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The Party is Over

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The Party is Over
« on: June 14, 2019, 07:47:10 PM »
Carly is a good girl. She can come off as stuck up sometimes, and is a little high maintenance, but she means well. She is non-confrontational, passive-aggressive, and snobby.
She wouldn't intentionally hurt anyone, but can be very opinionated. With that being said, she can say the wrong thing sometimes to the wrong person when she has a few drinks in her. This is what got her in trouble last week.

Carly has been married before and has had a lot of long term relationships fall apart and has been divorced. In the shadow of her 40th birthday, her only "child" is a lap dog that she treats better than any human being. She is hungry for something more and knows that she is a respectable woman who has a lot to offer any man who would see her for what she is worse. Being an attractive blonde with amazing breasts, she often attracts men who are not interested in her personality and often dump her after they got what they want. She has passed over good men for superficial reasons, such as money or looks, but has managed to maintain her respectability.


Jackie, on the other hand, did not have the privileged upbringing that Carly had. Growing up with two brothers, Jackie was raised by a father who was a golden gloves boxer and
a mother who was an exotic dancer. Jackie got into a lot of fights as a young girl and did not take any shit from anybody. She was course, crude, and told it like it was. She was also a beautiful woman. She has three kids from two different fathers and is always looking for a good time. She has a new fiance who is not their father who is willing to watch them while she goes out and drinks on the weekends. She is not faithful to him and treat him like shit.

They both ended up at the party of Mike, a good looking, up and coming lawyer starting to make a name for himself. Despite being in his late 30s, he has a bit of immaturity to him. Mike is more into throwing fratboy parties with drinking games than the cocktail hours that his colleagues host. Both Jackie and Carly were invited and both had their eye on him.

Carly has her heart in the right place. She may be a bad judge of character, but she sees the security and respectability that Mike can bring into her life. She sees a future with him and wants to attract his attention. Unfortunately, her efforts were being undermined by the "whore" who should be home with her fiance and kids. As they are playing beer pong on the table in his entertainment room, Carly is getting jealous of Jackie's advances on Mike. Jackie was grabbing him, brushing on him and allowing him to do the same on her. Carly was a little more respectable and could not believe that this woman, about to be married, was completely ruining her chances with Mike. As time went on, everybody began to drink a little bit more. Carly was getting more frustrated and it looked like Jackie was going to end up naked in Mike's bed by the end of the night. Carly began to start running her mouth.

As I said before, Carly is passive aggressive and non-confrontational. She turned and began to speak to a couple of others at the party about what a whore Jackie was being. Carly was talking about how Jackie already had a guy, how she was a black widow, and how sorry she felt for Jackie's fiance because he has to be the parent. Carly was being loud enough for Jackie to hear and wasn't pulling back. At the point where Jackie heard what was happening, she didn't take long to spring into action.

Jackie came up behind Carly and shoved her hard. Carly stumbled forward and fell into the glass coffee table. The table didn't completely shatter, but did crack when the side of Carly's face hit it. There now was a scratch down the right side of Carly's cheek and the right side of  her upper and lower lip were cut. Blood was trickling slowly down her face. Everyone rushed to help Carly as she slowly worked her way to her feet. For Jackie, it was time to go. She began to collect her things and was picking up her purse wallet when Carly rushed her.

Carly couldn't fight. She never could. She grabbed ahold of Jackie's hair from behind like a cliche, girly catfight. Her intent might have been to take Jackie to the ground. Jackie threw her elbow back sharply. The point of her elbow nailed Carly right where her liver was. Jackie then raised her fists and started taking Carly apart. Carly was doubled over and flailing wildly with one hand trying to get Jackie to stop while her other clutched her lower abdomen. Jackie grabbed the back of Carly's hair sharply and pulled back, forcing her to arch her back as she pumped five punches into Carly's face. Carly was throwing ineffective haymakers to Jackie's face while Jackie pumped punched into hers like a piston. The bare knuckles of Jackie's bony fingers cut Carly's face with each punch. The first one hit Carly in the cheek, which caused eventual swelling and a gash. The second struck her in the mouth further splitting her lips, the third landed on her nose causing blood to flow from both nostrils. The fourth struck her in the nose again, breaking it. The last one struck her in her jaw causing her to stumble on her feet backwards into a wall as Jackie released her grip on her hair. As Carly stumbled to the wall which held her up, Jackie threw and uppercut into Carly's sternum. The punch landed in the center of her torso near her solar plexus, right below where her skin met her plunging neckline. The wall held Carly in place as Jackie's fist penetrated into her body. Carly began to gasp for breath as she slid down the wall.

Jackie got in one more punch to the other side of Carly's face and was going to throw her to the ground and mount her for a pummeling. Before this could happen, the others had stepped in to try to pull Jackie off of her. As Carly slid down the wall, Jackie fought them to get back at her and tear her apart. Jackie's flailing legs planted a hard, solid heel in Carly's stomach as she was pulled off. Carly curled into the fetal position and laid there until Jackie was pulled away.

The party was clearly over. A couple of other guests tended to Carly. She had suffered a broken nose, her face was bloody and bruised, and her stomach was in pain. She was carried out to a car and taken to the hospital. Aside from her slightly crooked nose, Carly didn't suffer any permanent injuries. However, she was mentally and emotionally scarred. The beating that she received was humiliating and it was in front of all of her friends. Jackie ended up staying the night with Mike. A few weeks later, Carly saw Mike and Jackie together at a bar. With a wicked smile and a snicker, she stared at Carly as she put her arm around Mike and kissed him. Carly could not look her in the eyes as she finished her drink and promptly left.

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Re: The Party is Over
« Reply #1 on: June 14, 2019, 07:47:51 PM »
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Re: The Party is Over
« Reply #2 on: June 14, 2019, 07:50:19 PM »
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Re: The Party is Over
« Reply #3 on: June 15, 2019, 06:10:51 AM »
Great well written story.  It would be great to have a rematch somewhere  so Jackie could really humiliate Carly after kicking her ass again without anyone stopping her.  She could have some real fun with her and give Mike a sexy show until she was satisfied. 

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Re: The Party is Over
« Reply #4 on: June 17, 2019, 11:33:57 PM »
        Nice story. Would loved to have seen this fight. Would love to know what Jackie said to Mike after kicking Carly's ass like that. Wonder if he knew what started the fight. Judging by your description of Jackie and her attitude toward Carly after the fight in front of Mike I'm sure she used this to get Mike going.  I could see her talking Mike into acting as if he was interested into Carly (which I expect he was whether she can fight or not she's hot as crap) taking her home where Jackie walks in catching Carly with him and having a round 2 just for his personal benefit.