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« Last post by maine516 on Today at 01:42:53 AM »
I fully agree with and echo the comments made by 'pingpong' and 'shesfinished'. This update is an exciting climatic buildup to their final (?) conclusive confrontation. I very much like that they will settle things in private in the old barn outside of town. I've often imagined a great female western brawl in a barn setting, with the likes of some of the female western stars from back in the 1950's, like Marie Windsor, Peggy Castle, Ann Miller, etc. I'm looking forward to seeing how you bring this idea to life with Sara and Clara. I'm sure there will be plenty of thrashing around and use of all the elements the barn setting has to offer.
I may be reading into it too much, but I'm sensing you're hinting of something you intend by Clara bringing up Sara's tie to an outlaw gang. Or, it could be just a nice touch you added to intensify the buildup to the next stage. Either way it's a nice addition.