It was fun, and well written, so congrats 
Just a personal thing, but I am so, so bored of the Jenners, and that family in general. I get that's just me though 
Every writer who writes a series of stories, or for media (radio, TV, film) will tell you one of the most important, and difficult, parts if to create a 'believable villain". Hats off to Freefall for coming up with NOT ONE, but a whole family of villainesses for us to root against; or to root for - if you're of that persuasion. Say what you will about Freefall's "choice" of the Jenners for his story, he DID make them 'believable' and enough of you seem to agree I'm "afraid" you may see them in next year's Queen tourney. (Here's hoping anyway).