So stories.
I particularly liked "Harem - Love Duel" by halhal3. It has an exotic background, and the language used is very interested. It's not very standard and it adds to the exotic atmosphere. I'd love to write an story like this. I even have the place and time period. The country obviously being China, because I just love Asian girls(it's not yellow fever if I'm Asian too right?). However, I doubt my command of the English language is as masterful as halhal3.
Lisa or Sarah was another well written story. I don't know who is the author. What drew my attention to this story is the psychological component, which is not that common in other stories. The narrator is a man, and he's fascinated at the games Lisa and Sarah are playing to grab his attention away from her sexual rival. It all culminates in a titfight. The guy muses about what the girls must be feeling like, fighting tit to tit in front of the man they both desire, what their motivations are, why they chose to fight tit to tit, etc etc. The focus is not so much about the fight and more about their sexual rivalry. Which makes it hot.
JT Jason also wrote a lot of stories. It helps he writes about women fighting over men. On top of my head I liked Addrian vs Jodie and Shelley vs Jean the most. Shelley vs Jean the most because JT writes about the girls having sex with the guy to prove they're better than the other woman. But again, JT has many stories, and some poll based stories I like. I'd *love* to see a sequel for any of the stories JT has done. I also wish there was some sort of index of his stories, to check whether I missed one story. Also, there was also a request by JT for Amy vs Chris stories. I loved those. I think there's like 5 different versions of the Amy vs Chris catfight.
The cavalier letters were nice too. Most of them were about women fighting over a mutual boyfriend, mistress vs wife, wife vs girlfriend, etc etc. The fights are an even back and forth until one gives up her man. To boot, several of the stories have comic versions. And obviously, the classic Dee vs Maureen series. They were vicious to each other.
Mr Coleman(RIP) and Renee Wilder(?) was good. The stories this guy put out were HOT. he wrote the longest stories ever. It was hard fought back and forth, the women gradually grinding each other down until one is finally able to out last her rival and pin her down. Sure, after reading some of the stories, you realized that he was rehashing some of the stories, because substantial portions of some of the stories are in other stories word by word, except for the protagonist's names. But I guess that there's only so many ways you can say the girls were ripping each other's hair out when you do this for a day job. some copy pasting, I bitterly regret I never bought the CD with 200 stories from him. If anyone have the stories, I'd LOVE to get hold of the CDs. Another regret was never commissioning a story from him. But I was young and had no credit card or access to pay pal.
Another story I like is from AllanLongbow. Karren vs Anna. I just love how the female FWB suddenly finds herself jealous of the guy's new squeeze and decides to fight for him. Obviously, the girl who wants to become the exclusive girlfriend isn't too pleased to see the FWB and they fight for his dick. I can't really tell what I liked about the story, I just like it.
Anyways, there's many stories of women fighting over men to mention what I like about each one of them. I can't possibly mention all of them, because for one, there're several stories for which I don't know the author. And two, there's just too many stories i haven't read. Sure, I've gone through the painstaking process of going to first page of the forum and saving stories, but I think I may have missed several of the stories. Also, there was the original forum which regrettably no longer exists, it's contents lost forever to us.