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Sexfighting and Titfighting / Re: Out of necessity Mom's collide
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An excellent one-off piece with great characters, setting and evenly fought action! I also enjoyed the short references to prior opponents, as well as the after-action with Maria's smaller pair. We even got a "happy ending", with the antagonist learning a painful and humiliating lesson.
If there's one thing I would've liked to see, it is (to no-one's surprise I'm sure) a bit more detail in the descriptions. At least right at the beginning of the actual titfight. Relative size, shape, apparent composition etc... As it is, we only have a very rough idea of how each pair looks visually, and as all my readers have come to know, I happen to have a strong personal preference for elaborate descriptions.This also goes for the fight sequences, of course - the longer and the more detailed, the better!
Anyhow, this was a really good and exciting piece! I look forward to reading more of your work! (On that note: any chance of a sequel for the babysitter story? Or the college dorm one?)