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Streetwise Saiyan; input wanted for ghetto Dragonball Z style fight

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Offline luffy316

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I'm working on an idea for my patreon (for the public as well) that revolves around a DBZ style parody. Basically nothing to do with the setting beyond a Saiyan (super strong warrior aliens) came to earth, knocked up a woman in downtown New York, and left again (saiyans are not normally clingy parents by nature).

The real story is about Beet Walker, a half-black, half-saiyan afro girl who doesn't know her father but grew up with a love of fighting and a talent for blowing things up. Sassy, mouthy, but stays on the good side of the law thanks to her poor but respectable mom. So not anything racist, but she's certainly got a ghetto accent and gives few fucks because she's probably the strongest thing on earth.

Thinking some female aliens show up to invade her part of town and she doesn't put up with their shit, getting into a superpowered streetfight flying around the block and all. Looking for ideas on moves, scenes, jokes or what have you.
Mainly inspired by this pic for her look
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Offline N2-9 CatFights

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Re: Streetwise Saiyan; input wanted for ghetto Dragonball Z style fight
« Reply #1 on: March 01, 2020, 08:07:26 PM »
A DragonBall catfight definitely be something I'd like to see. Smashing each other through buildings blowing up mountains but keeping it sexy and catty would be awesome. Maybe a kamehameha straight into someone's pussy. and destructo disk to cut someone's clothes off. Also if it's dragonball  you have to do transformations maybe super saiyan give youbigger tits As well as the blonde hair.
Just some thoughts looking forward to reading the final product.
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Hair pulling, Clothes ripping, Breast groping, Pussy Kicking these are what make a great catfight.
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Re: Streetwise Saiyan; input wanted for ghetto Dragonball Z style fight
« Reply #2 on: March 02, 2020, 11:37:38 PM »
Like a lot of that. cxntbusting ki blast for sure and turn/blown off clothes. I feel like she’s flashy enough to name her moves but too impatient and uncreative to do it well. So she has a genuine Fuck You Beam in her arsenal
Also has to take off her sneakers and bra to reveal that they’re weighted clothing.
Maybe quoting 50 Cent after getting hit with a ki blast and not caring
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Re: Streetwise Saiyan; input wanted for ghetto Dragonball Z style fight
« Reply #3 on: March 03, 2020, 10:18:50 PM »
Kind of reminds me of the Katsumi stories I commissioned awhile back. 

Honestly, she could fight "Ginyu Force" style aliens with different shapes and sizes (and abilities).  Then, I guess there's always the chance to have a Saiyan rival as well.

And if you ever go with a blaxploitation route down the road, you could have a rivalry with a "Supergirl" blonde cheerleader type who is also an alien but from the richer side of town.  Imagine her shock and horror when the Saiyan girl can "go blonde as well", turning the heat up and becoming many times stronger.  This would go a long way in creating a Freeza vs. Goku type dynamic.  Maybe the Supergirl's species (whether Kryptonian or not) sees the Saiyan race as prey or something only for the tables to turn when the legendary Super Saiyan isn't just a myth.

Then, maybe 'Supergirl' has a very busty corporate CEO cousin in "Karen Starr/Powergirl" who is even more powerful and who also bankrolls various goons across the city for the Saiyan to deal with.  All the while, they're headed by the Amazonian Queen, aka the "Wonder Woman", who is secretly plotting to take over the world with her Amazons.

In that way, these superwomen could function as a Freeza->Cooler/King Cold->Perfect Cell type set of arcs for the heroine to fight through.


Fight-wise, there was a panel from a Wonder Woman comic where Power Girl punches her so hard she ends up in another country.  That was kind of interesting.  Perhaps you could replicate this by showing someone gets punched so hard, they pick themselves off a pile of rubble only to see buildings with ads in Japanese or something - all the while gawkers take pictures with their phones, realizing they are now in another country.  Of course, perhaps the punched person gets angry enough to create a shockwave that destroys all the viewer's smartphones or something before flying off back at her enemy.

Stuff like that could make it seem more epic and in-line with that Dragonball "scouter/TV screen/mountains blowing up" trope.



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Re: Streetwise Saiyan; input wanted for ghetto Dragonball Z style fight
« Reply #4 on: March 04, 2020, 02:57:30 AM »
really good stuff. I could see another, preppier girl as the Goku to her Vegeta. Not nearly as rough or strong as she is, but popular because she's more public and polite. Just to get kneed in the pussy when they meet up. Becomes her weaker ally when danger shows up

Definitely figured a Ginyu style invasion to start... not sure if I'll go too too crazy with their powers as I warm up and show Beet off before clashing with their stronger boss for a closer fight. Also the Super Saiyan thing probably saved for later, at the very least because she hates "that aryan shit"
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