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Girlfriend Grudges

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Girlfriend Grudges
« on: August 10, 2025, 12:55:30 AM »
It's been a long time since I last used this account for anything in earnest. I had the idea of getting into the catfight story scene some time ago, but that never really panned out. But as I've discovered some of the newer ongoing series and the talented creators out there, I decided it was high time I picked up a story I had started many years ago, tuning it up and finally writing the ending I had planned. It turned out to be a lot more fun than I expected! So stay tuned, I'm hoping for more stories yet!

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Rob and I have been friends for a while now. We were in the same class, back in high school. Occasionally on the weekends we’d come over to each other’s houses to hang out, or play video games. We worked together on our big project for history class, and we got an A on it thanks to his help. I thought I owed him.

But after graduation, we had gone our separate ways. I live in Brookvale, a college town here in Connecticut. Living in a college town, I guess I lucked out. When the time came for applications, I must have been a shoe-in. Didn’t even need to get a dorm when my place was just about a fifteen-minute walk away. I was pretty happy with that. It’d be convenient for my purposes, and it cut down on expenses. Plus I wouldn’t have to go through the trouble of moving in.

Things were different for Rob. He had lived in this town all his life, and he was desperate to get out. See the world, he said. He had applied to school in the next state over, and left the place as soon as he got the chance. We promised we’d stay in touch, and for a while we’d e-mail each other once in a while.

That didn’t last. Schoolwork got to the both of us, and we soon found we couldn’t find the time to balance our obligations. And besides, we were making new friends anyway.

That was where Tara came in.

I met her back in freshman year, and – this is gonna sound cliché, I get it – but I knew there was something about her from the first time I met her, because I can still remember it to this day. I ran into her on the first day of class, and I’m not going to lie when I said I had to stop and catch my breath.

It was an early fall day, cool enough to be pleasant but the sun was still shining and it was warm enough so that you wouldn’t need a coat. When I saw her come up the sidewalk with that golden light behind her, just…wow. Tall, lightly tanned with a few freckles on her face, slim but with a decently-sized bust, just the slightest hint of cleavage showing from under the collar of her shirt. Her hips swayed from side to side with each step she took, and her long straight hair, light brown, was caught in the breeze, blowing it back over her shoulders. Then I looked up in her eyes, those sparkling green eyes, and seeing her lips curl up into the slightest of smiles…

I apologize. I’m getting ahead of myself. I know this sounds like some stupid romance novel. I just want you to get the point. This was the girl I was dealing with.

Whatever the case, she must have noticed me looking at her, because she stopped to chuckle. Nothing mocking, just a cute little laugh. I could feel my face flush red, and I tried to hurry an apology, but she brushed it off. Said it was okay. She thought I was cute, and that we should get to talk more.

You think I was going to pass up a chance like that? Yeah, of course I had to say yes.

We started small. Seeing each other at lunch, between classes, that stuff. That’s when I got to know her better. Besides college, she had a job as a waitress at a local bar to help pay for school. She was an English major, had come here because she was hoping to be a writer, and she wanted to improve her craft. I know, that sounds like she’d be the quiet, nerdy one who no one notices. But you’d be wrong.

Girl was…something, all right. Sassy, funny, had a voice to say about most things, and she wasn’t one to mince words. She called it how it was. If she thought you were a dumbass, she’d say it to you – usually to your face, and in those exact terms. But underneath it all, she really did enjoy being around me. Soon enough, it was official. I had a girlfriend.

We stuck with it the next few years, and soon, the summer of junior year was almost upon us. Tara was still working at the bar, and that had become my hangout spot when I had free time after class, or if I wanted to go get a drink to celebrate another exam off my shoulders. She made it clear that I wasn’t going to get any discounts just because we were dating, but it didn’t matter to me. I had grown to like the atmosphere, in no small part because it reminded me of her, even when she wasn’t on her shift.

It was during that time – getting towards the last week of exams – when I opened my email inbox to find a familiar name. Rob. I hadn’t heard from him since high school. I wasn’t sure what to think at first, but soon enough I clicked on his message.

As it turned out, Rob was heading back to town. He had been up in New York at his new school for a while, but he was starting to grow homesick, and he was planning on coming home for the summer. His family still lived in Brookvale, after all, and he was looking forward to checking up on what had happened since he had left.

I hadn’t even spoken to the guy in so long, of course I had to wonder what he was up to. Even if it had been ages, he was still my friend. I told him that next weekend, when the school year was over, we should meet up. And I knew the perfect place for it.

I gave him the directions to Tara’s bar.

The rest of the week passed uneventfully enough. Finishing up finals was a lot off my chest, and I was looking forward to finally having some time to unwind. Getting to catch up with an old friend was even better. Soon, I found myself sitting at a table right by the door so that I could watch for when Rob would show up. With a beer in my hand, I sat back passing the time, and it seemed like no time at all before he came through the door.

Maybe it was the alcohol, or maybe just seeing him after so long, but as soon as I saw him, I got up from my seat and went over to shake his hand. “Hey, Rob! How you doing?”

“Oh, doing good!” We exchanged the usual greetings, but the next thing out of his mouth was news to me. “Oh, man, you haven’t met Amy yet, have you?”

“Amy?”

My question would soon be answered as a girl stepped through the door. And – forgive me for this again – but she was gorgeous. She was about Tara’s height, petite and slim of build with small breasts and hips, but no less beautiful, and the tight fit of her jeans was drawing my attention to how long and slender her legs were. Pale skin, blue eyes, and raven-black hair that came down in waves over her shoulders. I should probably be thankful that I was drinking at the time, because I think she noticed I was staring, and I heard the chuckle from her.

“Just so you know, I’m taken,” she teased.

“Yeah. This is Amy. We’ve been dating the last few months,” Rob explained.

“S-Sorry,” I muttered, my face going red as I tried to hide my embarrassment. I really didn’t mean to be rude. The last thing I wanted to do was to look like I was making any moves on my best friend’s girlfriend, especially at the bar where my own worked. This was supposed to just be a time to see each other and get caught up. I didn’t even know Amy would be coming; hell, I didn’t even know she existed up until this point. I went back to my drink, trying to distance myself with the situation. I focused my attention on Rob, checking in on how he was doing and what was new. Soon, I thought, I would be able to move past this, and it seemed like Rob didn’t take any offense over the whole thing either.

He had wanted to come home for a while, he said, and the summer had given him just the opportunity to do so. He was getting caught up with family, friends, the local happenings, and was staying at his old place until he’d need to go back up to New York. He was working for a website firm or something – I don’t know too much about that, I can’t really tell you – so he could work from home during the summer. That way commuting wouldn’t be an issue; he could stay as long as he wanted. And he had brought Amy along too, so he could introduce her to his family. He’d mentioned her to them before, but this was the first chance they’d be seeing each other face to face.

“So, you’re serious about it?” I asked him.

“Of course I am,” he said. “We met at school. She’s a photography major, like me, and she wanted to show me her work, but we hit it off. She really speaks to me. She’s funny, talented, and I’ve felt a lot better with my life, since I met her.”

I nodded in agreement. With how he described it, it sounded just like how I had felt about Tara. As I looked over, I noticed that Amy was starting to lean over a little closer, towards me.

“Huh?” I said, looking over in her direction. When I glanced at the table, our hands were almost touching. My face flushed hard at the thought. Was she…flirting? “I thought you were-?” I blurted out.

Amy giggled a little, then smiled up at me with a sly grin. “I am,” she said. “But I still gotta admit, you’re cute when you’re flustered like that.”

I froze. That was the exact sentiment I had heard from Tara. For a while, I was silent.

“You all right?” Amy said. “Cat got your tongue?” She still smiled, and her tone was teasing, the lilt in her voice displaying her sarcastic attitude.

I bit my lip. “Fine, fine,” I said. “You just…remind me of-“

And then I froze, as I heard a familiar voice behind me.

“May I help you?”

I turned around, hoping that my blush wasn’t showing too much. Sure enough, out of any of the waitresses that would come to my table, it was Tara.

I took in a gulp, staring dead ahead at her for what felt like ages. She really was beautiful, standing there in her work uniform, with a tightly-fitting white blouse, a short black skirt, and black socks that went up to her knees, all of which she looked absolutely stunning in. But right now, the cheerful glow I was used to her was gone, as she was watching the table with suspicion. Her eyes were narrowed in a flat stare, and her gaze was aimed right at Amy.

Rob broke the silence, wanting to defuse the situation. He ordered his drinks, followed soon after by Amy and myself, and Tara stepped off. After a moment we returned to our conversation, catching up on each other, though after the confrontation it was stilted and awkward. Soon, though, Tara returned to serve us. She passed out Rob and I’s drinks as normal. But when she got to Amy, she started to take her glass off the tray, guiding it towards where she was sitting…and then at the last minute, she dropped it. With a clatter and a yelp, the glass fell onto the table, spilling its contents all over Amy, who jerked herself away from the seat.

“Oops,” Tara muttered.

Amy’s eyes narrowed into a piercing glare as she looked back up at her. “You did that on purpose, didn’t you?” she shouted. My heart beat faster in my chest just sitting there. I had only known Rob’s girlfriend for a few minutes now, and already the tension between her and Tara was palpable. I hoped to God I wouldn’t get involved in anything I didn’t want to.

“No, no! I’m sooooo sorry!” Tara insisted, leaning in to pat Amy’s head. “Don’t worry, I’ll cleam that up, okay?”

Amy jerked her seat away from her, the screech of the feet of her chair against the floor ringing out through the bar. A few heads turned our way. “Don’t touch me!” she snapped.

“Okay, okay,” Tara said, backing away. “Look. I’ll go clean that up and get you a new drink, promise. It’s on me.”

To Tara’s credit, she delivered on her promises, soon coming back with a towel to wipe the table off and a new drink. By this point, though, the damage had been done. Amy and Tara wouldn’t look each other in the eye after that, and even when Tara came to pick up the tab and ask everyone about their night, Amy was silent. So too, the commotion had drawn a few stares from the tables around us, and we all knew it. Our conversation had come up short, giving way to a few awkward remarks and the occasional nervous chuckle amidst sips of our drinks. Tara might have been busy with work, but there was no question that her presence was still felt at our table.

Soon enough the time came to leave. We all packed up our business and headed to our cars. But when I was driving back to my house, all I could think of was that this was only the beginning. This wasn’t over.

I received confirmation as much the next day, when Tara and I met up at the park. There she showed me a comment she had received on an Instagram post she’d made about her job.

“Can you believe this?” she asked. “Look at this!”

I looked closer at her phone to read what had been posted. My heart almost skipped a beat when I saw it.

“To anyone who knows this bitch…worst server I’ve ever had! Spilled my drink on me for no reason and ruined my night. Never going to that place again”

And to confirm my suspicions, I recognized the name of the poster instantly. Amy.

“I don’t get what her problem is,” Tara said. “She won’t let it go.”

“I mean, you didn’t have to spill anything on her…” I tried to interject. Tara shot me a glare that made her stance perfectly clear.

“She didn’t back off. I knew what she was doing. You told them that I worked there, right?”

“Well,” I said, trying to come up with excuses. “I’m sure they didn’t expect you to be working that night…”

“Why’d she act like that if she came there with her boyfriend, then?” Tara shot back. “She’s trying to move in on you.”

I paused for a moment, but that was all that Tara needed, and she soon walked away. I realized there was no dissuading her.

That wasn’t the end of it. Of course it wasn’t. I soon realized what Amy had done by posting on Tara’s page. She was giving her the link back to her own profile. She wanted Tara to respond. And she had gotten it. Tara then left a comment on Amy’s page, calling her a dumb whore. Amy shot back in turn. It went on, each of them posting insulting comments on each other’s pictures.

Soon they were taking it to the next level. Tara posted a picture of herself standing in the woods with a smile on her face, the light of the trees filtering through the leaves behind her and casting a golden glow over her brown hair as she turned to the camera. It was a great shot; I almost swore she had never looked so beautiful. But she had captioned it “when you know you’re the best,” and while she didn’t name any names, it was clear what she was referring to.

That was only confirmed later, when Amy left a comment on it: “bold words for someone who isn’t even a photography major.” It wasn’t long after that she posted a new picture, one that was set to one-up Tara’s last attempt. I saw it as soon as it was posted, because she tagged me in it. And my jaw practically dropped when it loaded.

I feel so guilty saying this about my friend’s girlfriend, but…you need me to explain for this story to make sense. Amy, too, had posted a picture of herself spending her vacation. But this one was different.

She was on the beach, on a bright sunny day, clad in a purple bikini that hugged her svelte body tightly. Turned to the side just a little, you could see the strings tying her top and bottom at her hip and the back of her neck, dangling against her back and her pale and toned thighs. She sat by the shore, the water on one side of her as she reclined against a rock at the other, with her dark locks loose and cascading down her shoulders, and her long, toned legs were draped across the sand beneath her. I knew she was a photography major, but…wow.
She had set up this composition perfectly, drawing the attention to her. And her eyes were turned just towards the camera, with a knowing look. She was looking at me.

On anyone else’s gallery, this would just be another vacation shot. One that would garner a lot of likes, sure, but nothing unusual. But Amy wanted me to see this. She had taken it for me, and she was trying to seduce me. Not just that, but to one-up Tara and prove herself superior.

It worked. I can’t admit otherwise. It worked. I felt so bad that it had been so effective on me, but it did. I knew that Tara would be furious as soon as she found out – and she would. Amy wouldn’t have posted anything like this if she didn’t want Tara to see it. She knew Tara was following her, and she wanted her to know she had her in her sights. This was getting out of hand now, and I was growing worried that our relationship would be threatened, all because I had decided to catch up with my old friend while my girlfriend worked at the bar.

Finally, I knew, I had to do something about it. I had to talk to Rob about this.

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Re: Girlfriend Grudges
« Reply #1 on: August 10, 2025, 01:19:11 PM »
One thing I love, and one "opportunity":

<> Amy:  love, love, love the concept of the "taken" girl, who nonetheless would be down for some side action.  Lots of potential for misunderstandings and catfights.

But....

<> The narrator:  maybe it's just me, but for the first dozen paragraphs or so, I thought the narrator was a girl.  Kinda an important distinction to get straight up front (unless that was intentional).

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Re: Girlfriend Grudges
« Reply #2 on: August 10, 2025, 09:41:53 PM »
I really like the premise of your story!  It's a very believable build-up for a confrontation, and I'm very captivated by the characters.

Hope the next parts are coming soon, cause I can't wait tk read what happens next!

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Re: Girlfriend Grudges
« Reply #3 on: August 10, 2025, 10:26:51 PM »
Rob and I arranged to meet over lunch at a local sandwich shop. As we sat at a table across from one another, I filled him in on what was happening. But he cut me off. He already knew.

“You? You know about this? You’re okay with all this?”

“Yeah, why wouldn’t I be?” Rob explained. “C'mon, Jake. Who do you think took that picture?”

I couldn’t help but feel a pang of jealousy, but I continued. “You’re really okay with your girlfriend teasing me like this, though?”

“It’s not about you,” he said. “Maybe it was at one point. But not anymore. She doesn’t really like you like that. She’s trying to defend her territory.”

“Her..?”

“Girls can be very competitive with each other, you know. People don’t like to acknowledge it, but we really aren’t much different than animals. We have our boundaries. We try to stake things out for ourselves. And if we see someone else as a threat, then we try to assert our dominance. Tara crossed a line with her, and now she’s doing everything she can to let her
know she won’t tolerate that sort of thing.”

“But why don’t you stop it, then?”

“I don’t want to get involved,” Rob said, shaking his head. “This is between them. If I interfered, I’d only be dragging myself into their business.”

I sighed. “Look, Rob,” I said, “I really don’t want my relationship with Tara to be ruined like this. What if she breaks up with me over this? I mean, it was my idea to have you over at the bar. There has to be some way for them to settle.”

A smile came to Rob’s face as he looked up at me. “Oh, there is,” he said. I didn’t know what he was talking about. But he explained. “They’ve gotta decide it between themselves. They’ll only give when one of them submits. And if it comes to it, they’re going to have to fight it out.”

“F-Fight..?” I stammered. Rob couldn’t be serious with this.

“Put the two of them together. Let them go at it. We’ll know when one’s had enough. And that’ll be the end of it. Once they send that message, they’ll never bother each other again. Amy’s told me this has all happened with her before. She’ll have no problems doing it again.”

“I…is that even legal?” I mused, bewildered.

“No one has to find out,” Rob said. “Plus, I know just how to handle it. My parents got a new den in their basement. We have our friends over, make a party of it, and let the girls do their thing. If we have enough witnesses, no one will dispute who the better woman is. That should be the end of it.”

I stood for a moment, in shocked silence. I couldn’t help but admit it, though; Rob had a point. The fire with which the two had begun to trade their jabs at one another was getting to the point where if the two ran across each other again, I was sure someone was going to get hurt. This was the only way they were going to reach a conclusion to their little feud. Something definitive, contained, and with plenty of witnesses. And I had to admit…there was something in me that couldn’t help but find the idea of watching my girlfriend fight Rob’s enticing.

“But you’re staying with your family, right?” I asked. “Won’t they know?”

Rob shook his head. “They’ve got a trip planned, so they’ll be out for a few weeks coming up. Amy and I will have the place to ourselves. Besides, we haven’t seen each other in a while now, right? I’m sure they’ll understand if we want to get some old friends together and use the den.”

I was still worried if I was getting myself into something dangerous here. There was something about it all that didn’t seem right, and yet there was also something that told me that this was all inevitable. Tara and Amy wouldn’t budge for anything less than a fight. It had been brewing for too long now, and their hatred was only growing stronger and stronger with each day. If it was a fight they wanted, it was one they were going to get.

I broke the news to Tara the next day and explained the plan. She took one look at me, her face defiant and determined, and nodded. “I’ll do it,” she said.

“You’re sure about this?” I said tentatively. I knew that at this point it was going to happen sooner or later. But I still worried about her. Maybe there was an out. Maybe once Rob and Amy left, this would all be forgotten, and we could move on, without Tara having to get hurt. But I knew that was impossible. The business between the two had started, and now it would have to be finished.

Tara concurred with me. “Trust me,” she continued, “I think it’s a long time coming at this rate. She’s got it coming to her.”

“I just don’t want you getting hurt…”

“I’ve been in a good number of catfights before,” Tara said with a smirk. I didn’t doubt her, knowing how fiery she could get. “I’m not afraid of her.”

“So has Amy, according to Rob…” I cautioned.

Tara giggled a little as she flashed me a wink. “What,” she said, “are you talking me out of this? You don’t want to see your girlfriend kick the crap out of some dumb bitch who thinks she’s hot shit?”

I had to admit, she had me there.

“Rob’s going to get in touch with some friends and get things set up,” I explained. “He’ll let us know a week in advance, so we can get ready.”

“Perfect,” Tara said. She pulled me in closer, sealing the agreement with a kiss on my lips.

Now the deal was sealed, and the rivalry between Amy and Tara only grew hotter. They traded more comments back and forth, talking about how they were going to kick each other’s asses or how the other couldn’t possibly fight her way out of a wet paper bag. They knew that they would soon have their chance to prove their dominance once and for all. And they wanted to stoke the fires so that when the day came, they wouldn’t be holding anything back.

I did my part to let my friends know about the fight coming up, and gave them directions to Rob’s place. Everything was falling into place. And soon, the night was upon us.

It was a warm summer evening the night I found my car pulling up in the driveway of Rob’s family’s house. As my hands gripped the wheel, I could practically hear my heart pounding harder in my chest. My emotions were mixed, really. A part of me was afraid. What if someone got hurt? What if the cops busted us for this, because I was sure there was no way it could be legal? Had I really put my girlfriend up to fight my best friend’s into submission? And should I have?

But on the other side of things…I knew these two girls. I knew that Tara and Amy weren’t going to back down for anything short of a surrender from their rival. They were too committed, and things between them had gone on for too long. I knew that this was the only conclusion they would accept, and it was a long time coming to this. But this would be the payoff.

And at any rate…I’d get to see two gorgeous girls fighting each other. I’d be rooting for Tara, of course. But Amy had tried to seduce me more than once in the past, and as much as it pains me to say this, she wasn’t half bad at it.

As I stopped the car, I looked back at Tara, who sat in the passengers’ seat next to me. It was the middle of July, and she was dressed in a white tank top and jean shorts that hugged her figure tightly, flattering every curve. She didn’t blink, and she stared off into the distance out the window, a stoic look on her face. She was waiting for this, I knew.

“Tara?” I asked. “Just so you know, if you change your mind-“

“None of that,” she cut back, without a moment’s hesitation – almost like it had been rehearsed. “I’m not gonna change my mind. Let’s just show this bitch she made a mistake.”
I gulped, gripping the wheel a little tighter even though I knew the car was off. There was no talking her down now.

When Rob opened the door, I could already hear the noise coming from down below, of more voices than I could make out. Then I realized how many cars I had passed on the way here. It honestly shocked me at first - this turnout was far bigger than I had imagined. How many people had this gotten to?

“Hey, c’mon in!” Rob said with a grin, waving me inside. “I’ll show you the way.”

He led me down the stairs to the basement and around the corner, and soon I came to the den – transformed into the arena for what was to come. It was your average deal, a section of the basement that had been carpeted off, with a TV on the wall and some large, well-stuffed couches positioned in a semicircle around it. No one’s attention was on the TV, though. The couches had all been pushed to the edges, and laid out in the center were a few blue padded gym mats.

“I didn’t know you had these,” I muttered to Rob.

“My sister used to do gymnastics, so she had these to practice with,” he explained. “I figured I’d put them to good use.”

But what caught my eye next was how many people were here. I’d told a few friends, and Rob had done the same. Even Tara and Amy had spread the word. But evidently people had told people, and soon the den was filled to capacity. The couches were full of eager spectators, cheering and drinking from cans and bottles in their hands, and standing behind were still more, gathering around on their feet after the seats had filled up. A few people I recognized were here, and we sent each other our greetings. But there were plenty of new faces, too – friends of friends, and people who had just overheard that a fight was being set up. Or that there’d be beer. Or both. A lot of guys, of course, but there were even a few girls there, and they seemed just as excited to watch the action unfold.

But I knew who the real star of the evening was.

“Heeeey, look who it is!”

It didn’t matter that I’d only heard it in person once before. I knew that voice anywhere.

Amy came sauntering over to the mats, her hips wavering with every step she took. She took point in front of us and flashed us a grin. There was a beer can in her hand, and from the sound of her voice she was a few drinks into the night at this point. Maybe that was one reason why she had the biggest grin on her face I’d ever seen out of her. Her black t-shirt stopped just shy of the waistline of a pair of tiny khaki shorts that framed all attention on how long and toned her legs were – she did mention in one of her posts that she did track in high school, and I could see it now. She placed one hand on her hip, cocking her head toward me.

No, toward Tara. I knew who her attention was really on. But even when Amy was staring down her greatest rival, the one she’d been taunting and haranguing for over a month now, she didn’t seem the least bit angry or frustrated to be standing here in front of her. She was happy. She knew she had the opportunity of her lifetime in front of her. And, as far as she was concerned, she already knew she was going to win.

My attention turned back to Tara. She settled her gaze unblinkingly on Amy, staring her down with a serious stare I don’t think I’d ever seen from her before. Not a single muscle in her body moved. She didn’t want to show any hesitation if it was Amy in front of her. I had to admit, that sort of intensity coming from her was hot. And I hated to admit this even more, but so was Amy’s confidence.

“Took ya long enough,” Amy said with a smirk. “Here I was expecting you’d have turned around and run by now. Not that I’d blame you. Prissy little good girl really thought she had a chance?”

Rob had saved a seat on the couch for me, at the front of the action. He beckoned me over, passing me a beer. He wanted me to have front-row seats to watch our girlfriends tear each other apart. But even when I held the can in my hand, my attention was fully focused on the tension in front of me. I didn’t want to look away. Not even for a second.

“Bitch really thinks I’m a prissy good girl.” Tara rolled her eyes, giving a mocking chuckle. “Take a look at this, then.”

Nothing could have prepared me for what she did next. I need you to understand that in all the time leading up to this night – a time where we had been over multiple times what could happen and what she’d do – I never got the impression Tara was going to do this. Right in the middle of everyone, she grabbed the bottom of her tank top and yanked it up over her head, tossing it aside. Predictably, when the room was full of college guys and some of them were drunk, the whole den broke out into cheers. And they’d keep cheering when she pulled down her shorts a moment later and kicked them off, followed by her sandals. My girlfriend was now standing in front of everyone in her black bra and thong panties. There wasn’t a single sign of shame and embarrassment on her face, or in her stance, as she planted her hands on her hips to face Amy. I have to admit it, in that moment, gripped by confidence and defiance, she’d never looked hotter.

“Tara…what are you doing?” I cut in.

Tara looked back in my direction. “I like that fit too much to let this slut ruin it,” she said. “And I might as well remind her she doesn’t have anything worth showing.”

The cheers turned to an “oooh” for a minute there, but they turned back to cheers when Amy scoffed and stepped forward, shoving her beer can into Rob’s hand. “That’s where you’re wrong,” she said.

As quickly as Tara had, she whipped off her shirt and shorts. She was already barefoot, but now she was down to a blue bra and matching panties, showing off her trim, fit frame. Amy was slender, and her breasts were smaller than Tara’s, but she was no less toned and athletic, and now all of that was on full display. She knew it, too, if the teasing smirk she showed Tara then was any indication.

But Tara wouldn’t be swayed. “Bitch, you can’t fool me. I know that’s a push-up bra,” she retorted.

My eyes kept wavering between the two girls. I couldn’t believe what was happening. Tara was a little bigger, but Amy was leaner and more toned, and with longer legs like a runner’s. This could just as easily go anyone’s way. But I wasn’t really thinking of analytics right now. My girlfriend was in her underwear in front of me, and even if she was surrounded by strangers, she wasn’t the least bit hesitant. And even if I’d seen Amy in a bikini before, it just didn’t compare to seeing her here, in the flesh, and feeling her confident presence all the way from the couch – no matter what threats Tara threw her way, she just faced them with a smirk.

I saw their eyes running up and down each other's bodies, too. With this much skin showing, they could study every curve, and watch the faint ripple of muscles beneath their skin with every motion they made and every breath they took. They had to be comparing themselves to one another. Studying each other's figures, and matching them against their own. They were trying to gauge how fit they were for the coming fight, I was sure - but also, if they could convince themselves that they had the better body, that was one more thing they could take pride in.

Still, there was that creeping thought that wormed its way back into my head. What if my girl got hurt over some silly drama? I knew it was too late to stop the fight now – at this point, if I did, the angry mob would rip me limb from limb – but maybe I could at least make sure this was under control. “Shouldn’t we, uh, agree to some rules?” I said. “Like, no punches to the face, no pulling hair, or-“

But Rob took my arm and pulled it down, shaking his head. “That’s not for us to decide,” he said. “This is between the girls. If they don’t settle things their way, they never will.”
I gulped. But I knew he was right. I knew Tara, and I knew Amy. And I knew they wouldn’t settle this with anything less than a decisive finish, on their terms. All I could do was watch and wait as that happened. And all I could do was hope that luck was on Tara’s side.

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« Reply #4 on: August 10, 2025, 11:48:11 PM »
It's been quite a while since I was this intrigued by a catfight story. Well done so far.

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« Reply #5 on: August 11, 2025, 01:33:28 PM »
Excellent.    Can’t wait for next chapter

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« Reply #6 on: August 11, 2025, 11:36:42 PM »
Tara was ready for this - really, she’d been ready for this for a long while. She would be the one to throw the first blow. Sinking into a stance, bending low at the knees, she took one step forward and threw a slap right across Amy’s cheek. It landed with a crack, causing Amy to reel to the side. I gulped. I knew then that this was seriously going to happen. But what really confirmed it was when Amy planted her foot on the ground, standing firm, and went for a slap back at Tara, which sent her reeling in the other direction!

“Bitch!” Tara cried out. She swung for Amy again, the two of them exchanging slaps, paying each other back one for one. But I had to give Tara credit for this one – she was thinking ahead. This time, when Amy went to return fire, Tara grabbed for her wrist as it came near, stopping it just before her hand made contact. Their arms pulled and yanked like a tug of war, with each of them trying to take control.

Amy wouldn’t be contained for long, though. She hissed through her teeth, and with her free hand she grabbed for Tara’s brown hair, giving it a sharp yank downward and to the side. Tara let out a scream as she was pulled that way – but then, she grabbed for Amy’s hair with two hands, trying to outdo her. In doing so, though, she had just freed Amy’s other hand to attack, and that would go right for her rival’s scalp too. Now the two girls buried their curled fingers deeply into each other’s hair, yanking each other this way and that.

The crowd broke out into cheers. Some were cheering for Tara, and others for Amy, and others just wanted to see the spectacle. Amy started to get the upper hand, and as she pushed downward on Tara’s hair she managed to steer her back a few steps. Amy shoved harder with her shoulders, and my girl was pushed down onto her knees, and then her back, falling back with a groan. But she kept holding on to Amy, forcing her to double forward in order to maintain their mutual grasp.

Now Amy was practically bent over in half at the waist to maintain her grip on Tara’s hair – all while Tara tenaciously kept up her own hold, pulling Amy’s raven tresses. Her balance had been tested, and it was off-center. And that was something Tara would apply for leverage. Just then, she kicked up her legs and threw them around Amy’s waist, causing the paler girl to fall off her feet and come crashing down on top of her. She let out a squeal, gasping as Tara’s tanned legs clenched around her sides.

This will probably sound ridiculous, but I don’t think I’ve ever been more proud of Tara then when I saw her do that counter. Unfortunately, it wasn’t to last. Amy was still on top, and she started to throw slaps along Tara’s face and sides. Tara tried to hold on, yanking harder at Amy’s hair. The very fact she hadn’t let go was proof enough of her raw determination to win this. But with Amy slapping at her, her grip was beginning to slip. That was when she changed up her tactics. With one hand, she grabbed for Amy’s back, raking her nails along her skin! As pale as she was, Tara’s claws were enough to leave red marks down her bare back!

At first, Amy reeled back her head and screamed in pain. But pain soon gave way to anger. “Fucking skank-!” she spat in between gasps. She grabbed for Tara’s thigh, digging her own nails. Then, with Tara sending one hard slap to Amy’s face, the two girls rolled over onto their sides, facing each other.

For a moment, they lay there, panting for breath. But I knew it wouldn’t be long before they struck again. This fight definitely wasn’t over. And Amy would prove that when her hands shot forward – one grabbing Tara by the hair, and one shoving her palm into her face, digging her nails into her cheeks! Tara let out a shrill shriek that was enough to make me wince. She tried to throw a few slaps and punches back at Amy, but she was aiming blindly. Beneath them, their legs kicked and tangled, Tara’s tanned skin intertwining with Amy’s pale calves. As they struggled, their tangled legs pulled them in closer to each other. They were pressed up closer together, their hips and shoulders pressed into each other. And then, Tara grew close enough to swing her head forward, landing a headbutt against Amy’s forehead!

The raven-haired girl fell back, releasing Tara’s face and rolling over onto her other side to clutch at her own. And that was exactly when Tara struck. Bellowing in rage, she tackled Amy from behind. I knew this girl could be sassy, but I’d never seen her quite this aggressive. She threw her arm around Amy’s throat, cranking on it like she was trying to strangle the life out of her! Amy’s jaw dropped in shock; a hoarse groan left her throat. But she managed to grab for Tara’s arm, yanking and clawing at it. “Let…go, bitch!” she snapped.

“Fuck off!” Tara would only try to shove harder at Amy from behind, ramming her shoulders into her back. All around me, I could hear the cheers.

“Let’s go, Tara!”

“Kick her ass, Amy!”

As they pushed and pulled they began to rise, with Tara getting to her knees and pulling Amy up after her. Tara was fighting valiantly to hold on, but Amy was just as determined. Tara was her worst rival, and she wasn’t going to look weak in front of her. Eventually, that determination won out even above Tara’s, and she managed to pry that arm off of her, giving it a twist as she turned around to face her opponent. Now the two of them were on their knees, panting for breath. Their shoulders heaved, and their bodies dripped with sweat. But when they looked into their eyes, they still flared with anger, and their teeth still clenched in a grimace.

“You think this is over, slut?” Amy hissed. “It’s not. Not even a little. You’re gonna regret messing with me.”

“Fat chance you’ll even try,” Tara snapped back. “So far it looks like I’m gonna snap you like a twig.”

“Skank! You have no idea!” Amy retorted. And with that, she broke the momentary silence between them, connecting a swift backhand right across Tara’s cheek! My girlfriend gasped, whipping to the side as she turned. And with that, Amy seized on her chance. She lunged closer, and her hands grabbed for Tara’s breasts, clawing and squeezing at them!

I knew Rob had said that Amy had been in fights before, but I wasn’t expecting anything this brutal. Tara wailed in pain as the flesh of her breasts mushroomed between Amy’s fingers. For a moment, I thought about intervening. Maybe, I thought, I could get between them and stop this before anyone got hurt.

But I knew what Rob had said. This was between the girls. And they’d never forgive me if I deprived them of their chance to prove what they’d longed for for so long. I gulped. I had to keep watching.

“This great, or what?” Rob asked. But then, his girlfriend was the one in control right now. That was easy for him to say. I could only feel something stirring in the pit of my stomach at the thought of what Tara felt right now.

But then, I knew how tough she could be, and I knew she wouldn’t let this keep her down for long. And sure enough, she delivered. Even through the pain, Tara managed to take hold of Amy’s hair with two hands, giving her one sharp yank, then another. One of Amy’s hands fell off her boob, now traced with red marks, but she held firm with the other. That wouldn’t be good enough. And so, Tara threw a hard punch into Amy’s ribs, finally knocking her loose!

Amy fell back onto her ass, while Tara leaned forward panting for air. Whether intentionally or otherwise, Amy had pulled down one of the cups of Tara’s bra while she fell, and now the brunette’s breast was hanging loose. It was notably paler than the rest of her tanned skin, a fact that garnered a chuckle from Amy, who looked up, brushing some strands of hair away from her face. “Aw, is miss tough girl here too afraid to get an all-over tan?”

“At least I have tits,” Tara snapped back. She lunged in then, throwing all her weight against Amy as she tackled her back against the mat. Once again she grabbed at her hair, pulling at it in all directions. Amy did the same, and the two of them began to roll all over the floor, kicking and cursing at each other at every turn. But now that Amy had bared one of Tara’s breasts, she had exposed a vulnerable spot – and she would grab for it, squeezing at it even harder than she had before!

Tara screamed from the pain coursing through her. But if anything, she had taken a valuable lesson from it. More skin meant more unprotected areas to inflict pain. That must have been what her thought process was. When she rolled on top of Amy again, she swung a fist straight for the girl’s face, and knocked it back with a snap, causing her to gasp as she fell back against the mat. Then, she grabbed for her rival’s blue bra, right in the middle. She yanked back hard as she shoved her way back to her feet. Amy was lifted to her feet in the process – but only for a short while before her bra ripped right off her body, causing her to fall to her knees!

The crowd broke out into cheers at the sight. Amy gasped, bringing an arm up to cover herself. Tara stood tall, a dominant grin on her face as she swung Amy’s bra in a circle around her head before tossing it into the crowd. Maybe she was trying to make Amy more vulnerable to attacks. But I don’t doubt that after how smug Amy had been, Tara was waiting for the right opportunity to take her down a peg.

Unfortunately for my girl, that would only work for so long. Amy’s embarrassment would quickly be subsumed by anger – and she bellowed in rage at the thought of being humbled by her worst enemy. I could see her muscles start to twitch and tremble as the rage in her brewed, and then, she looked back up at her foe. With a surge of strength, she lunged forward and tackled Tara’s legs, sending her flat on her face! I winced as I saw my girlfriend come crashing to the floor – and as I heard the sheer fury in Amy’s voice.

“You WHORE!! I’ll make you PAY for thinking you can get away with that!”

Just as soon as Tara had fallen with a thud, her rival rolled behind her. The first thing Amy did was grab for Tara’s dangling bra. Shifted out of place, it was already starting to slip down; one strap was sliding down her arm, and it was having trouble covering her remaining breast. But now, Amy yanked it straight up around Tara’s throat. Her breasts spilled beneath her, and the crowd would only cheer louder when Amy pulled back hard at Tara’s bra, forcing her head to bend backward and lifting her up from the mats. There her bare breasts were on display for all to see, swaying from side to side with each lurch of her body.

I couldn’t help myself, but I almost felt a little guilty for looking, knowing that Tara was in such a bad spot. She coughed and sputtered a few breathless gasps, her face contorting in a grimace. Now it was Tara’s turn to be beaten and humiliated in front of the crowd. And…I really hate to be saying this, but as much as I hated knowing that was my girlfriend, there was something exciting about it. And something exciting about seeing just how wild and passionate Amy was when she was fighting back.

I bit my lip. This couldn’t go on. I had to stop this. Not just because Tara was going to get hurt, but because I didn’t want to be confronted with these feelings any more. I couldn’t be feeling this way about seeing the girl of my dreams getting choked out by my best friend’s girlfriend. “Rob, we’ve got to call this off,” I said. “What if they get sent to the hospital? Shit, what do we even tell them?”

But he met me with a smug smirk. Almost like his girl’s. “You just saying that because your girl’s losing?”

I gulped, turning my head back to the scene. No, he was right. I couldn’t break this up just to save Tara. She’d never accept that. That would be an admission that not only could she not beat Amy, she needed help. I knew a girl as spirited as Tara would never forgive me for that.

The real question was, could Tara even get out of this?

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« Reply #7 on: August 12, 2025, 10:10:04 PM »
I could only watch as my girlfriend’s rival strangled her with her own bra, pulling it back tighter against her throat. Tara coughed and wheezed hopelessly, but Amy would only smirk a smug smirk, tossing her hair back and out of her face with a flick of her head. I felt guilty for staring at Tara’s boobs when she was in a place like this, but I really felt guilty for finding that smug, dominant look in Amy sexy as hell. I knew that Rob wouldn’t want me checking out his girl like that…and, more importantly, Tara would absolutely hate it.

But I also knew that Tara was a tough girl who didn’t take shit from anyone. And sure enough, as Amy pulled back harder on the bra around her neck, she belted out a scream of defiance – one that brought all the cheers and chattering in the room to a sudden halt. Tara wasn’t out of this just yet! She threw an elbow behind her, into Amy’s ribs. Then another, and another! Each one landed with the sound of a smack against her sweat-slick skin!

“Gah! Fuck! Quit it!” Amy spat. But Tara wouldn’t be done until she was free – she couldn’t let her rival have the satisfaction of dominating her this way. With one last swing, she knocked Amy right off of her, sending the raven-haired girl tumbling onto her back!

The crowd broke out into cheers. I couldn’t help it – I did too. To see Tara break through impossible odds and fight her way free gave me an unquenchable sense of pride.

Panting for breath, she rolled herself backward, pushing her hands up off the mat to rise to a seated position. She pulled her bra off from around her neck and threw it aside. Everyone had seen everything anyway, and she wasn’t going to let modesty stop her now. Not with her pride on the line.

Amy pushed her way up to her feet then. Tara did too. There, she slowly strafed around in a circle, her eyes fixed on Amy and her weight shifted slightly forward as she leaned in closer. I could tell the fight was taking its toll on both girls. Their motions had become slower and staggered, and their chests and shoulders heaved with every breath they took. They were slick with sweat all over, and their skin was traced with red welts where they’d scratched and slapped each other. Their hair was a tangled mess, with a few clumps lying at their feet. Both were now in nothing but their panties, their breasts hanging free and swaying with every step. But they both knew this wasn’t over. It wouldn’t be until one of them had conceded defeat.
They both needed a moment to catch their breath. But even if they did, they wouldn’t let their rivals think for a moment this meant they were slowing down. Their eyes were locked in a glare, and their teeth fixed in snarls. In between pants, they traded insults.

“Slut,” Tara huffed.

“Skank!” Amy shot back.

“Flat freak!”

“Psycho bitch!”

“Man-stealing whore!”

That was the one that brought a gasp from the crowd. Tara had gone for an allegation now – and it was an allegation Amy wouldn’t have!

“You-!!” She stormed forward then, throwing a punch right into Tara’s gut! Tara gasped and groaned as she stumbled back – but then threw a slap of her own, catching Amy right across her tits! Amy briefly swerved to the side – but when she looked back up, it was with a shrill shriek fueled by rage. I knew then that she wasn’t just trying to beat Tara. She was trying to destroy her!

“Tara! Don’t lose this now!” I called. And not a moment too soon, because Amy charged for her with blinding speed, running quicker than she had any right to in her fatigued state! As she came near, her hands grasped for Tara’s breasts, squeezing them with all her might!

Tara threw her head back in a squeal as the pain shot through her system. At this point, though, she wasn’t even going to try to defend herself – she’d just make sure that Amy felt everything she was inflicting on her! She started to claw and maul at Amy’s breasts in turn, twisting them as her nails sunk deep into the flesh!

Both girls cried out in pain, but they wouldn’t slow down. Amy, looking to escalate things further let go of one of Tara’s breasts to snatch at her hair, and gave it a sharp pull down. It wasn’t long before Tara followed suit. They were pulling each other back and forth, forcing each other to bend over sideways as they yanked and twisted at hair. Their cries of pain had given way to growls of rage and aggression. Both of them were fully committed to winning this fight, and humbling their rival. And, watching it all unfold, I knew one thing.
Tara couldn’t lose this.

My voice rang out above the crowd. “COME ON, TARA!! MAKE THIS BITCH SORRY!!” I’m not normally the type to get this heated about these things. But this was my girlfriend, against her rival, in the toughest fight of her life. Like hell I’d let her face it alone. By this point, I wanted to see her kick Amy’s ass to the curb just as much as she did!

I don’t know if Tara heard me, or if she was just too consumed with rage in that moment. But almost as soon as those words had left my mouth, she balled a fist and swung it low, burying into Amy’s pale midsection just below her belly button. The raven-haired girl threw back her head and screamed in pain. And Tara didn’t stop there, either. She curled her nails like claws and struck again, shoving into Amy’s gut again with a firm thrust of her palm. Then, those nails dug inward, clawing at Amy’s belly. She screamed again, even louder this time – I could see the tears start to form in her eyes.

“FUCK HER UP, AMY!! FUCK HER UP!” Rob called back. Even if he was yelling for Amy to hurt my girlfriend, I honestly didn’t even think twice about it. He was just as hyped up as I was. And the whole room had grown to a fever pitch of cheers. Everyone now wanted to see this fight through to the end.

But I was starting to understand something about Amy and Tara through this match. Tara was feisty – I knew that as much. She was an outspoken girl who wasn’t afraid to speak her mind. It just made sense that she would be this tough. But Amy? Amy might have looked like a nice girl from the outside. But Amy fought dirty.

I’d see that as much with what came next. For a moment, Rob’s girl was writhing in Tara’s grip. I saw her squirm, and I saw the eager grin on Tara’s face. I thought, for a moment, that she just might have this. But then, Amy’s hand shot for Tara’s face. Now, another piercing scream filled the air as Amy raked her nails right across Tara’s eyes!

I couldn’t imagine how hard that had to have hurt - I shuddered just seeing it. Tara was forced to double back, clutching at her face. If I knew one thing about Tara, and one thing about this fight, it was that she wasn’t going to let Amy out of reach for any circumstances – so if something like this happened, something was very wrong. And Amy wouldn’t leave it at that, either.

She tailed after Tara, throwing a few slaps at her side that knocked her this way and that way. Each time the flat of her palm landed against Tara’s sweaty bare skin, a resounding thud rang out through the room. Then she aimed higher, throwing a slap right across my girl’s breasts that caused them to sway and jiggle. Tara let out a loud squeal at that. And finally, Amy reached for Tara’s hair with both hands, grabbing it and burying her fingers in up to the knuckle. She pulled her head straight downward, yanking Tara off her feet and sending her crashing onto her knees. My girl landed with a thud, letting out a squeal as she landed.

“Say your prayers, slut!” Amy snapped. She pulled back at Tara’s hair, forcing her head back, until she was folded over in a C shape. Tara was on her knees, and Amy had her bent backward, forcing her to look up into her eyes – her eyes, now fixed on Tara’s in a hateful glower. I could see the composure in Tara’s face waver as her eyelid twitched. I leaned in a little closer. Everything seemed to go still. Was this it? Was she going to submit now?

No. That wasn’t the Tara I knew. And sure enough, she would reach around then and dig her nails into the backs of Amy’s thighs! Amy let out a gasp, her fingers slipping free from Tara’s hair – and that gave Tara the freedom she needed to throw herself forward, aiming her head right into Amy’s already scratched and bruised gut! The two girls went crashing to the ground, Tara on top of Amy, who gasped and sputtered as the air was driven from her lungs against Tara’s lunge. I let out a loud cheer. This was the comeback I had been banking on, and Tara was delivering. Maybe, just maybe, my girl still had a chance!

Almost as soon as Amy’s back had hit the mat, she let out a loud screech. Not one of pain. I’d started to realize how to tell the difference by now. This was a scream of rage – and Amy wouldn’t dare allow Tara to get the better of her like this! She threw her arms around Tara’s back, scratching and clawing at whatever she could get a hold of. Tara just retaliated in kind – clawing at Amy’s sides, grabbing and mauling her petite breasts. Any bare skin they could find was another opportunity to inflict pain on each other, and they were using every chance they got.

They started rolling now – Amy threw her weight over, getting on top of Tara, but only for a few seconds before Tara took control again. They never stopped striking and scratching at each other. Their legs tangled beneath them, constantly in motion. At first, I thought they were trying to wrap their legs around each other’s to keep them from rolling, but when I saw the red marks run down Amy’s milky legs, I knew what was happening. Their fingers weren’t enough – they were both trying to scratch each other with their toenails!

“BEAT HER, TARA! GO GO GO!!” I cried. With the sheer ferocity on display, I knew that any finish here was going to be a close one. But I didn’t want to accept that a girl as tough as Tara could lose. She had to win this. I was counting on her!

And Tara was definitely growing bolder. Just then, as she rolled on top of Amy again, she leaned down and bit her right on the shoulder! As I watched her teeth sink into the girl’s skin, I gasped. I knew Tara could be a hothead, but this was a step above and beyond for her. But no one could bring this aggression out of her quite like Amy could!

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« Reply #9 on: August 13, 2025, 10:19:21 PM »
Amy screamed as the pain shot through her body. Frantic and desperate, she grabbed for Tara’s hair with both hands, yanking back on it hard once, then twice. For once, she wasn’t even trying to cause her rival pain – just to force her to let go! But Tara held firm – even as Amy began pulling out clumps of brown hair, she kept going back, digging her teeth in harder.

“You fucking psycho!! Let go!” she cried. She threw a few smacks against Tara’s ass with one hand, ringing out with a wet slap and causing her exposed cheeks to jiggle every time, before grabbing her hair again, and then gave one last forceful tug. This was enough to pull Tara off of her – for a moment, she had to stop, suspended from Amy’s fingers by her hair as she gasped for breath. Her face was red, and sweat glistened on her skin.

When I saw that, I could feel something drop in the pit of my stomach. Tara had stalled out for a few seconds. And those few seconds could mean everything.

“GET HER, AMY!! GET HER!” Rob called. But Amy didn’t need the invitation. Twisting Tara’s hair tighter in one hand, she brought her other hand up to squeeze her breast tightly, causing my girl to let out a pained squeal. Then, she bucked her hips once, then twice; Tara rose and fell against the motions. And with that momentum behind her, Amy could shove Tara off to the side, flipping her over onto her back.

It was only a few fleeting seconds before Amy pounced. She rolled on top of Tara again. This time, Amy’s sleek bare legs clamped around Tara’s midsection, squeezing down and pinching her waist in. Tara gasped from the pressure; she tried to bring up her hands, but Amy was too quick for her. She snatched at my girl’s wrists and shoved them straight down against the mat, pinning them in place.

“No you don’t, bitch,” Amy snapped. I couldn’t look away – I couldn’t even blink at the sight. Tara was flat on the ground, and Amy on top of her. Both of them nearly naked, I could see every scratch and welt they had left across each other’s skin, glistening with sweat under the lights. Amy had Tara straddled, her hips pressing down against my girl’s flat stomach. For a time, they were still – the only motions I could see were the rise and fall of their shoulders as they gasped for air. For the first time in what felt like forever, things had slowed to a crawl.

Amy glared down into Tara’s eyes, rising a little bit higher above her. Her breasts hung beneath her, rocking with every sway of her body. “Say it, you whore. Say it. I know you’re thinking it,” she huffed in between gasps.

Tara’s eyes narrowed in a glare, and her teeth clenched in a grimace. “Fuck you!” she snapped back.

“That’s not what I asked for!” Amy barked. She shifted her grip so that she held both of Tara’s wrists in one hand now, and threw a sharp slap across Tara’s face, causing her head to crack to the side. There, she sank back with a groan. But there she stayed, sinking lower into the mat.

My mouth hung open in shock. It couldn’t be. After how hard Tara had fought, after how much she and I had talked it through about what she was going to do, it felt like there was no way she could lose. But I could watch as the light dimmed from her eyes. There was only fatigue and soreness and defeat in them now. Her motions had slowed, and her voice was weak. I didn’t want to believe it, but…

“Say it!” Amy shouted again. She squeezed her toned legs harder, pressing her thighs up against Tara’s waist. As she rose up to draw on more force, Tara threw her head back with a low, groggy, tear-choked groan. Amy let go of her wrists, now sitting up on top of Tara’s belly with her hands on her hips. As I saw her release her grip, I thought for just a second that Tara might find some more strength in her – enough to power out and fight back and bring Amy down. But she didn’t. She didn’t have anything left in her. Amy knew that – that was the only reason she’d ever think it was safe to let go of Tara.

And while she had the top position, she was going to exert control. Gritting her teeth as she summoned the strength she needed, Amy squeezed her thighs together even tighter - so much so that Tara began to cough and wheeze, bucking up and down against the ground as the air was forced from her lungs!

I could only lean closer and closer, hanging off the edge of my seat. I didn’t even want to blink. I was holding out hope that Tara might have some trick up her sleeve still, and that at any second she could flip everything around. That she could still win. When I saw her open her mouth, I thought she was about to cry out in defiance - to prove Amy wrong. That she’d belt out a mighty battle cry as she powered through and put Rob’s girl in her place.

But that wasn’t what she did. With the air choked from her lungs, Tara could only manage a weak, half-muffled groan, her voice ragged with fatigue. And what she said was even worse than how she said it.

“I give…” Tara groaned out.

Sitting close, I could feel that like a chill shooting down my spine, and I pulled back with a wince. Already, a few cheers broke out. I could see flashes go off as the other spectators pulled out their phones to snap photos and video of Amy sitting on top of Tara’s crumpled, defeated form. But Amy wasn’t happy with that.

“Didn’t catch that, bitch. Care to say it louder?”

“I GIVE!” Tara screamed it now, her voice choked with tears. At once, I felt a cold, clammy sensation run over me. I had come out all this way to see Tara settle her grudge. To put this behind her once and for all. But in the end, it had only left her defeated, in front of everyone.

But Amy didn’t care. Amy couldn’t have been happier to have her dejected rival pinned beneath her. And as soon as those words left Tara, I saw Amy’s lips curl into that same smug little grin she’d shown me all the way back when I first met her, and she knew she had flustered me. She knew what she had done here, too, and she couldn’t have been more proud of herself.

“Smartest thing you’ve ever said,” Amy purred. With that, she jumped up from Tara, throwing her hands in the air. She bent over and gave her one last parting slap across the cheek, then ran over to the couch – where Rob was waiting. As half the crowd roared with cheers, Amy threw her arms around her boyfriend, pulling him into a tight embrace and a kiss.

My eyes, though, were fixed on Tara, and how she lay there, crumpled. She was still sore and aching. I’m sure Amy was, too, but the adrenaline rush of victory was pounding through her, and she was as full of energy as ever. But I had never seen Tara quite like this. Slowly, she pushed herself up onto her side, her body heavy and sagging, her eyes dull, and her mouth hanging limp.

I stared back at her. My mouth was hanging open too. I couldn’t imagine how much it had to hurt. Not just the physical pain, but the thought of being outdone and humiliated like this, in front of everyone. I knew how much this fight meant to Tara – so I also knew that to come up short would’ve hurt more than anything Amy could’ve done to her.

I was so focused on Tara that I didn’t even see where Amy was going. As she and Rob parted, she circled in front of me. Before I knew what had happened, Amy had grabbed me by the cheeks and pulled me closer – and kissed me right on the lips.

Everything went hot. Everything felt like a blur – almost like my head was full of static. There were a lot of emotions hitting me at once, a lot of emotions I’m not sure if I can fully describe. But I did feel a tingly sensation run up through me…and as much as I hate to say this, it was kind of nice. I felt for Tara. But to be kissed by a beautiful girl like Amy, high on the thrill of victory...it sparked a certain feeling in me that made the hairs on the back of my neck stand up.

And as soon as Amy pulled back from me, her blue eyes met mine, and she gave a quick wink. Then, she looked back at Tara. For a few seconds, as Tara was picking herself up off the mat, they met eye to eye. And there, I could see that same smug smile cross Amy’s face. Just one last reminder for Tara of who had come out on top.

Finally, though, Amy took a step back. She picked up the can of beer from Rob’s hand and thrust it to the sky. “All right,” she cheered, “who really wants to party?”

The whole room cheered. Her hips swaying, Amy wove her way back into the throngs. She didn’t even bother to get dressed, strutting around in just her panties. Even when she was topless in front of so many guys, she didn’t care - she was victorious and proud, and she wanted everyone to see it. She was like a classical statue, there to be admired. There was definitely something captivating in a girl like that, something that made her svelte figure and the grace with which she moved it seem even more electrifying. Ashamed as I am to admit it, my eyes did linger on her ass for a little. But then, I turned back to Tara, gently taking her by the arms to help her back up.

“You’re okay?” I asked her. Her only response was a grumble, and she glanced aside. I understood if she didn’t want to talk right now, and I wouldn’t pressure her.

Rob got up from the couch, coming to my side as Tara started to gather up her clothes. “Hey, man, no hard feelings, yeah?” he said. “You’re welcome to stick around.”

I looked back at Tara, then back at him. We didn’t say anything, but I knew what was on her mind. “I think we’re good,” I said. “I think she’d rather we head out.”

Tara started shrinking away to the door as she pulled her clothes back on. The two of us headed up the stairs, the sounds of music and cheering slowly dwindling away to nothing. As we walked back out to the car, I threw my arm around Tara, keeping her close against my side. But I still felt her let out a long exhale, and her shoulders slumped. She gazed down at the ground, not saying a word.

“Just so you know,” I told her, “you still did great out there. You’re still an awesome girl, and I’m proud to have you.” But no response.

There was a brief silence as we got into the car before I spoke again. “...Look, Amy doesn’t really feel that way about me,” I told Tara. “She wouldn’t do that in front of Rob if she did. She just wanted to get under your skin.” Again, nothing.

With a sigh, I turned the keys in the ignition, pulling out of the driveway. I headed toward my place – I figured I’d let Tara spend the night so she wouldn’t have to worry about getting home. But most of that drive passed in silence, with Tara staring out the window as the neighborhood rolled by. My eyes were staring out into the horizon, the events of the fight playing out in my head. Everything about it – everything I saw, everything I felt – was burned into my head. And there was still a sour sensation down there at the pit of my stomach. That, in trying to help Tara get the closure she was after, I’d just made her feel worse. Would she even forgive me for this, I asked myself? How would she be able to face her classmates knowing they’d seen her in her lowest and weakest moment?

Before long, we were pulling back into the garage. As the car slowed to a stop, I looked back at Tara, who was staring out into space. It took me some time to work out what I was going to say, but I cleared my throat and said it.

“Hey, look at it this way,” I said. “At least now, you don’t have to worry about her any more, right? This was supposed to settle things. So between you and her, it’s over.”

Slowly, Tara turned around to face me. I was expecting to see a frown on her face, her eyes puffy and wet with tears. I expected to put my arm around her and pull her closer into a hug – letting her know that whatever it was she was feeling, or how vulnerable she felt, I’d be there for her.

But that wasn’t what I saw. Instead, her expression was flat, stern, stoic – composed. She stared straight through me, never betraying any emotion with even a twitch in her eye.

“Actually,” she said, “if this bitch still thinks she can mess with me, it’s far from over.”

I gulped. This was going to be a long summer.

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Re: Girlfriend Grudges
« Reply #10 on: August 14, 2025, 12:03:31 AM »
I had high hopes for that story and it totally delivered! What an amazing fight!

Just out of curiosity, was the fifth part the conclusion of the story so far, or is there still more to come?

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Re: Girlfriend Grudges
« Reply #11 on: August 14, 2025, 12:11:15 AM »
I had high hopes for that story and it totally delivered! What an amazing fight!

Just out of curiosity, was the fifth part the conclusion of the story so far, or is there still more to come?
Thank you very much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed my foray into the world of catfight literature.

This is the end of Girlfriend Grudges, but it's definitely not the end for me. I really enjoyed writing this one, and the reception I've gotten has been an honor, so expect to see more stories from me in the future. I've got plenty of plans, and this isn't the last you'll see of Tara, Amy, Jake, Rob, or Brookvale. Stay tuned!
« Last Edit: August 14, 2025, 12:12:15 AM by Astrakhan »

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Re: Girlfriend Grudges
« Reply #12 on: August 14, 2025, 11:58:00 AM »
Well written and nice fight.
I liked to way you didn't go for he obvious stuff; blonde v brunette, no 99fff breasts etc, interesting result.
I'm glad you enjoyed writing it - yeah it is fun!
I hope to see more. I'd like to see more on Amy and Tara's motivations.
Consciously Incompetant.

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Offline Astrakhan

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Re: Girlfriend Grudges
« Reply #13 on: August 14, 2025, 08:56:28 PM »
Well written and nice fight.
I liked to way you didn't go for he obvious stuff; blonde v brunette, no 99fff breasts etc, interesting result.
I'm glad you enjoyed writing it - yeah it is fun!
I hope to see more. I'd like to see more on Amy and Tara's motivations.
Coming from you, this is a true honor. I'm a big fan of your work, and your Sally stories were a big reason why I decided to go back to writing. Glad you enjoyed!

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Re: Girlfriend Grudges
« Reply #14 on: Yesterday at 12:40:35 AM »
I really enjoyed this one. I wish I had the ability to write back and forth fights like this. I tend to start out with that intention and when the girl I want to win starts winning it becomes really one sided. Which I like that to but I love it when it’s back and forth like this. Not knowing who will win until it happens.

       I also liked the way one girl didn’t get lucky or land some absurdly vicious injury but instead showed greater will to fight. Seeing it in her opponent’s eyes she was finished and no longer a threat. Able to soak in the win before anyone else knew it. She had the ability to draw the submission from her rival anyway she chose to. It was different than most stories. I sure hope you do write more.