"I was eyeing the slut from across the bar the whole evening. I swear, if she's making yet another play with her hair and throws her hair into my boyfriend's face, I'll punch her". If this is followed by action which then closes off the story... I gladly admit, it must be me, but I like to discern stories and characters from each other. I don't expect 5000+ entries, just that I can know, what makes your story yours.