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The Apartment

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The Apartment
« on: July 13, 2025, 06:36:14 AM »
The Apartment

Lois was a 38 year old divorcee. She loved to party, and she loved having her choice of men now with her freedom. After selling the home they had Lois was financially good, she found and apartment at one of the hardest buildings to get anything in.

Being she only needed a one bedroom and preferred the top floor, she got the last apartment  that was free. She stood 5’9”, and was a 140 pounds fit and hot. Her body was a very enticing 36G-26-36, she had blood red hair to her neck and shoulders.

Her red hair had a side wave cut at the top and was very thick and silky. It took Lois a full day to move in and she had newer furniture delivered . Lois could be a sweet woman to get to know, but she had a dark side when cornered.

As this took place, there was a busty woman already living in the same building a few floors down. Debbie, a raven colored hair woman at 52, but rest assure she could pass for 30. Debbie was 5’10” a solid 139, and a 36G-26-36, with jet black hair to her shoulders and wavy, her dark blue eyes and full red lips and round cheek bones she was simply gorgeous and new it. Like Lois she was sweet but when cornered a real bitch.

Debra had a few altercations with other women that lived in the high rise building, and though not a (queen of the pool), she didn’t let just any woman strut in her territory with out a warning or fight .

Lois finally finished unpacking, and was so beat she knew at some point she would have to see just who “ran things” by the pool if any woman did. Finally one Saturday afternoon on a very sunny day and a temp of 90 degrees, Lois was ready to enjoy the pool.

Debra was already down by the pool, she was in a sexy tight red bikini, the cups barely covered her aureolas and thick nipples, her thong was even thinner and if not for a manicured bush wouldn’t be wearable .

As Deb lay and sit pool side she got a good number of dirty looks, but she just smiled in a smile that said(unhappy come try me”. But the few who had didn’t want to test her again, the ones unsure were warned not to take her on.

As the white sun shined down and men and women from the apartment building were in and of the pool area, you could have heard a pin drop when the elevator doors opened and Lois’s right heel stabbed the white cement patio.

Lois knew there was a chance some woman would try to warn her off, but at worse she would lose and at best they would get beat or not even think of taking her on. But something inside told her a fight was coming , just who and how was yet to be seen.as Lois with a slow powerful swagger strut from the doors toward the deep end she smiled at everyone’s reaction to her busty tall fit figure.

Lois knew all the eyes were on her, but her eyes were doing the searching as well. That’s when she saw Debra who at that minute had no idea this was her rival, well not instantly anyway.

Debra felt the shift in the atmosphere and she  sat up and looked about till her eyes locked on to Lois. Lois already sensed this was the woman to be the trouble here.
So as Lois strut swaying her hips, and her ass cheeks rocking up and down, she took notice of Debbi.

The two women glared with not a word said between them, but Lois knew who she just met, so she locked her eyes on the woman. She glared with a confident smile as she was about to pass Debra she paused in front of her, and made a obvious distinct glare up and down Debra’s body.

With a narrowing glare she rolled her tongue and pursed her lips, her green eyes darting from hair to heels with a pause at the swelling breasts of Debra. Lois was in a jet black micro kini, that if not for her heavy firm round breasts making the thin straps as taught as guitar strings, they would have burst from pressure.

Debra sat up slow but as quick as she could without looking as if she as worried or scared. The two held the glare then Lois added a silent insult by rolling her eyes and pursing lips in a mocking kiss like.

Then with no regard for Debra or her assumed status , Lois slowly saunters around to the bar at the far deep end, she slides onto a stool, orders a white wine and sits. Debra stood up. Adjusted her top and bottoms, slipped on her heel slippers and shakes her hair back then saunters to the same bar and the seat beside Lois.

When Lois heard the heels slowly coming , she swallowed her wine and sat up more, her thick nipples were tenting the cups as if not even on. Debra reaches the seat, she winks to the bar tender and says in a sexy purr, “white wine please”. As the bar tender gets it , she suddenly excuses her self , “so your new here or visiting?”.

Lois stares straight ahead , “i live here now, not that its any of your business …Honey”.
Debra squirms in the seat, she rather not get in a fight here with to many willing to stop it.

Lois adds ,”you want something ? Cause i rather meet some of these handsome neighbors instead of you”. The reply was like a slap she had no respect , Debra thought.

  Debra then while swirling her wine says in a soft but clear threat  purr, “since your knew here I’ll let it slide for now, but make sure you remember what i say next. I am the head bitch here and unless you want to try me, be smart to fall in line or you and i might have to go someplace to ..talk..Honey, i hope you catch my drift”.

Lois sat a moment and realized she found the bitch that thinks she owns the place, Lois sips and then replies, “well i think i could remember that, but the truth is i only listen to whores that make me, and you haven’t done that, so unless your going to formally challenge me i suggest you go lounge in your room”.

The tension was like a heard of elephants between them, Debra turns her head to Lois , who looks at her. Debra licks her lips “well is that so? Then i guess i am making it formal, i challenge you bitch, right now my place or yours how about it?”.

Lois breaths in seeing Debs thick nipples tent her tiny cups, both their tight cleavages rise and fall as both know there is a fight to be handled between them. Lois leans to Debra “my place lets go right now”.

Debra eases off her stool, arches with a hand on hip, “after you bitch”. Lois stands and the pair look ready to lunge, they hold it back, then Lois says “fine bring your lotion and lets chat on the ride up.

Without another word the two gorgeous women slowly swagger toward the elevator doors, Lois and her sharp nails stabs to call the elevator, when it opens they both step in and Lois hits 10.


The ride up is slow and soft, the two women step in front of the other, busts rise and fall slow. Lois smiling as if she won groans “nmmm how are we going to fight bitch?.” Her fingers trace her tenting nipples slow.

Debra does the same as she says “tit to tit, hair, claws and more”. She moans “nmmm your in for a fight”. Lois breaths in, “i was hoping so, i knew some bitch would be in my way.”

Debra breaths in, “better watch it bitch I’ll start right here with you”. Lois smirks then pulls her cups aside enough her stiff nipples spring straight out. Lois does the same, after a brief stare then ease closer then with hands of each reaching for her rivals hips they widen the stance.

Lois eyes locked on Debras huffs quietly “I’ll invert you bitch”, as her nipples graze Debras.
Debra pokes her nipples at Lois’s then firmly flicks from contact a she moans, “common and try it bitch , loser worships winner nipples ready?.

Lois nods “fight “, the two gorgeous women start a slow side to side duel, moans ,grunts and aching fills the tight elevator.. both women moan as the duel increases and grows from arousal to determined competition.

Their nipples seem to extend longer but also thicker, their aureolas swell out and become bumpy. The two women want to stay in a stare but as the seemingly non threat duel goes on, both women feel the pulsing run through their breasts.

An ache deep within starts to over take the arousal as well. With each taking her turn to push the others nipples back, the bell of the elevator chimes, letting both know time is running out before the doors open.

As each of them tries harder to invert her rival, the elevator starts to slow, with a sudden unplanned thrust the two women press head on into the other. Both stiffen and curl a lip, the doors start to open after the slight jolt of the stop. Debra hotly huffs, “i inverted you bitch”. Lois smiles “you wish bitch , i inverted you , cow”.

For a few seconds they stand frozen then Lois says “lets see who is inverted “. Slowly with eyes locked the women peel apart slowly. Lois looks at her rivals breasts, and licks her lips as she inverted Debra halfway.   Debra has the same winning smile, and sees she managed the same result.

Both so confident they won, they smile brightly and then caress their breasts over the nipples, its then both realize this erotic duel just became a draw. They snarl at the other and pull their cups back over the super sensitive nipples and coax them back out to full attention.

They ease apart and both growl “Bitch “. To the other, then with the doors fully open they strut into the hallway, and as if roommates they walk side by side toward Lois’s apartment, each could hear her rivals breath fuller and the slight cursing toward the other.

Lois stops at her door and takes a key from her bikini thong ass cheek, she gives Debra the same look that says (your still here) Debra can sense the glares intent and she hisses “you gonna open up or we gonna fight in the hallway?”.

Lois rolls her eyes, “I’ll fight you anyplace bitch”. Lois slides her key in and turns it slowly, her rounded hip bumps the door to swing open, she swaggers in and drops her key on her shelf along with her towel and swaggers her round ass further into the apartment.

Debra follows in and shuts the door then locks it, she follows Lois with the same confident strut and swagger. The two women step into an empty walk in closet, where Lois shuts the door.

She turns to look at Debra and both have their round firm heavy breasts rise and fall slow but fully. Their nipples once again stiff and tenting the small cups, Lois hands on her hips “so bitch it was a draw so wanna go again ?or you wanna call it and we move on hmm?”.

Debra considering herself the woman in charge here, is spitting mad she has to bend and admit a draw, but as she does she catches Lois off guard, “well bitch its a draw but since it is sounds like we each profit from the draw. Since your the challenger here in my building, you get first taste”.

Lois swallows but keeps the smile of confidence, she approaches Debra and takes the mini cup off Debras nipple, her head lowers and her wet moist lips start to kiss the tip of her right nipple,

Debra inhales from arousal, “unmmm thats it bitch harder cmon”. Lois slowly bobs her head as she licks , sucks and then saws her teeth on the thick stiff shaft. Debra rolls her head back as she moans “nmm you must lose a lot to be so good at it”.

To which Lois responds with a snug bite on the nipple, she licks around it then Debra hisses “bite me again bitch I’ll scratch your nipples off”. Lois slides her lips down the nipple to the broad tip sucks off the stringy saliva, and groans “trust me bitch I’ll give you chance later if you don’t quit early.

Lois then arches her back up fully and peels off her right cup, her nipple standing stiff. She sneers “cmon your turn bitch”.  Debra lowers her head and runs her tongue along the thickest vein running down her rivals breast.

Lois watches her rival and once her lips and tongue take the nipple in her head tilts back, her eyes shut briefly. Her lips purse as she groans , “harder bitch cmon”.

Deb’s head slowly goes up and down, her lips taking in her rivals aureola and she sucks hard . Lois squirms her hips she moans and her fingers grip her own hair in lust and desire to fight.

Finally Debra scrapes her teeth along the nipples shaft, Lois moans yet growls “oh you bitch are we finished now playing games? My tits are ready to fight”. Debra smiles knowing she got to her rival, “oh my tits were ready before you walked into my building and trust me before we are finished you’ll be breaking your lease bitch.”

Both have that devilish smile as they step apart a foot, then as they glare into each other’s eyes, they start to pull the thin string straps and the cups easily slip away. Their full round firm breasts easily plump free.
Glaring they both caress their breasts at the other, it is Debra who gets things going, “ok Bitch tit to tit , till one of us submits, loser gives up her top and gets her breasts milked agree or not?”.

Lois caressing her tits at her rival, “oh i agree and i want to add winner can face sit or tit smother the loser bitch”.  Without a missed beat, Debra smiles as her hands go to her own hair she pushes it in her palms.

She steps to center of the closet and widens her thighs as she hisses “fight me”. Lois sways her body like a serpent and stops right before they touch,  her own hair up and arches her breasts out at Debras. Lois hisses “cmon fight me bitch”.

They stare a moment then as if on cue both women arch and press together. Their large breasts meet and slowly both sets recoil back and start to bulge out from in between them.
Each woman moans at the initial contact and feel of her rivals smooth round breasts, slowly they enjoy the feel but then each starts to smear and roll her breasts into the others.

It seemingly looks like just arousal effects, but then each starts to press firmer and the motion becomes faster. The tight press restricts their need to really drag, but neither dares to pull from her rival yet.

Lois softly blows hot breath through her lips, as she moans “nnmmm yess feel my tits bitch hmm?, you seemed scared to really fight them”. Deb arches into her rival more then groans, “uww cmon bitch my tits want a real fight”.

Both taunt but also know they dare not take the taunts to high, cause the fact is they already know they are facing a true rival. It explains the methodical motion as they try to find a spot either feels week at.

The two women stand upright ,arching to get their breasts into the slow duel, both are breathing heavier as the arousal feeling turns to a bitter feeling for her rival. Deb slowly using her shoulders starts to row her breasts up and around Lois’s breasts. The motion is clockwise and her flawless mass is pulling Lois’s flawless pair . As Deb feels her breasts taking over she breaths in fully then adds a steady forward push into her rivals pair. Lois couldn’t stop herself from reacting from the move, “uuhhh oh you bitch”. Deb smirks a bit “having problems bitch hmm?, just give and its over , before i really start to hurt you”. 

Lois so wants to return the threat verbally but the pulling and stiff press to her breasts has her swallowing she may have just taken on a better fighter, her only reply as Deb makes her move a steady rhythm was”uuhh uhh uuhnnn oh you bitch mmff mmff mmfff noo noo damn it”.Lois knows she can simply back away to end the attack, but she chose to stand her ground as a sign she has felt tougher before and also refuses to give her rival any more fuel for big ego.

As Deb keeps it up, she makes the rhythm faster and as she feels her efforts if not ending the fight it is certainly hurting her rival deep in breasts and muscles. Deb now wants to hurt her rival more in case she wants or can fight longer, she snakes her calf around Lois’s and hooks her foot making Lois stay right where she is ,for now at least.

The small room they use filled with hot breathy huffs and short huffs from both ,but more from Lois. Deb began to sneer as she heard the dense echo of her breasts starting to clap into Lois’s, “mmmm oh yes my tits are going to crush yours bitch and just for the fun of it i am going to face sit and tit smother you, give now or its just gonna hurt more.”

Lois was starting to think she very well might lose to this seasoned woman, and easily understood how she was able to make others fall inline. Lois felt a fear shiver run down her spine, the thought of coming to this building thinking and acting as if she would make it hers, only to get destroyed had her mind racing.

But Lois deep inside knew she was better than to be forced to submit this early, she accepted she might lose, but at least give this woman a healthy hard fight. As she hears the their flesh clap, clop and slap together she digs deep and tells herself its not that bad fight through it.

As Deb holds her still with he leg lock and her tits attach her own, Lois takes a little more punishment then as the confident seasoned fighter sneers with the delight of slowly destroying yet another rival, Lois dips and as Deb drags her tits across , Lois thrusts upward.

It was like a movie clip, Debs head rears back, her mouth drops open, her eyes droop as she lets out a seemingly paused screech, but the SMACK that vibrated the room and bo5h fighters was the upper cut response from Lois into Debs open undersides.

Deb stood straight legged, her head back looking up at the white ceiling, her chest and breasts are knocked upward to her own chin, both fighters see and feel the jostling shake and quake in Debs breasts.then her scream came through, “AGHHHH OWWW MY TITS YOU BITCH!!”.

Lois pauses a minute as if unsure what took place, but as the sounds of what she did wake her from the strange daydream, she realizes she just stopped the assault Deb was giving her. She drives up and into Deb, who with a flutter in her worried voice, wants to growl but it comes off as fear filled panic, “Oh you Bitch you damn Bitch”.

Lois now sways her hips and starts to attack into Debs space. She starts by pumping and grinding the undersides as Deb stutter steps in retreat. Then as she sees er efforts are hurting the rival, she smirks “you want me to be a bitch?, well you got it whore”.

If you were to walk in on these two, it would seem an even fight, but to the trained eye, its clear Lois is starting to drag, pump, grind, slap smack and pump her rounded breasts all over Debs and is freely following her retreating rival.

Deb while a seasoned fighter has rarely if at all, been walked in retreat this way and never for this amount time. She lost between trying to counter the moves or break away cleanly and then going back after her rival. It seemed to the stun fighter however the hard impact this newer fighter gave her, has her scared to stand toe to toe and fight it out.

As Deb tries to formulate a counter move, Lois has backed her to a corner. Debs heels hit the walls molding ,but as she becomes aware, Lois unleashes on her.

Lois grabs her rivals wrists and shoves them up and back to the wall each hand at Debs ear level. Lois then arches her back and using her shoulder like windmill, forces her breasts to start hammering Debs side to side with no abandon.

The closets dense sound effects make it clear, there are fleshy exchanges between the two. Lois a grin of evil and pride looks between herself and her rival and watches as her full round breasts are literally punching Debs and forcing them to jostle, bounce and turn he brightest fleshy red she has ever seen or felt . Deb rolls her head back and to the sides , her mouth open as she sucks in the stale air of the room.

Lois drives firmly ahead and stabs her breasts into her rivals. The women both pant in the stale air, now as they use their breasts to settle this matter. Lois feeling she is on the verge to take the woman down who dares tell her she best get in line, she hisses to her rivals face ‘uuhhh uhh cmon bitch fight my tits harder” . Deb swallows a dry saliva down as she feels her rival gaining on her in the confines of this erotic yet tough fight.

Deb is being guided back, her heels scrape the wood floor, her back is about to be pinned to a wall, both women know if, even for a minute , the torrid exchange will be more then either could take for to long.

Lois as exhausted as her rival, needs to get Cora against the corner of the room. But her legs are quivering with each step. But so are Cora’s , her face as she turns her head shows the exhaustion and pain. Lois presses her breasts against Cora’s even tighter . Combined their mass bulging from between them turns redder.

Cora grunts out loud, “uuughhhh yo bitch”, Lisa gulping “fight my tits bitch “. The tight room is densely echoing the flesh colliding and rolling, dragging firmer between them. Suddenly Cora twists her hips, the move forces them to twirl unsteadily. Lisa spun by her rival staggers to a stop as she looks up in pain, she never realizes she now is closer to the wall.
 in a war, mouths panting hot breath , tummies and breasts bellow heavier and heavier for fresh air.
     
Their glistening bodies stagger but now it is Lisa who is slowly being driven back against her will. Lisa shakes her head, “ughh mmff mmff mff bitch you bitch”. Cora growls “problems Bitch cmon keep fighting my tits”.

Cora sucks in a much needed deep breath, and drives into Lisa. Lisa gulps out “uughhh damn you”. Suddenly the Smack. Of Lisas back hitting the wall rings out . Lisa squirms as she feels the as if the walls are closing around her.

Her spine in the corners seam, her shoulder driven inward swells her breasts . With hands still up to fight her breasts stand out like free targets. Cora arches so her breasts stand outward, she snarls to Lisa “lets go bitch one of us is going to give fight back”.
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Lisa about to reply gets cut off as Cora unleashes an attack on Lisa with her breasts. Cora snaps and twists her shoulders forcing her breasts to start pounding away at Lisas. Their thick firm heavy meaty breasts are in a fast painful exchange , but Cora has full room, while Lisa can barely get full motion.

The thick slaps,claps,smacks ring out now as both women are ready to cry from pain and exhaustion. Cora huffs as she winces, “uuhhh uhh mmff mff cmon you bitch give”. Lisa feeling the same loudly replies, “uuhh uhh uhh ohhh aww you first cow”.

Finally Cora slams her breasts across Lisa’s hard, the collision making Lisa sink into the corner her head rears up making her look up in sheer pain. Cora quickly grabs Lisas wrists and pins them to the wall high above her head. Arching her back and leaving her breasts more open.

Cora smears side to side to catch her breath, then she leans in and their sweaty cheeks meet. Both women are panting heavy in each other’s ear, but while they hear each other’s hurting skipping breath, their faces are contorted into pure agony, hiding it from the other .

Cora finally starts to row her breasts into Lisas slow but deeply, Lisa tries to wet her lips, then as all seemed quiet Cora dips and eases back a half step then thrusts up with her last bit of strength, the loud SMACK!! Fills the room nearly as loud as Lisas scream.

Cora fully steps from Lisa she glares with sweat and tears but knows if the move didn’t end the fight she has to fight on.
Lisa seems stuck to the wall, then focuses n Cora , “you fucking Bitch , I’ll crush your weak tits” Cora swallows and wants to drop on her knees , instead she breath in ,”bring it you Bitch”.

Lisa drops her hands and starts toward Cora , Cora braces for more action, then Lisa suddenly drops to her knees. Her hands cup her breasts , Cora comes at her and shoves Lisa onto her back and pounces down on her. Glaring down at Lisa , Cora decides to pin her rivals hands again then with her breasts hanging , pummels Lisas breast . The noise of the batter breasts is like gloves of boxers in a wild exchange.

Lisa crying now screams , “stop you bitch my tits ,oh god damn you get off. Me i give !!..” Cora drops her rivals body, they lay there a solid two minutes, finally Cora peels her sweating breasts off Lisas, she then stands up, she glares at Lisa who weakly gets up.

Cora bracing for a fight waits, but it never comes as Lisa steps at a flat area o the wall, both hands go to it as she leans there in pain, her breasts swaying under her. Cora steps to Lisas back and reaches around then slaps her hands onto Lisas breasts and starts to mangle and gouge and squeeze her rivals breasts.

Lisa rears her head in pain , “owwww oh god stop my tits  you bitch stop”, but Cora her own breasts against Lisas bare back widen her thighs and milks her rivals breasts so deeply it causes Lisa to fall again. Cora refuses being denied her due, she yanks Lisa by the hair to her back, she straddles Lisa in a reverse posture, then demands isa pleasure her wet pussy.

Lisa does so then Cora sneering growls down, “make me cum whore , your tits will never fight again”. With that Cora digs her hands in Lisas breasts and uses them in her hands like they were taffy..

Lisa under Cora’s ass and pussy cries as Cora’s juices drip on her sweaty face. Finally Cora stands up she grabs both bras and opens the door a swift cool rush of air hits her, she pauses looks back at her crushed rival, “get your shit bitch and never let me hear your name again”.

Cora shuts the door and leaves Lisa crying crushed and broken.

The End


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Re: The Apartment
« Reply #1 on: July 13, 2025, 01:00:40 PM »
Poor Lisa.     I was pulling for her.     lol.   Great work!

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« Reply #2 on: July 13, 2025, 04:36:29 PM »
Great story as always Dotti! And for those few who are going to wonder about the names at the end keep your thoughts to yourself. Its very easy to follow. And for the 99.9 percent of us who love her stories. We dont need the "internet trolls" who have nothing better to do making juvenile comments. Thanks again Dotti. So nice reading any and all of your stories
« Last Edit: July 13, 2025, 04:39:20 PM by Kingnick307 »

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« Reply #3 on: July 13, 2025, 06:25:24 PM »
Another wonderful story  One by a master of the genre.

Two minor  questions. Why did Deb suddenly become Cora? Also wasn't the fight inside a closet in Lisa's apartment, at the end it seems Cora is telling Lisa to clear out?

Very minor questions, it is still a wonderful story!

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Re: The Apartment
« Reply #4 on: July 13, 2025, 09:25:59 PM »
Great story as always Dotti! And for those few who are going to wonder about the names at the end keep your thoughts to yourself. Its very easy to follow. And for the 99.9 percent of us who love her stories. We dont need the "internet trolls" who have nothing better to do making juvenile comments. Thanks again Dotti. So nice reading any and all of your stories

Yeah, why would anyone expect even the tiniest bit of competence from someone who just spits out one nearly identical story after another? This was full of the usual good setup followed by hilariously bad spelling and grammar, and we got the name switch at the end showing that there's no attention to detail at all. Dotti's ideas written by a good writer would be the best titfighting stories ever written. Instead, it's one C- after another.

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« Reply #5 on: July 14, 2025, 12:04:19 AM »
Im sorry Dotti! I tried to do damage control. But people like human person only feel better about themselves when they can critique others. And human person you are pathetic and repulsive. Dotti doesn't have to spend so much time working on these stories for most of us to enjoy but she is a great person and does. If you dont like her stories or grammar then keep your thoughts to yourself. Most of us appreciate her beauty as a person and writer. As a soldier fighting  to defend our country its people like you that make me wonder why. But there are so many beautiful people like Dotti that make it all worth while. Great story as always Dotti. And you are very appreciated!
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« Reply #6 on: July 14, 2025, 11:20:37 PM »
Ok all i did screw up on the names , i have so many stories in the pot the names tend to get away from me , normally i can catch them but i missed this one, that being said , i would like to think looking past that error and let your mind see the bigger picture . As far as the fight part of the story , there is only so much i can do with a titfight I haven’t added in previous stories, and if ya’all read the others peoples works, its all the same rhythm. As far as human person goes i have learned to give anything said by him bother me . He is the type that needs to nit pic to make himself feel better do to the lack of effort put into the entire sight . I would like to see him balance handling kids , working from home , doing stories , maintains a household cleaning making dinner , every day . It is not easy to remember character names with all that. As far as the rest of you thank you for reading and enjoying my efforts, i was going to tell human to F off but its not worth my time to give a child’s mind any effort

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« Reply #7 on: July 15, 2025, 06:10:53 PM »
Ok all i did screw up on the names , i have so many stories in the pot the names tend to get away from me , normally i can catch them but i missed this one, that being said , i would like to think looking past that error and let your mind see the bigger picture . As far as the fight part of the story , there is only so much i can do with a titfight I haven’t added in previous stories, and if ya’all read the others peoples works, its all the same rhythm. As far as human person goes i have learned to give anything said by him bother me . He is the type that needs to nit pic to make himself feel better do to the lack of effort put into the entire sight . I would like to see him balance handling kids , working from home , doing stories , maintains a household cleaning making dinner , every day . It is not easy to remember character names with all that. As far as the rest of you thank you for reading and enjoying my efforts, i was going to tell human to F off but its not worth my time to give a child’s mind any effort

Its the story around the fight, the women involved, their backstory and why they are fighting. This is what I love about your stories. This is why I like your Peggy and Pam series so much. We read about them win and lose, break and get broken by other women. We can read about their husbands or family cheer and suffer with them. This is whats interesting and we see those women evolve and get stronger or lose their self confidence. For example the fight Peggy against this Arab woman in the desert where Peggy was so confident and after the fight she needed help by Ambers boyfriend to leave the fighting pit. This is what I and I believe a lot of us love about your stories. Not just the fight itself. You are a great writer.   

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« Reply #8 on: July 24, 2025, 12:42:01 PM »
Hey man, love your stories...what about the peggy stories??
Ik well that she has aged and can't fight but her daughter against gina's daughter would be very very good...
She trains her daughter and gina too and then a seperate storyline afterwards seperately of his daughter...she is younger and she can have alot of fights

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« Reply #9 on: July 24, 2025, 06:14:46 PM »
Hey man, love your stories...what about the peggy stories??
Ik well that she has aged and can't fight but her daughter against gina's daughter would be very very good...
She trains her daughter and gina too and then a seperate storyline afterwards seperately of his daughter...she is younger and she can have alot of fights

I dont wanna spoiler but Peggy may rest in peace. She is no more.

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Re: The Apartment
« Reply #10 on: July 26, 2025, 06:53:18 AM »
Aww that's bad...well rather than ending her in new Orleans series,it would have been so better if she trained her daughter and her daughter had her seperate stories...well now as well it would be great if we have Amber stories from dotti

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Re: The Apartment
« Reply #11 on: July 29, 2025, 02:31:28 AM »
Dotti is hands down one of the best writers on the site. Thank you for sharing your stories!

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Re: The Apartment
« Reply #12 on: August 05, 2025, 11:19:37 PM »
Thank you guys

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Re: The Apartment
« Reply #13 on: Yesterday at 07:56:37 AM »
Ok all i did screw up on the names , i have so many stories in the pot the names tend to get away from me , normally i can catch them but i missed this one, that being said , i would like to think looking past that error and let your mind see the bigger picture . As far as the fight part of the story , there is only so much i can do with a titfight I haven’t added in previous stories, and if ya’all read the others peoples works, its all the same rhythm. As far as human person goes i have learned to give anything said by him bother me . He is the type that needs to nit pic to make himself feel better do to the lack of effort put into the entire sight . I would like to see him balance handling kids , working from home , doing stories , maintains a household cleaning making dinner , every day . It is not easy to remember character names with all that. As far as the rest of you thank you for reading and enjoying my efforts, i was going to tell human to F off but its not worth my time to give a child’s mind any effort

I am so dense and was so into the battle I didn't even notice the names change.  I had to go back to find where they changed.  I just automatically switched Lois to Lisa and didn't even think about where Cora came from.  I know when I write I usually have somebody in mind for each of the characters then I go back and change the names to protect the not so innocent when I am done.  But every now and then a "real" name sneaks through.  It is only a first name, but still I try to avoid it.  But with as much as you write, probably harder to catch.  Great Job!
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Re: The Apartment
« Reply #14 on: Today at 03:47:24 PM »

Lois drives firmly ahead and stabs her breasts into her rivals. The women both pant in the stale air, now as they use their breasts to settle this matter. Lois feeling she is on the verge to take the woman down who dares tell her she best get in line, she hisses to her rivals face ‘uuhhh uhh cmon bitch fight my tits harder” . Deb swallows a dry saliva down as she feels her rival gaining on her in the confines of this erotic yet tough fight.

Deb is being guided back, her heels scrape the wood floor, her back is about to be pinned to a wall, both women know if, even for a minute , the torrid exchange will be more then either could take for to long.

Lois as exhausted as her rival, needs to get Cora against the corner of the room. But her legs are quivering with each step. But so are Cora’s , her face as she turns her head shows the exhaustion and pain. Lois presses her breasts against Cora’s even tighter . Combined their mass bulging from between them turns redder.

Cora grunts out loud, “uuughhhh yo bitch”, Lisa gulping “fight my tits bitch “. The tight room is densely echoing the flesh colliding and rolling, dragging firmer between them. Suddenly Cora twists her hips, the move forces them to twirl unsteadily. Lisa spun by her rival staggers to a stop as she looks up in pain, she never realizes she now is closer to the wall.
 in a war, mouths panting hot breath , tummies and breasts bellow heavier and heavier for fresh air.

How in the world can a "writer" post a story that loses track of not just one, but both names of the two characters midday through? And then just leaves it up without editing or replacing it? Come on... At least have the self-respect to go back and fix the mistake!