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My first ever story attempt - Part 1 - He picked me

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My first ever story attempt - Part 1 - He picked me
« on: September 08, 2023, 12:29:25 AM »
As the subject suggests, this is my first attempt at a story on here, or really anywhere. I realise it's not a polished masterpiece but beggars/choosers and all that. I did use an AI assist but I'd estimate over 90% was typed myself. Thoughts welcome, I'll continue if there's an appetite for it on here

Lily and Beth had been competing with each other for weeks now, and it was all over the affections of David. It started subtly at first, Lily would give him a smile, Beth would flash him a cheeky wink. Lily might raise a suggestive eyebrow, Beth would flick her hair. This steadily escalated with the girl's attempts at seduction becoming evermore brazen. Lily would pretend to accidentally drop a pen in front of David's desk so she could bend over in front of him and wiggle her pert ass. Beth would reach over David to get to some papers and flash him her ample cleavage. David was loving the girl’s attention, and the girls were becoming more and more jealous of each other by the day.
Over time, they upped the ante even further. Beth might sit on his lap, Lily would rest her legs on him. Beth would dissapear with him into the supply closet for an hour, Lily would take him into the staff room for two hours. Each girl would leave her mark on him - lipstick on his collar, the smell of perfume, scratch marks on his back and even bite marks on his chest. Both Beth and Lily were leaving clear signs of their amorous activity for her rival to discover.
One night both Lily and Beth were working late, with nobody else in the office. The tension was palpable, both girls regarded each other with disdain, silently giving each other side eye and judging the appearance of their rival. Beth was the first to speak, "You know you're outmatched, right?"
"Outmatched by who honey? Certainly not by you." Lily replied. Beth stood up "Listen to me, you little bitch. David is mine, you may have been a fun little distraction for him between our lovemaking, but he will certainly pick me over you."
Lily also rose to her feet, feeling her temper rise, "He has already picked me. He has picked my better legs, my superior ass and my amazing skills with his cock." Beth immediately replied, "Never, he has picked me with my bigger, perkier breasts, my tighter pussy and I can handle his cock better than you can even dream of." Lily faked laughter, "When I've finished showing you who's really the hot bitch around here, I might even let you watch me fuck him, you could use the help from what I hear!"
"You think you're the top bitch here?! How do you plan on proving that?! I'd love you to try it!" Beth challenged.
Lily turned to face her rival, "I don't need to prove anything, I'm already the best!" Beth stepped forward and grabbed Lily by the throat, "Prove it! Prove you're the best!"
She pushed Lily against the wall, "Prove it right now!" Lily struggled to break free, but Beth's strength was too much. She squeezed harder, "Prove it, or I'll rip your tits off!"
Lily was about to scream for help, to beg Beth to stop, to cry for mercy, but she managed to stop herself. she would not be beaten like this. She was the better woman here, and she know how she would prove it. She pulled Beth in closer to her, and pressed her lips against Beth's in a kiss. Beth was shocked at first her eyes widening and staring into Lily's as their mouths were pressed together, then Lily's silky tongue entered Beth's mouth and the dynamic of their conflict changed. They would compete with their sexual talents.
Their lips parted, their tongues intertwined, their bodies moved against one another. Beth's hands went to Lily's firm ass and began kneading them.
Lily's hand found Beth's breast and began fondling it through her shirt. Lily moaned into Beth's mouth, "This is how I plan to prove it." "A perfect way to beat you." Beth whispered back.
Their hands roamed each other's bodies, tearing clothing away as they went, until they were both completely nude with their tongues still exploring each other's mouths and their hands caressing every inch of their rival's body.
Beth broke the kiss, "Let's see if you can handle this." She took hold of Lily's wrists and pinned them above her head against the wall.
Beth leaned in close, "I bet you can't take this." She gave Lily a sharp slap across the face. Lily gasped and Beth continued, "I bet you can't handle this." Another slap, this time harder.
Lily cried out, "I can handle this!" Beth laughed and slapped Lily again, even harder this time, "I bet you can't handle this." Lily tried to respond, but Beth put her hand over Lily's mouth.
Their eye's locked, and Lily's eyes said it for her, she believed she could handle anything Beth threw at her. Lily wriggled her arms free and was able to deliver a slap to Beth, followed by a second, and then a third. Beth fell to the floor, clutching her cheek, tears in her eyes, but fire behind them. The girls were only just getting started.

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Offline JT Edson

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Re: My first ever story attempt - Part 1 - He picked me
« Reply #1 on: September 08, 2023, 01:50:36 PM »
Great story so far! Really hot and sexy.  I can hardly wait for the next part.

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Re: My first ever story attempt - Part 1 - He picked me
« Reply #2 on: September 09, 2023, 11:05:29 AM »
Part 2

Beth rose and the girls slowly approached each other in the centre of the room, electricity firing between their eyes. Lily brought her hands up, not to hurt Beth yet, but in a clear challenge to a test of strength. Beth accepted, and interlaced her fingers with Lily on both hands, and stretching her arms out straight from her sides, which brought the girls bodies into each other. Their bodies lined up almost pefecttly. Their legs were long and shapely, their pussies pressed together, practically screaming in anticipation to devour one another, their flat, toned stomachs lined up. Their breasts looked evenly matched, if anything Beth's may have been just slightly larger, with slightly larger than average pink nipples. Lily had slightly smaller brown nipples. Their faces also lined up, they were nose to nose, their lips lightly touching and their eyes, mere centimetres away from one another, continuing their glare. Even their hair was similar, long flowing blonde locks, with Lily's being just slightly darker in tone than Beth's.

Lily was the first to speak, directly into Beth's mouth no less, "Can you feel it now? Can you feel your pussy quivering in fear when opposed with mine? Your nipples shying away from mine? You're just a cheap imitation, I'm better for him in every way." Beth's lip curled into a snarl, it looked like she was about to respond, when she spat into Lily's face, their faces being so close that spittle flew out in all directions from their faces. Lily was shocked for a moment, but used Beth's insult to build her rage, as she reared back and then slammed her tits into Beth's with force. Beth responded in kind as the women reared back in sequence the second time and slammed them together again in unison, then a third time, and a fourth, building up a rhythm of torment for one other.

Each time the girls slammed into each other, their breasts rubbed against each other, their nipples rubbing against each other, and their clits grinding against each other, causing the two to moan in pleasure, pain, anger, and arousal. Both girls were dripping wet by now, their juices running down their thighs. The girls continued to slam into each other, the sound of flesh meeting flesh, the smell of sex permeating the air, the heat building between them.

They were both panting hard, sweat pouring off their bodies, their breathing becoming laboured. They were both gasping for breath, and their chests heaved up and down, their breasts bouncing with each thrust. The longer this slamming continued though, the more it seemed to favour Beth, and her slightly larger breasts, Lily was fighting valiantly and keeping up, but her breasts were starting to lose the battle, she needed to change the dynamic.

Beth's eyes were closed tightly, she was biting her bottom lip, her face contorted in an expression of pure lust. Lily took the opportunity and pulled Beth in close, holding her there and whispered. "You see that puddle beneath us? Our pussies want a turn. Mine is going to eat yours alive!" Beth was angry, "My tits are beating yours, I'll keep grinding you down with them!". "You're scared of matching your pussy against mine, you know it stands no chance." Lily goaded. Beth couldn't back down, she knew Lily was trying to end the tit war because she was losing, but she couldn't show weaknesses. "On the desk, scissor me you filthy whore, I'll show you who needs to be scared." Beth swept aside the contents of the desk, sending papers, computer equipment, and stationery flying in all directions.

Lily followed suit, and the two girls sat on the desk facing each other, legs spread wide, pussy lips touching. Their pussies were glistening with moisture, and they were both breathing heavily. Beth started to grind her pussy against Lily's, and Lily responded in kind. This went on for several minutes at a slow teasing pace, before they started to pick up the pace. Both women started to moan, partly from the pleasure and partly to tease their opponent closer to the edge.

"I could do this all day, I feel I'm being like being fucked by a virgin. Surely you never really though David would pick you over me?" Lily chided. "You're doing doing an awful lot of panting and moaning to say you're not into it, you'll be laid beneath me in a pool of your own juices soon enough." Beth threatened. "You're a joke, Beth. You're nothing compared to me". "My pussy is going to eat yours alive, Lily".

Both girls picked up the pace of their grinding, their clits now perfectly lined up in contact with one another, their moaning turning into screams as they pushed each other closer and closer to the edge, determined to send the other over the edge first. Lily's hands grabbed onto Beth's hips, and she started to buck her hips against Beth's, pushing her pussy harder against Beth's. Beth's fingers dug deep into Lily's hips, pulling her in tight, and started to kiss and nuzzle Lily's neck as the pace of their grinding never slowed.

Lily let out a scream of passion, and Beth bit down hard on her neck, causing her to scream even louder. Lily's pussy exploded, flooding Beth's pussy with cum, and Beth screamed in ecstasy as her orgasm hit her, her body shaking violently as she came. She collapsed on top of Lily, her pussy still pulsing and throbbing, as her pussy juices poured out around her. Lily lay underneath her, exhausted, and Beth rolled off her, landing on the floor next to her.

They rested for a while neither really knowing how long, until they both started to stir. Lily, still on the desk, looked down at Beth who was now on the floor. Many women may have come to an understanding or shown some sort of respect or compassion to one another after such an intense orgasm together, but based on their continued look of disdain, this would not be the case with Beth and Lily. "Is that all you can do? I'm going to finish you, then I'm going to fuck David on top of your pitiful, defeated body." Beth hissed. Lily did not respond with words, taking the opportunity to return an earlier sleight from Beth, spitting in her face. As the spittle ran down her face and dripped from her chin onto her breasts, Beth slowly rose to her feet.
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Re: My first ever story attempt - Part 1 - He picked me
« Reply #3 on: September 09, 2023, 01:12:02 PM »
I like this story a lot!

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Re: My first ever story attempt - Part 1 - He picked me
« Reply #4 on: September 10, 2023, 12:51:01 PM »
Part 3
Lily was expecting an attack, some sort of lunge, a slap, maybe a fist or a kick. She leapt to her feet ready to defend herself, but Beth turned in the opposite direction and began to slowly walk away. Lily was in shock, she was certain Beth was about to retaliate, to may her pay for the disrespect of spitting at her, but instead she had not even bothered to wipe her face, just turning and walking away. "Is that it then, you're finished?" There was no response from Beth, who continued to walk away. Lily started to follow her through the office, "You worthless loser, I knew you couldn't match up to me, my pussy proved its place above yours, and I have cemented myself at David's side. You don't even have the courage to look at me." Beth was still yet to respond, but had now stopped at her own desk and sank to her knees, rummaging around  in a drawer for something. Lily was standing a few meters away, continuing to gloat, "I'll call David now, he'll love to hear all about how I bested you, how we fucked and how I came out the better. It will keep him hard for hours." Beth now rose, placing something behind her back as she approached Lily, who hadn't even noticed her retrieve something from the drawer. "So now you can look at me, it's too late Beth, you're beaten, get back down on your knees like the skank you aruuughhhhh." Lily's gloating was interrupted as Beth struck her hard across the face with an object that made a meaty *SLAP* across her cheek, sending her tumbling to the floor. Lily looked up to see Beth clutching the largest double-ended dildo she had ever seen. Beth seemed taller now and she was filled with rage following Lily's words, "You've proved nothing, you've won nothing, we drew before, now I'm going to remove any doubt and put you in your place, you better hold on tight, you thirsty cxnt."

"You want to fuck me, with that?" Lily stammered, intimidated by it's size. Beth spat back "No, you stupid cum dumpster, I want to fucking destroy you with this." Get on your knees, we'll start ass to ass." Lily hesitated for only a second, before turning away from Beth and presenting her pussy to her opponent. Neither woman could back out of any challenge laid down by the other at this point, to do soe would mean admitting the other woman her better and losing David forever.

Beth walked towards Lily, her eyes fixed on the pink lips of Lily's pussy, and she felt a wave of hatred run through her as she saw them spread open, revealing the pink flesh inside. There was no need for any additional lubrication, as both girls were wetter than they had ever been, but Beth still spat on Lily's pussy before manouvering herself into a similar position until their pussy's and asses were facing each other. Inserting the dildo into them both was a challenge in itself, in temporary pause to hostilities the girls worked together to insert the dildo into both of their pussies, ensuring they both had a good grasp on the instrument, as they slowly began to pump their bodies back and forth into one another.

Any tiredness from their earlier battle was irrelevant now as their hatred and desire for each other fueled them, alongside their need to be the winner. The girls picked up the pace, pushing each other's limits. The dildo must have been 20 inches long, and there wasn't much space between their pussies, so between them Lily and Beth had at least 18 inches inside of them, more than either woman had ever had before. They started to scream in a mixture of pain and pleasure, trying all the time to get the best grip in order to force more of the dildo into the other woman.

The dildo became slick with their juices, as they dripped onto the floor beneath them. The sounds of their moans and screams filled the room, as they continued to thrust against each other, desperate to win. Beth was the first to start to feel that unrecognisable wave build within her as she approached orgasm, Lily heard Beth's screams becoming more frantic so seized her opportunity and clamped down as hard as she could on the dildo with the pussy, ramming it ever deeper into Beth with as much force as she could muster. Beth went off, cumming more intensely than she had ever done before, underneath her most hated enemy. Lily continued to pound the dildo into Beth, and with every thrust she could feel herself building towards her own climax.

Instead of enjoying Beth's submission, which Lily had expected with how intensely Beth had just screamed her orgasm, she felt her grip on the dildo slipping. Rather than submitting completely, Beth started to regain her senses and was taking back a measure of control. "How? How are you still going?" Lily stammered. "I've got more than one orgasm in me, this is a marathon you little whore and I will be the last one thrusting." Beth promised. In a moment of doubt, Lily started to lose her grip allowing Beth to clamp down on the dildo and thrust almost its entire length into Lily, causing her to go off just as intensely as Beth just had as she screamed her way through a powerful orgasm.

After coming back down from her orgasm, Lily had another sordid idea. "OK, our pussies have been pretty evenly matched so far, but I'd love to see how you ass holds up against mine." "I'd love nothing more than to humilate your pale ass with mine" Beth replied. The girls again reached behind them and removed the dildo from their pussies, slowly inserting its length into their asses, very very slowly bumping towards each other, sending shockwaves through their entire bodies as they each forced the dildo into their hated rival's ass.

As they pushed the dildo into each other, Lily and Beth started to moan loudly, as the sensation of having something so large inside their asses was overwhelming. Each girl knew that, as uncomfortable as 10 inches of dildo in her ass was, it was just as bad for the other woman, and that was enough to drive them to continue. They picked up the pace and started to pump furiously, their asses meeting with each thrust creating a loud *SLAP* each time they met, causing their ass cheeks to turn red as they continuously slapped into one another.

Tears started to form in both of their eyes, but they were both determined to keep thrusting until she forced her opponent to beg for mercy. Beth and Lily both started to openly weep at the pain they were causing each other, but their sobs only served to encourage the other to continue and, if anything, increase the speed and force being applied as they bumped their asses together with the dildo entrenched deep between them.

Seconds later, both women screamed louder than they ever had, both collapsing forward as each orgasmed together, the dildo slipped out of each woman, causing great relief to their suffering anus's and each woman continued to sob as their orgasms rocked their body, in the most confusing sensations of their lives.

The women lay panting for several minutes, only after they had gotten their breath back could they bear to look in each other's direction. Each woman had similar thoughts, noting that their opponent looked like she had been through hell, before realising that she probably looked just as disheveled. "What happens now?" Beth asked sternly. "That depends." Lily answered, leaving Beth looking confused. "On what?" She asked. "Are you ready to admit David is mine and stay away from him?" Lily asked threateningly. "Never" Beth answered. "Then we continue, until your answer changes." Lily stated matter of factly. "Game on, bitch" was Beth's only response as she lunged at Lily, her nails outstretched.
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Re: My first ever story attempt - Part 1 - He picked me
« Reply #5 on: September 10, 2023, 01:57:25 PM »
Love it........... a real battle....
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« Reply #6 on: September 13, 2023, 10:33:52 PM »
Warning - Last part is very much fighting, and somewhat brutal at that, so is arguably in the wrong section, be warned.

Final Part


Lily mirrored Beth's movement, lunging towards her with nails outstretched. They immediately went for each other's faces, but their momentum quickly caused the rest of their bodies to follow, causing them to collide face to face, breast to breast and pussy to pussy. They started to pull on each other's hair, throwing each other around the office as they did what they could to rip hair from each other's head. Blonde hair quickly littered the office floor.

The two women continued to fight, each trying to gain the upper hand, but neither was able to gain any ground as they continued to struggle, each trying to inflict maximum damage. After several minutes of this, Lily was able to get off a knee into Beth's stomach, causing her to bend at the waist, giving Lily the opportunity to swing Beth by her hair, causing her feet to literally leave the ground as Lily threw her into a nearby wall, which Beth flew into with a dull *THUD* and landed hard on the floor. Lily then proceeded to kick Beth in the ribs repeatedly, causing her to scream in pain and frustration.

This was all the encouragement Lily needed, as she began to jump on top of Beth, who tried to defend herself with her arms, but was unable to do much else due to the pain in her ribcage. Beth's hands managed to get a hold of Lily's legs, pulling them apart, which allowed Beth to land a few blows to Lily's thighs, but she couldn't quite land that telling blow to Lily's cxnt as she had intended. Lily had managed to regained her composure and was about to deliver another devastating kick when Beth finally found her opening.

As soon as Lily raised her leg to deliver the kick, Beth used Lily's unsteady footing to pull her off-balance down to the ground and as Lily fell bring her first up into Lily's crotch in a vicious blow, causing Lily to silently scream and assume the foetal position next to Beth on the floor. Beth needed the wall to help her to her feet, but she did manage it, staring down at Lily, feeling a sense to pride at what she had reduced this bitch to.

"So I win, there's no way you'll be able to fuck anyone with what I've just done to your crotch, David is all mine now" Beth proclaimed. "I'll text him now and have him come over so I can make good on my promise. I'm going to fuck him on top of your pitiful, defeated body." Beth retrieved her phone and proceeded to text David as promised, while Lily just remained on the floor, wincing in pain and trying to clear her senses.

Beth let Lily lay where she was and started to straighten herself up. Reapplying makeup, massaging aching muscles and looking for the tattered remnants of her clothes, she wanted to look her best for her lover's imminent arrival. Beth was at her desk, paying close attention to her eye liner, and had not noticed that Lily had finally recovered her senses and was now stalking towards her, with revenge in mind.

"Stand up and face me" Lily practically spit the words at Beth, making her jump as she didn't believe for a second Lily would be standing again any time soon. Beth quickly regained her composure and faced Lily. "You're no match for me, how many more times do I need to prove it to you Lily? Just stay down." Beth pleaded. "I'm more than a match for you, now let's go." Lily challenged as she swung the first punch, an uppercut that hit Beth squarely in the jaw. Beth responded with a hook of her own, catching Lily in the eye.

The girls abandoned all tactics and any semblance of defence, favouring attack and they pounded each other with punches to their faces, breasts, bellys, arms and sides. These girls were prepared to suffer anything if it meant making their opponent suffer just as much. Their pace eventually slowed and their punches turned into slaps, they were practically taking it in turns. Beth would slap Lily, then wait for the reply where Lily would slap Beth. Then Beth would slap again, followed by Lily, and on the cycle continued.

Lily was getting tired, her vision blurred, and her cheek felt like it was on fire. She could barely see, her lip was swollen, and she could feel her nose starting to bleed. Beth was starting to tire too, her arms were sore her ribs were throbbing and she wasn't sure she had much left in the tank to continue.

More out of a need for support to remain standing than a tactic to attack each other, the girls collided together and wrapped their arms around one another. They stumbled briefly around the room, using their nails to scratch at each other's backs as they tried to stomp on each other's feet. They eventually collapsed to the floor, wrapping their legs together and rolling as they continued to use their nails to scratch away at whatever flesh they could reach on each other. They rolled around for several minutes, scratching and biting each other's necks, arms and shoulders, leaving deep scratches and bites in their wake.

They came to a halt in their rolling, both laid on their side face to face, panting from the exertion and willing themselves to keep fighting. They had performed heinous acts on each other, even going so far as to use their teeth as a weapon, but it occurred to both women simultaneously there was one area they had avoided using their teeth on each other. An area that was now tantalisingly close to each of the girl’s teeth, their faces.

With a primal growl, both women reached for each other's face, pulling them together and proceeded to try and bite chunks out of each other. They bit away at each other many times, trying to do whatever damage they could, again there was no thought of defence, they would endure any pain and suffering if it meant that the other woman suffered the same. They eventually paused as Beth managed to get a good grip, trapping Lily's bottom lip between her teeth, as Lily simultaneously got a firm grip with Beth's top lip between her teeth.

Their eyes locked, for the first time the fear evident in both women's eyes. Everything in their fight so far, the girls would eventually recover from, but this could mean permanent, unrepairable damage, were they really ready to do that over this? They answered the question almost as soon as it was conceived, as their fear turned into steely determination. They pulled back and forth, grinding their teeth together and trying to rip each other's lips off. Beth managed to bite down hard enough to cause some bleeding, but Lily still managed to hang on.

After several minutes of this, Beth's jaw began to ache, her arms were sore and she was feeling light headed. Momentarily, her grip on Lily's lips slackened, and this was all Lily needed to pull herself free, but the momentum of pulling away also caused her to lose the bite on Beth's lip. Both girls had done damage to the other's lips, and they were starting to swell, but they still looked intact. Lily seized on Beth's moment of weakness to unleash a torrent of fury onto her. Lily straddled Beth planting herself on top of Beth's hips and proceeding to whale down a series of punches, slaps and scratches to Beth's face, breasts and belly. After the first minute or so, Beth was able to offer no resistance and succumbed to her fate, accepting the beating that Lily was delivering to her. In a final act of humiliation, Lily raised Beth's head by her hair, brought her towards her face and looked deep into her eyes. "Night, night bitch" Lily stated before she prepared a mouthful of saliva which she spit into her face, before one final punch that knocked Beth out cold.

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As Beth woke a short time later, she was immediately struck by the soreness in her body, her pussy was on fire, her tits were throbbing, her ribs were aching and the bite marks on her face and especially her  lips were stinging intensely. She daren't open her eyes but soon noticed the pressure bearing down on her, she was laid flat on her back with something of a similar size pressed on top of her, rocking rhythmically forwards and backwards. She heard satisfied moaning coming from a delicate feminine voice, accompanied by masculine grunting and groaning, as she continued to be rocked back and forth in time with the grunting as the weight continued to press down on her.

The weight moved slowly forward, pushing against her chest, then back, then forward again. It took a few seconds to register what was happening, but when it did, she was filled with disgust and horror. As Beth opened her eyes, she already knew what she would find. She was face to face with Lily, who had not yet noticed Beth was conscious once again. Lily was being avidly fucked from behind as she grinded her breasts, belly, crotch, arms and legs into Beth. Lily then spotted Beth's eyes open, a sinister smile curling the corners of her lips.

"Welcome back, honey. I was almost worried about you then; I wouldn't want you to have missed this. What did you promise me, Beth? Something about fucking David of top of my pitiful, defeated body?"" Lily said to Beth without stopping her thrusting into David for moment. Beth just stayed still, frozen in rage, eyes locked on Lily's, her body too sore to do anything about her predicament. Lily leaned in close to Beth, moving her hair aside and whispering ever so quietly in Beth's ear, "It looks like he picked me."

Beth felt a tear run down her cheek as she watched Lily's face, knowing that her words were true, and seeing Lily's smug smile as she claimed her prize only made it worse.

THE END