Feed back please.  How do you like this NOIR look?
Story line is for a RenPy interactive video type game story.
Starts off boyfriend get's serviced by his stripper girl friend, but while
they are getting it on, a hooker walks up and starts to challenge the 
girl friend, accusing her of working her turf ... well Sweater Girl [as she is known does a sexy sweater
girl dress routine on stage.]
does not back down easily, and before she can finish servicing YOU [POV catfight, you play the bouncer boyfriend]
she gets tangled up into a classic rolling street catfight with the older hooker. 
Sweater Girl is around 25 and the Hooker "Michelle Nipples" is 33.  Both around 5 foot 1 inch and 110 pounds 
enjoy and please reply on NOIR question 
 
 Also these are just test renders, not the best light or poses