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Kiva’s Fight Journal

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Offline sinclairfan

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Re: Kiva’s Fight Journal
« Reply #255 on: June 22, 2025, 09:44:18 PM »
Got kinda personal there for a minute between Pritha and Kiva.  Good to see Kiva claiming queen-of-the-house rights.

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« Reply #256 on: June 22, 2025, 10:28:36 PM »
Good chapter, glad that Calvin kept strong from a character pov. Please don't have kiva getting back with Tom, she deserves something truly amazing

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« Reply #257 on: June 23, 2025, 12:45:35 AM »
Good chapter, glad that Calvin kept strong from a character pov. Please don't have kiva getting back with Tom, she deserves something truly amazing

....unless it's to humiliate Tom's new girl.

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Offline The speech prof

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« Reply #258 on: June 23, 2025, 02:30:45 PM »
....unless it's to humiliate Tom's new girl.


Kiva flipping her lid after the kid refers to Tom's girlfriend as weekend mommy ?
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Offline Doc Holliday

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« Reply #259 on: June 24, 2025, 01:23:24 AM »
Amazing chapter! Your writing just keeps getting better and better. Can’t wait to see what happens between you and Jeanne!

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« Reply #260 on: June 27, 2025, 12:50:29 AM »
This was superb. Loved the emotion in the fight.  Would have been even better if it had gone all out dirty catfight but Calvin would have probably run off lol. Thank you.

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Offline Tiberius J.C.

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« Reply #261 on: June 27, 2025, 01:45:42 PM »
Well, that scene in the bedroom was hilariously excruciating ("awkward to say the least", to borrow your own phrase). Poor Calvin! Usually you need two other people to feel like a gooseberry, and he really didn't get it, did he? Not power but victory is the greatest aphrodisiac. I'm sure Pritha, in her steel magnolia kind-of way, goes most of the day turned on by the power she wields over the waiters and kitchen staff in her restaurant, but nothing like the high she gets at home from conquering, then raping, married women in front of their husbands. How I loved the way you handled her, trapping her in one of the most humiliating of holds and making her submit – and cry (twice!) – into the bargain. Yay, Kiva!
But you really didn't think through that sharing-a-bed-with-my-gay-friend-afterwards thing, did you? What any of us wouldn't have given to have been in his place! We would have understood exactly what you were feeling, but it was all, clearly, a mystery to friend Calvin. And his presence there awkward to say the least.  ;D
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Be it said in passing, I can't see any woman in Europe making the same mistake. Over here, boys and girls both, we're trained in kindergarten with square pegs and round holes, so that we'll be able to recognise and anticipate that kind of problem in later life. But I guess it's one of those lessons that has to be absorbed in earliest childhood. By the time you got to Yale, hon', it was already too late.
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« Reply #262 on: June 28, 2025, 05:26:51 AM »
Thank you all again for your comments, likes, or if you read and enjoyed it. I noticed that the concept of two women fighting in front of their husbands is a favorite fantasy here, with the presumption of great sex for the couples, especially the winner. This story was me having fun with this idea by throwing in a twist. Kiva (fictional) had to find a surrogate husband and chose a very trusted gay friend partly because she expected him to not be interested in post-match sex with her. Of course, it backfired when she underestimated the powerful aphrodisiac effect of victory, and she was stuck with a dud in bed. Did you catch the self-deprecating line: "A fiction writer never would come up with this."

I like the Calvin character. I don't mean to promote the stereotype of male nurses as gay. I've had many gay colleagues. I've also worked with many guys with wives and kids. I've had special friendships with some of them over the years like I described in Part 1. Calvin is a composite of those guys. Great humans. Great nurses.
Don’t bother walking a mile in my shoes. That would be boring. Spend thirty seconds in my head. That’ll freak you right out.

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« Reply #263 on: June 28, 2025, 12:51:05 PM »
Thank you all again for your comments, likes, or if you read and enjoyed it. I noticed that the concept of two women fighting in front of their husbands is a favorite fantasy here, with the presumption of great sex for the couples, especially the winner. This story was me having fun with this idea by throwing in a twist. Kiva (fictional) had to find a surrogate husband and chose a very trusted gay friend partly because she expected him to not be interested in post-match sex with her. Of course, it backfired when she underestimated the powerful aphrodisiac effect of victory, and she was stuck with a dud in bed. Did you catch the self-deprecating line: "A fiction writer never would come up with this."

I like the Calvin character. I don't mean to promote the stereotype of male nurses as gay. I've had many gay colleagues. I've also worked with many guys with wives and kids. I've had special friendships with some of them over the years like I described in Part 1. Calvin is a composite of those guys. Great humans. Great nurses.

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