesn't mean they are bad people. It just means that their part in your story is over."

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Re: Passionate Hatred Part 4
« Reply #19 on: October 01, 2010, 01:50:00 AM »
DUDE!!!!!! Beaten with my own experiances!!! that's SOOO harsh!!! LOL

Your uppence will come good sir! This girl swears it!

x G x

PS. That was so funny!!!... but you're still gonna pay...
I'm paranoid and needy. So I think people are talking about me, but not as much as I'd like.

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Re: Passionate Hatred Part 4
« Reply #20 on: October 01, 2010, 02:54:44 AM »
yeah Gemma, I'm pretty sure I will at some point. But it wouldn't be the first time Too Sexxxy faced a short, overrated, wannabe submissions fighter who was turned off by his fetish  :P

Oh and to Jonica, congratulations on the birth of your child. I wish you, your man, and the baby nothing but happiness and peace in life. Having a child can very easily make you humble because you realize what's truly important and you learn to let so many things go and embrace the love that is pouring out of that little extension and eternal living symbol of two people's love for each other perfectly united in the body and mind of a baby.  :)
"When people walk away from you... let them go. Your destiny is never tied to anyone who leaves you... and it doesn't mean they are bad people. It just means that their part in your story is over."

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Re: Passionate Hatred Part 4
« Reply #21 on: October 01, 2010, 03:20:49 PM »
I've had my butt kicked by everybody.

But hey, after your personal Labor Day, something can always be arranged. ;)



Marie

He weighed 6 lbs 8 ozs and was 20 inches long.  He's a little over six days old. 

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Be careful what you wish for.  Grrr.....

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Re: Passionate Hatred Part 4
« Reply #22 on: October 01, 2010, 11:21:24 PM »
thanks Hawk! I was always a fan of that song from the Transformers, but when I saw Dirk Diggler singing it in "Boogie Nights," I cracked up hard. In another one of my stories posted somewhere else, I created an assassin named Melody, who spoke in song lyrics; I just let Too Sexy do that, since there have been so many different interpretations of that character. Marie B. has done a different interpretation of him every time she's used him lol. I hope everyone is having a great day!
"When people walk away from you... let them go. Your destiny is never tied to anyone who leaves you... and it doesn't mean they are bad people. It just means that their part in your story is over."

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Re: Passionate Hatred Part 4
« Reply #23 on: October 03, 2010, 02:30:00 AM »

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Jonica walks to her lockerroom and I see Gemma follow. Jessika tells Joe and Hawksmoor that she needs to talk to Jonica and Gemma and Too Sexy approaches Kayla and I.

“I knew right from the beginning, that you would end up winning,” he said smiling

“Okay,” I respond, giving him a bit of a smile, “I might consider giving you a two line response this time… and maybe one emoticon. I‘m warming back up; just give me time. Happy Early Birthday too.”

I've had my butt kicked by everybody.

But hey, after your personal Labor Day, something can always be arranged. ;)



Marie

Wait... she did it... that's two lines and an emoticon and while it isn't directed at me.... scooooooooooooooooore ;D
"When people walk away from you... let them go. Your destiny is never tied to anyone who leaves you... and it doesn't mean they are bad people. It just means that their part in your story is over."