Wedding War

Started by lumberjack66, September 21, 2015, 07:49:58 PM

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CatfightOriginals

Hi Lumberjack66.  I really enjoyed this story.  From the roll around action but the whole well thought out plot in general.  The thought that this could re occur on many future family gatherings makes my nuts ache.  Just a wonderfully creative all around intelligently written story.   
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YH5050

Really really liked this one!

snw

I'm not sure how I missed this story but it's really good. I love it when the "bad" girl  wins. The one who's goal is to be the alpha above anything else. This one leaves open the door to more fights and afterward humiliations. I can see Ann showing up at Beth and Jim's to fight Beth and bed Jim again in her bed. Very nice story. In case I've missed it, is the only fight between the two wives or has there been more stories about these two posted here?

Gmc10

Wow, never saw this one before, such a great story! I wouldn't also mind a sequel, maybe an erotic battle to see who of them is the better woman in sex. Nice chances to go anywhere from here in the potential next part. Hope that lumberjack or someone else gets the insipiration to continue from here!

DoubleT2

When alphas meet, the whole good vs evil contrast is meaningless. It's primal...nothing to do with morality nor ethics...as nature intended. Great story!

Crimsonrash

I'd love to see this story become a series. Annette imposing her will on her rival mother in law with the extended family slowly becoming aware of it. Would be awesome.

Crimsonrash