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new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?

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new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?
« on: August 06, 2018, 02:53:35 PM »
https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/loot-chest/list?title_no=206977



still getting the hang of how photoshop works. still going back to alter or improve past issues. need to replace the first cover with the new style i used for the cover on issue 2.



the interesting rules at that site....
1. no nudity for sex
2. nudity for fighting is okay as long as no genitals or female nipples are exposed.
3 min. age of use is 14.
4. it seems like other rules apply if i list the comic as "adult" but then it stops showing up for viewing in several countries....



made to appear on a phone and be scrolled down with a finger swipe. may not look as good blown up several times larger on a computer screen.



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Re: new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?
« Reply #1 on: August 07, 2018, 01:09:16 PM »
This is great. I love it so far. Great catfight art and an interesting story. I hope there will be more.

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Re: new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?
« Reply #2 on: August 07, 2018, 03:16:42 PM »
https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/loot-chest/list?title_no=206977



still getting the hang of how photoshop works. still going back to alter or improve past issues. need to replace the first cover with the new style i used for the cover on issue 2.



the interesting rules at that site....
1. no nudity for sex
2. nudity for fighting is okay as long as no genitals or female nipples are exposed.
3 min. age of use is 14.
4. it seems like other rules apply if i list the comic as "adult" but then it stops showing up for viewing in several countries....


made to appear on a phone and be scrolled down with a finger swipe. may not look as good blown up several times larger on a computer screen.
this might be an attempt to respct the other country's law



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Re: new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?
« Reply #3 on: August 08, 2018, 04:30:04 AM »
respect other countries laws? i think so too. they have so many rules though. like no glorified villians? so james bond mastermind baddies that are rich are "out"?   hmmmm.

it appears the company wants to be mainstream, and be in several countries. i hear that some comics with no "risky" content don't show up at all. the world has alot of different views. to fit into all of them will be hard.

it seems the website is using old comicbook rules from a few years ago, in the united states. like the time catwoamn and batgirl fight naked with masks on, in a room full of naked people. https://thegothamarchives.com/batman-comic-review/batman-cat-bat-review/   there, that link has reviews and pics. insane that mainstream dc would do that, but all the rules above are covered. lol.


oddly it requires people to be 14 years old to use the service. like pg13 movies?

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Re: new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?
« Reply #4 on: August 08, 2018, 09:06:02 AM »
respect other countries laws? i think so too. they have so many rules though. like no glorified villians? so james bond mastermind baddies that are rich are "out"?   hmmmm.

it appears the company wants to be mainstream, and be in several countries. i hear that some comics with no "risky" content don't show up at all. the world has alot of different views. to fit into all of them will be hard.

it seems the website is using old comicbook rules from a few years ago, in the united states. like the time catwoamn and batgirl fight naked with masks on, in a room full of naked people. https://thegothamarchives.com/batman-comic-review/batman-cat-bat-review/   there, that link has reviews and pics. insane that mainstream dc would do that, but all the rules above are covered. lol.


oddly it requires people to be 14 years old to use the service. like pg13 movies?

I start at the end as there seems to be the biggest confusion. The parental guidance does not equal to minors using services of their own accord. It's age 13 in the US federally, for example, and it's a good rule.

While DC is a major publisher, I'd hardly called Batman:Confidential mainstream. Plus they adhered by not showing genitalia.

As for "fitting into rules", a few grave misconceptions: cultural differences have always existed. It's part of capitalism to expect of the producer to do a market research. Yet the biggest misconception is thinking regulations are like an à là carte buffet. There's potential for your story to evolve (if I had written it, instead of pods the devices would be augmented reality too as they already are, and way more in the future) so it's best to find the most profitable way the quickest with the least of confrontations.

Last but not least, glorification. The James Bond mastermind isn't always rich, in Timothy Dalton's first stint it was a Soviet general. It's also beside the point. Greg Sestero writes about it in his memoir that he took Tommy Wiseau to watch the Talented Mr. Ripley, to recognize how his behavior adversely affects others. His takeaway was that Matt Damon's character was the protagonist, whom he even misheard as Mark. He truly believed his movie will be a masterpiece on par with Tennessee Williams and Oscar worthy.  So, in effect, while narcissists and sociopaths are luckily are a minority, being the only people who see their own vile actions as benevolent, catering to them by showing such deeds as if they are positive is glorification. Objecting to that is just being human.
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Re: new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?
« Reply #5 on: August 08, 2018, 10:55:34 AM »
i promise there is much more to the story, that will be evident in issue 3. the story may move a bit slow, but is meant for weekly updates. im working a 50 hour week at my "real" job, so im a little limited. i have tried "cheap" artists in china, and south america, alas, their base art is not so good, and their story-boarding skills (directing) suck. thus i have to do it myself. you get what you pay for i suppose.

as i also study people's reactions, i noted some changes.

1. did you know that elvis the singer once was considered dirty for the way he danced onstage? lol. laura prepon was also banned in france for a fully clothed dance she did for a t.v. gap jeans ad.  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Llga9fgDzeI

2. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tJ3F_hhzJ3o   when cartoons got viewed differently. the very moment.

it all comes down to... can i make the reader happy without rocking the boat, lol.


also of note for this board, how much backstory is needed for a good catfight? none? lots? both sometimes? can things be personal in a short story? 

i love the hunt for knowledge, of the minds of people, and their different reactions.

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Re: new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?
« Reply #6 on: August 08, 2018, 01:10:37 PM »
i promise there is much more to the story, that will be evident in issue 3. the story may move a bit slow, but is meant for weekly updates. im working a 50 hour week at my "real" job, so im a little limited. i have tried "cheap" artists in china, and south america, alas, their base art is not so good, and their story-boarding skills (directing) suck. thus i have to do it myself. you get what you pay for i suppose.

as i also study people's reactions, i noted some changes.

1. did you know that elvis the singer once was considered dirty for the way he danced onstage? lol. laura prepon was also banned in france for a fully clothed dance she did for a t.v. gap jeans ad.  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Llga9fgDzeI

2. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tJ3F_hhzJ3o   when cartoons got viewed differently. the very moment.

it all comes down to... can i make the reader happy without rocking the boat, lol.


also of note for this board, how much backstory is needed for a good catfight? none? lots? both sometimes? can things be personal in a short story? 

i love the hunt for knowledge, of the minds of people, and their different reactions.

I subscribe to psychological realism, so my stories tend to be at least 4 to pages long, and I tend toward series instead of standalone work, but alas, in commission work it's not me who has the steering wheel.

I wish I could say Elvis lived in a different era, but it would a point of interest to you that when people disagree with a cultural paradigm shift and they're radical in nature, they raise their kids to share the same values. It gets to the point of self-parody when in an interview a few years back, Steve Doocy talked to the Duggars and the Robertsons about how much clothing a woman should wear, with all agreeing up to their neck as if this is the cloister age from the 11th century, only to be followed up by them publicly ogling jegging models in the studio, leaving little to the imagination (you know, wholesome Christian conservative entertainment).

Far Eastern drawing styles. Whereas one can't find the even then offensive Song of the South for purchase, the Japanese have no qualms portraying non-Japanese with crude stereotypes. The worst offender is even in shows not meant to mock gaijins is how they portray black people. The offensive lips drawing from the 1930s? That's still a thing in Japan. Why the NAACP doesn't care for that is beyond me, I chalk it up to hemispherical influence.
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Re: new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?
« Reply #7 on: August 08, 2018, 03:56:14 PM »
heh, in japan celebrities do ads and posters for beer and such. considered "bad taste" in america, they figure the money is really good, and a american will never visit japan.

a fake fight, that is portrayed as fake, as if it were real for the audience in realm of the story. story inception. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lFNhG7WoHKQ

oddly im seeing naruto (naruto anime) girls drawn grown up, in catfights, getting huge numbers in views, and then dropped. the artists did them as a lark, but when it far and away became their most well known piece, they erased it from their sites. they did not want to be known for it. ive seen this happen several times to different artists. sad thing is they cant even sell merch of it as they dont own the characters. HOWEVER, selling comics invovling the characters in japan is possible it appears, since copyright holders must complain to stop the action. and there are tens of thousands of actions, AND it is considered poor form to file even one complaint.   https://www.tofugu.com/japan/doujinshi-definition/



there are people who publish tens of thousands of ripoffed toons at conventions, and net enough to live on. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Comiket


since each of these comics is almost never reprinted, getting a issue (often 1 a year and numbered), can be pricey, if old enough. they are paper only. digital might be stopped by license holders off shore. and causes people to rush the outlets like black friday, since they dont want their artist/author to run out before they get there. nyc comiccon 150,000 people. comiket is now twice a year, and 400000 people. booths after a day are often emtey. they ran out of product.....


something to think about in the world of smut drawings. i just want to be a bit naughty with my storyline here and there though.

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Re: new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?
« Reply #8 on: August 08, 2018, 06:18:59 PM »
heh, in japan celebrities do ads and posters for beer and such. considered "bad taste" in america, they figure the money is really good, and a american will never visit japan.

a fake fight, that is portrayed as fake, as if it were real for the audience in realm of the story. story inception. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lFNhG7WoHKQ

oddly im seeing naruto (naruto anime) girls drawn grown up, in catfights, getting huge numbers in views, and then dropped. the artists did them as a lark, but when it far and away became their most well known piece, they erased it from their sites. they did not want to be known for it. ive seen this happen several times to different artists. sad thing is they cant even sell merch of it as they dont own the characters. HOWEVER, selling comics invovling the characters in japan is possible it appears, since copyright holders must complain to stop the action. and there are tens of thousands of actions, AND it is considered poor form to file even one complaint.   https://www.tofugu.com/japan/doujinshi-definition/



there are people who publish tens of thousands of ripoffed toons at conventions, and net enough to live on. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Comiket


since each of these comics is almost never reprinted, getting a issue (often 1 a year and numbered), can be pricey, if old enough. they are paper only. digital might be stopped by license holders off shore. and causes people to rush the outlets like black friday, since they dont want their artist/author to run out before they get there. nyc comiccon 150,000 people. comiket is now twice a year, and 400000 people. booths after a day are often emtey. they ran out of product.....


something to think about in the world of smut drawings. i just want to be a bit naughty with my storyline here and there though.

If a content creator does a lot of commissions, 3 things exist at the same time or might exist: content you create solely for somebody else, content you create for a niche you like and mainstream. I could have said things you have to do, things you like to do but don't want your friends to find out and things that pay better. It's natural the artist wants to change, we don't live in the Belle Époque anymore, the shenaxxxxns of Toulouse Lautrec (just as much a catfight aficionado as Pablo Picasso) aren't tolerated anymore in art. Around the same time with Lautrec, patent stealing Thomas Edison shot movies of boxing women, it's in the Library of Congress.

None of these things is something you usually hear in art class or art history class, simply because when you take away the cocaine that was used back then, the brain has time to process perceived shame (and not make another Conan movie, looking at you, Red Sonja).

I agree with your take on doujinshi, but that, again, only applies to the Japanese. They put their energy hunting copyright infringement on piracy, I've seen the video of the anime industry. They know a lot about us too, including how 4chan and Deviantart are a massive hub of furrification of any kind. Anime characters being grossed out by that and bronies was hilarious.
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Re: new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?
« Reply #9 on: August 09, 2018, 01:58:25 AM »
silly things like "my little pony VS. transformers" got big. https://tfwiki.net/wiki/File:MLP_micro05-coverRE-Botcon.jpg  never under-estimate the power of silly.




now, how do i make catfights mainstream? are they not already? was there not a bunch of catfights in the mummy series? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y8svNN8saeU


the art of sneaking in a catfight is more the thing. i am so going to make the two mommies in my comic have it out in the future. *evil laugh* i just need to set it up.

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Re: new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?
« Reply #10 on: August 09, 2018, 10:04:31 AM »
silly things like "my little pony VS. transformers" got big. https://tfwiki.net/wiki/File:MLP_micro05-coverRE-Botcon.jpg  never under-estimate the power of silly.




now, how do i make catfights mainstream? are they not already? was there not a bunch of catfights in the mummy series? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y8svNN8saeU


the art of sneaking in a catfight is more the thing. i am so going to make the two mommies in my comic have it out in the future. *evil laugh* i just need to set it up.

I had a similar discussion a few months back and my opponent (in this sense, the other debater) clung so tightly to both of us being white and male, that he flat out ignored this: while not as well defined as the LGBTQI+ community, fetish attraction is a sexual minority.

There are 3 main reasons why it isn't mainstream with many harping on the easiest "muh, women don't appreciate the fun". Never mind that it's more likely they oppose objectification or the trivialization of some very serious issues. The second reason comes from the very sexual nature of this fetish: much like countries being strongly against weed, some catfight/wrestling/fight fans, especially those with money like to keep it in a profitable manner. While piracy can hurt online distribution, it's not like everyone can just up and open a strip club with mud wrestling.

Which brings me to the third, culturally diverse reason: the human ability to want to keep something secret to avoid being chastised. It'd be easy to assume (and boy does the alt-right like to assume that) that "men are being conditioned to hide it"... as seen above, strip clubs are pretty public, that's not the reason. As men, we're more often raised to give emotionally weak responses, if we even show them at all. It's one thing to cheer on a "champion" in a strip club and another being open to another man publicly, in detail about this fetish. There's a millennia-old stigma on divulging on sexual topics that you do by your lonesome.

In other words, while we would die admitting, yes, there's a risk of losing social acceptance by admitting to being a catfight fan. Since we don't form a unified block the first mental picture people have of us is the sleaze with the tissue box in the porn theater and not that of the accomplished man. In that sense, or viewed from that perspective we have this in common with LGBT people, just not to that severity. It'd be hubris to claim there's even a smidge of a chance enjoying catfight becomes punishable, but it's shunned all the same. Correction, not punishable anymore? Remember when you talked about Elvis? When he was chastised, owning or wishing to buy a catfight picture was punished by 2 years in jail and the snitch network was excellent (and in the '50s such a behavior was equal to being gay).

The way to mainstream is similar to the path they go through, but to reach that the view of society has to change. I'm not saying it's hopeless. Raze was made because there was will for it to be made and it featured women who wanted those parts. The 2016 film Catfight could be made because it had a fine balance of telling a good story with believable reasons to fight (though that was more a string of brawls, beggars can't be choosers).
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Re: new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?
« Reply #11 on: August 10, 2018, 03:02:33 AM »
i have seen girls get jealous of two guys playfully wrestling. a girl really cannot wrestle with a guy on even terms. she is left out of that form of affection with the guy in question.

i have also seen girls wrestle girls when they think noone is looking, as a form of mutual affection. yet i cannot find any material that has any of that in it. the closest ive come is ino and sakura from the anime naruto. and that is some thin leavings.



catfight hype during the super bowl? https://www.wmagazine.com/story/britney-spears-pepsi-commercials-kendall-jenner


catfights need more...... status then?

once i am not working 50 hours a week, i should be able to pump out 1 issue a week. much cleaner and set than they are now. even though it might be as much as a dozen issues between catfights, i will lend then some weight. i just wish i had more to borrow/steal/copy from. while it may be nice to have something going that is a bit unused in pace, it does make it harder to pull off realistically. espically to cram all that information into the first issue, without cluttering it. you dont even learn the moms or girlfriends names.....no room.



ive planned out 500 issues. 52 a year, plus the fact that it takes about 2 weeks with my current workload, about a decade of content. it takes about 4 minutes to read a issue, so about 33 hours of reading. hmmmm crunching numbers.


as for making money, well lets take a look at the ad sense program the website has. same as youtubers. need 1000 subs, and 40,000 views a month to start access. but i bet merchandise can add up too. sexy one-piece "dollies", er action figures, or statues (lol) seem quite a hit. even for a niche market. https://www.dhgate.com/store/product/one-piece-pop-nami-mugiwara-ver-beer-lady/396763045.html


it all comes down to the setup of the start. it cant be too slow, and it cannot be sheer porn. look at star trek the next gerneration and the holodeck. they must have spent the equal of a whole single season in that thing. dungeons and dragons (1984), the orginal sword art online, got game of throne rating in brazil when it ran there for the first time in 2011. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XHc9d2Nihuk   (good stuff, most expensive cartoon series of the 80's)


ha! i got the ultimate challenge yesterday. to make a comic so enthralling that you could show it to a man about to kill himself, by throwing himself off a building... and then (after a few issues) only offer to show the rest if they give up on suicide. at least for a short while. that is a hard challenge.


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Re: new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?
« Reply #12 on: August 10, 2018, 11:19:49 AM »
i have seen girls get jealous of two guys playfully wrestling. a girl really cannot wrestle with a guy on even terms. she is left out of that form of affection with the guy in question.

i have also seen girls wrestle girls when they think noone is looking, as a form of mutual affection. yet i cannot find any material that has any of that in it. the closest ive come is ino and sakura from the anime naruto. and that is some thin leavings.



catfight hype during the super bowl? https://www.wmagazine.com/story/britney-spears-pepsi-commercials-kendall-jenner


catfights need more...... status then?

once i am not working 50 hours a week, i should be able to pump out 1 issue a week. much cleaner and set than they are now. even though it might be as much as a dozen issues between catfights, i will lend then some weight. i just wish i had more to borrow/steal/copy from. while it may be nice to have something going that is a bit unused in pace, it does make it harder to pull off realistically. espically to cram all that information into the first issue, without cluttering it. you dont even learn the moms or girlfriends names.....no room.



ive planned out 500 issues. 52 a year, plus the fact that it takes about 2 weeks with my current workload, about a decade of content. it takes about 4 minutes to read a issue, so about 33 hours of reading. hmmmm crunching numbers.


as for making money, well lets take a look at the ad sense program the website has. same as youtubers. need 1000 subs, and 40,000 views a month to start access. but i bet merchandise can add up too. sexy one-piece "dollies", er action figures, or statues (lol) seem quite a hit. even for a niche market. https://www.dhgate.com/store/product/one-piece-pop-nami-mugiwara-ver-beer-lady/396763045.html


it all comes down to the setup of the start. it cant be too slow, and it cannot be sheer porn. look at star trek the next gerneration and the holodeck. they must have spent the equal of a whole single season in that thing. dungeons and dragons (1984), the orginal sword art online, got game of throne rating in brazil when it ran there for the first time in 2011. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XHc9d2Nihuk   (good stuff, most expensive cartoon series of the 80's)


ha! i got the ultimate challenge yesterday. to make a comic so enthralling that you could show it to a man about to kill himself, by throwing himself off a building... and then (after a few issues) only offer to show the rest if they give up on suicide. at least for a short while. that is a hard challenge.

Okay, I'll begin at the end... have you lost your marb... I rephrase. I hope you said no to that challenge. For one, in countries like the US, at least in some states suicide is on the books as murder. Two, if you get involved and the guy does die, you'll become accessory after the fact. Think about such implications before you make such promises. What that guy needs is two things: a 72-hour suicide watch for starters, and therapy+reintegration.

Wrestling. A lot depends on how well they are trained, how much experience they have. Do not forget, judo was invented by a scrawny guy to stop getting him bullied, and just like aikido, it uses the kinetic energy of the opponent a lot. It matters how much exercise they have. Put a slob against an MMA fighter to find out. Our bodies being more sturdy is just a general rule with a need of a lot of upkeep, and let's be real here, outside health nuts, most of us either don't have the time or lack the patience to do it.

We're steering women in a lot of things and have done so for centuries. The reason you don't see many girl fights isn't just because it's unbecoming/unladylike... it's also because women, for obvious reasons don't like bad smells. It does originate in bad smell=bad spirit=sickness, that has evolved into women identifying themselves with nicer things. Sweating profusely is not one of them. So, the girl willing to fight is a rare girl among women. In other words, even if they're among themselves there are things they're afraid to do publicly.

It's also a huge help if not all conflicts are sexualized. To take two examples from the Potterverse, with both involving Bellatrix Lestrange, her torturing Hermione was an act of perceived superiority, an act of racism. Mrs. Weasley killing her was practically self-defense. Given sufficient reason that women can get behind, they're more approving even if it leads to a catfight.
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Re: new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?
« Reply #13 on: August 11, 2018, 06:42:53 AM »
the challenge was to make it so they dont  die, to addict them to your story.  might be a idea kicked around by police after they tried everything else, and then they either try something experimental, or rush to grab the person. think people are fishing for free stuff to use to make their organization better, or teach newbies in a company for free. educational tools. in my research ive come across invention boards, and crime boards, dark web, etc. (needed ideas for villians and stories)



would two girls pitting their boyfriends against each other in some contest to settle something be a catfight? lol. each time one boyfriend got a edge over the other the girls might trade looks, or make remarks, cheers, etc.


the online game setup in the comic can allow me to put them into games within games. futuristic, stone age, etc.
giant momies fight inside a mideval town
supernatural/ creepypasta
superhero stuff
this also allows a world wipe, not alot of history to deal with then. as well as any serious injuries or affects on the mind to be removed from the characters. exsample: is it realistic for so many monsters and destruction to appear around spiderman's apartment? noone ever thinks things out? lol.


if i move the characters into redbank, they could film movies from there. use the businesses as cheap backdrops and sets. it would also base my toons. like mickey mouse and disneyworld. i would not profit from this part, but to get based toons that have a greater impact (the headless horseman is from sleepy hollow, a real town in new york state). that impact would not cost me 1.2 billion to create either. i, of course realize i cant use the businesses in the comic as it would be too small for them to bother with at this point, not to mention paperwork.



i need more things that both girls and guys like. or even things that guys or girls would like if only with the other at least. people seem to hate horror movies, but love them when in a group. hmmmm.


latest fact find: golden vipers. they live only on one small island. like the dinosaurs in jurassic park. they have venom that can melt flesh on contact. their bite is almost sure to kill. there is only one lighthouse there, and only the army visits it to reload its batteries. rowboats and other small craft are tied up all over the place, half sunk, their owners never returning from the forbidden isle. bullshit right?  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kjaz0mynQvk

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Re: new , free, comic that sometimes has catfights. suggestions?
« Reply #14 on: August 11, 2018, 09:03:59 AM »
the challenge was to make it so they dont  die, to addict them to your story.  might be a idea kicked around by police after they tried everything else, and then they either try something experimental, or rush to grab the person. think people are fishing for free stuff to use to make their organization better, or teach newbies in a company for free. educational tools. in my research ive come across invention boards, and crime boards, dark web, etc. (needed ideas for villians and stories)



would two girls pitting their boyfriends against each other in some contest to settle something be a catfight? lol. each time one boyfriend got a edge over the other the girls might trade looks, or make remarks, cheers, etc.


the online game setup in the comic can allow me to put them into games within games. futuristic, stone age, etc.
giant momies fight inside a mideval town
supernatural/ creepypasta
superhero stuff
this also allows a world wipe, not alot of history to deal with then. as well as any serious injuries or affects on the mind to be removed from the characters. exsample: is it realistic for so many monsters and destruction to appear around spiderman's apartment? noone ever thinks things out? lol.


if i move the characters into redbank, they could film movies from there. use the businesses as cheap backdrops and sets. it would also base my toons. like mickey mouse and disneyworld. i would not profit from this part, but to get based toons that have a greater impact (the headless horseman is from sleepy hollow, a real town in new york state). that impact would not cost me 1.2 billion to create either. i, of course realize i cant use the businesses in the comic as it would be too small for them to bother with at this point, not to mention paperwork.



i need more things that both girls and guys like. or even things that guys or girls would like if only with the other at least. people seem to hate horror movies, but love them when in a group. hmmmm.


latest fact find: golden vipers. they live only on one small island. like the dinosaurs in jurassic park. they have venom that can melt flesh on contact. their bite is almost sure to kill. there is only one lighthouse there, and only the army visits it to reload its batteries. rowboats and other small craft are tied up all over the place, half sunk, their owners never returning from the forbidden isle. bullshit right?  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kjaz0mynQvk

i love knowledge.

Well, only untrained and irresponsible cops would try that idea. Here are a few pointers: if you have foreknowledge someone is about to off themselves and refuse to help, that's criminal negligence. You have foreknowledge but you prevent the person from getting help, in states were suicides equal homicide, that's accessory to murder. In short, the only legal scenario, like what I did is to inform relatives, people close to them, and if need be, authorities. It's always best if they admit themselves for suicide watch. Regarding the mainstream, I'm a crime fiction writer, plus I did avert two suicide attempts, so I speak from experience. Not to mention, making them addicted, as nonviolent as it may be is just making things worse. Addiction fuels the compulsory behavior that led to suicide in the first place, and by inevitably leading to manic depression, lethargy or a psychotic break, the previous factors preventing the act will not be in place. It would still be on your conscience. Your brother's keeper I'm not, but my advice is still to stay away from any offers whose implications you're not fully aware of. At best the suicidal person doesn't exist and they just want you to work for free. One thing is for sure, with such friends I don't want enemies. Also, yeah I research too, but I never once would visit the dark web. Not just because it only has the worst humanity has to offer, but also because PRISM logs your traffic there, that is, if you wish to do it because being on the no-fly list is fun. The best course of action is reading the book by professionals.

Women can be and often are cunning fighters. It heavily depends on personal morals, but yes, war by proxy is not uncommon. There was a girl who allied herself with her mother to sway me over from my girlfriend to her through my stomach and back then I did not register that that was part of the battle. I did not deduce it, my then girlfriend told me, which is when we entered into an alliance.

Paperwork? In 1989 Disney removed a mural in Florida from a kindergarten because the management did not ask for copyright when they painted Mickey, Goofy, and Donald. You'd be lucky your grandkids aren't stuck in litigation. You can think about brands that target the young male demographic, as they are already not family friendly, but of course, it means playing by their terms. I circumvent the rule by using my vast imagination to create brands.

America is a tough crowd. If you want to be realistic and portray women as they are, you run into the wall raised around young men, that is tagged all over with one message: women are submissive. You can shatter that fantasy, but a lot of men only change when they become fathers. The core problem is the endorsement of the lone wolf mentality, that men cannot belong (and yet hypocritically the same men will only harp on blacks for not being baby daddies, go figure). Actually, an important note: the rampant anti-women behavior of the fringe right has been on the catfight scene ever since they took over 4chan.

It could be a mixture of adventurism (that breathes tall tales) and a genuinely endangered species. What I know for a fact is, that species indigenous to a single area can usually be found on a remote island that drifted off a long time ago, like Madagascar or Galapagos.
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