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The Eighth Rank

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The Eighth Rank
« on: June 17, 2022, 01:37:08 PM »
The invasion was swift and brutal. An overwhelming flood. Everyone took up arms; Princess Larisa herself led the final stand after seeing her family butchered.  With an arrow in her shoulder, she swore to her remaining people that she would fight to the end. 

When the walls fell and the invaders surged in, the flat of a sword to her temple denied her that death.  When her mind fully returned, she wore an iron collar and shuffled in the dirt of the mountain road with the remnants of a proud people.  The survivors tried to hide her, to make her as anonymous as each of them, but that was futile.  Her eyes alone marked her as royal.  She was kept alive, and whole; the commanding general himself saw to that.  She was a prize, in time to be delivered to Xerxes. 

At first, she refused the food offered to her. Far better to die with her people. Her heart broke with each who fell during the cruel march. But once they reached the capitol she was isolated, treated more as a visiting dignitary than a captive.  Her shoulder healed. The flesh she lost in the transit returned to her slender frame.  Her beauty, unquenched, bloomed again, a wildflower in a glasshouse.

She was brought to Xerxes.

“Kneel,” he said.  The connotation was clear, and beyond political tribute.

“Never,” Larisa said. She met his gaze without a tremble. 

His throne room was still. Water softly trickled in a marble pool. Sunlight streamed through high windows.  He thought of a fortress, beyond taking.  Beauty that cannot be taken whole must be razed, and that was a different pleasure. 

“This is your choice, princess,” he said, and she was silent. 

She was returned, that night, to the throne room, this time in chains.  Now torches lit the marble walls and floor, the veins in the stone seemingly alive in the flicker of the flames.  She had been stripped, and oiled. Her hair anointed, fragrant with sandalwood.  Her body gleamed, bared except for the thin cloth draped from the cord about her hips. 

Xerxes watched her, watched her eyes move from the stone obelisk of his cock to the two women who attended him.  One was dark, an African beauty, called Akisha; the other was fair, a noblewoman herself, from Larissa’s own kingdom.  She was Raine, and she stroked his stone with slow, firm hands. 

“Has your answer changed?“  Xerxes’ voice was without emotion or inflection. Larisa did not answer.  Silence hung, a thin curtain disturbed by the soft sound of Raine’s mouth as she sensually teased him. 

“I’ve made them each an offer,” the king said.  He inclined his head toward the dark woman.  “For her, to return to her people.”  Larisa saw the slight tension this caused in the elegant face.  Xerxes touched the fair head that slowly bobbed in his lap. “For her, to return with your people. To rule in your place.”  Raine smiled and wiped her lip with one finger as she lifted her head in a gaze of cold hate. 

“Only one will collect what she was offered,” Xerxes said.  Raine stood.  She moved to her right.  Akisha moved left. Both were sinuous, lithe, athletic.  Both were stripped and oiled in the same way as Larisa. The guard who had escorted Larisa unlocked her chains, and let them clang to the floor.  A triangle formed and flowed, a geometry of violence.

He didn’t need to say it, for Larisa. He spoke the words gratuitously, to please himself.

“Only the one who takes your life, Princess.”

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Raine darted forward like an asp striking, because hate and avarice are spurs of flame.  Larisa, at last, in her power!  The royal family was dead and gone, with only this bitch left alive.  The throne of a broken and burned country was better than no throne at all; her allegiance to Xerxes was coming to fruition tonight, at long last.  She would take what rightfully was hers….after a lifetime of spite. 

Larisa pivoted but a heartbeat too late.  Raine’s fist pounded into her ribs, the lowest ones, the ones most easily snapped.  She staggered, and the African drove a knee into her spine, catapulting her forward into Raine.  This time, the fist was into the princess’ mouth.  Larisa fell to her knees.  Blue eyes and brown met over her bowed head. 

A game of chess, then. Two pieces pursuing one across the board. A complex waltz of careful cooperation that both knew would be limited.  Akisha dragged back Larisa’s  head, and Raine savagely kicked her in the chest.  The princess sobbed in pain as the bridge of Raine’s foot crushed her breast.  Akisha locked an arm around her throat and lifted her. She harbored no hatred for Larisa; she held no centuries’ old political grudge. 

She only wanted to go home. Anything, for that. Anything.

Even cooperate with the loathsome Raine. 

She held Larisa as Raine bludgeoned her, feeling herself the impact of the blows through the princess’s slender body.  The blonde bitch was snarling, radiant with hate.  She kicked Larisa again and it was no indiscriminate attack. She targeted her breasts.

Cooperate….but only one could win her heart’s-desire. Xerxes, you cunning bastard.  Even as Raine punished Larisa, even as Akisha pinned her….. they knew that they would turn on each other.

“Lift her!” Raine hisses at Akisha. Akisha obeyed but hissed herself in warning. She pinned Larisa’s arms back, and dragged her up. The princess bore her own weight; did Raine notice? The dark girl held her tongue. A chess match. 

Contemptuously, Raine slapped Larisa’s breast.  “You will never nurse an heir, bitch.”  She spat in Larisa’s face, uncaring that Akisha was sprayed as well.  She drove her fist into Larisa’s belly and for a second Larisa’s weight did sag in Akisha’s grip.  “You will never bear a child!  Your family of dogs ends tonight!”

Larisa’s foot whipped up between Raine’s thighs.  Her skull snapped back into Akisha’s face.  As the blonde dropped, the princess’s knee paid her breast revenge. 

Xerxes smiled as Raine screamed.  Chess was bloodsport. 

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Re: The Eighth Rank
« Reply #1 on: June 19, 2022, 12:27:10 PM »
Terrific start as always. I still remember that great Xerxes illustration that time with princess Alia. Lets see how this continues
« Last Edit: June 19, 2022, 12:27:32 PM by Drake8 »

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« Reply #2 on: June 19, 2022, 03:47:45 PM »
Two against one.  The unknown dark one….and Raine.  Before the first blow fell, Larisa knew now how her city had fallen. Raine. The unmatched fury of betrayal bloomed in her mind as her blonde nemesis attacked. But even in a fair match, Raine would be daunting.  And this….struck from behind…. The African…..

Whatever the fury Larisa felt, Raine’s lifetime of hatred matched it.  Larisa jerked under the savage blows to her breasts. The last of her family….

No. Xerxes’ game be damned.  She would not fall. These two, they could be split. Turned against each other. It was the only gambit she had. The African staggered back, blood streaming from her nose, as Larisa drove her knee into Raine’s breast. She wanted nothing more than to do it again, and again, and again, until the traitorous whore was dead.

But no.  Strategy must precede attack. 

Larisa wheeled to face Akisha, her hands open and raised.

“I have no hate for you - join me - then when she is finished…..you and I…..”

Mid-step, Akisha hesitated. Her eyes flickered.  Larisa saw, or thought she saw. 

Akisha held no love for Raine. More than once in Xerxes court they had nearly come to blows. Of course he knew that. Of course that was why he chose Akisha to complete this trinity.  Where in the winds of hate would she blow?

With a scream of unholy rage, Raine smashed her knee into the base of Larisa’s spine.  The force of it flung the princess forward towards Akisha. It was instinct rather that intent that caused the dark girl to react. Her fist caught Larisa across her mouth, turning her forward lurch aside in a spray of blood, dropping her to her knees. 

Raine spat in rage at Akisha’s feet.  “I’ll kill you too, cxnt!” Her eyes were mad slits, windows to a withered soul.

It was instinct again that catapulted Akisha forward into the furious blonde.  The contrast of their bodies, ebony and ivory, drew a groan of lust from the watching king.  The vicious slap of their breasts colliding; the sound of hate that hissed through their clenched teeth; the sweat that flew from their flesh. 

Raine…. She was his favorite.  She gave herself so willingly to him, she indulged any act he desired, she introduced perverse delights beyond even those he demanded.  She had in fact told him the way into Larisa’s strongholds, asking only for one thing in return:  the head of her enemy.  His favorite, yes, but also dangerous to him.  He knew better than to indulge her too much.

She had screamed at him when Larisa was brought to court alive.  Even then, this game was birthed in his mind.  He could have simply pitted Raine and her despised princess…..but no; the dark allure of the African drew him to a broader game.  She, who submitted to him, but never willingly. 

Three beauties with desperate desires.  A delicious swirl. 

Raine slammed her breasts into Akisha’s.  Pink nipples into black ones.  Her fingers tore at the African’s thick hair. The pale palm of the lioness was wedged beneath the fair girl’s chin, forcing back her head as they fought.  Larisa slowly rose, nearly forgotten.  Blood ran down her chin, dripping patterns on her breasts. 

“You are a demon, Xerxes,” she spat.  He laughed, almost merrily.

“Am I?” he retorted. “Am I the monster?  Or have I only prepared the board for the game?”

Akisha cried in pain, as Raine’s fingernails opened slashes in her cheek, a cry that burst and scattered as Raine rammed a knee between her thighs.  She fell, but the blonde still clutched her hair. Raine turned, her mad eyes finding Larisa’s
“You will get worse,” she promised, and her voice was brittle with icy truth. She turned back, and drove her fist into Akisha’s face.  Again.  Again. The black girl’s body swayed with each sodden impact, her arms falling limp. 

Raine let Akisha slump to the pristine marble, a pool of crimson forming from her burst lips.  She turned again to the waiting princess, licking the blood from her knuckles as she did. “A test for me, love?” she said to Xerxes.  “A play of shifting alliances?  You know that I will win, whatever may.”

“You won’t,” Larisa said, and her blue eyes were just as cold. 

Pieces move, thought Xerxes.  He looked to Akisha, and saw her stir, and smiled.  Pieces move in a slow progression, a waltz of war.  In chess, pieces move in ordered synchronicity, a pattern that can be predicted.  He much preferred games of chaos.

Larisa moved, her lithe body flowing like a mountain cat. Raine’s eyes widened but the reaction of her body was not as fast. The sword edge of Larisa’s hand knifed into her throat. The wrenching gag of pain that exploded from Raine’s lips was cut off as Larisa’s other fist drove straight into the pink nipple that still bore the sweat of their fallen third.  Straight, and to the ribs, the soft tissue of the breast crushed and deformed.  Her next blow was lower, directly into Raine’s ribs, the bruised breast above it jerking from the ripple. 

“You murdered my family,” Larisa snarled.  “You….”

Raine’s hand flashed forward, her thumb gouging into Larisa’s eye.  Larisa’s hair flew as her head snapped back.  Akisha was on her knees now, a silent spectator.  Raine lunged forward, her fist spearing into Larisa’s belly. With balletic grace and power, she slipped to Larisa’s side and slid her arm across her throat, wrapping it around the back of her neck. Both of them were facing Xerxes, but only Raine could see him as she cruelly wrenched Larisa’s head back. 

“Remember, Xerxes?” Raine’s voice was a harsh croak. “Remember what I promised?”

He smiled and nodded. The princess was bent back, her breasts apart on her slender chest, her belly and hips thrust forward, her trembling thighs split open. 

“He brought you here for this, bitch,” Raine said, and closed her claw on Larisa’s breast. Her fingernails were honed to daggers, and her forearm corded as she drove them deep.  “Envy your family, princess - they died quickly.”

Akisha closed her eyes as Larisa’s scream echoed through the throne room, and pushed to her feet. She forced all thought but that if freedom, and home, from her mind.  Raine could not be allowed to steal this prize.  To escape hell, one must be willing to go through fire.

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« Reply #3 on: June 20, 2022, 02:12:30 PM »
Wow this is wonderful. I usually don't like 3 ways but this is an awesome scenario and a novel motivation / take on it and I'm enjoying the historical setting. I really hope Larissa manages to win!

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« Reply #4 on: June 22, 2022, 11:04:52 PM »
Love the story so far. Glad to see you’re back posting here. I’m cheering for Raine to win this fight!

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« Reply #5 on: July 22, 2022, 02:45:27 PM »
Raine’s eyes flicked to the lithe African.  “Have you learned your place, dear?”  She snarled the words, more command than question.  “The bitch is mine, not yours.  If you help, you have my favor…..else stay out of my way.”

“I know my place,” Akisha said, and touched her bleeding mouth.  Raine squeezed deeper yet into Larisa’s breast, bruised flesh bulging through spread fingers. She twisted Larisa’s torso towards the dark girl.  “Show me,” she said.  Akisha’s fingertips brushed Larisa’s other breast, offered to her.  Offered as a test. 

Akisha clenched her teeth, and dug her nails into the helpless princess.  Home, Akisha thought.  Remember home.  Larisa’s scream sliced into her, proper music to accompany a deal with a devil.

Xerxes applauded.  Akisha lifted her eyes to Raine‘s.  Larisa’s blood ran along her clawed fingers, a mirror reflection, only darker, of the torture Raine inflicted.  Akisha’s free hand curled into a fist.  With a scream, she drove it between the princess’s breasts, just left of her sternum, just over her heart.  Larisa jerked as if an arrow had pierced her. 

“You bitch!” Raine snarled.   She knew as well as Akisha that such a blow could stop a beating heart. Akisha’s fist hammered home again.  “No!” Raine screamed.  There was only one prize here, and she could not allow it to be stolen!   Nor so soon, before she fully dragged the princess-whore through every field of agony!

Raine released her stranglehold across Larisa’s throat and seized Akisha’s wrist to stop a third blow.  Larisa hung on her knees, her head still thrown back, held up by their claws still embedded in her breasts.  Her two attackers strained across her, muscles locked, staring in hatred at each other. 

“Stalemate,” Xerxes voice was thoughtful.  “A game that ends in stalemate has no winner.”  The only sound now in the great room was harsh breath and the drip of Larisa’s blood from her ribs to the marble floor. 

“Is this your choice, African?” Raine hissed. “That I kill you first?”  Akisha gave no answer, her full and swollen lips motionless, though if she had spoken it would have been a shriek that she had no choice.  Home.  It was the only thought she allowed herself. 

Raine’s claw relaxed.  Larisa’s breast slumped free.  Her torso hung for a second in Akisha’s grip alone, before the dark girl also let her go.  Her predators rose in unison across her fallen form.  They circled her, Raine needlessly stepping on her throat in passing.  As rain and Akisha studied each other, Xerxes looked only to Larisa. What a Queen she would have made. Even now, he saw her body was not broken, and her half-lidded eyes were alight.  She gathers strength, he thought, and smiled.  He heard the sound of bodies colliding, but his gaze lingered lovingly on Larisa. 

What if she wins the game?  A novel idea, certainly not his plan, but a chess master must consider all outcomes. Her eyes met his as she lay there, bloodied but beautiful and brave. His smile widened.

Akisha sobbed as Raine’s fist punched into her breast.  She tried to clinch, to pin the cruel blonde’s arms, but Raine snapped back her head with a savage forearm strike to her nose.  Akisha was a warrior but Raine….Raine took pleasure in cruelty.  She drove her knee into Akisha's belly.  “Is there a lover at home, cow?”  She spat. “Children?”  Akisha’s eyes flashed but Raine’s fist ripped across her cheekbone.  “You know they have already mourned and forgotten you!   He fucks another now…. They call her Mother…..” Her words were stones as hard as her blows, because Akisha feared they were true. She screamed and hit Raine, a brutal bludgeoning blow to her temple that staggered her. 

“If I am already dead to them,” Akisha cried, ”then I have nothing to lose to you!”

Larisa pushed to her hands and knees, her teeth clenched against the agony in her breasts. 

Raine slammed into Akisha, driving her backwards until her spine hit the arm of Xerxes throne. She bent the dark girl back over it, her ebony hair parted by his jutting cock.  Raine gripped the same hair, twisting Akisha face to the side. Xerxes obligingly caressed her gasping mouth. 

“You still have a soul,” Raine snarled. “And I’ll not do you the kindness of freeing it!  I will cage you……and take more of it every day……”

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Re: The Eighth Rank
« Reply #6 on: July 22, 2022, 05:32:07 PM »
Wow, this is a fiercely hot story!  ;) :D The princess sure is a cruel bitch ...  ;D
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« Reply #7 on: July 22, 2022, 08:26:01 PM »
Larisa landed on Raine like a panther pouncing.  She nearly screamed as her breasts hit her foe’s back; she did scream at the impact of bearing the bitch to the marble floor. Xerxes mouth turned in a moue as Akisha lips slipped away from his cock, the black girl slipping bonelessly away to the floor herself. 

Raine threw Larisa off, hard, driving the princess into the unyielding stone.  She stood over her, breathing in harsh gasps, then stomped her.  Again.  Again.  The sound of it was unspeakably brutal.  But for Raine, it was too ….. remote.  Her hatred for Larisa demanded more.  It craved dark intimacy.  She dragged Larisa by her hair to her feet and theatrically licked her battered face. Her sweat-slick breasts swung into Larisa’s tortured pair, her hard nipples raking across the princess’s softened nubs. 

Raine locked her arms around Larisa, and squeezed.  Larisa’s cry was a strangled sound of pure pain as her breasts flattened cruelly, her nipples forced inward to the core of her beaten flesh.  Raine lifted her to tiptoe, adding her own weight to the vise around her torso. Larisa’s head lolled back, her belly hard against Raine, her fair hair streaked with blood and matted with her sweat. Her throat bared to the she-wolf….and Raine’s head darted forward. 

“Check?” murmured Xerxes at the wet sound of Raine’s jaws.  He looked to Akisha, but the dark girl remained still.  There would be no help from that segment of the board, no help for either of the mortal enemies now nearing the end.  Larisa, the once-to-be queen, now trapped, unable to move, unable to even breathe.  And Raine, now poised at the edge of the eighth rank, the point at which a piece has triumphantly crossed the board to ascend to queenhood herself.  He sighed.  All games end, eventually.   He leant forward, the better to hear Larisa’s ribs crack, to see her death spasm, to smell her last hot blood more it cooled and congealed. 

Instead he saw her hands lift, and smash against Raine’s temples.  He saw her thumbs hook into shocked blue eyes.  He saw her hair whip as she drove her forehead into Raine’s face.  He saw no more from there, as Akisha jerked back his head, her own loin cloth twisted around his neck, her weight dragging his shoulders back across the throne-arm, her ebony legs closed on his throat even as the cloth bit deep. 

Akisha’s eyes met Larisa’s as the princess knelt on Raine’s neck, the bitch’s gaze also turned her way, but no longer seeing. 

For all his gamesmanship, Xerxes had forgotten, checkmate comes with the death of the King, nothing else. 

The White Queen and the Black Queen now held the board. 

“You will go Home,” Larisa said, simply.  Akisha closed her eyes.   

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« Reply #8 on: July 27, 2022, 04:08:55 PM »
Superb, simply superb
Viciously Delicious, and Savagely fun.

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Re: The Eighth Rank
« Reply #9 on: July 28, 2022, 11:40:32 AM »
Another great story. Loved the ending. Nice surprise on Xerxes.

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« Reply #10 on: July 29, 2022, 03:12:36 AM »
Another great story. Loved the ending. Nice surprise on Xerxes.
Wait, that was the end? I had assumed there was more, since there were two fighters left.

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« Reply #11 on: July 29, 2022, 09:47:41 AM »
Another great story. Loved the ending. Nice surprise on Xerxes.
Wait, that was the end? I had assumed there was more, since there were two fighters left.

The impression I got was with Xerxes dead there was no reason to fight anymore but to escape and leave for home.

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« Reply #12 on: July 29, 2022, 05:39:55 PM »
Another great story. Loved the ending. Nice surprise on Xerxes.
Wait, that was the end? I had assumed there was more, since there were two fighters left.

The impression I got was with Xerxes dead there was no reason to fight anymore but to escape and leave for home.
Ah. I had missed the part where he died. I was too focused on the FvF action.

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« Reply #13 on: July 31, 2022, 11:54:29 AM »
IMHO the ending was kidna stupid. Xerxes being killed would mean the execution of both of the girls via his guards. Terrible ending via the circumstances.
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« Reply #14 on: July 31, 2022, 10:05:01 PM »
IMHO the ending was kidna stupid. Xerxes being killed would mean the execution of both of the girls via his guards. Terrible ending via the circumstances.
I do think that the ending was a bit of a cop-out too. I was hoping for at least two of the other women to start fighting after the third went down.

Don’t take that as me insulting the rest of the piece, mind. The beginning and middle were both great. It just lost me at the end.