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THE ROAD TO PURGATORY (A Tale of the Old West)

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THE ROAD TO PURGATORY (A Tale of the Old West)
« on: May 31, 2013, 10:48:59 PM »
THE ROAD TO PURGATORY (A Tale of the Old West)

I realized that I needed to take a break from OLD DEADWOOD DAYS. As much as I love writing it, it's time to put it away for a while. But I love the Old West too much so I decided to start a new series that takes place in 1888, twelve years after OLD DEADWOOD DAYS, in the Wyoming Territory instead of South Dakota. Like in O.D.D., I'm using FCF friends 'n 'frenemies' in this series. Jonica, Marie B., Jenn Peccavi 'n Kayla are the first to make an appearance, along with me 'n my cat Marnie. I didn't find out until today that Jonica is allergic to cats. Oh, well. Marnie is staying! More familiar names will be showing up! Hope everyone likes this new series! Feel free to respond 'n thanks for reading!!!

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Laurie


Chapter One

The tired grizzled old man, known as “Leadhead” to both friend and enemy, had seen better days. Much better days. Once upon a time, he had been working his own claim, panning for the color in the Black Hills of the Dakotas. But the vein dried up, the color disappeared forever, and too much bad whiskey and bad luck at poker eventually led him, twelve years later, here to Purgatory. Purgatory, this godforsaken dry hole of a town in the bowels of the Wyoming territory where he spends his days slowly pushing a well-worn broom along the dusty boardwalk for pennies and wondering what the hell went wrong with his life.

Leadhead stopped to hawk a spit gob into the dirt of the main thoroughfare and wipe the grimy sweat off his wrinkled brow. He squinted into the harsh noonday sunlight and was about to resume his lethargic sweeping when something in the distance caught his eye. He stood there and stared, toothless mouth slightly open, transfixed with amazement at the sight of the three riders making their way down the dusty road into Purgatory. Not that three riders heading into town was an uncommon sight. Old Leadhead had seen hundreds of them pass by and never once did a one of them cause him to stop in his tracks and rub his rheumy eyes like they were playing tricks on him.

What made these three riders so unique to the old man was the fact that they all happened to be women. Three women riding into a town like Purgatory without a man to watch out for them was not something you’d see every day. Or practically never. And these women weren’t big neither. In fact, they were downright small, the bunch of them.

“Well, I’ll be go to shit,” was all Old Leadhead could think of to say.

If the sight of these three small female riders on three equally small horses wasn’t enough to make him shake his head in wonderment, the fourth figure trotting along beside them did the trick. It was a gray black tabby cat, with bright inquisitive eyes, keeping pace with the three horses that barely acknowledged its presence in the line. But Buster, the old Bluetick Coonhound lazing under the bench in front of the Mercantile, sure noticed. The sleepy dog scrambled to his feet, eyes fixed on the feline interloper, and let out a low excited growl. The cat and the rider closest to it both saw the dog at the same moment. The girl gave a quick whistle and, without breaking stride, the cat leapt into her protective arms.

Buster’s growl turned into a sad whine as the procession passed by the astounded old boardwalk sweeper and disappointed dog. The rider in the middle, a tiny blonde, turned to her companion and muttered, “You just had to bring the cat, didn’t you?”

The other girl gave her a quick look. “You startin’ that again?”

The three riders continued down the dusty thoroughfare until they arrived at The Briars Hotel. They dismounted, tied their reins to the hitching post and all four of them, cat included, went inside. Buster yawned, shook himself, and curled up under the bench again. In moments, he was dreaming about cats that didn’t cheat you out of a fun chase by jumping in the arms of a girl on horseback. Old Leadhead shook his head and mumbled, “I WILL be go to shit!” He cackled, farted loudly, and resumed sweeping.

First Impressions

Jenn Peccavi looked up from her ledger book in annoyance when she heard the timid little knock on her office door.

“What is it, Tippitt?” she called out, an impatient edge to her Australian accented voice. She had given instructions not to be disturbed. The door opened and a head came into view. A round head with bulging blinking owl eyes behind spectacles, a flat nose, a tiny almost lipless mouth and a few sparse corn-colored hairs plastered to a shiny skull.

“Sorry to bother you, Miss Peccavi,” the roundhead said in a quaking voice. “There are three young … ladies … out here who say they have business with you.”

Miss Peccavi caught his hesitation on the word “ladies” and it piqued her curiosity. Figuring it was a delegation of “soiled doves” looking for rooms to rent while they secured a suitable establishment for their business needs, she signaled Tippitt to usher the visitors in. The sight that greeted her was probably the last thing she expected to see. Jenn Peccavi was a woman who’d been around. From Southern Australia to the Barbary Coast of San Francisco. From Denver, Colorado, to Purgatory. Like Old Leadhead, she’d seen it all. Or so she thought.

These were no painted ladies of the evening. First of all, they were all covered from head to toe with a good fifty miles of Wyoming dust. Their attire suggested a life of trail scouting, fur trapping, cattle driving, faro dealing. Except for the long hair, soft features, lack of facial hair and obvious curves of their bodies, she would have been hard-pressed to even hazard a guess that they were indeed feminine. But they were. And they were standing in her office doorway. Tippitt discreetly withdrew, closing the door behind him.

“Please,” Miss Peccavi gestured toward the wooden chairs in front of her desk. “Make yourselves comfortable.”

The three women looked at each other, fidgeting. The tallest of the three, who was maybe two inches above five feet at the most, tipped the brim of her black hat with her fingers and mumbled, “Thank you, ma’am. We just fine standin’.” Her voice had a slight but definite Louisiana flair to it. The older woman tried to place it. Definitely not Creole. Cajun, most likely.

“Very well.” Miss Peccavi leaned forward in her chair, her clasped hands resting on her open ledger book. “What can I do for you?”

The Cajun girl had evidently been elected spokesperson of the trio. She took a small step forward and replied, “Question is, ma’am, what can we do for you?”

She took off her black hat and shook out her shoulder length brunette hair. Miss Peccavi chose to ignore the light cloud of dust that suddenly appeared in the air. The smallest of the three, the little blonde, gave a quick cough of warning. The brunette immediately started fanning the air with her empty hand. Miss Peccavi tried to hide her smile. The girl holding the cat looked bored. The cat yawned.

Miss Peccavi took this uncomfortable moment to quickly study her visitors. She prided herself on being a good judge of character; one who could size up a stranger at first glance. By their demeanor, body language, clothing. It was apparent to her that these were not three city girls indulging in a silly game of dress-up. They were not play-acting. The weapons they wore were not there for show.

The Cajun girl wore a burgundy coat over a frilled shirt with ruffled cuffs that had once been white a long time ago. Scarlet brocade vest with a few buttons missing. The top button of her shirt was open and, instead of a gambler’s tie or cravat, a large lethal-looking yellowish tooth dangled at the end of a leather necklace. Probably a crocodile’s. Tight black striped trousers and dusty black boots. A well cared for Colt .45 Peacemaker rested in a holster on her right hip. That was the only weapon in sight but the older woman guessed there were others hidden for just the right moment.

As the Cajun finished clearing the dust from the air, Miss Peccavi turned her attention to the other two. Barely five feet tall, the tiny blonde looked positively lost in the large open buckskin jacket she wore over a calico shirt and faded cords. A carved wooden cross hung from her neck. A black plush beaver fur western style hat rested on her silvery blonde hair, the brim pulled down covering her cornflower-blue eyes in shadow. A large trapper’s skinning knife hung in a sheath on her left hip while a shortened cut-off Winchester rifle was nestled in a custom leg holster on her right. Miss Peccavi had heard tell of these new-fangled Mare’s Legs but this was the first one she had ever laid eyes on.

The girl holding the cat was a puzzlement. Her light brown hair was curly and her eyes were sky blue but everything else about her screamed Injun. Her fringed blouse and leggings were made from tanned elk and bighorn sheep skin. She wore high top moccasins on her feet and a coffee-colored slouch-brimmed hat rested squarely on her head. A well-crafted bow was slung over her right shoulder and a quiver of homemade arrows hung down her back. Three knives were nestled snugly in a back sheath between her shoulder blades.

“Sorry, ma’am,” the Cajun girl stammered, her face flushing. Then she regained her composure, removed a folded piece of wrinkled newspaper from the inside brim of her hat and placed it on the desk in front of the older woman’s clasped hands. Miss Peccavi smoothed out the much-folded clipping and began to read. She recognized it as the advert she herself had posted in the Cheyenne Daily Sun when she visited that city a few months earlier. An advert for help in ridding Purgatory of the undesirable element that so often plagued small out-of-the-way western towns. So far, the advert had been a waste of time and money. Not a single candidate had responded. Until now.

Miss Peccavi looked up from the newspaper at her visitors. The three girls watched her expectantly, waiting for her decision.

“Let me get this straight,” she began, in a slow deliberate voice. “You’re here for the job, all three of you?”

“That’s right, ma’am,” the Cajun spokesperson replied. “We’re kinda a package deal. Ya hire one, ya hire us all.”

The Australian woman smiled. It was a friendly smile, not at all condescending. “No disrespect meant,” she chose her words carefully. “But as my old man used to say, the three of you don’t look big enough to fight, fuck or run a foot race.”

The unexpected profanity coming from the proper-looking well-dressed woman caused a couple of surprised gasps and a muffled giggle from the dusty girls. Miss Peccavi pushed the clipping off the ledger book in a gesture of dismissal. “I’m very sorry you rode all this way for nothing, ladies. You’re welcome to stay the night, have a bath and a hot meal.”

She saw the disappointed looks on their faces. The Cajun girl opened her mouth to protest but thought better of it. The blonde looked down at her feet, it was hard to tell what she was thinking. The girl with the cat had edged a few steps toward the door, as if she felt the need to make a quick getaway.

Miss Peccavi felt she owed them at least an explanation. “Purgatory is growing fast,” she continued, “and decent folks are sick and tired of riff raff and troublemakers coming in raising hell. The big ranchers in the valley send their men in to unwind and they end up shooting their guns off in the street and the saloon. People lock their doors now and are scared to go out after dark. Yes, we need help but I really don’t think three tiny girls can ride roughshod over a pack of drunk cowboys.”

“You’re wrong,” the blonde spoke for the first time. She nudged the Cajun girl. “Show her the book.”

Her voice was insistent, with a pronounced French lilt. Canadian, from a trapping family, Miss Peccavi guessed, by the look of her. The brown haired girl nodded and pulled a paper-covered book from the pocket of her burgundy coat. She stepped forward and handed it to the curious woman behind the desk. Miss Peccavi looked at the cover. It was one of those penny-dreadfuls that were so popular in Britain and brought over to Australia by sailors. She had read more than her share of them in her youth. Lurid sensational stories in purple prose printed on cheap pulp paper. She’d seen plenty out here too. Only they were called dime novels now and they usually told some wild tale of derring-do by some gunslinger or outlaw or lawman. Half lies and half exaggeration.

The artwork on the cover depicted three women -- three small women -- brandishing blazing guns and slashing knives doing battle with a mob of evil-looking desperadoes, under the banner title The Legend of the Killer Bees: Scourge of the Lawless. A True Story recounted by S.A. Tyree.

Miss Peccavi cocked a quizzical eyebrow. “Killer Bees?”

The Cajun girl grinned. It was a pretty grin, one that would light up a room, even under all the dust and grit. “Yeah, the writer made up that palaver. On account of all our last names start with ‘B’. Killer B’s. Not the buzzing stinging kind. But I guess the printer fellas liked it the other way. Or something.”

Miss Peccavi smiled. “I can see how they’d be confused.”

“Anyway,” the Cajun girl continued. “I’m Jonica Bowdrie.” She pointed to the blonde. “She’s Marie Bouchard.” The blonde nodded with a shy smile as she fingered the wooden cross at her neck. Jonica indicated the girl holding the cat. “And that’s Laurie Benteen.” The curly haired girl lifted a hand up to touch the brim of her slouch hat in greeting. Her face bore no expression at all. Miss Peccavi was certain of it now, she just had to be part Injun.

Jonica leaned on the desk. “Please,” she said, in her most persuasive voice, “Give us the chance to prove we can get the job done. Say, a week. If you don’t think we cut the mustard at the end of the week, we’ll ride outta town, no hard feelings.”

“A trial period, huh.” Jenn Peccavi was a business woman. She liked the logic. It made perfect sense. She also liked these three girls. She had a good feeling about them. Sometimes in business you go with logic, sometimes you go with your gut instincts, sometimes you go with both. The Australian woman stood up. “You have yourselves a deal. I’ll have to bring it up to the town council to make it official but they’ll go along with it.” She pointed a finger at them. “But I’ll give you three weeks, not one. Twenty-one days to prove yourselves.”

The girls all looked relieved at her decision, even Laurie allowed herself a slight smile. Marie, the blonde, pointed at the clipping on the desk and said, “Your writing here says room and board provided.”

Miss Peccavi nodded. “That’s what it says and that’s what you’ll get.” She frowned. “Unfortunately we only have one room available. It’s not very big, it will only fit two of you comfortably.” Her gaze fixed on the cat, purring in Laurie’s arm. “And we don’t allow any pets in the hotel. I’m sorry.”

"Good," Jonica mumbled. "Damn cat makes me itch. An' sneeze like the dickens."

Laurie spoke for the first time. “That's all in your head an' you know it." She turned to the older woman. "It’s all right. Wihakayda and I can sleep in the livery stable.”

The Australian woman shook her head. “You will do no such thing! There’s a small room in back of the jail. Sheriff Bogardus wouldn’t mind you staying there. In fact, I think he’d appreciate having someone else around. Means less work for him.” As she led them out of the office, she continued, “Our sheriff isn’t the most thrifty of men. In fact, he’s downright lazy but he’s all we have in Purgatory. That’s why I put out the advert.”

Sheriff Bogardus did indeed welcome the help. He was a big man with a perfectly round belly, salt-and-pepper hair, a gray handlebar moustache and spindly bowlegs. Miss Peccavi and the three girls had seen the sheriff lounging on the boardwalk, leaning against the wall of the jail without a care in the world. They crossed the thoroughfare and the older woman made the introductions.

“Sure will be nice to have some permanent help around for a change,” the sheriff said in a raspy voice accompanied by a friendly grin dripping with tobacco juice.

“We do rustle up temporary help when the situation calls for it,” Miss Peccavi explained.

Bogardus spat a gob of brown tobacco juice into the dirt and wiped his mouth with his sleeve. “Saddle tramps, mostly. They come and they go. Work long enough to buy themselves a bottle of smiles, then they ride outta town spouting bad poetry and big lies.”

The Australian woman scanned the horizon, her eyes passing over the wooden buildings on either side of the thoroughfare. “Purgatory is growing, getting bigger every day. More people are moving in. Good people. And there’s talk of Wyoming becoming a state. When that happens, we want to show everyone we’re civilized in this town.”

“Can’t come soon enough to suit me,” Sheriff Bogardus added. “It’ll make my job one helluva lot easier. I’m tired of puttin’ my neck on the line ever’ time some dumb cowpoke rides in all full of piss, vinegar an' corn likker. I’m fifty-two years old and I aim to live to be sixty-two. Old age runs in my fam’ly, I’d sure hate to spoil the record.”

“Useless as tits on a bull,” Miss Peccavi muttered after the sheriff excused himself and lumbered inside the jail. The four women crossed the thoroughfare and went into The Briars restaurant next door to the hotel. Patrons looked up from their bowls of stew and gaped curiously at the three dusty strangers, then commenced with their eating. Miss Peccavi dispatched a short squat Pawnee woman in a greasy apron to fetch four bowls of stew and a saucer of milk for the cat. As they settled down at the Australian woman’s personal table, she leaned forward with a smile and said, “Alright now. Suppose you tell me how the “Killer B’s” became the “scourge of the lawless”.

The Cajun girl, Jonica, grinned sheepishly. “Well, ma’am, it’s kinda a long story.”


From the Acadian Swampland

“You take that back!”

Nine year-old Jonica Bowdrie stood in the school yard, her tiny fists clenched in fury, angry tears threatening to cascade down her cheeks as she glared at the smug little girl in front of her.

“I will not,” Airy Belle Vermette snickered. “My momma said so, I heard her, and my momma does not lie. You’re a bastard.”

“I am not!”

Jonica had no idea what a “bastard” was, but she was pretty sure she wasn’t one. Airy Belle didn’t know either, all she knew was that it made Jonica mad enough to cry, and that was good enough for her to start a taunting chant of “Jonica’s a bastard” that was picked up by the rest of the girls and a few of the boys too. The taunting chant ended as quickly as it started. It ended because Jonica punched Airy Belle in the nose.

Airy Belle sat down in the dirt, grabbed her nose and started crying. One of her followers scampered off to find the teacher. Jonica didn’t care. She hated Airy Belle Vermette. She was the richest girl in school and she let everyone know it, lording it over the other kids, especially Jonica. Jonica was her favorite target. That’s why punching her in the nose felt so darn good. Jonica knew she was in trouble, would probably even get a few whacks with the switch.

Which is exactly what happened. The teacher didn’t even bother to ask the confused little girl why she punched Airy Belle. She just grabbed the hickory switch she kept in the corner and gave Jonica ten hard lashes across her backside. Fighting back hot tears, Jonica saw the mean triumphant smirk on Airy Belle’s face and blurted out, “She called me a bastard!”

“You are a bastard!” Airy Belle yelled. “And your momma is a whore!”

“Airy Belle!” The red-faced teacher hollered her name so loud, the entire class jumped. “You hush up right this minute, young lady!” She turned to Jonica. “As for you, missy, you go stand in the corner till lessons end. Maybe you’ll learn not to punch anyone anymore.”

“It ain’t fair,” Jonica protested as the teacher pulled her by the arm to the corner. “Airy Belle called me a bastard and I don’t even know what that means.”

“Ask your mother,” the teacher snapped. “She’ll explain it to you.”

When school ended, Jonica was the first one out the door. She ran all the way home, not stopping until she reached the old big red building on the outskirts of the city. The little girl liked the old house. She and her momma had lived there ever since they came to Shreveport from the Atchafalaya swampland when Jonica was four. All the ladies who lived in the house called Jonica their “little princess” and they treated her like one. They doted on her. Maum Arletty the cook always sneaked her a homemade oatmeal cookie or a piece of cake when she came home from school. Burdetta, an older redhead with a still pretty face, taught Jonica how to play cards. The little girl was a natural. Her fingers flew as she expertly shuffled the deck. The cards looked like liquid flowing through her hands.

“I swear, sweetie,” the redhead shook her head in amused awe. “You do that better than half the dealers on the Mississipp’.”

Burdetta had worked the riverboats and she taught Jonica all the tricks of the trade. How to bluff like an expert. How to read the other player’s eyes, face, tics, mannerisms, body language to see if they were bluffing or not. How to slow-play a hand to reel the sucker in for the kill. How to spot cheaters. All the tools that separated a good poker player from a great one. Jonica took to it all like a duck to water. Burdetta even taught the girl how to play fast and loose with the rules. How to mark a deck and spot one already rigged. How to bottom deal. How to palm a card without getting caught. But Jonica didn’t need to cheat. She was just that good. Pretty soon, she was beating everyone in the house, including Burdetta.

But cookies, cake and cards were the furthest thing from Jonica’s mind today. She wanted her momma. But her momma was busy. Her room door was closed. So the little girl waited. The door finally opened. One of momma’s friends came out, patted the little girl on the head and strode down the hall. Jonica ran into the room and climbed on the bed where her momma was resting. The girl was too distracted by her own problems to notice the paleness of her momma’s face and the dark circles under her tired eyes. In one solid rush of words, she recounted everything that had happened at school.

Her momma listened silently, softly stroking her daughter’s brown hair. Finally she spoke. “Jonica, cher, you listen to your mere, hear? You gonn’ sometimes hear folks callin’ you names. Callin’ your mere names. Names what aren’t very nice. Don’t you pay them no nevermind, now. Names are words only. They don’t hurt your mere. So you don’t let them hurt you none, jolie catin.”

“But those words sounded so mean, mere! An’ the way Airy Belle said ‘em, I just knowed they was somethin’ bad!”

“They just words, baby. You show ‘em they don’t hurt. You show ‘em you strong. Just like your mere is strong.”

Her mere WAS strong. But not strong enough to fight the sickness growing inside her that took her life less than a year later. As Jonica stood over her momma’s grave surrounded by the weeping women who were like her family, the little girl fought back the tears. She wanted to show her momma that she was strong too. And Airy Belle Vermette was a liar. Momma was a saint. Not a whore. Whatever that was.


The stew had arrived. Miss Peccavi and the other two girls ate in silence as they listened to Jonica. The Cajun girl unconsciously twisted a chunk of bread in her hands as she resumed her tale.

“After Momma died, I couldn’t live at the house no more. Much as they all wanted me to. I was sent to the foundlings home and there I stayed for three years until I lit out on my own. Used everythin’ I learned from Burdetta and got me a job dealin’ on the Magnolia Blossom. But they let me go when they found out I was only fifteen. Since then I been movin’ from place to place playin’ poker. I just turned thirty so I been at it pretty near half my life. About, oh, a year n’ a half ago, give or take, I was in a game down in Colorado, at the Square Deal Saloon in Julesburg. A couple salesmen, a local rancher and a foreign lady from someplace called South Africa, I think she said. Owned a gold mine there or somethin’. None of them was very good but they all took losin’ in stride. Until … ”


“You cheated. I won that hand. You cheated.”

The words were said calmly and deliberately, not loud with anger. But one look at the eyes of the tall pretty woman would be crystal clear evidence that she was boiling mad inside and was trying real hard to keep her composure. It was obvious that she was a lady of means, or at least was doing her best to give that impression. She wore a fashionable elegant brocade traveling suit trimmed in black lace and taffeta ruffles, her perfectly coiffed brown hair was pulled back in a French bun.

On the table in front of her were five cards, upturned. Seven of hearts. Seven of spades. Seven of diamonds. Queen of diamonds. Five of clubs. Trip sevens. Three-of-a-kind.

Jonica pushed the brim of her black hat up with her slim forefinger and looked at the other woman. Her eyes were colder than the North Sea. Her cards were spread out in a line in front of her. All red. All hearts. A lovely flush.

Jonica’s response was equally calm, equally quiet, equally forceful. “I don’t cheat.”

The brown-haired woman stood up. She was a good seven inches taller than Jonica, who remained seated. The three men quickly pushed their chairs back, watching the show with a mix of expectation and wonderment. Disagreements over poker hands were common but one between two women was as rare as being dealt a Royal Flush.

“You had to have cheated. There is no way you could have beaten my hand if you didn’t.”

Her voice was a bit louder this time, with a biting edge to it. A definite testament to her rising anger. Jonica still sat there, the gambler’s “poker-face” masking any emotion she may have been feeling. In the same flat tone as before, she answered, “I didn’t have to cheat. You’re such a bad poker player there was no need for me to cheat, even if I wanted to. Which I didn’t.”

There were those who witnessed what happened next who later said they’d never seen anything like it in Julesburg or anywhere else. It all happened so fast. One second the tall well-dressed brunette was standing there facing the seated pretty gambler. The next they were a snarling spitting slapping kicking hair-pulling ball of fury, rolling around on the dusty dirty floor. Gamblers, cowboys, drunks, bar girls alike all got the hell out of harm’s way, giving the fighting women a wide berth. The brunette was not only taller and heavier, she was also frothing in fury and was hell-bent on punishing Jonica for the grievous slight she felt had been perpetrated on her.

The gambler’s black hat had gone flying when the woman lunged at her, tipping her chair over backwards, sending them both to the floor. Now the brunette’s wildly clutching fingers were snarled deep in Jonica’s hair and she was slamming the gambler’s skull into the hard wooden floor. Jonica’s head was pounding and she knew she had to do something before the crazed bitch battered her unconscious. So she slashed the brunette’s face with her finely manicured nails (a gambler needs to pamper and take care of her fingers and hands, after all), gouging angry red furrows into her cheek from her eye down to her mouth.

The woman screeched wildly, clutched her face with both hands and jerked back, rolling off the dazed gambler. Jonica quickly scrambled to her feet and kicked the woman hard in the side. But there was still plenty of fight left in the tall brunette. She grabbed the shorter girl’s boot with both hands and pulled hard, sending Jonica crashing to the floor on her butt. The little gambler cried out from the stinging pain shooting through her tailbone. The bigger woman dove on top of her, knocking Jonica flat. Her fingers clawed at the writhing squirming woman under her, ripping at her clothes and tearing a couple buttons from the gambler’s red brocade vest. Jonica flailed away wildly, smacking the brunette’s face with hard punches as she yanked her hair free of the French bun.

The woman let out a loud hissing snarl of pain and fury as the Cajun yanked out a nice-sized clump of her hair. She struggled to straddle the thrashing gambler and clamped both hands around Jonica’s neck. The Cajun’s eyes grew wide as the grip tightened and she felt herself being slowly strangled. She let go of her attacker’s hair and grabbed at her wrists, pulling hard to get them off her neck. One of the men who had accompanied the South African to the Square Deal, a short butterball with glasses and a derby hat, tried to cheer her on with a loud supportive “That’s it, Miss Kayla! You’ve got her now!”

A bargirl muttered nervously, “Somebody maybe should get the marshal.”

“Naw,” a cowpoke replied, eyes glued on the action. “I say let ‘em settle it betwixt themselves.”

Kayla, the brunette, shifted to get a better position on top of the gambler as she fought to keep a tight grip on her throat. As she shifted, Jonica brought her knee up hard into the bigger woman’s back. The brunette stiffened, her hands flew up, and Jonica used the opportunity to send a hard mean desperate punch up flush in the startled brunette’s mouth. Kayla gasped as her snarling teeth clamped down on her tongue, drawing a thin trickle that oozed out of her mouth.

Coughing and gasping, her face red, Jonica pushed the woman off her. As Kayla fell backwards, the gambler sent the heel of her right boot hard into the woman’s chest. Kayla gave a strangled cry and fell backwards. Jonica rose to her knees. The blank “poker-face” mask had disappeared. Her face had a look of blind rage. Angry purplish-red marks were visible on her neck from Kayla’s strong strangling fingers. As Jonica rose to her unsteady feet, Kayla started to sit up.  She grabbed at a broken whiskey bottles that had fallen off a table. Jonica wasted no time. A quick kick sent the jagged bottle flying. A second kick landed on the seated woman’s jaw. Kayla’s eyes crossed for a brief second, she let out a low groan, her body gave a shudder and she slumped to the floor unconscious, her long legs twitching slightly.

Breathing hard, Jonica leaned on the table. Out of the corner of her eye, she noticed the derby-wearing butterball, his face suffused with hate, start to lower his right arm. He saw that the gambler was unarmed and reached for the holstered gun on his hip. Quick as a flash, with a flick of her wrist, a tiny Derringer pistol on a spring release rig appeared from the ruffled cuffs of her white shirt into the Cajun girl’s right hand.

“I don’t think that’s a real smart idea, mister,” she hissed quietly.

Butterball’s hand froze in mid-air, his face a mix of impotent anger and frustration. His mouth worked until finally he managed a blustery bluff. “That tiny pop gun would never stop a man cold.”

Jonica leveled him with a cold look and even colder smile. “It will if I put a bullet through his heart. And I can. And I will.”

His other companion, a tall cadaverous looking man with a face full of old acne pockmarks, muttered, “It’s no good, Ponka.

After one final baleful glare at the gambler, Ponka and the other man moved to the now moaning Kayla, carefully picked her up and carried her through the batwing doors out onto the boardwalk. Jonica breathed a quick sigh of relief and scooped up her winnings.


The Cajun girl ate a forkful of stew. The others were finished, even the cat who was purring sleepily in Laurie’s lap. The silence was broken by a quiet giggle from Marie.

“Now tell her the funny part,” the blonde insisted.

The Australian woman was curious. “What’s the funny part?”

Jonica grinned. “Well, truth be told, she was right. I DID cheat. But only because she cheated first. An’ she cheated real bad too. I saw her palm that third seven. I was surprised no one else caught that. An’ there was no way I was gonna let that bitch beat me with a rigged hand.”

Miss Peccavi nodded. “Sounds about right to me.”


TO BE CONTINUED

(Up Next: Marie Bouchard's and Laurie Benteen's history)

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Re: THE ROAD TO PURGATORY (A Tale of the Old West)
« Reply #1 on: June 01, 2013, 12:09:23 AM »
Laurie,

Since I got a sneak peek, you already know how I feel about this story.  You are a magnificent storyteller, and FCF is fortunate to have you!  But you are selling yourself short (*snicker*)....you need to be published.  Your ability to take us out of our time frame and sink us into the past is beyond incredible!  Please, please, please publish something!  You have the talent to pull it off!

I really can't wait to read the next part!

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« Reply #2 on: June 01, 2013, 06:44:52 AM »
Laurie,

Since I got a sneak peek, you already know how I feel about this story.  You are a magnificent storyteller, and FCF is fortunate to have you!  But you are selling yourself short (*snicker*)....you need to be published.  Your ability to take us out of our time frame and sink us into the past is beyond incredible!  Please, please, please publish something!  You have the talent to pull it off!

I really can't wait to read the next part!

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J
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Better watch out, Joni. Marie is gonna get mad at you for stealing her 'short' routine. You're just way too happy that I put in print that you're the tallest of the three of us.  ::)  ::)  Get over yerself,okay?

Anywho  ;)  thank you so much for the compliment! If anyone deserves to get published, it's you! I'm just a girl from the Badlands who loves the Old West 'n likes to ramble on, telling stories about it.

The rest of Chapter One will be coming in the next couple of days!

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« Reply #3 on: June 01, 2013, 03:37:33 PM »
I have to second the idea of you seriously looking in to getting published Laurie. You have an amazing talent and, along with your western interests, I think you could make a serious dent in the genre!

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« Reply #4 on: June 01, 2013, 05:48:54 PM »
Aw gee, I'm so angry & gonna have revenge on that bitch Jonica some time - next time she's not gonna be so lucky to beat me - that's a promise! Grrr!  :o >:(

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« Reply #5 on: June 02, 2013, 02:39:44 AM »
Laurie, you're doing an outstanding job with these stories. The characters have a lot of depth and the setting always fits well. These are great stories and I wish you had your own show. You should get published and my advice to you is that if you write anything under your own name, be sure to copyright it and be careful who you show it to. People do steal. You have a great talent and you may as well make some money from it or gain more opportunities through publishing. I'm published. You should be too. Great job, as always.
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« Reply #6 on: June 03, 2013, 02:01:33 AM »
Thank you so much, Catwacher 'n Howard!!!  I just love telling these Western stories, putting my friends in them 'n posting them here for people to read 'n  enjoy!   :) ;D :-*

Thanks Kayla for being in the story. Don't worry, we'll be seeing a lot more of Kayla Paige in future chapters. She's a great baddie 'n she's here to stay.

Jessika, payback can be a bitch...I don't know right now what's in store for Kayla but I can say this much ... her run-in with Jonica will have repercussions 'n a certain tiny blonde (who thinks she's tall) will be standing in Kayla's way. That's all I'm gonna say about that.... Jessika, If you want to join the black-hat baddie brigade, just say the word 'n you may find yerself back in the Old West, without needing a jazzed-up Delorean like Michael J Fox!

Thanks again everyone for reading!!!

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« Reply #7 on: June 03, 2013, 09:44:17 AM »
This is a great story, I'm just envious of your talent. You and Jonica seriously should see a publisher.

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« Reply #8 on: June 03, 2013, 11:50:26 AM »
Great stuff there with Kayla the 'cheater' being out'cheated' & outfought ... 

Aw, shut-up, Jess!  >:( When last were you in a fight that YOU won, huh? The last boxing match you had you got totally clobbered - LOL!  ;D ;)

Thanks Kayla for being in the story. Don't worry, we'll be seeing a lot more of Kayla Paige in future chapters. She's a great baddie 'n she's here to stay.

I don't know right now what's in store for Kayla but I can say this much ... her run-in with Jonica will have repercussions 'n a certain tiny blonde (who thinks she's tall) will be standing in Kayla's way.

Only a pleasure, Laurie, to 'help' out - eeks!  ::)

Oooh, can't wait to get my nails into that little blonde runt - it's been a while! Tee hee!  :P :-* ;)

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« Reply #9 on: June 03, 2013, 05:06:57 PM »
.... taught Jonica how to play cards. The little girl was a natural. Her fingers flew as she expertly shuffled the deck. The cards looked like liquid flowing through her hands.

That description reminds me a lot of the present-day Joni we all know. She's always seemed a bit of a riverboat gambler, with a quick wit, sharp eyes, deft hands, and a pants zipper that can never quite remain closed. :o

I love the start of this story. The words and ideas flow like magic and it's plain Laurie has lost nothing of her narrative ability.

I can't wait for more, especially as we read next about Laurie, the shortest of the trio.......and of Marie, the tallest and toughest.

Fabulous story, Laurie. :)



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« Reply #10 on: June 10, 2013, 03:16:26 AM »
Thank you Miss Jenn 'n Kayla....both for yer wonderful comments 'n for allowing me to use you both in the story. There will be lots more of the both of you in the future, that I can promise you.

Thank you too, Jessika! I think you'll like this next part. Another baddie appears on the scene, not physically, not just yet but it's always good in these kinds of stories for a slow build.  ;)

Okay, Marie....with you calling yerself the tallest of us three, now we get a really good idea why they called these kinds of stories TALL tales   ::)   You wanted Marie's backstory, here it is! Hope you like it.

My sweet Southern Sis, what can I say except I am so glad you're back!  :-* Love ya lots!

Okay, here's the second part of Chapter One, hope everyone enjoys it, thanks so much for reading!

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THE ROAD TO PURGATORY (A Tale of the Old West)

Chapter One (continued)

Miss Peccavi brought the three women to the public bath house, paid their bath fees and gave the young boy at the door an extra coin to make sure they had complete privacy. Then she excused herself and returned to the hotel as the boy prepared the baths. The large wooden tubs were filled with clean water and he added a few buckets full of water that was boiling in a large kettle over a fire out back. After testing the water temperature, he gave a quick sheepish grin, blushed deeply and scurried out the door, shutting it behind him.

The three dusty women looked at each other, giggled at his awkward shyness and began to peel off their dirty traveling clothes and undergarments. Then they slowly lowered themselves into the wooden tubs, moaning softly as the warm water cascaded over their bodies. Soon three large bars of homemade soap were doing their job as foaming lather washed away the grime and weariness.

Wihakayda, the gray-black cat, curled up in a shady corner and groomed herself, keeping a safe distance away from the water sloshing out of the tubs. As far as she was concerned, water was for drinking only. She could clean herself just fine without it, thank you very much.

The door suddenly opened and the squat Pawnee woman in the greasy apron shuffled in and scooped up their dusty clothes.

“Miss Peccavi say brush and clean up clothes for you,” she mumbled. “I bring back when done.”

She left as quickly as she had come in. Jonica leaned against the curved side of the tub, her head back, her eyes closed, luxuriating in the cleansing relaxing water.

“So this is Purgatory. I’m liking what I see … so far.”

Marie nodded, not saying anything. She was thinking how strange it was that things had come full circle. Purgatoire. French for Purgatory. Her journey had begun a year or so earlier that horrible night by the Picketwire River. Picketwire, the name the locals gave to the river in Colorado that the French trappers had named the Purgatoire. It all started in Purgatoire. Would she find what she was looking for in Purgatory?


From the True North

She was a coureur de bois, one who runs in the woods. Like her father and grandfather before her. For as long as she could remember, Marie Bouchard always knew exactly what she wanted to do with her life. She wanted to follow in the footsteps of her father and grandfather. Even when she was a tiny little girl in the family house in Roberval, Quebec, sitting on her father’s lap listening to the stories of his exotic adventures in the woods and mountains.

The family had migrated there from a settlement on the St. Lawrence River. Marie’s mother had shocked her proud aristocratic family by falling in love with the wild fur trapper Phillippe Bouchard and marrying him, despite their strenuous objections. Monsieur Delacroix, her father, had sponsored Bouchard’s excursions and had been rewarded with a tidy profit from the multitude of pelts he had brought back. But it was inconceivable for his cultured beautiful daughter to even consider marrying the scruffy dirty uncouth uneducated trapper.

But they were in love. And she did marry him. She remained his loving faithful wife even during those long periods of separation, sometimes lasting a year or more, while he was gone trapping beaver. Every time he returned, bursting through the door with a loud bellow and a crushing hug as she flew into his waiting arms, the reunion began with a frenzied desperate yearning primal adventure behind the closed doors of the boudoir. One such encounter resulted in the birth of Marie in 1858. Making up for lost time spent in the wilds, a succession of offspring followed after similar reunions: two boys and two more girls.

But Marie, his firstborn, remained the apple of his eye. He doted on his beautiful blonde daughter. The little girl would sit by the window, watching the street intently, day after day, waiting to see her father’s short muscular buckskin clad figure striding briskly to the door, full of hugs and kisses, gifts and stories. He always brought back a trinket or two for his children; toys or necklaces handmade by Lakota Sioux or Arapaho or Cheyenne Indians he would encounter in his travels. All the tribes knew Phillippe Bouchard. They trusted him. He never gave them reason to doubt that trust.

After one trip, Phillippe brought his daughter a beautifully carved wooden crucifix on a leather necklace. He told Marie he had it made special for her by an old Arapaho woman and had traded a silver bracelet for it. Before he would leave for the mountains, Phillippe always filled a pouch with inexpensive jewelry from the city for trading. The Indians of the Great Plains loved shiny pretty things and would happily trade pelts, hides, food or shelter for them. Marie’s father tenderly put the cross around her neck and there it stayed, to this day.

It came as no surprise to anyone when Marie announced on her fourteenth birthday that she wanted to be a trapper like her father. Phillippe just happened to be home at the time, one of her few birthdays where he was actually present. Marie’s maternal grandparents, the Delacroix’s, as pompous and stuffy as ever, huffed and puffed in righteous indignation. In time, they had grudgingly forgiven their daughter and son-in-law for their marriage but this announcement from their granddaughter was too much to take!

Don’t be idiotic, how can you say such a thing? You have a good education, why waste it in the woods? You’re a beautiful cultured girl, find a rich man in the city, get married, have babies, like a normal woman. Maybe a good spanking will beat the wild streak out of you. You’re too small, you will never survive out there!

The objections flew fast and loud from the mouths of her grandparents. Phillippe sat there, leaning back in his chair, smoking his pipe silently. With proud loving eyes, he looked at his determined beautiful daughter as she stood defiantly in her ruffled party dress in the middle of the parlor room. Marie’s mother also said nothing. She had seen this moment coming, had known there was no way to avoid it. Marie was a strong-willed girl, she inherited that from both her parents. As much as she wanted to put her foot down and say ‘no, absolutely not’ to her daughter, she knew that she was in no position to do that. After all, she had gone and married a fur trapper against her parents’ wishes. And their marriage was a happy one. If this was Marie’s dream …

Even so, one thought DID worry her. Marie’s grandparents were right about one thing. Marie was very small. She wasn’t even five feet tall … she was four-foot-ten, at the most. How could a girl that small survive in the wild, no matter how determined she was?


Marie unconsciously fingered the cross hanging from her neck. Her blue eyes opened. She’d been remembering, her mind drifting back in time and, for a second, she didn’t know where she was. She looked around, saw Jonica and Laurie relaxing in their tubs. Marie closed her eyes again ...


Mama didn’t need to worry. Marie DID survive, even though she never got taller. But she had her Papa to watch out for her as she learned the family trade. It hadn’t been easy at first. The culture shock of leaving a comfortable home for a life outdoors. Sleeping on the cold hard ground instead of a soft featherbed. Meals consisting of hardtack, dried meat and wild berries. Setting and marking beaver traps. Finding the ideal spot to put them. And then skinning the fur off the dead carcass, cleaning it, caring for the pelt. Many times Marie had cursed herself for stupid mistakes, had gagged at the grisly task of skinning, had miserably dreamed of the life she left behind. But she kept at it. And Phillippe remained patient, teaching his daughter everything she needed to know. Besides being a proud father, he was also a practical man. He knew that, with Marie working with him, the number of pelts would increase and so would the profits.

But he was wrong. Things were much different now. The beaver was growing scarce. Too many greedy trappers over the years had killed off most of them and trapped the lodges dry. The very few remaining beaver had fled from the valley streams and foothills, moving to the higher ground, the rivers and streams of the dangerous Rockies. Also, fashion tastes in Europe had changed. Men were no longer wearing beaver hats. Kind of a sad irony, Marie would think in later years, how the demand for beaver had died down just as most of the beaver in the Plains had been exterminated.

The most dangerous change was in the relationship between the Indian tribes and the white man. Too many settlers moving west into Indian territory, too many broken treaties and broken promises, too many violent skirmishes, too much “land stealing” had damaged and destroyed the uneasy truce. The tribes began to view the white man as an enemy. But Phillippe Bouchard was a man to be trusted, a loyal honest friend of the People. Even during these dangerous times, he was always welcomed into their tipis. And so was his daughter.

Besides beaver trapping, Phillippe and his Indian friends taught Marie other useful skills. She became an expert tracker by her sixteenth birthday. She mastered her father’s old muzzle-loading Hawken rifle and her own breech-loading Sharps, becoming a crack shot with both. She also showed she had a quick ear and learned how to speak and understand Arapaho, Cheyenne, Ute, Pawnee and Sioux.

The Cheyenne, Arapaho and Lakota Sioux all taught fighting and wrestling techniques to the petite blonde, enabling her to take down and subdue much larger opponents with her speed, skill and agility, and by using their own size against them.

She demonstrated this new-found ability with great success on a rare visit back home in Roberval. Eighteen year-old Marie had been invited to a cotillion and she was really looking forward to having fun, dancing, and showing off the brand-new dress her mother bought for the occasion. For one whole week she practiced her dancing, grown rusty from time spent in the wild, with her younger brother as her partner, under the careful tutelage of her mother and grandmother. Her father sat in his chair and made silly comments when he wasn’t laughing at Marie’s awkwardness.

The night of the cotillion finally arrived and Marie was nervous and excited as she got dressed. She was still self-conscious about her dancing ability but managed to get through the evening with just two or three minor stumbles. The young men could care less how good a dancer she was; they were all captivated by the beautiful petite blonde and clamored around her as she smiled coquettishly and regaled them with stories of her adventures. Needless to say, all the attention being given to Marie did not sit well with some of the other young ladies.

One in particular, Sandrine Bechamel, spent the entire time making unflattering and, in some cases, downright nasty comments about Marie in a loud enough voice for the blonde to hear. Marie let most of the taunts and insults slide, ignoring them as she continued to dance and have fun with her fawning admirers. This made Sandrine even angrier and more jealous. During a break in the music when the conversation died down, she announced loudly that Marie’s dress was a present from her father for sleeping with him.

One minute the hefty girl with the spit curls and mean pursed mouth was standing with her friends at the edge of the dancing area. The next she was lying on her back on the parquet floor, screaming and crying, trying to defend herself from ninety pounds of blonde fury sitting on her belly, wailing away at her with both fists. Marie was roughly pulled off the bawling bully but she broke free and tackled Sandrine as the big girl was helped to her feet. Sandrine grabbed Marie’s hair as they went down again in a tangle of writhing arms and legs. She used her fifty pound weight advantage to roll Marie onto her back and started to straddle her. But, quick as a flash, the blonde twisted her body around and scooted out the back door before the big girl could pin her down. Marie jumped on Sandrine’s back, wrapping her arms around her throat and her small but strong legs around her midsection. She hung on for dear life as her red-faced tormentor thrashed and flailed wildly. Some of the men were laughing, most were watching with obvious enjoyment, some of the girls had shocked stunned looks on their faces and two girls actually fainted.

Sandrine fell backwards on top of Marie but the blonde refused to let go. She continued to choke and squeeze the big girl until Sandrine’s desperate struggles got weaker and weaker. When the chubby girl’s face turned a shade of deep crimson and her eyes started rolling up, concerned onlookers rushed in and pulled Marie off her semi-conscious victim. Breathing hard with furious tears streaming down her pretty face, Marie shook free from their restraining arms. Her beautiful new dress was now torn in a few places and her blonde hair was in disarray. She paid no mind to the moaning Sandrine, who had finally gotten her wish and was the center of attention. Marie whirled around, fled the cotillion and ran all the way home.

Two days later, she and her father left Roberval to return to the foothills of the Rockies. It was the fall of 1876. Things were changing for the better and also for the worst. Colorado had become the 38th state a month earlier. But there were Indian uprisings all over the Plains. On June 26th, General George Custer and 267 of his men were killed at the Battle of the Little Big Horn in Montana. With emotions running high among the tribes, it was very dangerous now for one white man and one white woman to travel the woods and streams. But Marie and Phillippe were left unbothered by the Indians. Unfortunately they had little success in finding beaver and, after a bad winter in the mountains, decided to give up trapping for good. They opened a trading post in the small settlement of Sterling along the South Platte River. As the town grew, the trading post became a general store.

Marie enjoyed the day-to-day running of the store. She was still in the west that she’d grown to love, living the life she wanted to live, with her father beside her. But Phillippe had been a restless man his whole life. He couldn’t stay in one place very long. He was a coureur de bois, he needed to run in the woods to be free. He’d give his daughter a big kiss and hug, fill his pouch with pemmican, hard sweets and bullets for his new Sharps rifle, and leave the store singing an old French song. He never would tell Marie where he was going and wouldn’t return until months later. Then he’d settle back in to the daily grind until the itch returned and he’d go off again.

June 9, 1887. The day started like most other days. Marie woke up early, fixed herself a cup of black coffee and a light breakfast, and unlocked the door of the store. A shipment of goods was coming up from Denver on the noon stage. She busied herself sweeping up when the broom suddenly dropped from her hands and clattered to the wooden floor. She heard a voice crying out in her brain, a voice so loud, so crystal-clear, so unmistakably in agony that her face turned ashen white and her whole body trembled. Her father’s voice. She was sure of it. Phillippe was in trouble. He needed her.

The rest of the morning was a blur. Like a sleepwalker, Marie went through the motions of waiting on customers, barely acknowledging their attempts at conversation. When the stage finally arrived, it not only brought the supplies she was waiting for. It brought the news that would change Marie Bouchard forever. The news that set her on a new path that eventually would lead her to Purgatory.

“Your father is dead.”

The words cut Marie like a sharp knife. The stage driver felt awful having to be the one to break it to her but he had his instructions.

“They found his body on the bank of the Picketwire,” he continued. “Knew who he was. Recognized him right off. Injuns done it. Musta got hisself bushwhacked or somethin’.”

Marie nodded absently, her brain numb. Her small hands gripped the counter tightly. She thought she was about to faint. Small fragments of the gory details registered in the swirling whirlpool of her mind. Her father dead. Murdered. His body riddled with arrows. Shot once. In the back. Scalped. His Sharps rifle gone. His ammunition gone. He died alone. Alone.

By dusk on that fateful day, Marie Bouchard was sitting in a buckboard wagon, riding south to the Purgatoire, to bring her father’s body home. That was her only goal, to bury her father in the Sterling cemetery close to her so he wouldn’t be lying under the dirt in an unmarked grave by the trail. She had sent a wire up to Roberval, letting her brothers and sisters know what had happened. Her mother had died two years earlier. Later that night, as she sat by a small fire looking up at the stars with the Winchester Mare’s Leg cut-down rifle she had taken from the gun case on impulse resting on her lap, Marie’s mind drifted back to the countless nights just like this one that she’d spent sleeping under the same stars with her father.

She arrived in Las Animas, a town barely a year old, situated where the Arkansas and Purgatoire Rivers meet. The name of the town came from the legend of the Spanish Catholic conquistadors who had died in this godforsaken spot without being given the last rites. As a result, their souls would go to Purgatory. La Ciudad de las Animas Perdidos en Purgatorio. “The City of Lost Souls in Purgatory”. Like Phillippe Bouchard, the Catholic coureur de bois from Canada.

There in Las Animas, Marie learned even more of the story of her father’s death. His mutilated body was found by a band of gypsies in a caravan headed north to Denver from the New Mexico Territory. Two of the gypsies then rode to Las Animas to report it to the sheriff who went to the scene along with a reporter from the Las Animas Leader who took his camera and snapped photos of the grisly scene. They had brought Phillippe Bouchard’s body back to Las Animas and buried him in the small cemetery on the hillside.

Marie fought back tears as she gazed at the photos of her father’s lifeless body. She studied them carefully. Something about them just didn’t look right. Word around Las Animas was that a roving band of angry Arapaho was responsible. Marie didn’t believe that. Her father was a trusted friend of the Arapaho. Not only that, the Arapaho people had been gone from Colorado for nine years; they lived on the Wind River Reservation in Wyoming now. It wasn’t possible that they could have done this. It could have been the Ute; there were still roving bands of them in the area and Phillippe had had run-ins with them in the past.

As her father’s coffin was being removed from his grave so she could bring him home to Sterling, Marie sat in the sheriff’s office, fingering the lethal arrows that had been removed from Phillippe’s body. She examined them. They weren’t Ute. Or Arapaho, Cheyenne, Comanche or Pawnee. Marie had been taught well by Phillippe and his Indian friends. She knew that each tribe had its own distinctively unique style in weaponry, clothing and tipi design and she could tell the difference between them. These arrows appeared to be Apache. Marie had only seen a couple of Apache arrows in her life but she was pretty sure that these arrows taken from her father’s body were made by the Apache. Mescalero Apache by the look of them. The Mescaleros were south in the New Mexico Territory. Where the gypsies who found Phillippe’s body came from.

Trying to mask all emotion from her voice, Marie casually asked the sheriff, “The gypsies that found my father, are they still here?”

“No, they stuck around a couple days, then lit out for Denver.” He paused. “All except … ”

“Yes?”

“One of ‘em took a nasty spill when her horse got spooked by a rattler and throwed her. Banged herself up good. Doc thought it best she stayed put till she mended some. Which should be any day now.”

Marie inquired, “This gypsy got a name?”

“Calls herself Julianka. She’s been stayin’ at Doc’s with her kid brother.”

“I’d like to talk to her, if I can. Ask her a few questions.”

“I don’t reckon that’s a problem. Like I said, she’s been movin’ around pretty good. I ‘spect she’ll be headin’ up to Denver an’ her folks soon.”

Marie thanked the sheriff and left the jail. She stood on the boardwalk with her eyes shut tight, her heart pounding wildly. She was positive that her father wasn’t murdered by Indians and believed the gypsies must have killed him and then made it look like an Indian ambush. But she didn’t have proof. Maybe this Julianka …

Marie opened her eyes. She looked around, squinting in the harsh sun. The main thoroughfare of Las Animas was practically deserted. Only a handful of people hurried along the boardwalk, anxious to reach their destinations and get out of the early afternoon heat. None of them resembled a young gypsy girl. Not even close.

Wait. She heard a door open on the other side of the thoroughfare. A door with a wooden shingle on the wall next to it. A wooden shingle like a doctor would have by his office door. A young boy, around ten or eleven years old, darted out of the open doorway and scampered off toward the stable at a full gallop. In each of his small hands was an equally small old carpetbag. A tall slim dark-haired girl followed the boy out onto the boardwalk. She was wearing a yellow and black low-cut off-the-shoulder chemise and a black ankle-length skirt. A pair of ornate earrings and a large gaudy ring on her right hand completed the picture. Her wide flashing brown eyes matched her hair color. Right now those eyes were scanning the horizon, in a sweeping arc from left to right, both sides of the thoroughfare. They stopped to rest on Marie. There was a brief pause as the two girls appraised each other.

The dark-haired girl dismissed Marie as no one of importance and she started toward the stable, after the young boy. Marie crossed the thoroughfare and followed at a distance, confident that this was indeed the gypsy girl she was looking for. If the girl knew she was being followed, she gave no indication of it. She passed some storefronts without even a casual glance in a window until she reached the stable and went inside.

Marie instinctively reached her right hand down to the custom holster where her Mare’s Leg hung from her hip. The holster was empty. She had left it on the sheriff’s desk in the jail at his request. Town law in Las Animas: no firearms in the city limits. She did have her knife but hoped she wouldn’t have to use it. She took a deep breath and stepped into the stable.

It took a few seconds for Marie’s eyes to adjust from the bright sunlight. She saw the dark girl tying the carpetbags to the saddle on a big placid bay roan horse. The boy was nowhere to be seen.

“Julianka?”

The dark girl whirled around, her eyes even wider in surprise and suspicion. Marie stood framed in the stable doorway, her thumbs hooked in the side pockets of her cords, her black beaver hat pushed back on her head. Julianka relaxed slightly, sensing that the tiny blonde wasn’t a threat but she was still on her guard. She finished securing the carpetbags to the saddle and then turned to face Marie.

“Who are you? What do you want?”

“My name is Marie Bouchard. Phillippe Bouchard was my father. I’d like to ask you a few questions.”

“Why, c-certainly.”

Is it my imagination, Marie wondered, or did the gypsy girl hesitate just a bit in her answer? And was there a flicker of something like fear that flashed in those big dark eyes for a fraction of a second? Marie studied the tall dark girl’s pretty face. It was like looking at a mask, expressionless, lacking all emotion, cold dead eyes like a doll’s eyes. Marie sat on an empty water barrel, her tiny feet dangling down, inviting the gypsy to sit down also. The dark girl chose to stay standing, leaning on the wooden railing of the roan’s stall instead. The blonde tried to keep her questions conversational, not wanting to arouse Julianka’s suspicions and let the gypsy know she wasn’t buying the Indian ambush story.

Julianka described how they found Phillippe’s body when they stopped at the Purgatoire to water their horses. She said they’d been warned in a southern settlement about a band of marauding Arapaho in the area but hadn’t heard or seen anything until they found the body. With all the arrows in him and with him being scalped, it just had to be Indians! Who else could have done such a thing?

The blonde said nothing during all this. She just nodded encouragingly from time to time, lulling the gypsy into a false sense of security, waiting patiently for the right moment, like the expert trapper she was.

“That’s what I’ve been wondering too,” Marie replied, springing the trap. “I know something about arrows that you don’t. Every tribe makes their arrows in their own unique style. The arrows in my father’s body were not made by the Arapaho. Or the Cheyenne, Pawnee or even the Ute! Those were Apache arrows. Mescalero Apache. From New Mexico. Where you came from!”

It happened so fast, Marie had no chance to react. Julianka grabbed the half-finished saddle that had been draped over the stall railing and hurled it at Marie. Before the startled blonde could even raise a hand to deflect it, the saddle hit her right in the chest and knocked her backwards off the barrel into a small pile of hay. The gypsy girl bolted for her horse, put her foot in the stirrup and was about to mount. But Marie scrambled to her feet, rushed over and got hold of Julianka’s skirt, pulling her down off the roan onto the stable floor with the furious blonde on top of her.

The two angry wildcats started rolling around, locked together in a deadly struggle. With everything she had learned from the Indians, Marie may have been the more experienced fighter, but Julianka was, by far, the dirtier fighter. Her sharp nails clawed wildly at the blonde’s eyes and it was only by turning her head to the side that she avoided getting scratched blind by the crazed gypsy bitch. Nasty slash marks covered Marie’s cheek as Julianka used her size advantage to get the smaller blonde on her back. The gypsy wasn’t much heavier but she was about eight inches taller with long legs that immobilized Marie’s shorter ones easily. The dark girl’s wide eyes flashed cruelly and her mouth stretched as she bared her teeth with a wolf-like snarl. Her left hand had a firm grip on Marie’s blonde hair and she reared her right hand back to slam her fist into the struggling smaller girl’s face.

Marie finally managed to free her legs and she bucked up hard just as Julianka’s fist caught her in the cheek with a glancing blow. The gypsy rolled partly off the blonde, bumping into the roan’s front right fetlock. The big horse snorted and shuffled around in the stall, lifting his hooves up and stamping them back down again. Julianka scurried out of harm’s way backwards on her butt, giving Marie the chance to scramble to her feet and send a hard kick to the gypsy girl’s chest, directly between her small breasts.

Julianka gave a gurgled cry and fell backwards into a steaming pile of manure. Marie was on her in a flash, straddling the gypsy and, like she had done to Sandrine so long ago at the cotillion, wailing away at the whimpering girl’s face with both fists.

“Tell me the truth, bitch!” Marie hissed viciously between punches. “Your people killed my father! Didn’t they?” In between her gasps and cries, Julianka was cursing at the blonde furiously in a foreign language as she tried to cover up from Marie’s relentless pounding. Her wide hate-filled dark eyes filled with tears. She brought her knee up hard into Marie’s back. But the determined tiny blonde refused to be moved. She rocked the bawling gypsy’s head with hard smacks, one after the other as she screamed, “You killed my father! Then you made it look like the Indians did it!”

Julianka blurted out, “No! It wasn’t me! I swear! It wasn’t me!”

Marie grabbed her long thick brown hair and lifted the sniveling girl’s head up off the floor. “Who was it then?” she demanded as she slammed the back of the gypsy’s head down on the hard dirt floor. She yanked her head up again and threatened, “I’ll keep doing this until you tell me! Who was it?!”

The dark girl’s imploring begging eyes left Marie’s face and drifted to the left of the blonde sitting on top of her. Marie saw a look of relief appear on Julianka’s face as the gypsy girl whispered, “Now, Chavula ... Now!”

Marie felt like her head had exploded. A crashing wave of unbearable pain coursed through her skull. Her astonished blue eyes widened, she let out a quiet moan and slumped over, landing on her side. Julianka weakly pushed the blonde’s leg off her and raised her hand up to the small boy standing there with a wooden board in his hand. The brother. Marie had forgotten all about him. And she paid for it.

Chavula dropped the board and helped his sister to her feet. Just before Marie slipped off into blackness, she heard Julianka mutter, “Hurry. We must join the others. Warn Jessika.”

When Marie came to, Julianka, Chavula and the roan were long gone. She cursed herself for being so careless. But now she knew the truth. And she had a clue. A name. Jessika.

She said nothing to the Las Animas sheriff as she collected her Mare’s Leg. Her father’s coffin was loaded in the wagon to take him back to Sterling to bury him at home, where he belonged.

And then? Marie knew she had only one choice. She was a coureur de bois, one who runs in the woods. She was Phillippe Bouchard’s daughter. She would leave the running of the store to others. She would go to Denver. To track down the gypsy band. And Jessika. To avenge her father’s death.


TO BE CONTINUED
« Last Edit: June 10, 2013, 06:39:29 AM by Laurie Breeze »
We're on a circuit of an Indian dream
We don't get old, we just get younger
When we're flying down the highway
Riding in our Indian Cars

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Re: THE ROAD TO PURGATORY (A Tale of the Old West)
« Reply #12 on: June 10, 2013, 04:04:23 AM »
Miss Peccavi brought the three women to the public bath house, paid their bath fees and gave the young boy at the door an extra coin to make sure they had complete privacy. Then she excused herself and returned to the hotel a


Of course i want my staff to be clean. excellent story Laurie. You are liniing up the bad girls one by one. I am glad I am on the good side. It's about time. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
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Re: THE ROAD TO PURGATORY (A Tale of the Old West)
« Reply #13 on: June 10, 2013, 07:53:42 AM »
Hhhm, looks like lil Marie is quite the little hellcat - fighting in manure with the gypsy girl!  ::) Tee hee!  ;D

And good to see Jessie come into the story too!  ;) Very entertaining writing!  :D

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Re: THE ROAD TO PURGATORY (A Tale of the Old West)
« Reply #14 on: June 10, 2013, 03:44:50 PM »
Another great entry, Laurie!  You are much more than a writer.  You have earned the title "storyteller!"  I can't wait for the next part!

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Do I sense some foreshadowing here....

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The bitch is in her smile.
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