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Taught a valuable lesson

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Offline Remmy

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Taught a valuable lesson
« on: September 30, 2018, 04:08:33 AM »
Disclaimer: Obviously fiction.  If you like the premise, I'll continue and if there's enough interest I'll turn it in to a series.

Kelly was a confident woman.  At 5'8" 140lbs, she had a body most people her age would die for.  In fact, most people thought she was in her 20's even though she was well in to her 30's.  Being a natural gifted athete, Kelly took a large amount of pride in her body and staying in great shape.  She worked out everyday, and even had recently started an Instagram and had earned herself a modest following.

One thing that Kelly could not stand was a bully.  That's why, when she looked outside her window every Saturday morning, her blood boiled.  It had all started a few months ago.  One cold Saturday morning, she saw one of her neighbors, Ally, barefoot in a bikini that barely fit her body washing the truck of her neighbor across the street, Wanda.  Wanda sat comfortably in a lawn chair watching her frantically clean tre truck.  At first she chuckled to herself, thinking this was maybe a lost bet of some sorts.  After she had finished washing the truck entirely, Wanda stood up and Ally followed her into the house.  Kelly observed Ally later leaving the house, still clad in only a bikini and mascara running all down her face.  Kelly observed this week after week, every Saturday, quickly realizing that Ally was being forced to do this against her will.

Ally was considered to be one of the most beautiful women in their town.  Now 25, she was well past the age she should be subjected to such cruel bullying.  No one knows what really caused her to have to clean Wanda's truck every Saturday, but a few rumors were that Wanda was jealous of Ally because of one of her boyfriends, or that Ally had a drunken encounter with Wanda.  Whatever the case was, Ally never missed a single Saturday.

Wanda was the type of girl most people knew would never amount to much.  At 21, most people thought she would grow out of her meanness, but all it did was grow it.  Everyone in town knew why she had gotten kicked out of college her sophomore year.  One of her male professors had made the mistake of failing her in one of her core classes.  As revenge, Wanda broke in to his house, beat him up in front of his wife, and squeezed his balls while forcing him to yell horrible and degrading things.  This little stunt earned her some jail time and obviously a permanent expulsion.  Since then she had started a mechanic's garage, which was doing surprisingly well.  She never had to worry about people arguing with her, first for her reputation, but also her large size.  At 6" even and 190 lbs, most people would rather just pay her the money than attempt a negotiation.

On one particular Saturday morning, Kelly sat on her front porch and watched the normal degradation unfold, her blood boiling as usual.  And then it happened.  As Ally carried one of the buckets, her footing slipped and she landed straight in to a pile of mud.  Kelly was too far away to hear what was being said, but she could make out that Wanda had bursted out laughing while Ally had bursted out in tears.  Unable to take it anymore, Kelly marched acrossed the street to put an end to this.

"Ally, get up and head in to my house, now." Kelly demanded.

"I...I can't.  I need to wash Wan..." Ally sobbed before she was interrupted.

"Wanda can wash her own damn truck." Kelly retorted.

"Excuse me bitch, who are you?"

"I'm your neighbor across the street, and I'm putting an end to all this now!"

"I don't think you understand.  If Ally doesn't wash my truck, there will be consequences.  Do you want consequences, Ally?" Wanda inquired.

"Oh god please no, not again.  I'm washing your truck.  Look, I'm an obedient bitch.  Please don't punish me!"

Kelly stepped forward right in to Wanda's face who was now standing.  "Listen, the only consequences will be if you don't stop this, got it?"

"Oh, are you going to be the one to make me?" Wanda chuckled.

"I know your type.  You think your tough and everyone will do what you want.  Well I'm not.  What are you going to do about it?"

Wanda's face suddenly went serious.  She had never be challenged like this before.  Especially in public.  Clearly this girl wasn't afraid of her, she either didn't know who she was messing with or could back up her talk.

Wanda sighed.  "You know what, you got me in a good mood today.  Normally I would beat your old ass right here but I don't want the cops getting involved.  Ally, you can go.  I won't hurt you, I promise.  In fact, your debt is cleared.  I won't force you to clean my truck again." Wanda focused her attention back on Kelly.  "You just owe me one thing."

Kelly didn't blink.  "What's that?"

"Tomorrow night you are going to fight me.  We can do it at either of our places so it's private and the police don't come.  I want Amanda there to watch me beat you like a drum and I'll bring one of my friends so you two don't try and jump me."

Kelly couldn't believe it.  This girl wanted to fight her?  At first Kelly was going to tell her to go fuck herself, but than something happened.  Kelly instantly thought back to a few of her wrestling matches with her friends.  She was even able to beat some of the guys.  With Amanda there, she could teach herself the value of standing up for yourself and break Wanda at the same time.

"We can do it at my place.  But don't cry when you lose."

Wanda ignored the second part.  "Good.  We'll discuss rules and stakes tomorrow.  Now get the fuck off my property, losers."

Ally couldn't believe her ears.  She had been set free.  She quickly ran up next to Kelly as they walked back across the street.

"You're amazing!  I've never met such a confident woman.  You made Wanda back down.  Why are you going to fight her though?"

"She needs to learn a lesson.  She thinks just because she's big she can bully people.  She is going to learn the hard way tomorrow about respect."

End of part 1

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Offline Remmy

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Re: Taught a valuable lesson
« Reply #1 on: September 30, 2018, 09:36:45 PM »
Kelly could barely sleep with all the thoughts racing in her head.  Did she really agree to fight this girl who has a reputation of thoroughly destroying and humiliating her opponents?  It was well past the time of backing down, and besides Kelly was confident in her skills from previous wrestling matches and planned to demonstrate that size isn't everything.  With an audible sigh, Kelly closed her eyes and faded in to sleep.

The next morning Kelly woke up early, ready to prepare for the big day.  As she walked around her house, she decided that the living room would be the best place as it was the biggest room in the house and had carpet instead of hard floor.  Kelly quickly pushed all the furniture to the outside of the room and grabbed two chairs, one for Ally and one for Wanda's "spectator".  Kelly could barely contain herself at the thought of making this giant woman grovel at her feet.  Kelly decided to focus on other tasks as she was quickly wasting the day away with her fantasies.

At around 2PM, Kelly's cell phone began to ring to a familiar sound.  Kelly rolled her eyes and grabbed her phone.  "What does Eric want?" she muttered to herself.  Eric was Kelly's ex boyfriend of about 3 years.  Though they remained friends, most people would rather categorize their relationship at frenemies.  At 6'2" 200lbs Eric was most girl's dream man, which unfortunately for Kelly meant she had to compete in her own relationship, which inevitably brought the relationship to an end.

"Hey Kelly!" Eric said enthusiastically.

"What do you want?" Kelly retorted, perturbed that she was on the phone at all.

"Oh nothing, just calling to confirm something I heard."

"And what is that?"

"That you put Wanda in her place yesterday."

How did Eric hear about this?  She had so many nosy neighbors.

"Yea, I told her that she needed to leave Ally alone and stop tormenting the poor girl."

"Oh my god, that's insane!  How do you walk with those big kohonas you have?"

Kelly rolled her eyes.  It's every girl's dream to be told she has large balls.

"Listen, I'm not afraid of her.  I've handled bigger than her before."

Eric chucked.  "I hope you aren't referring to me and the guys."

"Why's that?"

"We use to let you win all the time."

"What do you mean 'let me win'?" Kelly asked in disbelief.

"Just what I said.  I told all my friends if you wanted to wrestle to make it look believable but take a fall.  Every time you beat one of them, it was the best sex I've ever had."

Kelly's face began to redden.  Was she not as strong as she thought was?  "So you mean I didn't actually beat any of you?"

"Of course not.  We at most went at half speed.  Hey, I have to go back on duty, but maybe you should grab a dessert and apologize to Wanda, okay?  I don't want you to become her next victim."

"Okay, later jerk."

"Love you too!" Eric said sarcastically.

Kelly hung up the phone.  It felt like the wind was knocked out of her.  What was she going to do?  She couldn't back down now, who knows what Wanda would do to Ally if this fight didn't happen.  And there was no guarantee that she would be let off the hook either.  She had no choice, this fight was going to happen and she needed to be confident that she could, no, would win.

End of part 2.  Next part, the fight

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Offline Tigressel

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« Reply #2 on: October 01, 2018, 08:26:48 AM »
Nice start. Can't wait for the next part
The best way to settle rivalries between bitter rivals is to get down and dirty and let the claws talk...

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Offline Ginny38

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Re: Taught a valuable lesson
« Reply #3 on: October 01, 2018, 10:45:46 AM »
This is a great START to what could be a very interesting story (or series). I'll wait patiently until I read the conclusion of this before getting all excited and lavishing praise, but there's so much that's good in the writing that I have high hopes for something really good.

I'm looking forward to the next (several) parts with interest. (And thanks for sharing!)

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Offline Remmy

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Re: Taught a valuable lesson
« Reply #4 on: October 04, 2018, 02:47:14 AM »
Thanks everyone for the positive feedback.  Hopefully will be writing the next part this weekend or the next

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Offline lifeofriley

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Re: Taught a valuable lesson
« Reply #5 on: October 05, 2018, 08:42:49 PM »
definitely interested!  :P

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Offline DavisJones

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« Reply #6 on: October 06, 2018, 11:41:24 AM »
I would also like to say that this is a very good start. I'm really looking forward to reading more.

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Offline ralbright2010

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« Reply #7 on: October 06, 2018, 03:53:13 PM »
I agree, this is a great setup. Dying to see how you develop this into  a fight scene. You may have the start of an entire anthology here!

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Re: Taught a valuable lesson
« Reply #8 on: October 24, 2018, 03:26:13 PM »
I'm looking forward to the continuation of this. Please don't abandon us at this point!

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Offline lifeofriley

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Re: Taught a valuable lesson
« Reply #9 on: February 27, 2019, 09:16:45 PM »
please finish!!!

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Offline cletus

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Re: Taught a valuable lesson
« Reply #10 on: February 28, 2019, 07:42:50 PM »
Good start looking forward to more