[Jonica]

Yay!  Terrific work as usual, Laurie!  I am so impressed with your writing abilities.  If you ever stop I will ride my tricycle to South Dakota and chain you to your laptop!





Joni
xoxo

[lil sara]

sooooo omg awesome Brat Sis!!! the story keeps gettin' better 'n better...i luv'd readin' it 'n like Joni said...ya better not stop now or else ya will be chained 'ta yer laptop...*giggle*

*huggles 'n kisses*

[laurie breeze]

Thanks, Joni 'n Sis!!!  

Yeesh, between Pete's snow machine, Joanne's camp-outs 'n now the threat of being chained to my laptop, I'd better get moving on finishing part two of the chapter!      


A couple of new characters based on FCF friends made their first appearances in this chapter:

SILKY HEIDI, one of Lurlene "Queen of the Blondes" Johnson's soiled doves, played by Preppy_Girl_Fighter

C.C. CLEEVER, an associate of the mysterious 'H', played by Catfight Cop

More new characters will follow in part two of the chapter!


hugggzzzz 'n xoxo

~L~

[Heidi Alexis Foster]

Ummmmmmmmmmm......Wow, so like where to begin?? I used to think that cowboy stories were just for boys. Neither me nor any of my friends read them, but whatever.... I prefer magazines to books anyways. I've never rilly cared about the old west at all, though I have  been a Saloon girl for like the past three Halloweens now!

I have to admit though, I found myself totally unable to stop reading... I guess that means you're like a good writer or something Laurie (at least for a Girly Girl that is! ). I am VERY curious to see where all of this goes!

Laurie, here's a little critique for you, so you can become a better writer! 

PROS: You totally described my style and beauty and presence PERFECTLY!! OMG, that scene where I'm walking down the street and all of those boys are just falling all over themselves?! SO kewl!! Also, LOVED how you included Kasia with me!! With the two of us making out, we'd be taking over that town! 

CONS: OK....IRL.....if ANY girl tossed a parasol of mine into the mud, I'd be tossing HER in after it!! *curtsies* That girl Jenn would have TOTALLY had her booty kicked by me!! Other than that, everything else was good....Just NOT ENOUGH SILKY HEIDI!!!!

XOXOXO

[Marie B.]

Love your use of Wild, Wild West dialogue, Laurie.

I'm a-fixin' to read the story agin!

Great job.



Marie

[laurie breeze]

Ummmmmmmmmmm......Wow, so like where to begin?? I used to think that cowboy stories were just for boys. Neither me nor any of my friends read them, but whatever.... I prefer magazines to books anyways. I've never rilly cared about the old west at all, though I have  been a Saloon girl for like the past three Halloweens now!

I have to admit though, I found myself totally unable to stop reading... I guess that means you're like a good writer or something Laurie (at least for a Girly Girl that is! ). I am VERY curious to see where all of this goes!

Laurie, here's a little critique for you, so you can become a better writer!  

PROS: You totally described my style and beauty and presence PERFECTLY!! OMG, that scene where I'm walking down the street and all of those boys are just falling all over themselves?! SO kewl!! Also, LOVED how you included Kasia with me!! With the two of us making out, we'd be taking over that town!  

CONS: OK....IRL.....if ANY girl tossed a parasol of mine into the mud, I'd be tossing HER in after it!! *curtsies* That girl Jenn would have TOTALLY had her booty kicked by me!! Other than that, everything else was good....Just NOT ENOUGH SILKY HEIDI!!!!

XOXOXO

Thanks Heidi! I know you're from NY 'n the only horses you've ever seen were in an amusement park or in front of a supermarket    so I can understand how western stories aren't your thing. I grew up out here, I live just a few miles from where my story takes place, been to Deadwood lots of times, it's been a part of my life forever..... 'n they say it's good to write what you know so that's what I'm doing!

Ummmm, you don't know Miss Jenn, do ya? Don't take my word for it but if you tried starting up with her, the booty that would be kicked would be yours. Not saying that to be mean, only telling it like it is. Joni, Joanne, Marie, even Ms. Jenn herself will back that up!     You'd run straight to the store 'n buy another parasol....it's less expensive than a doctor's bill!

Hope you like the rest of the chapter!  

xoxo

Love your use of Wild, Wild West dialogue, Laurie.

I'm a-fixin' to read the story agin!

Great job.



Marie

Thanks, Short Stuff!  

Just keep on a-readin, thangs are gonna get right orn'ry by 'n by....mark my words on that there!

xoxo

Laurie ,  Thank you for starting chapter 7.  The snow machine is gone.  I put a ball and 300 feet of chain on your left leg.  Hehehehehe.

pete

Oh yippety skip! Thanks, Pete! More chains.....just what I need!

xoxo

~L~


I've been asked a few times if the character of Lurlene Johnson 'The Queen of the Blondes' is based on a FCF regular. She isn't. She's based on Mollie Johnson, a real Soiled Dove 'n madam from Deadwood. I did think about using an FCF blonde but the blonde egos are so big now, I knew I would be creating a monster if I gave a blonde here the title of 'Queen'!    

[Jonica]

Ummmmmmmmmmm......Wow, so like where to begin?? I used to think that cowboy stories were just for boys. Neither me nor any of my friends read them, but whatever.... I prefer magazines to books anyways. I've never rilly cared about the old west at all, though I have  been a Saloon girl for like the past three Halloweens now!

I have to admit though, I found myself totally unable to stop reading... I guess that means you're like a good writer or something Laurie (at least for a Girly Girl that is! ). I am VERY curious to see where all of this goes!

Laurie, here's a little critique for you, so you can become a better writer! 

PROS: You totally described my style and beauty and presence PERFECTLY!! OMG, that scene where I'm walking down the street and all of those boys are just falling all over themselves?! SO kewl!! Also, LOVED how you included Kasia with me!! With the two of us making out, we'd be taking over that town! 

CONS: OK....IRL.....if ANY girl tossed a parasol of mine into the mud, I'd be tossing HER in after it!! *curtsies* That girl Jenn would have TOTALLY had her booty kicked by me!! Other than that, everything else was good....Just NOT ENOUGH SILKY HEIDI!!!!

XOXOXO

OMG!!!  I just laughed so hard Diet Coke shot out my nose when I read Heidi's con!  I can't wait til Jenn sees this.  As a matter of fact, I think I will email this quote to her!



J
xoxo

[Jonica]

On my way to South Dakota:

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XaLKFiMvlb0

[peccavi]

Thank you Laurie for another excellent post, I love it. And yes I do have quite a temper, but I hope I am a little more restrained in real life. (though gosh what I'd like to do to some developers or ratepayers (or indeed to the evil bastard who bashed my cousin James last weekend- dear James- he was visiting his parents and went out to see some friends, he in the street saying goodbye before going back to his parents when someone hit him because he woudlnt give the fool a lift somewhere- 2 fractures to his eye socket, blurred vision ..not good)
 is something not even you could imagine!).

 And to Ms Preppy, well if you tried anything after your parasol was gone you'd be surprised. As it is I might just include you in one of my stories: as to which I am sorry peeps I've been more than a little slack on the writing front lately.

And to Jonica,  you shouldn't drink diet anything. It's bad for you. And chocolate is good for you!

Delightful thanks you evil kittie

[A_J 2012]

Great job Laurie!
This should be put into a book, i would buy it !

[Heidi Alexis Foster]

Thank you Laurie for another excellent post, I love it. And yes I do have quite a temper, but I hope I am a little more restrained in real life. (though gosh what I'd like to do to some developers or ratepayers (or indeed to the evil bastard who bashed my cousin James last weekend- dear James- he was visiting his parents and went out to see some friends, he in the street saying goodbye before going back to his parents when someone hit him because he woudlnt give the fool a lift somewhere- 2 fractures to his eye socket, blurred vision ..not good)
 is something not even you could imagine!).

 And to Ms Preppy, well if you tried anything after your parasol was gone you'd be surprised. As it is I might just include you in one of my stories: as to which I am sorry peeps I've been more than a little slack on the writing front lately.

And to Jonica,  you shouldn't drink diet anything. It's bad for you. And chocolate is good for you!

Delightful thanks you evil kittie

OK.....Ummmmmmm...whatever Joni might have told you in her email...it was probably like a lie....When I said what I said, I had no idea that you were a mod here.... Please humbly except my apologies for what I said. *bats my lashes innocently* Honestly, I don't start any drama with girls that can boot me from the site...girls like Joni or Laurie...that's another story!! *giggles*

XOXO,
Heidi

[peccavi]

Preppy I would never boot you from the site or ban you for making comments about me like that. It would be most unfair, you said nothing wrong within our rules. But a preppy lil girl like you, someone who wears stockings and bats her eyelids at me, well, I'd love to have you over my knee . You'd squeal so well as I spanked you.

[Jonica]

Preppy I would never boot you from the site or ban you for making comments about me like that. It would be most unfair, you said nothing wrong within our rules. But a preppy lil girl like you, someone who wears stockings and bats her eyelids at me, well, I'd love to have you over my knee . You'd squeal so well as I spanked you.

I endorse this post!  Don't worry, Heidi!  I have been at Jenn's mercy before.  It only hurts for a little while.  Then you kinda go numb......



J
xoxo

PS....patiently waiting for the next chapter *foot tapping*

[laurie breeze]

Preppy I would never boot you from the site or ban you for making comments about me like that. It would be most unfair, you said nothing wrong within our rules. But a preppy lil girl like you, someone who wears stockings and bats her eyelids at me, well, I'd love to have you over my knee . You'd squeal so well as I spanked you.

There will be a lot of action in the second part of Chapter 7....at least 3 fights, maybe more.....but you just gave me a great idea, Ms. Jenn! I think everyone would love to see Silky Heidi get her bottom spanked by Madame Featherlegs!! 

Preppy I would never boot you from the site or ban you for making comments about me like that. It would be most unfair, you said nothing wrong within our rules. But a preppy lil girl like you, someone who wears stockings and bats her eyelids at me, well, I'd love to have you over my knee . You'd squeal so well as I spanked you.

I endorse this post!  Don't worry, Heidi!  I have been at Jenn's mercy before.  It only hurts for a little while.  They you kinda go numb......



J
xoxo

PS....patiently waiting for the next chapter *foot tapping*

Keep tapping, Joni.....I'm working on it!       Hopefully be done by Monday. No snow machines or chains, please!!!

hugggzzz 'n xoxo

~L~

[peccavi]

Lauire
always a pleasure to help you. That's what we mods do best.